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The de Montforte Brothers #5
The Wayward One
The bluest of blood; the boldest of hearts; the de Montfortes will take your breath away.
Irish Captain Ruaidri O' Devir has no love for the English. Taken from his family and pressed into the Royal Navy at a young age, he is now a commander for the fledgling American Continental Navy, hand-picked by John Adams himself to steal a potent new explosive from the British. Ruaidri expects to be successful in his mission. What he doesn't expect is to fall in love with the sister of the man he's crossed an ocean to abduct...
Beautiful Lady Nerissa de Montforte is the youngest sibling in a powerful and aristocratic English family. Fiercely guarded by her overprotective brothers, she pines for love after a longtime betrothal was cruelly cut short. When she accompanies her brother to a demonstration of his new explosive, she never dreams that her wildest longings to find love and freedom are about to be fulfilled ... by a man who is wrong for her in every single way except the one that matters most...
The spectacular conclusion to the internationally bestselling DE MONTFORTE series by New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Danelle Harmon!
Irish Captain Ruaidri O' Devir has no love for the English. Taken from his family and pressed into the Royal Navy at a young age, he is now a commander for the fledgling American Continental Navy, hand-picked by John Adams himself to steal a potent new explosive from the British. Ruaidri expects to be successful in his mission. What he doesn't expect is to fall in love with the sister of the man he's crossed an ocean to abduct...
Beautiful Lady Nerissa de Montforte is the youngest sibling in a powerful and aristocratic English family. Fiercely guarded by her overprotective brothers, she pines for love after a longtime betrothal was cruelly cut short. When she accompanies her brother to a demonstration of his new explosive, she never dreams that her wildest longings to find love and freedom are about to be fulfilled ... by a man who is wrong for her in every single way except the one that matters most...
The spectacular conclusion to the internationally bestselling DE MONTFORTE series by New York Times and USA Today bestselling author Danelle Harmon!
341 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 17, 2016
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Danelle Harmon
40 books471 followersNew York Times and USA Today bestselling author Danelle Harmon has written seventeen critically acclaimed and award-winning books, with many being published all over the world. A Massachusetts native, she has lived in Great Britain, though these days she and her English husband make their home in New England with their daughter Emma and numerous animals including five dogs, an Egyptian Arabian horse, and a flock of pet chickens. Danelle enjoys reading, spending time with family, friends and her animals, dog showing, plane-spotting, and sailing her reproduction 19th century skiff, Kestrel II. She welcomes email from her readers and can be reached at Danelle@danelleharmon.com.
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March 8, 2016
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
Lady Nerissa is trying to recover from the heartache of having her fiancée break things off after her older brother meddled too much. She loves her older brothers but their over protectiveness is stifling her. When she has a chance meeting with an Irish rogue, she is both appalled by his behavior and feeling awakened for the first time. Ruaidri hates the English and as an Irishman fighting for the American cause, he is only in England on a mission from John Adams. He kidnaps the sister of the man who invented a new explosion technique hoping to exchange that knowledge for his hostage. Nerissa and Ruaidri may be enemies on the war front but they soon find themselves wanting to call a truce in the bedroom.
Book five in the de Montforte series, The Wayward One is Nerissa’s, the youngest sister, story. I have not read the previous four books and although her brothers, previous book's heroes, make appearances and two of them are a big part of the story, I never felt like I was missing a big part of the story. I think new readers can start of fine here and continuing fans will greatly enjoy the inclusion of past characters. The de Montforte family members are all mentioned, which helped me gain a clear picture of the family but the author didn't heavily clutter the story with all their backstories, which was wonderful.
"I'm not in the business of ravishin' beautiful young women, even if they are English."
"Sometimes a woman wants to be ravished, Ruaidri. Just once."
Ruaidri and Nerissa's attraction was a little too immediate and I can't say I ever felt it truly evolve. There is not a lot of shallow he/she is hot therefore I love them but there also wasn't a lot of emotional connection and sense of growing closeness. Nerissa is portrayed realistically as a pampered and bit naïve sheltered aristocrat but who wants to break free of her gilded cage. Not necessarily a new trope and I can't say Nerissa ever matured from that. She seems to cling to Ruaidri because he is handsome, take charge, and dashing. She was willing to fight for him but it all felt somewhat milquetoast, as the growth and emotions just weren't there. Ruaidri had more substance to his character with more backstory and general personality. He was the pretty common Irish rogue, charming, witty, sexual, and commanding. There were times where his affability was a bit much but he was definitely likeable. That was maybe what the problem or nonproblem I had with this book overall, together, our couple was likeable. Their passion doesn't jump off the page, they won't emotionally grab you, but they are likeable.
And he saw the way he treated her, with free and easy abandon instead of the status-conscious, fawning deference to which she was accustomed…and that in itself gave her a certain liberty to be the person she had never really had the chance to be: Herself.
The plot of Ruaidri kidnapping Nerissa to get her brother to give him his new explosion technique started off ok but the English enemies and their arrogance, the brother joining them, then the older brother getting manic over controlling the situation, Ruaidri's secret that Nerissa gets dramatic over, and the very quick resolution to Nerissa's brother refusing to give anything to the colonials, kind of unraveled at the seams. From the characterizations to the moving plot, it was all fairly loose. What kept me in the story was the wonderful nautical feel. The vast majority of the scenes take place on Ruaidri's ship and the author did a great job of describing the ship and setting the feeling of the atmosphere without making it feel like I was looking at a diagram or being lectured to. If you like a nautical feel, you might want to read this for that alone as they are few and far between in romancelandia lately.
The last 30% or so lost a lot of its momentum as our couple was basically together and the story had to rely more on how would Nerissa's brother get out of giving away his explosion secrets, which was resolved pretty much out of sight and very quickly and then her older brother coming to take her back home, which felt forced but maybe continuing fans will enjoy more of his involvement. The book cover is gorgeous and if you're a continuing fan of the series you'll enjoy the younger sister getting her story, but as a newcomer, I was underwhelmed with the depth and emotional aspects. However, like I said, the nautical feel was fun and could scratch any seafaring itches.
Lady Nerissa is trying to recover from the heartache of having her fiancée break things off after her older brother meddled too much. She loves her older brothers but their over protectiveness is stifling her. When she has a chance meeting with an Irish rogue, she is both appalled by his behavior and feeling awakened for the first time. Ruaidri hates the English and as an Irishman fighting for the American cause, he is only in England on a mission from John Adams. He kidnaps the sister of the man who invented a new explosion technique hoping to exchange that knowledge for his hostage. Nerissa and Ruaidri may be enemies on the war front but they soon find themselves wanting to call a truce in the bedroom.
Book five in the de Montforte series, The Wayward One is Nerissa’s, the youngest sister, story. I have not read the previous four books and although her brothers, previous book's heroes, make appearances and two of them are a big part of the story, I never felt like I was missing a big part of the story. I think new readers can start of fine here and continuing fans will greatly enjoy the inclusion of past characters. The de Montforte family members are all mentioned, which helped me gain a clear picture of the family but the author didn't heavily clutter the story with all their backstories, which was wonderful.
"I'm not in the business of ravishin' beautiful young women, even if they are English."
"Sometimes a woman wants to be ravished, Ruaidri. Just once."
Ruaidri and Nerissa's attraction was a little too immediate and I can't say I ever felt it truly evolve. There is not a lot of shallow he/she is hot therefore I love them but there also wasn't a lot of emotional connection and sense of growing closeness. Nerissa is portrayed realistically as a pampered and bit naïve sheltered aristocrat but who wants to break free of her gilded cage. Not necessarily a new trope and I can't say Nerissa ever matured from that. She seems to cling to Ruaidri because he is handsome, take charge, and dashing. She was willing to fight for him but it all felt somewhat milquetoast, as the growth and emotions just weren't there. Ruaidri had more substance to his character with more backstory and general personality. He was the pretty common Irish rogue, charming, witty, sexual, and commanding. There were times where his affability was a bit much but he was definitely likeable. That was maybe what the problem or nonproblem I had with this book overall, together, our couple was likeable. Their passion doesn't jump off the page, they won't emotionally grab you, but they are likeable.
