This is Pynchon's zenith as a prose stylist and his best and most mature work. To lovers of Those Other Pynchon Books (of which I rank among) this would seem like blasphemy but I really do think that time will treat this book fondly, early critics obviously had to rush out their reviews on a deadline and were thus unable to fully wrestle with a narrative that demands this much out of the reader and is this sprawling. It's not a perfect book, no Pynchon novel is but this is most likely his most beautifully connected and well-considered work bar none, which is especially impressive when it appears to be so disjointed at first. But Pynchon puts in so many through lines in which one can approach this leviathan if they just meet it on its own terms and consistently put in the time and attention it craves from the reader. And it does demand a lot, it's understandable why someone who didn't crack this the first time would not feel all too compelled in returning... obviously it's long as hell for one, and it's pretty much entirely dependent on the reader just trusting that Pynchon take them for the ride of their lives with the book's own Internal Logic and Rules which are not exactly congruent with established narrative fundamentals... I know Lynch comparisons are cliche but for once I really do think that Twin Peaks: The Return might be the most cogent comparison for this kind of storytelling, in the sense that as in that series there is very clearly an authorial grand design here composed of very potently established components that build up to something stunningly complex, specifically in how those motifs can be reassembled and restructured in the reader's Brain Space with every single reread while Pynchon's own "objective" motives for the story remain just tantalizingly out of reach; the motifs and story beats are all there, but Pynchon just writes in such a way where you can really just experience something completely new out of the same fundamentals every single time, because the entire thing is steeped in such a consistent dreamlike logic that presumably only Pynchon fully understands, and allows the generous freedom of letting the reader piece that design together in the ways they prefer.
In slightly less prolix terms, he is not some Smart Guy Who Hates You like some accuse him of being but is instead someone who trusts the reader to interpret as they see fit with the parts they've already been given. This book is, at its core, about the holy pilgrimage that is the shared consciousness of its characters (and thus all of humanity), so you don't have to understand everything to the tiniest detail, because that isn't how life works either. As basic as it is to say, the journey is literally the destination here, and the journey here is about Our journey as a species, which is why the sprawl is completely justified. This is a book about everything We are, as told in the distinct lens of Pynchon's that is so valuable to the sprawling universe of fiction and the eternal solace we can seek in art.
"... was the signal going around the planet, or through it, or was linear progression not at all the point, with everything instead happening simultaneously at every part of the circuit?"
This style of narrative creates a book that actually, as best as anything can, feels infinite... something that sort of flew over my head (har-har) the first couple times was how these aforementioned narrative components are all meshing together to inform what is very much a mythic tale, in service of that central pilgrimage. The Odyssean quest is implicit here, but Pynchon is pulling from so many avenues of history, spirituality/philosophy, and fictional lineage, so that the allusions he makes can be mined from ad infinitum; so this actually ends up being Actual Myth in its very composition, given the way everything here can be played with and restructured like a narrative Rubix cube, forever reinterpretable and elastic. What this leads to is a sense of worldbuilding and nearly Infinitely Expansive awe and intrigue that would put most fantasy novelists out of commission, despite (and because of) the fact this just ostensibly takes place in Our World. A lot of the motifs here are primal and pretty much timeless; water and darkness, light and earth, civilization and its clash with the primal human need to be "out in the wind" as it were, the co-conscious and collective conscious and of course night and day, sleep and dreams... these motifs are what Pynchon uses to paint his extraordinarily ambitious fictional canvas, Literally Everything is working to build a mind-bogglingly vast fictional universe that you can just dive in and out of at any point as you see fit and take something new from. The book itself is long enough by page count, but the effect its actual narrative and structure creates is as though it's its own unending Library of Babel. This is a novel to be admired for just how intricately and convincingly its author creates a pulsing, breathing world [and it is indeed, everything in reality is conscious, that is one of the main themes of the book] that feels as though it has always existed and will exist forever, just like the universe we live in outside of the pages of books.
Is there some fluff? Probably, sure, the book is eleven-hundred pages long so not everything is going to click, there's certainly some moments which come to mind I can pick out and critique, but the thing is that everything is working so holistically on a chapter-by-chapter level that even in the bits I don't like quite as much, I would be hard pressed to think of what specifically I'd have left on the cutting room floor. Every damn page progresses the plot, even if it's using oblique methods to do so. Every character is important to the grand cosmos of the book, even those who may seem like one-off or joke characters are essential to what Pynchon is crafting here.
