This was a fun thriller. I think this story was written at a great pace and had a cool concept. Some of it was really far fetched. I would sum this up as good, not great.
First the good: I like Hope as a person. I love the idea of the society with all these different personality types working together. There is such diversity in the group, and even a LGBT is represented
I loved that this story started right off with the first letter. Like I said before, the pacing was right on. I liked that I didn’t have to wait for the society to appear in this book, it pretty much gets introduced in chapter one. The mystery of who the society is becomes really important as the story moves forward. I enjoyed guessing who done it, and was shocked at the reveal. I am sure most readers will be surprised as well. (that might be because we are not given enough information, and a key detail is left out of the narrative until almost the end, which leads me right into…)
The Not So Good: First things first, Hope’s frailty. Cystic fibrosis would have been bad enough, but this story went a little too far. In a conversation Hope’s mother states that she was born 4 and 1/2 months premature. 4 AND 1/2 MONTHS! My son was born 4 months premature (24 weeks) and I can tell you right now that sort of prematurity alone would have been almost fatal. She was 22 weeks pregnant when Hope was born. Most hospitals in this country wouldn’t even consider a 22 week pregnancy viable (the survival rate is 2%-9% at 22 weeks). Cystic fibrosis is awful and deadly, and I think the author should have stopped right there. It does explain why her mother might have a been a bit overprotective.
The only visitor Hope has is her crush. Hmm, that seems mighty coincidental. Ethan as the love interest made me yawn. He is so ideal and boring I don’t understand why he was needed in the story. There were a lot of extreme characters in this story which made me roll my eyes. Characters are really bad, really rich, really smart, really sick, really good looking, and/or really evil.
I don’t think a lot of readers will be able to relate to Hope. She is hard to imagine with her illness, close family, and her hot best friend. Hope is also a lot less awkward then originally described. She is graceful in social situations and despite being really sick, she is still bullied? I really didn’t get why a bullied kid would want to go back to school so badly.
In Conclusion: I think this story was okay, but some elements were really immature. I can’t imagine readers will find this to be an original story as it uses so many overdone elements. I had major issues with a few things in this story, but it was an okay read.