Real talk, I wasn't even sure I was going to finish this book, and if I did, it would take me awhile. Yeah... kinda jumped the gun on that one. Long story short, I marathon read this in about three hours, only stopping to take notes, and in reality, the rating may be a 3.5, but I'm not only keeping this author's Sleeping Beauty retelling on my shelves, but I'm probably going to give her take on Snow White a spin as well. I was a bit wary of this book, seeing as it's indie published: a high rating doesn't always guarantee a solid read (the author has a smaller marketing scale and kind has to rely on word of mouth among friends and family as opposed to pumping the press with an agent). And while this book is far from perfect, it kept me engaged, tugged at all the right heartstrings (the blurb doesn't lie), and actually does something different by way of the beast.
Pros
-Tinged with Gothic/Thematic to a Tee
*From the castle, to the beast prowling the grounds frightening Rose in the dead of night, even descriptions of the landscape were beautifully macabre (ex: Rose observes a tapestry dangling like shredded flesh and tree branches that hang like skeletal arms).
*Wolves take a bite out of Thorn (the Beast) in the woods just beyond Rose's window, and she does the OG Gothic trope: runs through the castle into the cold winter's night in her nightgown. Candles burn to the wick as shadows dance into the dark. Someone make a short film of this or better yet, a film student make a fan film.
-Rose is an active heroine without becoming "too stupid to live"
*She runs to Thorn when the wolves appear not out of curiosity or turning purely ornamental: she's a semi-skilled archer, sending arrows into the animals to protect Thorn.
*Rose also doesn't allow herself to be dressed like a doll and do the old "dresses are too fancy for me" routine. Instead, she opts to re-stitch the ones that don't suit her, making for a durable, personable wardrobe.
*She also retains a good memory for healing (ex: when Thorn's wound becomes infected, she sends the fairy residing in the castle out to find the herb and makes a paste).
-Complex Characters
*Rose and Thorn deal with conflict in their doings/affections towards one another
1.Rose loves her family and wishes to return to her realm, but also knows she must find out what the curse is/break it, but since she's grown to care for Thorn, leaving won't be so cut and dry, ensuring she'll be unhappy either way.
2.Thorn loves Rose, but lies by omission for six weeks when the portal opens up, allowing for her escape. He knows keeping her in his realm is wrong, but his loneliness has made him selfish. And once he admits his wrongdoing, she's rightfully upset, but still into him.
-Breaking the Mold
*First off, despite the Gothic aesthetics, our beast is far from brooding (Thorn is giddy when a puppy stumbles upon the castle, makes sure to accommodate Rose's every need, takes her skating and makes jokes without being snarky)
*There's a moment when Thorn says "You don't like to fit in; you're not like other girls" and typically, Rose would've gone all *blush*. But instead, she laments that fitting in isn't all bad; it means you've got connection to people. It's when you start faking/sacrificing your opinions/values that it gets dicey. YES! This, right here, *chef's kiss*.
*Unlike most YA BATB retellings, there's no Gaston or love triangle. Rose does admit to having kissed someone prior, but reassures Thorn that he's only a friend and there were no fireworks.
-Chemistry and Emotional Gravitas
*Feel like these go hand in hand, since their connection makes for the pull. The author makes you feel the sadness and loss mingled with love when Rose returns to the mortal realm, her frustration upon realizing the beautiful ball was useless/nothing but a distraction because it changed nothing but loving the momentary distraction anyway. And yes, that final line did warm the cockles of my heart.
Homages
-Hades and Persephone
1.Rose is whisked into Thorn's realm while picking flowers in the meadow, much like the earth splitting open beneath Persephone, taking her to the Underworld whilst picking the narcissus.
2.Rose stumbles upon a poppy early on: poppies are given to Demeter by the gods after Persephone disappears. They're also used to remember those slain in battle.
3.A deathly decay settles upon the meadow when Rose is taken, as well as the garden being likened to a graveyard (Hades is the god of the Underworld and thus Persephone becomes queen in this land of the dead).
4.Thorn not telling Rose of the opening/way to escape is sort of akin to some variants of the Hades/Persephone myth where she's tricked by Hades into eating the pomegranate seeds which tethers her to him. Both men do this out of loneliness/desperation for the woman to stay.
5.Thorn and his castle doing its/his best to accommodate Rose (making her favorite meals, having her favorite books in his library), felt very Hades making sure Persephone wants for nothing and treats her with the upmost respect.
6.Rose coming to the realm in the winter/not able to leave for six months and also marking her departure by the arrival of a garden blossoming. Very Persephone living with Hades for six months when it's winter in the mortal realm and returning to Demeter six months later come spring.
-Jean Cocteau's, La Belle et la Bête (1946)
1.Thorn has dinner with Rose every night, much like Cocteau's beast, but unlike that beast who proposes to Belle each night, Thorn waits further down the way.
2.Rose proclaiming to the meadow she must pass through because "I am here to set him free" reminded me of Belle returning to the castle saying "Beast! I am here!"
3.The mirrors revealing Thorn's mortal face and Rose's father's illness, prompting her to want to return to the mortal realm, were reminiscent of Belle looking through the magic mirror and seeing Beast's sorrow upon her departure.
4.Her family staying on in their castle was also a nice homage to Beast promising Belle that her father can stay with them.
-Disney (Kind of my least favorite)
1.Rose is really into books, much like Beauty, and much like that Beast, Thorn takes Rose on a tour of his library.
2.Skating scene where Rose must learn balance is ripped straight out of the movie, although that Beauty was an expert skater.
3.Ballroom attire: Rose=white and yellow gown with many layers and Thorn=a blue suit with his hair clipped back... Beauty=we all know the gorgeous yellow dress seemingly pressed from buttercups (we don't talk about the 2017 film here) and Beast=blue waistcoat and suit with blue ribbon tying back his mane.
Cons
-Needs an editor
*From the strange spacing to the wordiness (the author has a wonderful romantic part where Thorn asks "You said you looked at me earlier; what did you see?" and Rose goes "You. I saw you". Gorgeous, right? Until we get this awkward explanation of what she means. And even sans romance, Roses goes on and on about loving solitude, and it's like, we got it the first time a paragraph ago).
*Also, info dumping is a huge reason I kind of didn't feel a reader's connection to Rose's mortal life: Devil's advocate, the story and character growth take place in the Fey realm, but every human tie to Rose was explained so clunkily.
*Modern dialect creeps in: words and phrases such as "Um" and "You're bleeding pretty badly", and possibly the worst of all, "She's not all that" took me right out of the story.
The author's talent and penchant for storytelling has me overlooking those cons. I will definitely be carrying on.