1.5/5
I was completely let down and underwhelmed. The start of this novel was totally promising and opened a seriously mysterious circumstance. The story centered around the perspectives of three people: a couple Eleanor and Richard, and their lodger Zoe, they all lived in the new house that Eleanor and Richard had recently moved in with their two children, Rosie and Isobel. And then, the mystery slowly turned up as readers were revealed with every event that led up to the anomalies happening in the house. Sound intriguing, right? Well, it was the execution of the story that troubled me the most.
What I noticed first was the digestible writing. It was the kind of writing that easily imprinted itself into my mind, which increased my interest with the book. The words were carefully phrased and had a very slow tempo to it that I felt really appropriate with the atmosphere created for this novel. The suspense was built up gradually in accordance with the wording, which, in my opinion, always kept me on edge all the time... until I realized that the story was actually... nothing.
The feeling was like some one gave me a really heavy punch in the stomach, and in the chest, and in the head, I supposed. It was like the somber reality hit me so hard when I expected it the most. Let me clarify. The plot boosted my curiosity as Eleanor was aware of strange writings in the house, and her bizarre illness whenever she was in the house (her illness was gone when she got out of the house), and the horrible sensation emanated from the upstairs room, and Rosie's weird behaviors. These events all created a very frightening atmosphere that added up to the real mystery of the house: Emily. Eleanor discovered that Emily was the child of the previous family that used to live here, and she presented a series of strange scary activities. The neighbors noticed all kinds of weird things happening in the house as well. All of that, really interesting to read, right? I thought that too. Besides, Zoe's and Richard's narratives also intensified that feeling I got when reading this novel.
However, I was extremely frustrated. It turned out that the narratives of Zoe and Richard were not, in all cases, relevant to the main story. No one cared about the strangeness of the house. I thought this would be solved at the end of the book, but NO. I didn't know why the author let Zoe tell her boring story about her boring job, her unhappiness with her new seeming boyfriend Adam, her slight obsession with Adam and his present girlfriend Kathryn. Zoe also told about her unsuccessful relationship with her previous boyfriend Rob that was utterly irrelevant and tedious to read. This applied to Richard too. Richard kept thinking about his academic failures, his incompetence in his job, and his uselessness when he worked at home (he was immensely useless - doing nothing useful). I was under the impression that he was such a despicable man and was not deserving of his wife Eleanor. As I said, Zoe and Richard did absolutely nothing that could help Eleanor explain the mystery of the house. They didn't even notice anything strange. Yes, they did notice, but very little and then they pretended to be ignorant of it. It was such a stupid behavior! So Eleanor was the only protagonist in this book. However, the story didn't resolve thoroughly this mystery. Until the end, I still didn't get to the bottom of the history of the house, what really happened to Emily, to Rosie, why Eleanor was always sick in the house, the writings made by Emily, why the house was supposedly haunted. The final solution was very simple and gave me the impression that the author failed to solve the mystery herself, so she found the only way to escape the story that was totally dull and insipid.
It occurred to me that it was likely that this book was not intended to be a psychological thriller. Indeed, the story was not focused on the mystery as much as I like, rather than Zoe's life story and Richard's incompetence in work and relationship. Perhaps the author wanted to concentrate on telling the relationship of three main characters of this novel, and how the weirdness of the house impacted on it. Well, in that case, I must say the attempt to make it work was highly unsuccessful. I failed to see the connection in any of those things aforementioned that might combine together to make a good story. There was no starting point, the execution was poorly done, and the ending was not solved intensively.