And he saw the way he treated her, with free and easy abandon instead of the status-conscious, fawning deference to which she was accustomed…and that in itself gave her a certain liberty to be the person she had never really had the chance to be: Herself.
The plot of Ruaidri kidnapping Nerissa to get her brother to give him his new explosion technique started off ok but the English enemies and their arrogance, the brother joining them, then the older brother getting manic over controlling the situation, Ruaidri's secret that Nerissa gets dramatic over, and the very quick resolution to Nerissa's brother refusing to give anything to the colonials, kind of unraveled at the seams. From the characterizations to the moving plot, it was all fairly loose. What kept me in the story was the wonderful nautical feel. The vast majority of the scenes take place on Ruaidri's ship and the author did a great job of describing the ship and setting the feeling of the atmosphere without making it feel like I was looking at a diagram or being lectured to. If you like a nautical feel, you might want to read this for that alone as they are few and far between in romancelandia lately.
The last 30% or so lost a lot of its momentum as our couple was basically together and the story had to rely more on how would Nerissa's brother get out of giving away his explosion secrets, which was resolved pretty much out of sight and very quickly and then her older brother coming to take her back home, which felt forced but maybe continuing fans will enjoy more of his involvement. The book cover is gorgeous and if you're a continuing fan of the series you'll enjoy the younger sister getting her story, but as a newcomer, I was underwhelmed with the depth and emotional aspects. However, like I said, the nautical feel was fun and could scratch any seafaring itches.
December 16, 2020
It was well enough written, but the style of story just isn't really my cup of tea. In spite of a few sex scenes, it has a very old-school feel. Kind of like watching an old Errol Flynn swashbuckler movie. Adventure and dastardly deeds on the high seas, all brewed up with the American Revolutionary period and the power struggles between England and America at the time. The love story was nice, if, as I said, old-fashioned in feel.
Although Ruaridh was a captain in the new American navy, the book does have a 'pirate' feel to it, and may appeal to fans of pirate romances.
I read this book for November 2020 read for the HRBC Romance Across The Ages challenge: American Revolution.
Although Ruaridh was a captain in the new American navy, the book does have a 'pirate' feel to it, and may appeal to fans of pirate romances.
I read this book for November 2020 read for the HRBC Romance Across The Ages challenge: American Revolution.
January 26, 2018
In my humble opinion, The de Montforte Brothers series are the best historical romance tales since the Malory novels written by Johanna Lindsey. In the final installment, Lady Nerissa de Montforte finally gets her man. Much to the displeasure of oldest brother, Lucien. Nope, marriage has not softened him up one bit! Thank goodness, she has brother Andrew as a sort of ally! I have not yet read Danelle Harmon's other book series, but this book in particular crosses over into her Hero of the Seas series.
April 1, 2016
When Irishman Ruaidri O'Devir appears at his sister's home in England during an event he isn't supposed to attend, no one thinks anything of it at first. The uncouth drunkard leaves much to be desired but his sister is the wife of an English aristocrat so his presence is tolerated for the most part.
Lady Nerissa De Montforte, the youngest sister of the influential De Montforte family, is there for her brother Anthony, who has invented a new type of weapon which could be used to squash England's enemies if he allows it to get into their hands. Nerissa has been through a tough time since her older brother, the Duke of Blackheath decided to test Nerissa's former betrothed and when the man in question failed the test, Nerissa was heartbroken.
Unbeknownst to everyone in attendance, Ruaidri is a Commander for the American Continental Navy and has been given the task by John Adams himself, of retrieving Andrew De Montforte's invention but not without complication, for the minute the handsome rogue sets eyes on Lady Nerissa, his interest is piqued and trouble abounds. Although Nerissa thinks him to be a drunken lout, something about him sparks her interest like no man ever before.
During the invention's demonstration, an accident befalls Nerissa and Ruaidri takes advantage of the situation, whisking her away to be used as a trade.When Nerissa awakens after her abduction she is shocked to find Ruaidri is not the kind of man she originally perceived him to be, but so much more and not only has been kidnapped, but she is on the ocean on Captain O'Devir's ship. Nothing will thwart O'Devir from his mission, not even the fascinating Lady Nerissa who he finds is not the spoiled aristocrat he assumed her to be.
The more the Irish Captain and Lady Nerissa spend in each other's company, the more they discover about each other, which brings them closer together. Nerissa finds there is life beyond the betrayal she suffered and maybe the Captain could be a part of it. But the Duke of Blackheath will stop at nothing to retrieve his sister from the traitor's hands, even if it causes more heartache for her.
As much as I would love to recount more of this intriguing story, I will just suggest that you read this well written tale for yourself. Ms. Harmon is a master at weaving her story so that this reader was compelled to read from the first page to the end without turning off the eReader, thus watching the sun come up without having slept. That, along with such interesting characters, made this a winner for me.
March 17, 2016
I cannot even tell you how long I have been waiting for Danelle to bring back The de Montforte Brothers!!! I have read all of the previous four books and they are some of the best in Historical Romance then and now. Lady Nerissa is the sister, and she is just like her brothers. Stubborn, Opinated, and very protective of her brothers, especially Andrew.
It was great to see Lucian, still the same autocratic brother who will fight to the death for his siblings. When Nerissa is abducted by an American privateer or as the English call them Pirates. He will do ever thing in his power to get his sister back.
The hero is a troubled Irish man who was forced into the Royal Navy against his will. Now he is an American on a special mission and Nerissa is the key to getting what he needs.
Everything about this book is classic Danelle. Wonderful story with lots of intrigue and excitement. Her characters have so much depth and you feel like you are part of the family when you are reading her books. The plot moves at a great pace and you never want it to end.
I love the way she writes, her stories are everything you would ever want in a romance. There is true love, lust, frustration and of course a happy ending.
I would recommend that you go back and read books 1 through 4...you will not be sorry!!
Received a complimentary copy from the author for an honest review
It was great to see Lucian, still the same autocratic brother who will fight to the death for his siblings. When Nerissa is abducted by an American privateer or as the English call them Pirates. He will do ever thing in his power to get his sister back.
The hero is a troubled Irish man who was forced into the Royal Navy against his will. Now he is an American on a special mission and Nerissa is the key to getting what he needs.
Everything about this book is classic Danelle. Wonderful story with lots of intrigue and excitement. Her characters have so much depth and you feel like you are part of the family when you are reading her books. The plot moves at a great pace and you never want it to end.
I love the way she writes, her stories are everything you would ever want in a romance. There is true love, lust, frustration and of course a happy ending.
I would recommend that you go back and read books 1 through 4...you will not be sorry!!
Received a complimentary copy from the author for an honest review
March 18, 2016
This series, is just not for me.
The book itself is alright, it's a ok story featuring a romance. Ruaidri, the Irish sea captain serving the Americans met Nerissa, sister of a duke. One of Nerissa's brothers had something Ruaidri was after and he abducted her to get it. They spent some time on Ruaidri's ship and a few days later they were in love (eyes rolling). Royal Navy intervened to get Nerissa back. Said brother met Ruaidri and Nerissa and boom they got married with the brother's blessing. Sex scene ensued with Ruaidri half dead but he wanted Nerissa so much, you know? At 70% Ruaidri and Nerissa got married, had great sex and everybody loved everybody except Nerissa's duke brother who was out for blood. I didn't know why the readers should bother reading about the duke. The book had a lot of secondary characters all from the navy. I lost track on whose side they were on.
What I liked: Ruaidri's character and the life on the sea.
