Things The Series Did Right
-Worldbuilding
-Descriptions
I could picture the characters and surroundings quite well. It all seemed very real to me, which is not always easy to do, but I rarely struggled with the writing and with imagining things in the books. Even during boring parts I would be able to read through it smoothly because the writing always flowed very well for me, and rarely left me confused or having to go back and re-read something. Sometimes certain parts even felt like how I myself would write something.
-Side characters
-Side characters getting development/multiple POVs
Some people don’t like the multiple POVs, but I personally do, just because it’s nice to get away from the main gang for a while. It also makes the story flow faster and more smoothly, for me anyway. HoN tries to do that, but fails miserably. Probably because I don’t care about ANY of the characters in that series, nor the plot or “writing” (if you can call it that). I think there were clear and distinct differences between the groups (Shadowhunters, the four Downworlder groups, mundanes, Silent Brothers, angels, demons, etc.) and I was able to get a sense of each of them. Obviously I wish that they’d focused on more than others, but that’s a different story.
-Humor
-Building up suspense
-Lots of action and fight scenes. I liked how some of them were especially violent.
-Names. Yes, I liked quite a lot of the nomenclature in here.
-Diversity (It’s not required, but it is nice when a series has it)
In fact, now that I think about it, pretty much all my favorite characters are nonwhite. Maia, Raphael, Magnus, Jem (I’m sure there are some dumbasses in the fandom who think those last two are white, even though it’s clearly stated that they’re not), and while I hate the term “whitewashing” for its overuse by abhorrent anti-white SJWs, I think it would probably be appropriate in the case of people wanting Magnus or Jem casted as white actors.
Things The Series Struggled Quite A Lot With
-Having the characters always be likeable or sympathize-able.
-Forced relationships. Everybody is in a relationship. Everybody.
-Repeated descriptions
-Loose ends.
The biggest one being that the Shadowhunters never learn from their bigotry. They, even some of the main characters, still think they’re better than Downworlders and mundanes, even after the sixth book. Which is really, really disappointing.
-Inconsistencies with the characters.
Something about these books that makes them so up –and-down for me is the fact that the characters just don’t seem consistent to me. Like let’s see—one minute, Alec is a raging asshole, the next, he’s this shy sensitive guy. I literally think he has two separate people living in him. That’s the only explanation. And Clary…the movie Clary and book Clary are COMPLETELY DIFFERENT PEOPLE. In the movie I felt so bad for how she was treated, she was nice to everyone and the Lightwoods preyed on her and ripped her to shreds, but in the books…in the books everybody loves her, almost immediately, and she is high-and-mighty as a result (though she’s like that anyway). It’s just super freaky. It’s almost like I can’t decide on a final opinion about these people, because they are so contradictory in themselves.
-Double Standards
I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but the following are a disturbing amount of double standards in these books that I’d like to point out:
-Jocelyn makes ONE mistake (erasing her daughter’s memories to protect her) and she is set up on a cross and burned to death for it. Clary KEEPS making the SAME mistakes over and over and OVER again (being rash and impulsive, running off into danger, having no regard for who it affects whatsoever), yet is praised endlessly to the very end. The ONLY time somebody decides to call her out on her shit is when Luke scolds her for creating that stupid Portal in City of Glass, but then again, Luke is barely around after that, and we conveniently leave Clary being surrounded by all who love her.
-Jocelyn makes that mistake and no one can forgive her. Alec makes the mistake of considering taking Magnus’s immortality away, and we have a whole army raiding down on Magnus to forgive Alec and get back together with him immediately. How DARE Magnus be a little hurt by someone’s betrayal and therefore want some time away from them???
-Clary gets angry all the time, screams at people, and oftentimes gets violent. Yet we’re supposed to just accept this without complain, cuz you know, that’s Clary for ya! Jocelyn gets mad ONE time, justifiably, because her stupid selfish daughter goes running off and no one thought to tell Jocelyn this or even sympathize with her, after she went through the EFFORT to bring Clary somewhere safe, and we’re supposed to believe Jocelyn’s not allowed to get angry at all. She’s vilified for having the same human emotion that CLARY is always exhibiting.
