Rating this book is hard. I read it in czech, and I am sure something got lost in the translation, because I HATED, really really hated the way this book was written.
I loved the world, but not how needlessly detailed everything was. I loved the concept I guess. But not the characters. Not a single one (does Kuro count?), and that was probably what made it so hard for me to read. The pacing as well was so... slugish. I was bored most of the time. The book could be shorter. From the page 500 up, I liked the action a lot. Ending not so much. Sentences were too short, clipped (my head spinned). I would prefer some of them merging into a longer ones. There was no flow to it. And I hated how characters knew what others thought just by looking at them. They(the author) didn't let me choose what to think of their actions. It felt manipulative.
Yeah so, spoilers:
- first, I was thrown into this unknown world right away and I was annoyed for at least 50 pages, because nothing was explained to me, absolutely nothing. Characters just went on, but I was so confused (This is a personal preference, I just really hate these types of books. I don't want infodumps either, but would a little help in this mess hurt anybody? Not every reader is familiar with norse myths and legends, and so for me this world felt very unfamiliar and was hard to grasp)
- the cover is so ugly and revolting
Hirka
- I just don't like her. For one, I am tired of ginger protagonists. But other than that, I couldn't identify myself with her in any way, at all. We couldn't connect. She is 15 and acts stupid a lot. Fine, she is really young. Yet sometimes, she acts as if she knew everything (so wise) or she is staring people down her nose while being just one of them (but of course she needs a special treatment and she is not like others... like that situation towards the end, when the heigher-ups showed up at that Kolkagga hideout). She seems irrational to me too. Why freeing that puppet man? She didn't know him at all! It's so random.
- yeah, it's interesting how everybody loves her... I mean: her father, that dude that listens to the stone, Eirik, Tein, Rime of course, the man that leads the Kolkagga, that dude that sweared on his name that will protect and follow Rime, the man who owns the tea shop, Ramoja, Vetle... Basically every important man huh? Hirka gives me "not like other girls" vibe bc of this.
- yet Hirka is so jealous of every girl! She is a tomboy and has no friends. Girls her age. Oh wait, she had one girl friend. But her friend from the village turned out to be "a slut"(of course), throwing herself at Rime, so that was that. We are supposed to hate her for that, okay? And everytime Rime is near some other girl, Hirka goes like this: oh he can't love me, he can't have me because he would die and he will forget me in a few days and will find another...
- like.... girl, have some confidence in yourself. She kept belittling herself all the time, saying something like: Rime Al-blablabla, the heir, the blessed and feared, he is so above me I can't reach him, I can't dirt him with my hands, oh my what do I do... I just got tired of it quickly. She thinks he is a god and... just no. They are the obvious pairing, even if I like that other dude she met in the bath better, it was clear she will end up with Rime... so forcing this conflict was annoying. They already did not act all that bothered by their "class" being different. And since they knew each other before the story began there is very little development there. I like childhood friends only within a specific context and here it felt cheap, only there so the author did not have to bother building up their relationship. Anyway.
- they kissed (not once), both acting obviously in love... yet how can Hirka even think Rime doesn't know she likes him? And why can't she believe he likes her, dammit?! For the angst??
- her talk about plants and herbs was tiresome. Look, I'm a gardener, I would love more lore about the plants and their names, but it was there only to fill her character with something. Bc she didn't have much of a personality besides: I am a healer, I never saw violence, I will never let Rime win over me, I want to touch Rime, honeybread, climbing and being without a tail.
- oh yeah... so they live in this kind of medieval society(at best), right? ? Yet Hirka is so stunned to see violence? An actual fight with weapons? And I am just like... why are you so surprised? Are there no brawls around, no wars or battles, no executions?
- and wow, Hirka thinks about Rime a lot. I began to cringe everytime Rime showed up in her thoughts because like... alright, she is a teenager, I was there too. But she has other things, more important things, to worry about, yet her world is revolving around him, she thinks he is holy or something... Hirka was willing to die for him (not once). What was most the hideous moment between them: that time when Rime told her she is good and not mold/rot/blight (I don't know the translation for this one) and every worry of hers just melted away. Hahaha... NO. Just no. A person doesn't need another person (a romantic partner) to told them what they are for them to finally become confident... Like, it helps if people around you believe in you and respect you, but to put your whole self-worth on a love interest? It just didn't felt right.