But I was bored most of the time. The connection between Ruaidri and Nerissa was ok in the beginning but quickly lost its momentum. The story isn't focused on the relationship so the relationship just feels undeveloped. The seafaring scene is done well though. Other than that, I couldn't really stay interested in the story.
*I receive an ARC for the book from the publisher on NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
The book itself is alright, it's a ok story featuring a romance. Ruaidri, the Irish sea captain serving the Americans met Nerissa, sister of a duke. One of Nerissa's brothers had something Ruaidri was after and he abducted her to get it. They spent some time on Ruaidri's ship and a few days later they were in love (eyes rolling). Royal Navy intervened to get Nerissa back. Said brother met Ruaidri and Nerissa and boom they got married with the brother's blessing. Sex scene ensued with Ruaidri half dead but he wanted Nerissa so much, you know? At 70% Ruaidri and Nerissa got married, had great sex and everybody loved everybody except Nerissa's duke brother who was out for blood. I didn't know why the readers should bother reading about the duke. The book had a lot of secondary characters all from the navy. I lost track on whose side they were on.
What I liked: Ruaidri's character and the life on the sea.
But I was bored most of the time. The connection between Ruaidri and Nerissa was ok in the beginning but quickly lost its momentum. The story isn't focused on the relationship so the relationship just feels undeveloped. The seafaring scene is done well though. Other than that, I couldn't really stay interested in the story.
*I receive an ARC for the book from the publisher on NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
March 7, 2016
The Wayward One by Danelle Harmon is the 5th and concluding book in the De Montfortes series.
You don't have to have read any of the other books to enjoy this one, but having said that, I recommend reading the whole series, in whichever order you choose, because each book is an emotional, exciting, thrilling story. The De Montforte family are a powerful, aristocratic family, with each of it's members being a force to be reckoned with. But they are more than that, they are loyal, caring people who take every care to make sure that each sibling is protected and happy. They don't realise that the way they go about caring for others, especially in this instance, Narissa, can be very much unwanted.
In this book we are told Nerissa's story. Lady Nerissa De Monforte is the only sister in a family of very overprotective brothers. They protect her to the point of smothering her, because instead of seeing their care as a good thing, she sees it as them trying to control her. She also blames one of her brother's meddling in her life for the fact that a betrothal to a man she was very much in love with, was broken off. Any chance of freedom she thought she would gain from her brothers' overbearing, smothering ways, disappeared when she found herself single again.
Captain Ruaidri O' Devir is an Irishman, and he hates the English. He was press-ganged into the English Navy and was treated deploringly when he was under their command. At the first available opportunity he escaped in America, became a Privateer, and that led to him becoming a member of the American Navy. A navy that the English refused to accept as a legitimate thing. Ruaidri has been given a mission by the navy to obtain a new explosive, and it's inventor, and to bring them back to America.
The inventor of the explosive is none other than Andrew De Montforte, one of Nerissa's brothers. A big event has been planned at his home where important members of the English Navy, family and friends will be present. It's where he will give a demonstration of just how powerful the new explosive is. If the Navy are impressed then Andrew will sell the formula to them.
Ruaidri's sister, fortunately for him, is married to another of the De Montforte brothers, and that gives him an excuse for being at the house, if not the actual event. It's there that he meets Nerissa, and it's also there, after one thing leads to another, where he ends up kidnapping her with the hope of ransoming her to her brother. He will release her when the formula for the explosive is given to him.
What follows is the wonderful story of Nerissa and Ruaidri and the relationship that forms between them despite neither of them wanting it. We also read about how Nerissa's family try to get her back without having to give over the formula, and all about life onboard a ship. The story is so full of excitement and adventure, from beginning to end, it was a real pleasure to read. From the very moment that you realise that Nerissa and Ruaidri could have feelings for each other, you also start to wonder how on Earth anything can ever come of those feelings. He has kidnapped her, if he doesn't get killed by her brothers themselves, he'll more than likely end upon the gallows for what he has done.
I honestly could not see a way that the two of them could be together. I couldn't see how the author could possibly bring about a believable way that would see Ruaidri not ending up dead one way or another. Did she manage it? Will they be able to fight their feelings, if they can't, then what will happen that will allow them to be together. Will the family trade the explosives for her? Will the explosives end up in the hands of the Americans? Whichever country has them will be a force to be reckoned with, and both Navies will stop at nothing to be the one to secure them. Nerissa and Ruaidri are just pawns in a dangerous game, will they actually see that?
All the characters in this story were well thought out, not just the main characters, but right down to the youngest man aboard Ruaidri's ship. Their relationships amongst each other were very believable, and it was easy to either love a character, or totally despise them.
There is on particular scene where one of the English navy takes advantage of a situation to vent his spleen on a fallen member of the American navy. I just wanted to reach into the pages of the book and throttle that particular character before throwing him overboard. To feel such emotion over a scene in a book is proof to me of just how good an author is.
More proof of that is when I have no idea how a book is going to end, and I have to read as quickly as I can to find out. Be prepared for tears of laughter, and sadness, but be assured that the way it ends will be surprisingly, just perfect.
When you finish this book, if you haven't read the others in the series, I am sure you will definitely want to because, yes, this book is just that good!
I was given a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.
You don't have to have read any of the other books to enjoy this one, but having said that, I recommend reading the whole series, in whichever order you choose, because each book is an emotional, exciting, thrilling story. The De Montforte family are a powerful, aristocratic family, with each of it's members being a force to be reckoned with. But they are more than that, they are loyal, caring people who take every care to make sure that each sibling is protected and happy. They don't realise that the way they go about caring for others, especially in this instance, Narissa, can be very much unwanted.
In this book we are told Nerissa's story. Lady Nerissa De Monforte is the only sister in a family of very overprotective brothers. They protect her to the point of smothering her, because instead of seeing their care as a good thing, she sees it as them trying to control her. She also blames one of her brother's meddling in her life for the fact that a betrothal to a man she was very much in love with, was broken off. Any chance of freedom she thought she would gain from her brothers' overbearing, smothering ways, disappeared when she found herself single again.
Captain Ruaidri O' Devir is an Irishman, and he hates the English. He was press-ganged into the English Navy and was treated deploringly when he was under their command. At the first available opportunity he escaped in America, became a Privateer, and that led to him becoming a member of the American Navy. A navy that the English refused to accept as a legitimate thing. Ruaidri has been given a mission by the navy to obtain a new explosive, and it's inventor, and to bring them back to America.
The inventor of the explosive is none other than Andrew De Montforte, one of Nerissa's brothers. A big event has been planned at his home where important members of the English Navy, family and friends will be present. It's where he will give a demonstration of just how powerful the new explosive is. If the Navy are impressed then Andrew will sell the formula to them.
Ruaidri's sister, fortunately for him, is married to another of the De Montforte brothers, and that gives him an excuse for being at the house, if not the actual event. It's there that he meets Nerissa, and it's also there, after one thing leads to another, where he ends up kidnapping her with the hope of ransoming her to her brother. He will release her when the formula for the explosive is given to him.
What follows is the wonderful story of Nerissa and Ruaidri and the relationship that forms between them despite neither of them wanting it. We also read about how Nerissa's family try to get her back without having to give over the formula, and all about life onboard a ship. The story is so full of excitement and adventure, from beginning to end, it was a real pleasure to read. From the very moment that you realise that Nerissa and Ruaidri could have feelings for each other, you also start to wonder how on Earth anything can ever come of those feelings. He has kidnapped her, if he doesn't get killed by her brothers themselves, he'll more than likely end upon the gallows for what he has done.