-Clary arrives in the City of Glass completely shocked and appalled that no one wants to see her, and it’s a big old pityfest when Jace yells at her (even though he was right about what he said), and poor Clary, poor poor wittle Clary…when Jocelyn arrives in the City of Glass to see her daughter, after committing the unthinkable act of WAKING UP FROM A COMA, Clary fucking screams at her and RAILROADS her into the next town! But Clary is still treated like the victim, even though she’s the one who abused her mother, and acted EXACTLY the same way she didn’t want someone else acting towards her earlier on.
I mean goodness, there are enough double standards here to fill up a whole train station! It’s like unless you absolutely agree with every single thing the main group of characters are doing, and unless you absolutely love them, you’re just a bad person who deserves to be cast aside. No matter what they’re doing is stupid, and never mind how it may be affecting you…you don’t matter, they do, so you HAVE to agree with what they’re doing or else. I mean jeez…just because someone’s the main character doesn’t mean they’re perfect, always right, and exempt from criticism. A good writer knows this.
That’s why I’d started to have some faith in CoG when Luke, the closest anyone came in this entire series, actually called Clary out on her shit when she decided to go and create that stupid Portal, literally in the middle of Magnus and Luke yelling at her to stop it and explaining to her how it’s dangerous and why she shouldn’t do it. I would’ve thought Clary would’ve learned a huge lesson after that, that she would’ve grown and matured and developed as a character and been more thoughtful from that point forward when doing things. But no…she literally just keeps on doing the same thing over and over and OVER throughout the entire series, and people stop criticizing her and instead start praising her! She isn’t brave...she’s stupid. It’s as plain and simple as that.
This series has the exact opposite problem of Eona. In that series, the main character is mistreated horribly and she’s actually a great person who deserved a lot more credit and respect. In this series…you freaking hate the main character, she’s so unlikeable, but she’s a total Mary Sue because everybody loves her, and the people that ever criticize are the vilified for it immediately. And what is with the ageism in this books? Honestly, I love YA, but it really feels like all the teen characters in here are treated like speshul little snowflakes just because they’re young, and ALL of the adult characters—with the exception of Magnus—are treated as insignificant, annoying, ignorant people that just need to be pushed aside. And Jocelyn and Luke’s love is treated as “disgusting” while Clary and Jace’s “I love you after only a few months and will sacrifice everything for you at the cost of hurting my mother” is supposed to be sweet???
Also, Can I just say that some people would LOVE to have Jocelyn as a mother? I mean, ASIDE from not being allowed to watch anime/Disney movies (but then again, Clary probably did that at Simon’s house, or in secret, I mean how could Jocelyn actually know?), she actually let Clary have the freedom to socialize. When I was little, I wasn’t allowed to do ANYTHING. I wasn’t allowed to have friends come over, I wasn’t allowed to go to other friends’ houses, I wasn’t allowed to go out anywhere with them, even if there was adult supervision…hell I was barely allowed to talk on the phone or online. I wasn’t allowed to even trick-or-treat with my own friend who lived in the same neighborhood as me, I had to STRUGGLE just to do THAT for a LITTLE while. So to read about this little brat who got to have it all while she was growing up…it just pisses me the fuck off. And I don’t want ANYONE to try to tell me that Clary Fray was sheltered and treated like a prisoner and not allowed to have any freedom. Because if I’D walked out of the house to go somewhere with someone when I was her age, I’d have had the motherfucking cops called on me.
The Characters
Clary- Okay in the first book, then became a bitch. She snaps at everybody. I don’t like people who snap.
Jace- He goes back and forth between being funny to me, to being annoyingly boring, overdone, and the center of everything. I mean does he have to be loved by EVERYONE? The thing about the “bad boy” or the “anti-hero” or whatever is that they’re not supposed to be loved by the majority of the characters, and in fact, that’s what makes it so much more likely that the reader/viewer will like them. They’re not shoved down your throat. I thought he was pretty okay in the first three books, but the thing that just made me annoyed with him in the last three is that it still continued to be all about him—we have so many characters in here. Can’t we have the central plot focus on somebody else for a change? Like he is literally always at the center of everything—Valentine’s son, cursed, heavenly fire running through his veins, possessed—like wow. EVERYTHING happens to him. He never gets a break, does he? It’s just overkill to me.