- this book as a whole feels very outdated in places, it checks many of the tropes that were popular around 2010s and earlier
- so yeah, Hirka is stupid and I don't like her. She should have slept with Rime when she could if she really cannot help herself, instead of creepily watching him naked by the pond or always staring at him while saliva is dripping from her open mouth, and dreaming about touching him, or him filling her (with a Force/Might, of course). I don't think he would be against that. Maybe then they would shut up for a minute about each other and could focus on the real problems (and the plot)
- wtf was that scene where she went almost hysteric about her backpack? the hell
- also, when you are in a cave, at night, with a thunderstorm raging outside and no fire/light... you will probably not be able to see paleness of someone's lips, crescents under someone's eyes or their facial expressions, no? ...just sayin
- was that part with a tea shop necessary? why was that man even important? what a filler
- everything came to Hirka easily (in Ravnhov, in Manfalla), I didn't get a feeling she had it that hard. Rime always showed up in time to save her anyway
- simply put, she is a special snowflake
Rime
- this boy is so melodramatic and emo, oh my (and trust me, I loved my fair share of melodramatic, emo boys, but this one is just not doing it for me)
- he is always whining about how bad the life was to him... while being rich, and from a respected family, with a brilliant future awaiting him (yeah, you sure have it bad, boy)
- but he is moping around instead of doing something with it, and then he rejects it all, just to show them who is in control (or something)
- also, Rime is beyong handsome, beyond skilled in martial arts and his enemies are shaking in fear when he enters the room
- also, he is just a young boy
- I don't know, maybe wolfs in this world have silver eyes. But it seems strange to me to call his eyes "wolf's" when I imagine yellow or orange... IDK, it just felt wierd to me, probably a cultural difference
- I found him too perfect (yet too whiny) to be likable
- also, anybody knows why Rime and Hirka are supossed to love each other so much? They obsess over each other, yet what is the base of these feelings? They don't have any other friends and it's weird. Is this about looks only? IDK. Everything is about these two and I DON'T FEEL IT
- simply put, he is the archetype of a prince who doesn't want to be royalty, poor baby
- RAPE... in this book surprised me. There was no warning on the jacket. I was so repulsed to know Urd raped Ramoja as well (why going this way, dear author? no other idea how to make a villain, hm?), and even more repulsed by that scene in dungeons. Was is necessary? Like, was it, really? Because how convinient, that someone showed up seconds before the man raped Hirka. Really, what a lucky girl. Yet she doesn't suffer bc of this afterwards, and not even 24h after she wants to fuck Rime. So, why the hell was that in this book? Why?? If you put this into a book simply to make it edgy and dangerous, just stop. I am lucky this kind of thing does not trigger me, but there are many people who NEED a trigger warning for this.
Urd.
- he could have been a better villain. He was impulsive and abusive and used violence often. Pfft. I was more scared when he was manipulating people, when he used his mind as a weapon. Like other characters in this book he is very 2D. I would really like to see maybe someone he cares about, his other sides. If he cared about Ramoja or his son, THAT would be interesting.
- I liked Kuro a lot
- the rest of the characters.... nah. They did nothing for me. Too many names. Everybody seems to always like Hirka, because she always says what they need to hear. How convenient. I thought Tein will have a bigger role (wtf was that bathing scene with him and Hirka?? Again, what was the point? Why did we stop in that place? Is everything just a setup?)
- I liked everything about the Force/Might, it was so interesting. But here I am, having read the entire book one, and I know not much about it. Nobody cared to explain how it works exactly, nobody commented on Hirka and her strange powers etc.
- the worldbulding... on one hand, the world could feel really rich and interesting, but there were times when the tiniest details were described without being relevant
- the world feels strangely empy, not lived in
- there are interesing things about things about this realm, like the religion, the form or government, the architecture, history and all the lore about stones (but again, we learn nothing)
- why do they have tails when it seems like they are just humans anyway
- Rime could have changed towards the end, but he seems as self-centered and selfish as always
- Hirka didn't change at all.
- so no character development(for anyone)
- what was the point of this book I wonder
- overall I am hopeful for the next book