Sigh.
This seemed promising, I'm not going to lie. I actually had high hopes for this and expected to love it. Coming from someone who completely adored The Night Circus -it's perhaps my favourite book of magic-, and had her feet leaping with Caraval. However, not everything was bad, I remain too optimistic to only see the bad in stuff. Now, why one star? Mainly because it was disappointing. I had too many problems with the story to give it more than this.
1) Setting
Now, hear me out. The setting was GOOD. The beginning was roughly similar to Caraval, like I could actually see it before my eyes; especially that scene where they're near the docks. Yeah, definitely Caraval. Now, the whole background story about the hotel only appearing for a certain amount of time reminded me too much of TNC, because that was sort of like the point of the book. It was good in general, but for being an enchanted hotel, I think the idea and the place could have been exploited better, and also a little deeper. Don't get me wrong, I loved the magic and the descriptions, but it felt short compared to what it promised. It's a freaking Hotel! I think we could have seen a little bit more of it but that never happened.
2) Story-wise
The story was perhaps my favourite point. It was a really nice touch to make it grow darker because I totally didn't expect it. You have to understand that, at all times, I had TNC and Caraval in my mind for reference (maybe not the best way to read it), so everything that happened was immediately being compared in my head. When the dark stuff started happening, it really took me off guard - in a very good way. I enjoyed the mystery. I actually had a theory and was proven wrong and that made me feel good because, for a second there, I thought things would get predictable. Something I did not necessarily enjoy was the small detail about making Jani a suminaire. It felt all-too-convenient, for some reason. Of course, our main character would find out that she had this wonderful powers after being lied to for her whole life. Typical. Another thing, Des Reves's character seemed very interesting to me and I think we didn't get to see enough of it. It was like all the story had been summed up in Celeste's tale and that was it. What truly motivated Nicole? What was exactly her relationship with Alastair? Who really controlled who? Sometimes I had the feeling it was Alastair behind all of it but it seemed he also let himself be influenced by Nicole, so I never truly understood what was going on there.
3) Characters
Probably, no, not probably, DEFINITELY, my least favourite part. This is just a big NO from me. Let's start with our (not) dear, Jani. I have never felt more frustrated with a character in my life, I actually considered dropping the book because of her. You see, there's this thin line that separates braveness from stupidity and she is constantly crossing it. She likes to tell herself and everybody around that she's capable of handling things on her own, that she can do whatever she wants to do, but somehow, it infuriates me that she knows the consequences of her actions and still chooses to do it. She is the most selfish character I've ever seen. Everything is suddenly about her and her sister. It doesn't matter if her actions hurt other people if it's for her own good. Jani doesn't take a 'no' for an answer, and whenever people refuse to help her, she manipulates them into guilt-tripping them, telling them that they don't care about her or what happens to her. Like ????? Of course, woman, they are going to choose to keep themselves alive! Plus, for someone who claims to be so independent, she surely likes asking for help A LOT. She didn't do a single thing by herself during the whole book and whatever she did do, she did it wrong. And obviously, plot armour is a thing, so we have every single character suddenly having a reason to aid her in whatever she needs. Her character is also awfully cliché. We have the typical sister that feels like she's not as good as the other, the one that has always been kept in the dark because apparently the other one is the one considered "special".
Now, Bel. He was nice. Just nice, though. I didn't see enough of him to call him a good love interest. It felt sort of forced. You could see that all the encounters they had would be filled with subtle flirting and questionable moments. It felt like the author was holding two toys and pushing them together like "Now, kiss!!" the whole time. Oh! That's another thing I wanted to mention. The K I S S. You see, normally when authors keep pushing the golden scene further and further away, it creates expectation. Genius move, honestly. But I think she took it a bit too far. Bel and Jani had an almost-kiss scene like four times? Which I found a bit ridiculous. Once is okay, twice makes you suffer deliciously, three times it's getting a bit annoying, and the rest is just history. And the cherry on top is... that kiss scene was completely discouraging. After so many almost-kiss scenes, I admit my hopes were up in the sky. But that kiss??? It was HORRIBLE. Total manipulation. It was the product of Jani being scared and desperate for help, so what do you do when you don't know how to convince a boy to help you? Of course, ask Teacher Jani and she will say, "Easy, just kiss him. Like that, you will mess with his feelings and confuse him enough to agree with whatever you say!" Yay!
An addition: What... what's the issue with the skin colours? I'm genuinely curious. It was mentioned EVERYWHERE and used to describe even the vaguest and non-important characters. It almost seemed like it was the only physical trait they had. I learnt about a dozen of different shades just because of this book. ?? The constant mention of colours made me feel uncomfortable.
In conclusion, I wanted to chuck the book out of the window. And myself with it. I'm so salty about this book and I cannot hide it. I probably sound like a 5-year-old complaining but I don't care. I just dipped my tongue into saltwater.