This was a fun fantasy with a sweet romance. Overall I would say that it was enjoyable, but the book had a superficial feel to it, both in the setting and the romance.
Writing-
The writing was alright. Their investigation seemed a little haphazard and unprofessional to me, like they were all slightly incompetent. For instance, here’s a quote: “We haven’t been able to tell the king about the ludrako because it would elicit far too many questions.” Uhhhh, how does that make ANY SENSE when the king is heading the investigation? Keeping knowledge to yourself so you can avoid questions?! *shaking my head*
Here’s another quote: “If he’s right, if the beast marked me, I could be leading trouble straight to the blessing [herd]. But Irving injured the creature badly enough it fled. Tonight, it will likely be in its lair, nursing its wounds. And I need the unicorns’ gentle reassurance and memories.” So because you want to be comforted, you’re willing to risk leading the beast to the unicorns and destroying your entire mission? She has no idea where it is or what it’s doing- it’s just uninformed conjecture that it will be in its lair. That seemed like very silly, very immature decision making to me.
So in that regard, the writing seemed juvenile.
Some aspects of the story I found to be cheesy, like the whole protect-the-unicorns part was pretty sappy. (And definitely the ending scene with the unicorns was way too sweet for my tastes.) Also, there wasn’t quite the depth I would have expected to find in regards to a secret society like their Order. I mean, the king invited non-Order members to get in on the secret without too much concern, and even invited Irving into the society without really knowing him. That diminished the magnitude of the Order, and made it less believable that their secret could really be such a tight secret in the first place. (Besides, how do you truly hide a herd of unicorns for generations from anyone accidentally coming across them in their secluded valley?)
Characters-
Although the characters were superficial, I liked them well enough. I really liked the girl friendships and the strong sibling relationship between Audette and the king.
Romance-
They had good chemistry. I liked whenever the prince put his hands on Audette’s waist and pulled her to him. He was flirty and cute to her.
However, I was pretty put-off by Irving flirting with a random noblewoman when he is moments from getting MARRIED in the opening chapter. What a d-bag, asking her to kiss him as he heads to his own wedding! Obviously he doesn’t think that’s cheating on his bride (?!!), but what about the fact that while he doesn’t know who she is, he knows she is in his bride’s small entourage, and that she knows the princess- shouldn’t that temper his rash behavior? And if not that, then he also knows anyone could turn the corner and see him kissing someone else. Let’s just say I was not impressed and SO GLAD the princess ditched him. However, it seems that Audette was more concerned about the fact that he didn’t want to marry her than the fact that he was perfectly fine with cheating on her moments from their ceremony. Thankfully, the cheating concern was generally addressed, but not to my satisfaction: he never seemed to recognize anything wrong with his specific actions that day, regardless if he felt a spark with her or not!
Anyway, if you can get over that, then you’d probably like the romance. By the end he seemed completely devoted to Audette and very sweet. I was convinced he would be faithful (even though I still harbored a little grudge, as I mentioned above).
I really liked that scene when they changed their mind about how/when they would get married. No spoilers here, but yeah, they were going to do something rash and selfish and I was SO GLAD they stopped themselves. Yay for that scene!
I also really liked the scene when Irving and the king race to reach Audette first to explain their side of the story- that was a great scene! Speaking of which, I liked that misunderstandings weren’t prolonged too long in this book.
Content-
Language- no swearing
Sex- no sex or talk of sex. Just some kissing. chemistry.
Cover- I like it
I read this on KU