And oh voluminous vectors, the prose (I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself). This may receive the most contention on these parts of Goodreads, but imo this is Pynchon's finest hour as a stylist; the sort of gritty coarseness to the prose in Gravity's Rainbow has its own abrasive charm, but the prose in Against the Day is clearly an established master at the peak of his craft. It's the enviable control over tone and atmosphere Pynchon has in this book that especially elevates it to Olympian heights imo... there's an abiding spiritual tenderness toward the characters and story that Pynchon employs in this work that exists but is sort of at the margins in many of his other works (Vineland and Mason and Dixon come closest), and also suffusing that with a roiling feeling of apocalyptic dread and foreboding that is so befitting to the themes of a world teetering on collapse. There is such a melancholy and empathy toward the time period and characters in this book and by extension to the human race as a whole, even when Pynchon holds his cast accountable for their decisions. The sentences are winding and complex, but you could never accuse this of being purple prose imo because it just communicates the tone it wants to portray to such all-abiding perfection not to mention how well it continually establishes the book's cosmos, and this approach is sustained from page one to the last. Take this scene featuring the character Stray:
"She got sometimes to feeling too close to an edge, a due date, the fear of living on borrowed time. Because for all her winters got through and returns to valley and creekside in the spring, for all the day-and-night hard riding through the artemisia setting off sage grouse like thunderclaps to right and left, with the once-perfect rhythms of the horse beneath her gone faltering and mortal, yet she couldn't see her luck as other than purchased in the worn unlucky coins of all those girls who hadn't kept coming back, who'd gone down before their time, Dixies and Fans and Mignonettes, too fair to be alone, too crazy for town, ending their days too soon in barrelhouses, in shelters dug not quite deep enough into the unyielding freeze of the hillside, for the sake of boys too stupefied with their own love of exploding into the dark, with girl-size hands clasped, too tight to pry loose, around a locket, holding a picture of a mother, of a child, left back the other side of a watershed, birth names lost as well as behind aliases taken for reasons of commerce or plain safety, out in some blighted corner too far from God's notice to matter much what she had done or would have to do to outride those onto whose list of whose chores the right to judge had found its way it seemed. . . Stray was here, and they were gone, and Reef was God knew where - Frank's wishful family look-alike, Jesse's father and Webb's uncertain avenger and her own sad story, her dream, recurring, bad, broken, never come true."
So many motifs there, all in service of a central emotional wavelength he wants to get the reader on with the imagery, phrasing, themes... the prose just rides on its own tracks and soars across the pages, Pynchon has no need for traditional syntax because the mood he creates is rich and strange and moving for its digressions and interjections and what at first seem like strange asides that are really getting at core themes of the novel, propulsive throughout every sentence of this 1,085 page universe. The writing feels constantly expansive and tickling to nearly every side of my imaginative faculties and just constantly gets me considering and reanalyzing everything as I come across it, it's the closest a book has ever come to me where unraveling its deeper mysteries actually felt addictive, and especially exciting still knowing I haven't and never will get everything there is to be gotten out of this book. In earlier days I would have considered that a constraint, of not having all the answers, but I realize now that this is the point of life and art, for me at least.
There's so much more to the myth elements and what I love about it is that it actually centers the characters themselves. Postmodern characters are often accused of being ciphers, as merely drivers for the themes and structure surrounding them, and while this may technically be the case here, the book is overall about the characters, and the world itself which is alive. There are times where I am tempted to call this book "Lovecraftian" because of how the characters appear to lack agency in the face of a tempestuous universe conceived and maintained by oblique cosmological forces... the stuff going on here in the background in terms of the co-conscious, dreaming, accelerationism and the political forces of history is seriously weird, and something I'm still parsing out; there is a lot of mind bending stuff occurring here where Pynchon's worldbuilding is sort of built off an oblique but still clearly intentional Tarot / Kabbalah mythology which is something I didn't really get until I read it the third time, but it is possibly THE key to what's going on here and way more prominent than I initially realized. Spiritually this is maybe the richest novel Pynchon has ever penned. There's a lot going on here with the mathematic structure of the novel, the mobius strip and concept of eternal return and ascent / descent, and math is not really my brain language no matter how interesting I find it conceptually, but the motifs Pynchon uses to highlight its importance are enticing and vivid enough that I understand what he's getting at when combined with all of the other stuff I already feel like I'm more attuned to.
