Shirayuki’s work continues through the busy flu season while they wait for the new flower breed to bloom. Meanwhile, while Zen and company are out on business, the question of Kiki’s suitor-to-be rears its head again amidst a series of suspicious attacks on nobles…
I wouldn’t call this a return to form exactly, but things definitely perk up a bit this volume and strive to be a bit more interesting than last volume’s research snoozefest. Small steps, at least.
There are some authors who get so enamoured of their world that they literally lose the plot and I definitely get the sense of that here. Why explore Shirayuki’s desire to ride a horse when we can just blow forward a year and it’s done?
I’m being snippy because this used to be a remarkably dependable series that has really stumbled for me lately. The flu season stuff is interesting since it shows the herbalists doing something useful, plus Ryu gets to grow a little.
There’s also a bath visit that features some okay banter, but also shoehorns in a ‘small boobs’ joke that couldn’t feel more jarring unless somebody threw a display case of Smucker’s at it.
The Zen side of things fares much better, probably because Kiki and Mitsuhide are more fun. What starts as an innocent mission from the king turns into a shockingly interesting plot, as random (?) nobles are being attacked.
I say attacked because this series remains absolutely toothless in its attitude towards violence, where a thrashing is the usual way of things and a plague claims a shockingly low number of victims. I don’t need the streets to run red, but come on…
Still, the Kiki and Mitsuhide dance continues and, while I appreciate the way Zen is showing himself to be a strong leader, I am pretty sure that I have the measure of exactly where this is going, even without the silly cliffhanger that ends things.
The art remains beyond reproach, I will say that much, it has never flagged this whole time. Less so the plotting, which exchanged love and derring-do for clerical work and the series’ usual trope of people being exhausted and falling asleep (for real, there is at least one of these per volume now).
As always, this sprawling cast is wasted without a decent cast list because it is nigh impossible to keep anybody outside the principals straight. Instances where you are clearly meant to go ‘hey, it’s them!’ abound, but it feels like being confronted at a high school reunion by somebody you haven’t thought of in twenty years and fumbling for a name.
Few series stay consistently good over their run, but this one seems unsure of what it wants to be any more and in searching for a new path it constantly throws out the things that made it worthwhile to begin with. Stories are better when building on their foundation, not knocking the struts out and finding a new plot.
3 stars - grousing aside, the Zen plot line is good and it is definitely more tolerable than the last volume. Faint praise, but that’s still all I can give at this point.