I honestly could not see a way that the two of them could be together. I couldn't see how the author could possibly bring about a believable way that would see Ruaidri not ending up dead one way or another. Did she manage it? Will they be able to fight their feelings, if they can't, then what will happen that will allow them to be together. Will the family trade the explosives for her? Will the explosives end up in the hands of the Americans? Whichever country has them will be a force to be reckoned with, and both Navies will stop at nothing to be the one to secure them. Nerissa and Ruaidri are just pawns in a dangerous game, will they actually see that?
All the characters in this story were well thought out, not just the main characters, but right down to the youngest man aboard Ruaidri's ship. Their relationships amongst each other were very believable, and it was easy to either love a character, or totally despise them.
There is on particular scene where one of the English navy takes advantage of a situation to vent his spleen on a fallen member of the American navy. I just wanted to reach into the pages of the book and throttle that particular character before throwing him overboard. To feel such emotion over a scene in a book is proof to me of just how good an author is.
More proof of that is when I have no idea how a book is going to end, and I have to read as quickly as I can to find out. Be prepared for tears of laughter, and sadness, but be assured that the way it ends will be surprisingly, just perfect.
When you finish this book, if you haven't read the others in the series, I am sure you will definitely want to because, yes, this book is just that good!
I was given a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.
March 16, 2016
The Wayward One, story five in The de Montforte Brothers books, by Danelle Harmon was a terrific conclusion to this series! At face value the hero and heroine of this work appear as a cocky, swaggering Irish rogue and a proper, aristocratic English lady yet underneath this pretense they both possess much more than is visible to the observer at first glance. The journey the author takes her audience on, as little by little the hero and heroine's hidden layers are revealed and they succumb to love, was exuberant and quick moving. Ms. Harmon's writing grabs you from the start with its spiritedness and competence. A story whose characters exhibited liberal doses of charisma and originality The Wayward One was a lively and entertaining romance that readers will love!
*I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review.*
*While part of a series this book can be read as a stand alone.*
*I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review.*
*While part of a series this book can be read as a stand alone.*
March 8, 2016
WARNING: THIS BOOK’S COVER COMES TO LIFE AS YOU READ IT. YOU WILL NOT BE ABLE TO GET THIS BOOK OUT OF YOUR HEAD. DO NOT READ IF YOU HAVE AN UNROMANTIC HEART.
BRIEFLY SETTING UP THE STORY –Lord Perry Brookhampton upends Lady Nerissa de Montforte’s life when he ends their betrothal. It casts her into a sea of ‘what-ifs’ and loneliness. Lucien de Monteforte, the Duke of Blackheath had meddled. He thought he was helping Perry get past their endless betrothal stage and marry his sister. But Lucien’s meddling gets Perry captured, tortured, and nearly killed. But even her family’s daring rescue doesn’t sway Perry. Almost immediately, he drops Nerissa, distancing himself from her entire family. She loves Perry and misses him.
It’s her brother, Lord Andrew she is focused on this night. His invention, the explosives used to save Perry, gains the attention of the top brass of the Royal Navy. He is issued an invitation to present his invention and give a demonstration to the Admiralty, a legacy opportunity that could change the course of the war with America. Lady Nerissa accompanies Lord Andrew, intent on to keeping him calm and without one of his ‘attacks’ during his presentation.
Captain Ruaidri O’Devir crashes the demonstration, pretending to be drunk. He wants to see the ‘secret’ demonstration that his brother-in-law, Captain Christian Lord, is hosting for the Royal Navy. Not only does he see the object of his quest, Lord Andrew de Montforte, but also he finds himself looking at the most beautiful woman he has ever seen, Lady Nerissa de Montforte. Ruaidri mesmerizes Nerissa. She believes she has never seen a more handsome man. Momentarily, her thoughts of Perry fade. Unknown to his brother-in-law, Ruaidri is a Captain in the United States Navy. His family believes him to be farming a poor piece of family land in Ireland. But no, he is on an important mission for America that could change the outcome of the war for his country. His brother-in-law orders him to leave the event, and moves the event the outdoors for a demonstration. Ruaidri pretends to leave, but slips back into the dark house, to watch the ‘event’ from an upstairs room, unnoticed. Meanwhile, Lord Andrew, being the protective brother, orders Nerissa back inside. With little argument, she goes into the house and discovers Ruaidri. They spar with words, and she decides to go outside and escape his company. The explosive detonates as she starts downstairs, and she tumbles all the way down, ending up unconscious at the foot of the stairs. Ruaidri hears her fall and rushes to her rescue. He sees that she lives, and also sees an opportunity to achieve both his goal, and have the beautiful lady. He grabs Nerissa’s limp body and carries her to his ship. Nerissa wakes days later finding she is captive to the very handsome Irish Captain.
When Lord Andrew realizes Nerissa is missing, no stone in England goes unturned. Perry is questioned when Nerissa turns up missing, but Perry turns them away. He neither knows where she is, nor cares. The de Monteforte brothers receive a ransom note, finding that their sister is captive to one American Naval Captain, an Irishman that has every reason to hate the British. Characteristically, the Duke turns the Royal Navy on its ear as he rushes to save his beloved sister. But can her brothers save Nerissa? And will Nerissa even want to be saved? Can Ruaidri be saved?
All of THAT was just the beginning, so you just got a taste of this book. This story is explosive. It is rich -- full of romance and adventure. The characters are well developed to such an extent that you feel you actually know them. Danelle Harmon is a master of character development. Nerissa grows up into a thoughtful, mature woman as we turn the pages of this story. Ruaidri sheds his angry persona and becomes a real hero, a person that fits the very handsome powerful body and demeanor to whom Nerissa finds herself attracted. You want to KNOW these characters! Harmon is also rather good at turning the plot in directions you never see coming. She paints great pictures with her imagery and brings you wherever her characters are…the ocean, a ballroom, the battle between two large ships, or the confines of a captain’s cabin. You see it all through the eyes of her characters, and you feel the story on her pages. Her writing is powerful.
The love story between Captain Ruaidri O’Devir and Lady Nerissa de Monteforte is quite a voyage. I closed the book when I read the last page. I glanced at the cover and realized how closely it conveys the essence of the book. This story continues to linger in my head. All of this adds up to an impressive read. Danelle Harmon did it again.
It's a five-star hit. It was long awaited...and well worth the wait.
BRIEFLY SETTING UP THE STORY –Lord Perry Brookhampton upends Lady Nerissa de Montforte’s life when he ends their betrothal. It casts her into a sea of ‘what-ifs’ and loneliness. Lucien de Monteforte, the Duke of Blackheath had meddled. He thought he was helping Perry get past their endless betrothal stage and marry his sister. But Lucien’s meddling gets Perry captured, tortured, and nearly killed. But even her family’s daring rescue doesn’t sway Perry. Almost immediately, he drops Nerissa, distancing himself from her entire family. She loves Perry and misses him.
It’s her brother, Lord Andrew she is focused on this night. His invention, the explosives used to save Perry, gains the attention of the top brass of the Royal Navy. He is issued an invitation to present his invention and give a demonstration to the Admiralty, a legacy opportunity that could change the course of the war with America. Lady Nerissa accompanies Lord Andrew, intent on to keeping him calm and without one of his ‘attacks’ during his presentation.
Captain Ruaidri O’Devir crashes the demonstration, pretending to be drunk. He wants to see the ‘secret’ demonstration that his brother-in-law, Captain Christian Lord, is hosting for the Royal Navy. Not only does he see the object of his quest, Lord Andrew de Montforte, but also he finds himself looking at the most beautiful woman he has ever seen, Lady Nerissa de Montforte. Ruaidri mesmerizes Nerissa. She believes she has never seen a more handsome man. Momentarily, her thoughts of Perry fade. Unknown to his brother-in-law, Ruaidri is a Captain in the United States Navy. His family believes him to be farming a poor piece of family land in Ireland. But no, he is on an important mission for America that could change the outcome of the war for his country. His brother-in-law orders him to leave the event, and moves the event the outdoors for a demonstration. Ruaidri pretends to leave, but slips back into the dark house, to watch the ‘event’ from an upstairs room, unnoticed. Meanwhile, Lord Andrew, being the protective brother, orders Nerissa back inside. With little argument, she goes into the house and discovers Ruaidri. They spar with words, and she decides to go outside and escape his company. The explosive detonates as she starts downstairs, and she tumbles all the way down, ending up unconscious at the foot of the stairs. Ruaidri hears her fall and rushes to her rescue. He sees that she lives, and also sees an opportunity to achieve both his goal, and have the beautiful lady. He grabs Nerissa’s limp body and carries her to his ship. Nerissa wakes days later finding she is captive to the very handsome Irish Captain.