Isabelle- Okay in the first book, then became a bitch. She snaps at everybody and has a massive victim complex.
Alec- He is really back-and-forth for me. Books 1, 5, and 6 he mostly annoyed me. Books 2 and 3 he was alright. I don’t really like how the fact that he’s gay and oppressed seems to be used as an excuse for his irrational anger towards people who haven’t done anything to him. I don’t tolerate those kind of people or that type of behavior. I am a very staunch believer in, “Judge a person on their character”, though I know that sadly many other people aren’t. Plus, you could easily argue that he’s also privileged in a way, since he’s a Shadowhunter, is part of a prestige family, has friends by his side all the time, and in the end, his father accepts him. And he’s got the delicious Magnus Bane in love with him, even after being whiny and difficult towards him.
I also don’t like how he’s always defending Isabelle. It’s like she’s allowed to be a mean and rude to everybody as much as she wants, yet no one’s ever allowed to be remotely smart to her back. Or even when they’re being NICE to her he still gets mad for some reason…
Simon- The only character who ends up changing for the better. In the first two books I did not like him because of the obnoxious , “I’m a nice guy and I’m being friendzoned” mentality. But once he dropped that, it was really nice. I don’t like how the ONLY reason the others seem to care about him after a while is because he’s a vampire and then potentially a Shadowhunter. They’re still stuck-up assholes towards mundanes, they still don’t really like Simon for Simon, they just like what he can do and provide for them. If he’d remained a mundane, they wouldn’t have given half a shit about him. And that makes me so mad. I mean it’s weird in a way, so many readers out there love Jace and Alec and Isabelle, but the truth is, they wouldn’t give two shits about you guys. At all. They really wouldn’t. Because you’re mundanes. I mean why would you like characters that you know for a fact would hate you if they were real???
Valentine and Sebastian— Valentine was a pretty good villain, Sebastian…eh. The only things I found fascinating about him were that A) he literally fooled everyone for an entire book that he was someone else completely, from his name and identity down to his looks, which in retrospect makes them all look stupid. So kudos to him for that. And B) his final moments in Heavenly Fire as Jonathan Morgenstern. That was pretty epic right there. Didn’t know that was going to happen.
Helen and Aline-Really wish there would’ve been more of them in here…they seemed a lot stronger and more likeable than our main heroines.
Jocelyn and Luke-One of the best couples in here, but they’re sadly shoved aside a lot, because there’s this weird anti-older people stigma going on in the books. Like anyone who’s over their teens or twenties suddenly don’t matter anymore, are “disgusting” for being in love, and deserve ridicule. Meanwhile we’re subjected to having “Clace” and “Sizzy” shoved down our throats like they’re the most important things ever. Get me a bucket.
I’ve already talked numerous times about how Jocelyn needs to do something about Clary’s attitude. If Clary were my child, I’d beat her. I’d beat her hard. There is literally not ONE book in this entire series where she is remotely respectful to her mother. Clary is so lucky I’m not her mother, or she’d be in for a whole different life.
By the way, Jocelyn’s a painter, and I would’ve loved more details about that. I mean in all the detail they go in about Shadowhunting, fighting demons, killing things, etc…it would be nice if they could talk about somebody else’s hobbies for a change. Something that was actually peaceful and didn’t involve so much stress or violence. But then, maybe that’s because I started re-watching Bob Ross when I started doing this review.
Maia (The REAL heroine)— Oh Maia….how I love you. You rock. Everything about you rocks. Stay you, keep doing you, don’t ever change. And truthfully speaking, you deserved Simon WAY more than Isabitch ever did.
Raphael and Magnus- My two faves!!!! I look forward to reading The Bane Chronicles, especially as one of the stories has Raphael in it too! They are both so awesome, and I love how they don’t hold back from mocking the Shadowhunters. I love how they look out for their own interests. I admire their self-preservation, rather than being guilt-tripped by other people and their silly “morals”. It’s nice when characters have backbones, ya know?