I think this is a far too humanity focused novel to term it as "cosmic horror" or anything of the sort [there is one "At the Mountains of Madness"-esque stretch of the book, mixed with its own mindbending "sci-fi" mechanics, that executes an excellent homage to the style, though]. Each character is a separate entity but they are all also One, they are all part of the greater cosmos, equal in how the entire universe of the book is structured, they are the world, they are a reflection of our world and people reflected on a world "set to the side of this one". These are very unconventional takes Pynchon is spinning on fictional and mythic archetypes throughout history [Lake and Webb's Genesis-inspired story is a good example, as well as Cyprian and Yashmeen's Orphic journey out of the underworld] but even with all the immense concepts they represent, he still gives all the best of them time to shine on their own terms, to make an impact as individual people who really feel like they could exist somewhere on the endless wheel of life the book, and perhaps our world, exists in. The genre homage elements don't do anything to deter from this, they are part of the point, these characters' transformations and strange, emotionally tender metaphysical apotheoses throughout the story works perfectly for a work that is absurd and surreal and not entirely in line with "Realism" as we understand it, it needs to have these genre elements and spins on tradition, the story is partially about how everything can be viewed as the same stories we tell ourselves repeating throughout the history of our race, and how they all really get down to the same fundamental things at the end of the day, and how arguably everything is ultimately about how humans want one thing, to be free and wild and "out in the wind" and how the forces of history and authority are forever in conflict with that Natural desire. Every character contributes to this theme beautifully in their own ways, they are their own world even while they fight for a better world, and even if they fail.
Overall this is just like how my brain works, contrary to people who may feel this is too disjointed the digressions just felt like second nature to me, and continue to be more and more understandable with every read, I think I'm inclined to love it and most of his books for that reason. There's so much here that is stimulating to my autist brain and I feel like the book's narrative and worldbuilding really works to that same wavelength. I don't know if Pynchon is autistic obviously but at the very least his work is interpretable as such, it's neurodivergent af, it is a work about imagination and the transformation through imagination, which I as a disabled person am very attached to, especially being given such grace to be trusted by the author to enjoy it at my own interpretation and pace. There's plenty to criticize about Pynchon's treatment of gender in the book, which I have in my notes that I'm planning to eventually all piece together into a chapter-by-chapter breakdown, but there are some very smart ways he reconstructs the concept of Gender here and I felt myself really pulled to how I myself understand my own identity. Basically, it's a very Me book, on nearly every level, and can be read on all of those levels at once or separately and come out with more joy every single time. The excitement just never ends with this book for me, contributing even more in my headspace to the themes of infinity here. I am quite sick to say the least for fear of getting too personal here, but I've come to terms with knowing that I need to believe in some kind of infinity at this point in my life, when I don't know what awaits even just tomorrow for me. Books can't be direct mirror images of the world waiting outside, but that I can create and maintain a world within my brain just from reading letters arranged in a certain way, it gets much easier to believe that there's so much more to this no matter what happens in my body and brain.
Like I've said there's a lot going on here, so it really does take commitment, but the beauty of it is that it's really not that hard either, it may be dense in how much Pynchon is working with here in structuring the cosmos of the book, but like I said not everything is graspable and linearity isn't the point, this just on its own terms works so potently in just taking the reader to the very ends of the universe and back in terms of imagination. It is the ultimate adventure, encompassing everything in fiction history you can conceive of and doing it in its own unique, eternally inventive logic, it is perfectly palatable as a narrative despite not having conventional build up or resolution, if you only accept the terms of the author's skyship odyssey. I think early critics and detractors ought to return to this if they have the time because it really does fully reveal itself with the rereads like all the best books. That being said it's gained a much wider readership and appreciation in recent years and that's exciting. But yeah, this is his best imo, if the page count is too much, I promise it's worth it if your brain is on the same track as this kind of storytelling, if this appeals to you, absolutely check this out, this does benefit a lot from its structure as a sort of sibling to Gravity's Rainbow I do think regardless of your previous Pynchon knowledge this is great on its own terms enough that it can be enjoyed for what it is no matter what, given that what it is can be so well-controlled by the reader and their engagement. I am so glad to be able to experience something like this and know it exists.
"Throughout the journey, then, Kit had dreamed of the moment he had stepped through the Gate. Often the dream came just before dawn, after a lucid flight, high, aethereal, blue, arriving at a set of ropes or steel cables suspended, bridgelike, above a deep chasm. The only way to cross is face-skyward beneath the cables, hand over hand using legs and feet as well, with the sheer and unmeasurable drop at his back. The sunset is red, violent, complex, the sun itself the permanent core of an explosion as yet unimagined. Somehow in this dream the Arch has been replaced by Kit himself, a struggle he feels on waking in muscles and joints to become the bridge, the arch, the crossing over. The last time he had the dream was just before rolling in to Irkutsk on the Trans-Siberian. A voice he knew he should recognize whispered, "You are released". He began to fall into the great chasm, and woke into the wine-colored light of the railroad carriage, lamps swaying, samovers at either end gasping and puffing like miniature steam engines. The train was just pulling into the station."