When Lord Andrew realizes Nerissa is missing, no stone in England goes unturned. Perry is questioned when Nerissa turns up missing, but Perry turns them away. He neither knows where she is, nor cares. The de Monteforte brothers receive a ransom note, finding that their sister is captive to one American Naval Captain, an Irishman that has every reason to hate the British. Characteristically, the Duke turns the Royal Navy on its ear as he rushes to save his beloved sister. But can her brothers save Nerissa? And will Nerissa even want to be saved? Can Ruaidri be saved?
All of THAT was just the beginning, so you just got a taste of this book. This story is explosive. It is rich -- full of romance and adventure. The characters are well developed to such an extent that you feel you actually know them. Danelle Harmon is a master of character development. Nerissa grows up into a thoughtful, mature woman as we turn the pages of this story. Ruaidri sheds his angry persona and becomes a real hero, a person that fits the very handsome powerful body and demeanor to whom Nerissa finds herself attracted. You want to KNOW these characters! Harmon is also rather good at turning the plot in directions you never see coming. She paints great pictures with her imagery and brings you wherever her characters are…the ocean, a ballroom, the battle between two large ships, or the confines of a captain’s cabin. You see it all through the eyes of her characters, and you feel the story on her pages. Her writing is powerful.
The love story between Captain Ruaidri O’Devir and Lady Nerissa de Monteforte is quite a voyage. I closed the book when I read the last page. I glanced at the cover and realized how closely it conveys the essence of the book. This story continues to linger in my head. All of this adds up to an impressive read. Danelle Harmon did it again.
It's a five-star hit. It was long awaited...and well worth the wait.
March 11, 2016
Danelle has done it again! And she never ceases to amaze her audience with her colorful Gentlemanly characters, word weaving, & surprises.
The story begins after the American Revolution. Rebellious, Captain Ruaidri O' Devir has a mission. Uncover the secrets to an explosive. To finally expel the British from the American coast for good. There is only one problem. The tempting Nerissa de Montforte. Who becomes a temptation from the beginning. When Ruaidri comes to an opportunity to kidnap the beautiful lady. He takes full advantage of the situation. Thus develops a plan. He'll turn over the lady, for the formula for the explosive. But, not before he can have some fun with her. What Ruaidri did not expect, was to have developed an attraction to his captive. And Lady Nerissa, soon for our Gallant, Charming, and dare I say it? Swashbuckling Captain.
Danelle seems to have knack for building our hopes up, then the next minute pull the rug out from under us. Not to worry though. The story does have a happy ending. With lots of surprises, twists & turns along the way.
Five Stars for Danelle Harmon and Her Roguish Irish Men. And the Heroine's who complete them.
The story begins after the American Revolution. Rebellious, Captain Ruaidri O' Devir has a mission. Uncover the secrets to an explosive. To finally expel the British from the American coast for good. There is only one problem. The tempting Nerissa de Montforte. Who becomes a temptation from the beginning. When Ruaidri comes to an opportunity to kidnap the beautiful lady. He takes full advantage of the situation. Thus develops a plan. He'll turn over the lady, for the formula for the explosive. But, not before he can have some fun with her. What Ruaidri did not expect, was to have developed an attraction to his captive. And Lady Nerissa, soon for our Gallant, Charming, and dare I say it? Swashbuckling Captain.
Danelle seems to have knack for building our hopes up, then the next minute pull the rug out from under us. Not to worry though. The story does have a happy ending. With lots of surprises, twists & turns along the way.
Five Stars for Danelle Harmon and Her Roguish Irish Men. And the Heroine's who complete them.
September 26, 2016
I received an eARC, from NetGalley and the publisher, in exchange for an honest review.
This is book five in "The de Montforte Brothers" series. I have been jumping in and out of the series so I do feel this is a standalone book.
Lady Nerissa de Montforte wants to find love but has been very protected by her brothers. But on a trip with her brother to demonstration of his new explosive she meets Captain Ruaidri O' Devir. Ruaidri is there to actually try to steal the explosive from her brother. Rauaidri has not love for the English after being sent off at an early age to join Royal Navy. But they are both drawn to one another and so starts their relationship.
This is book five in "The de Montforte Brothers" series. I have been jumping in and out of the series so I do feel this is a standalone book.
Lady Nerissa de Montforte wants to find love but has been very protected by her brothers. But on a trip with her brother to demonstration of his new explosive she meets Captain Ruaidri O' Devir. Ruaidri is there to actually try to steal the explosive from her brother. Rauaidri has not love for the English after being sent off at an early age to join Royal Navy. But they are both drawn to one another and so starts their relationship.
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August 22, 2020
Wonderful
This book gave me mixed emotions. Happy because Nerissa finally got her adventure and found love. Sad that it took her away from her family. I love the De Montforte's and the closeness of the family. I think Ruaidri was perfect for Nerissa and hope to read more about them. I've enjoyed this series and am ready for the next book.
This book gave me mixed emotions. Happy because Nerissa finally got her adventure and found love. Sad that it took her away from her family. I love the De Montforte's and the closeness of the family. I think Ruaidri was perfect for Nerissa and hope to read more about them. I've enjoyed this series and am ready for the next book.
March 14, 2016
It was with great pleasure I returned to this delightful series. The author doesn’t play favorites in this tale of the turmoil between the British and Americans who were seeking freedom and justice for its citizens. Emotions high on both sides make men do the unthinkable.
On deck of the Tigershark, splattered in blood with gore at my feet, mangled bodies with severed limbs…my captain down, I was helpless, defeated, despairing. With my hears still ringing, I lifted my eyes from the page, drying my face of tears and sea spray and swallowed hard. What prey tell, could be worse and how were we to survive? Yes, dear reader, these are my feelings. This I saw, heard and felt. It's wonderful when a writer can transport the reader in this way.
Ms. Harmon’s style of writing and scene progression is totally riveting. She’ll show us what happens, but doesn’t tell us the outcome. So no point is a convenient stopping point—I had to know what was to come. Besides writing great battle scenes, in detail, Ms. Harmon tantalizes our senses with a scene where Lady Narissa discovers the feel of a man’s body with her fingers and hands, in her innocent fashion.
On both sides of the Atlantic, Brits and American were made of strong fabric. Those who had been downtrodden, as our hero, Captain Ruaidri O' Devir, learned to fight for what they want, or in this case, for who he wanted. Ruaidri is a man much changed since last we read of his exploits earlier in the series. But does his past come to haunt him when he realizes his love for Lady Nerissa?
Reader, certainly there is merit in such a man: opinionated, driven, with a powerful physique, yet beneath this veneer an Irish heart of love and passion.
There comes a time in a person’s life, if encaged, even though a gilded one, the spirit of the individual must spring free. Lady Nerissa feels her worth is in her lineage and dowry her person possesses. But she’s always had a wayward spirit smothered with the trappings of breeding and convention. Once she realizes her situation and reputation are ruined by being abducted, it gives her the freedom to choose her path. But by doing so, will she lose her family, those who matter most in her life?
Even though I knew what Lady Nerissa would do to save the day, (and she did a splendid job of it), it nevertheless, did not reduce the thrill of her heroine action. If I were she, I would do the same. Love of another pushes her forward, to do the unthinkable. I cheered her on. Bravo, Lady Nerissa!
