DNF @41%. I really was going to trudge my way through this book through the end bc I didn’t wanna DNF a book from a black woman author but…the audiobook is 18hrs long and that is just too much to dedicate to a book you are not enjoying.
I feel like the plot and the characters in this book really needed some work. And by work, I mean chucked out the door and totally replaced.
Let’s start off with the characters.
Our main character is Ikenna and the author made the unfortunate choice to tell the book in entirely 1st person POV. Ikenna lands on the extreme end of angry fanatasy book heroines that I’ve read and I’m quite frankly, sick of this particular trope and narrative. Listen, I get it. People wanna read about badass angry women overthrowing sh*t (I’m assuming, given the prevalence of this trope?) but the way authors continue to massively fail at this just leaves me tired of reading about callous, ill-tempered women incapable of vulnerability.
It is virtually impossible for a reader to form a connection to a character if the character has virtually no vulnerable moments. And that is the case with Ikenna. Sure, her grandfather died, but her grief is never fully explored and is instead replaced by an unrelenting anger and need to find her grandpa’s killer.
Ikenna is essentially always on the defensive, paranoid, and angry. Because of this, it is extremely unenjoyable to read from her perspective. I didn’t find her internal monologues interesting. In fact, I found a lot of the places her thoughts went downright stupid. She would essentially come up with an idea of who and why killed her grandpa and would be irrevocably convinced of this idea without any proof. Mind you, Ikenna is an adult (around 20 years old). She really just read like an angry petulant child most of the time.
The side characters are no help either and this is where it may become evident that this is a debut author bc her side characters read as interesting as a cardboard box. Her female best friend (I forgot her name) is essentially just obsessed with sex. Which is fine, but that was literally her entire personality and it wasn’t interesting to read about. The guy best friend , Zayn, is as interesting as the gum stuck on the bottom of my shoe. The author doesn’t even attempt to give him any personality. I didn’t buy into their friendship trio at all. It felt very contrived and like they were there for the sake of having side characters in a book.
I can’t speak much on the plot or the world building bc well the author does basically no world-building even though their constantly fighting monsters and using all this bizarre technology. The author’s only instrument of world-building, background, or history of this world is by telling us over and over about the achievements of Ikenna’s grandfather who we’re supposed to care about and respect.
This book also features a heinous amount of swearing. I’m not even one to notice or dislike curse words in my books, but the frequency that Ikenna cursed in her internal monologue and dialogue was honestly distasteful.
Anyways, that’s all I got to say. It brings me no joy to harp on about how much I didn’t like this book bc the author is a black woman. But a bad book is a bad book and unfortunately, that is what this was. Have I read worse? Sure. But this isn’t far from those.