I cannot say enough about this author and this series. Her books are rich in history, full of action and suspense and with the added layer of romance, they are perfection. Don't delay reading her. This book is the final in the series. If you'd like to see my reviews of each book in the series, please browse my blog.
On deck of the Tigershark, splattered in blood with gore at my feet, mangled bodies with severed limbs…my captain down, I was helpless, defeated, despairing. With my hears still ringing, I lifted my eyes from the page, drying my face of tears and sea spray and swallowed hard. What prey tell, could be worse and how were we to survive? Yes, dear reader, these are my feelings. This I saw, heard and felt. It's wonderful when a writer can transport the reader in this way.
Ms. Harmon’s style of writing and scene progression is totally riveting. She’ll show us what happens, but doesn’t tell us the outcome. So no point is a convenient stopping point—I had to know what was to come. Besides writing great battle scenes, in detail, Ms. Harmon tantalizes our senses with a scene where Lady Narissa discovers the feel of a man’s body with her fingers and hands, in her innocent fashion.
On both sides of the Atlantic, Brits and American were made of strong fabric. Those who had been downtrodden, as our hero, Captain Ruaidri O' Devir, learned to fight for what they want, or in this case, for who he wanted. Ruaidri is a man much changed since last we read of his exploits earlier in the series. But does his past come to haunt him when he realizes his love for Lady Nerissa?
Reader, certainly there is merit in such a man: opinionated, driven, with a powerful physique, yet beneath this veneer an Irish heart of love and passion.
There comes a time in a person’s life, if encaged, even though a gilded one, the spirit of the individual must spring free. Lady Nerissa feels her worth is in her lineage and dowry her person possesses. But she’s always had a wayward spirit smothered with the trappings of breeding and convention. Once she realizes her situation and reputation are ruined by being abducted, it gives her the freedom to choose her path. But by doing so, will she lose her family, those who matter most in her life?
Even though I knew what Lady Nerissa would do to save the day, (and she did a splendid job of it), it nevertheless, did not reduce the thrill of her heroine action. If I were she, I would do the same. Love of another pushes her forward, to do the unthinkable. I cheered her on. Bravo, Lady Nerissa!
I cannot say enough about this author and this series. Her books are rich in history, full of action and suspense and with the added layer of romance, they are perfection. Don't delay reading her. This book is the final in the series. If you'd like to see my reviews of each book in the series, please browse my blog.
April 1, 2016
Revolutionary War Story with an Irish Hero
Set in 1779, this is the story of Irish Captain Ruaidri O' Devir, a commander in the American Continental Navy, selected by John Adams to sail to England and steal a new explosive formula developed by an English nobleman.
Lady Nerissa de Montforte, the youngest sibling in an aristocratic English family, is excited to accompany her brother to a demonstration of his new explosive invention. When her brother sends her to safety so she will not feel the device’s impact, it provides the perfect opportunity for Ruaidri to abduct her, thinking he will ransom her for the formula.
Having experienced the brutality of being impressed into serving the British navy, Ruaidri is contemptuous of all English and particularly the aristocracy. Nerissa finds the Irish captain both arrogant and attractive. Neither counts on falling in love, but they do and very quickly while the British Navy is searching the seas to reclaim her and do away with the Irishman.
This is a well-told story of second chances set against the time of America’s War of Independence. Nerissa’s fiancé jilted her and Ruaidri’s first love betrayed him with his best friend. In addition she is from wealth and title; he is from a poor Irish family. So, both carry baggage into their already problematic relationship. But Ruaidri is noble of heart, if not birth, and also a gentleman, so we want him to get the girl.
Harmon has included some exciting scenes of battles at sea with vivid descriptions and accurate nautical terminology. Those who love authenticity in their historical romances will appreciate her attention to detail.
This is book 5 in the de Montforte Brothers series and I recommend reading them I order. Also, Harmon’s various series are related and characters from one series may appear in another. From the beginning of The Wayward One, couples and characters from the earlier stories appear, some remaining to be characters in this story. If you want to understand who they are, best to begin at the beginning.
The de Montforte Brothers:
The Wild One
The Beloved One
The Defiant One
The Wicked One
The Wayward One
Set in 1779, this is the story of Irish Captain Ruaidri O' Devir, a commander in the American Continental Navy, selected by John Adams to sail to England and steal a new explosive formula developed by an English nobleman.
Lady Nerissa de Montforte, the youngest sibling in an aristocratic English family, is excited to accompany her brother to a demonstration of his new explosive invention. When her brother sends her to safety so she will not feel the device’s impact, it provides the perfect opportunity for Ruaidri to abduct her, thinking he will ransom her for the formula.
Having experienced the brutality of being impressed into serving the British navy, Ruaidri is contemptuous of all English and particularly the aristocracy. Nerissa finds the Irish captain both arrogant and attractive. Neither counts on falling in love, but they do and very quickly while the British Navy is searching the seas to reclaim her and do away with the Irishman.
This is a well-told story of second chances set against the time of America’s War of Independence. Nerissa’s fiancé jilted her and Ruaidri’s first love betrayed him with his best friend. In addition she is from wealth and title; he is from a poor Irish family. So, both carry baggage into their already problematic relationship. But Ruaidri is noble of heart, if not birth, and also a gentleman, so we want him to get the girl.
Harmon has included some exciting scenes of battles at sea with vivid descriptions and accurate nautical terminology. Those who love authenticity in their historical romances will appreciate her attention to detail.
This is book 5 in the de Montforte Brothers series and I recommend reading them I order. Also, Harmon’s various series are related and characters from one series may appear in another. From the beginning of The Wayward One, couples and characters from the earlier stories appear, some remaining to be characters in this story. If you want to understand who they are, best to begin at the beginning.
The de Montforte Brothers:
The Wild One
The Beloved One
The Defiant One
The Wicked One
The Wayward One
March 31, 2016
I LOVED this book! It is the thrilling and satisfying conclusion to the de Montforte Brothers series, which is one of my favorites. This book had me both cheering and crying throughout.
Nobody writes sea captains and their adventures the way Danelle Harmon does! While I believe this book can be read as a stand-alone, it will be particularly meaningful for readers who have read previous books. What I especially love about this book is that it combines elements and characters from both of the author's exceptional de Montforte Brother series and Heroes of the Sea series in a natural and brilliant way. This book is truly the best of both worlds. You will love it if you like honorable men and women either by land or sea, and if you equally enjoy reading about British nobility and masters of the sea, prepare yourself for pure joy!
If you are familiar with the de Montforte Brothers, then you already know and love Lucien, the formidable Duke of Blackheath. In this book, he is back! (Huzzah! Huzzah! Huzzah!) Better yet, his sister is a true blue de Montforte and comes into her own. Best of all, Lucien has met his equal in Captain Ruaidri O' Devir, who is a force himself.
The true genius and beauty of this story is how past beloved characters make appearances that bring reader joy and satisfaction without detracting from the current story or leading man and lady. It is truly well-plotted and all of the characters have a meaningful contribution to the story. Also, the story is thrilling with a meaningful storyline and characters to cheer for and fall in love with.
I highly recommend this book as well as the previous de Montforte Brothers books and Heroes of the Sea books!
Nobody writes sea captains and their adventures the way Danelle Harmon does! While I believe this book can be read as a stand-alone, it will be particularly meaningful for readers who have read previous books. What I especially love about this book is that it combines elements and characters from both of the author's exceptional de Montforte Brother series and Heroes of the Sea series in a natural and brilliant way. This book is truly the best of both worlds. You will love it if you like honorable men and women either by land or sea, and if you equally enjoy reading about British nobility and masters of the sea, prepare yourself for pure joy!
If you are familiar with the de Montforte Brothers, then you already know and love Lucien, the formidable Duke of Blackheath. In this book, he is back! (Huzzah! Huzzah! Huzzah!) Better yet, his sister is a true blue de Montforte and comes into her own. Best of all, Lucien has met his equal in Captain Ruaidri O' Devir, who is a force himself.
The true genius and beauty of this story is how past beloved characters make appearances that bring reader joy and satisfaction without detracting from the current story or leading man and lady. It is truly well-plotted and all of the characters have a meaningful contribution to the story. Also, the story is thrilling with a meaningful storyline and characters to cheer for and fall in love with.
I highly recommend this book as well as the previous de Montforte Brothers books and Heroes of the Sea books!
March 6, 2016
Ruaidri could be one sweet caring man, “Nerissa,” he repeated, looking up to her. “Why do ye cry? We don’t have to do this if ye aren’t ready ... I’d never force ye, y’know.” I liked this book I thought Ruairdi was a good man
July 31, 2018
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Book Plot - 5 STARS
What an amazing book! I enjoyed the plot and the interaction of all the characters from this book who also appeared in previous books to this series. Rich with descriptive imagery and fully developed characters the reader will be enthralled with this book.
I felt a great deal of compassion for Lady Nerissa de Montforte as she tried to overcome her disappointment of the failed engagement with Perry and her older brothers interference with her life. Her feisty rebellion against her restraints was handle with finesse and brought tears to this readers eyes.
Compassion is the word I think of in regards to Irish Captain Ruaidri O' Devir. How he survived his childhood to become the adult he was shows great strength of character and a dark desire for revenge. This is one character that the term "Don't judge a book by it's cover" fits to a T. He really made this story work. Ruaidri won my heart from the first page and many times throughout the book I had tears in my eyes regarding situations he and Nerissa got into. But for me the most memorable was the conversation with Narissa's oldest brother, Lucien and he in Boston it's caused a pang in my heart and tears to flow.
This book is an awesome display of family love, honor and forgiveness.
Narrator - 4.25 STARS
Narrator Wayne Farrell did an outstanding job on the male voices and accents. In the beginning I struggled with his female voices but the book was so well written that eventually I forgot my feelings regarding this and began enraptured in his narrating.
Received an audible copy in exchange for a fair review.
Book Plot - 5 STARS
What an amazing book! I enjoyed the plot and the interaction of all the characters from this book who also appeared in previous books to this series. Rich with descriptive imagery and fully developed characters the reader will be enthralled with this book.
I felt a great deal of compassion for Lady Nerissa de Montforte as she tried to overcome her disappointment of the failed engagement with Perry and her older brothers interference with her life. Her feisty rebellion against her restraints was handle with finesse and brought tears to this readers eyes.
Compassion is the word I think of in regards to Irish Captain Ruaidri O' Devir. How he survived his childhood to become the adult he was shows great strength of character and a dark desire for revenge. This is one character that the term "Don't judge a book by it's cover" fits to a T. He really made this story work. Ruaidri won my heart from the first page and many times throughout the book I had tears in my eyes regarding situations he and Nerissa got into. But for me the most memorable was the conversation with Narissa's oldest brother, Lucien and he in Boston it's caused a pang in my heart and tears to flow.
This book is an awesome display of family love, honor and forgiveness.
Narrator - 4.25 STARS
Narrator Wayne Farrell did an outstanding job on the male voices and accents. In the beginning I struggled with his female voices but the book was so well written that eventually I forgot my feelings regarding this and began enraptured in his narrating.
Received an audible copy in exchange for a fair review.
March 8, 2016
This avid historical romance reviewer is absolutely thrilled to see the return of the de Montforte family in this wonderful series by Danelle Harmon. Especially one particular brother, Lucian. My fellow romance book-loving friends, it can’t be a coincidence his name is so similar to Lucifer. For Lucian is like the devil unleashed when his family is threated. As patriarch of this English noble clan, he’s interfered, manipulated, and even coerced his siblings down the paths of matrimony, sometimes kicking and screaming, steering each of them to true love. Simply put, Lucian is not one to be messed with and all of England bloody well knows it. No, this is not his story. You need to read book 4, The Wicked One, to see how karma finally caught up with him. Fortunately for us, his marriage has not mellowed him. He is still a powerful force to be reckoned with. A fact that Irish Captain Ruaidri O’Devir soon learns after abducting Lady Nerissa, the de Montforte’s baby sister, in The Wayward One.
Lady Nerissa de Montforte may be a blonde, angelic beauty on the outside, but she’s definitely a de Montforte on the inside. That prideful, stubborn, resourceful streak serves her well as she finds her life turned completely upside down after being held captive by our handsome hero, Captain Ruaidri. Most of the storyline occurs aboard his ship, btw.
**spoilers possible**
After being forced to serve in the Royal Navy for 13 years, Ruaidri has no love for anything British. Though Irish, he considers himself an American and takes on a mission assigned by John Adams to secure a new explosive material invented by Andrew de Montforte. Seizing an opportunity to exchange Nerissa for Andrew, he whisks her away and the chase/showdown soon begins.
Though I mostly enjoyed it, I must admit it was a fairly predictable read, despite the dramatic near death of a key character. In fact, I wish there had been more surprises to it. I kept expecting Perry, Nerissa’s former fiancée, and/or Ruaidri’s former girlfriend to make an appearance and stir things up but neither happened. I also didn’t see the big deal about Ruaidri’s deep dark secret he was so afraid of losing Nerissa over. That type of scenario wasn’t uncommon back then. All in all, things tied up a rather too neatly at the end with a rather non-dramatic ending. Well, except for the fact Lucian finally does get his hands on Ruaidri.
I still recommend this series and am glad I was gifted an ARC to review this one. Having read all de Montforte Brothers books, I really wish all the brothers had been included in what will likely be the last book. I strongly suggest you read Book 1 and Book 4, my favorites. They were absolutely amazing. Book 3, of course, will give you a more in-depth background of Andrew, as well.
Title: The Wayward One, Series: The de Montforte Brothers (Book 5), Author: Danelle Harmon, Pages: 336, stand-alone, HEA, some violence, a few VERY steamy scenes, no cheating, no OW/OM drama.
Book 1 – The Wild One (Gareth & Juliet)
Book 2 – The Beloved (Charles & Amy)
Book 3 – The Defiant One (Andrew & Celsiana)
Book 4 – The Wicked One (Lucian & Eva)
Book 4.5 - The Fox and The Angel (Roger & Angela)
Book 5 – The Wayward One (Ruaidri & Nerissa)
(This review is based on NetGalley ARC received in exchange for an honest, unbiased opinion. No compensation was paid to the reviewer.)
Lady Nerissa de Montforte may be a blonde, angelic beauty on the outside, but she’s definitely a de Montforte on the inside. That prideful, stubborn, resourceful streak serves her well as she finds her life turned completely upside down after being held captive by our handsome hero, Captain Ruaidri. Most of the storyline occurs aboard his ship, btw.
**spoilers possible**
After being forced to serve in the Royal Navy for 13 years, Ruaidri has no love for anything British. Though Irish, he considers himself an American and takes on a mission assigned by John Adams to secure a new explosive material invented by Andrew de Montforte. Seizing an opportunity to exchange Nerissa for Andrew, he whisks her away and the chase/showdown soon begins.
Though I mostly enjoyed it, I must admit it was a fairly predictable read, despite the dramatic near death of a key character. In fact, I wish there had been more surprises to it. I kept expecting Perry, Nerissa’s former fiancée, and/or Ruaidri’s former girlfriend to make an appearance and stir things up but neither happened. I also didn’t see the big deal about Ruaidri’s deep dark secret he was so afraid of losing Nerissa over. That type of scenario wasn’t uncommon back then. All in all, things tied up a rather too neatly at the end with a rather non-dramatic ending. Well, except for the fact Lucian finally does get his hands on Ruaidri.
I still recommend this series and am glad I was gifted an ARC to review this one. Having read all de Montforte Brothers books, I really wish all the brothers had been included in what will likely be the last book. I strongly suggest you read Book 1 and Book 4, my favorites. They were absolutely amazing. Book 3, of course, will give you a more in-depth background of Andrew, as well.
Title: The Wayward One, Series: The de Montforte Brothers (Book 5), Author: Danelle Harmon, Pages: 336, stand-alone, HEA, some violence, a few VERY steamy scenes, no cheating, no OW/OM drama.
Book 1 – The Wild One (Gareth & Juliet)
Book 2 – The Beloved (Charles & Amy)
Book 3 – The Defiant One (Andrew & Celsiana)
Book 4 – The Wicked One (Lucian & Eva)
Book 4.5 - The Fox and The Angel (Roger & Angela)
Book 5 – The Wayward One (Ruaidri & Nerissa)
(This review is based on NetGalley ARC received in exchange for an honest, unbiased opinion. No compensation was paid to the reviewer.)
March 25, 2016
This is book five in the de Montforte series and many fans of this series will be overjoyed to finally read Nerissa’s story. I’ve read all of them and this one is my least favorite.
That said, I must say that the story is well written and with some great prose.
"The night wasted no time in swallowing him."
~~~~~ *** ~~~~~
"She was, in short, unreachable. Untouchable. Unobtainable."
~~~~~ *** ~~~~~
"Velour, Virtue, and Victory was the family motto."
~~~~~ *** ~~~~~
Although it starts off a bit slow, the pace picks up fairly quickly and the action and addition of de Montforde brothers, especially Lucien, had me enjoy it to the max.
The only reason I haven’t fully enjoyed this story as much as I did the previous four, were the principal players.
As much as I liked them separately, together they had absolutely no chemistry. I honestly couldn’t figure it out. The hero was someone who had strength, charm and allure, but when it came to the scenes with them together, he came off boorish, overbearing and callas. By the time they were falling into bed, which was way too soon, I should have felt the connection, and I just didn’t.
In contrast, I liked the heroine much more and thought her characterization well done and much more believable, until she was in a scene with the hero, at which point she becomes naïve and at times, silly. I wish the author had given this relationship more time and space to grow, maybe become friends and allow the passion to develop in a slow burn. I believe that this would have made their first intimacy much more believable.
What I loved the most in this story was the action on the ship. It was written exceptionally well and I felt the tension as I was reading it. Now, I’m not well versed in anything nautical and most of the jargon was over my head, but I L.O.V.E.D. all the running around, dialogue and fighting. That I understood!
Another thing I loved was the appearance of Nerissa’s brothers. It made me realize how much I adored those books and now I’m ready to reread them all. Oh, and how can I forget Brendan and Mira?! Listen, if you’ve not read ‘Captain of My Heart’, then you better get to it. That was a romance for the ages! When I encountered them here, I just let out one of the most loudest sighs …
If you’re a fan of this author and this series, then this is a no-brainer! You have to read this story. It completes the series well. But if you’ve never read this author, then I would urge you to get the first book in this series, ‘The Wild One’, which has been FREE for a long time now. That was the book that had added Ms. Harmon to my ever growing list of favorite authors.
Melanie for b2b
Complimentary copy provided by the author
That said, I must say that the story is well written and with some great prose.
"The night wasted no time in swallowing him."
~~~~~ *** ~~~~~
"She was, in short, unreachable. Untouchable. Unobtainable."
~~~~~ *** ~~~~~
"Velour, Virtue, and Victory was the family motto."
~~~~~ *** ~~~~~
Although it starts off a bit slow, the pace picks up fairly quickly and the action and addition of de Montforde brothers, especially Lucien, had me enjoy it to the max.
The only reason I haven’t fully enjoyed this story as much as I did the previous four, were the principal players.
As much as I liked them separately, together they had absolutely no chemistry. I honestly couldn’t figure it out. The hero was someone who had strength, charm and allure, but when it came to the scenes with them together, he came off boorish, overbearing and callas. By the time they were falling into bed, which was way too soon, I should have felt the connection, and I just didn’t.
In contrast, I liked the heroine much more and thought her characterization well done and much more believable, until she was in a scene with the hero, at which point she becomes naïve and at times, silly. I wish the author had given this relationship more time and space to grow, maybe become friends and allow the passion to develop in a slow burn. I believe that this would have made their first intimacy much more believable.
What I loved the most in this story was the action on the ship. It was written exceptionally well and I felt the tension as I was reading it. Now, I’m not well versed in anything nautical and most of the jargon was over my head, but I L.O.V.E.D. all the running around, dialogue and fighting. That I understood!
Another thing I loved was the appearance of Nerissa’s brothers. It made me realize how much I adored those books and now I’m ready to reread them all. Oh, and how can I forget Brendan and Mira?! Listen, if you’ve not read ‘Captain of My Heart’, then you better get to it. That was a romance for the ages! When I encountered them here, I just let out one of the most loudest sighs …
If you’re a fan of this author and this series, then this is a no-brainer! You have to read this story. It completes the series well. But if you’ve never read this author, then I would urge you to get the first book in this series, ‘The Wild One’, which has been FREE for a long time now. That was the book that had added Ms. Harmon to my ever growing list of favorite authors.
Melanie for b2b
Complimentary copy provided by the author
April 21, 2016
A character in the book says "it's known that some women have romantic feelings for their captors"
Yes the theme is not new but the writing was good and I enjoyed it - very much.
Until I reached the 50% mark and things started changing-
Ruaidri is sent to England to get a new explosive - he kidnaps Nerissa, the inventor's younger sister in order to bargain for it - and then we read some really romantic good writing as they get to know each other and we get to know them.
And then it changes , it is no longer just Nerissa and Ruaidri on a ship - there is a rescue mission and a sea battle and brothers show up. And lots of other characters that I didn't care about -
What happened is that Nerissa's character changed and i didn't like it - in the first half of the book she was a privileged lady, high born and classy - yes she was somewhat unhappy with how controlled her life was and we saw a glimpse of a different Nerissa, one that needed to open up and have more freedom- yet she still acted like a well behaved lady -
Then she turned into this unbelievably rude aggressive, too bold, too controlling person who only cared for herself.
I didn't like how she talked to her brother - I didn't like how she just decided to walk away from her old life with not a care to her family - or the consequences of her actions.
And then Lucian her oldest brother shows up, he wants to save her and return her home, but she is ungrateful and rude and he is not very likable - wasn't he the hero of one of the previous books, he is not a character that I want to read about.
I wish the book took another turn and Nerissa found a better self.
This review is for a free copy courtesy of the publisher and NetGalley.
On a side note here is a perfect Ruaidri
Yes the theme is not new but the writing was good and I enjoyed it - very much.
Until I reached the 50% mark and things started changing-
Ruaidri is sent to England to get a new explosive - he kidnaps Nerissa, the inventor's younger sister in order to bargain for it - and then we read some really romantic good writing as they get to know each other and we get to know them.
And then it changes , it is no longer just Nerissa and Ruaidri on a ship - there is a rescue mission and a sea battle and brothers show up. And lots of other characters that I didn't care about -
What happened is that Nerissa's character changed and i didn't like it - in the first half of the book she was a privileged lady, high born and classy - yes she was somewhat unhappy with how controlled her life was and we saw a glimpse of a different Nerissa, one that needed to open up and have more freedom- yet she still acted like a well behaved lady -
Then she turned into this unbelievably rude aggressive, too bold, too controlling person who only cared for herself.
I didn't like how she talked to her brother - I didn't like how she just decided to walk away from her old life with not a care to her family - or the consequences of her actions.
And then Lucian her oldest brother shows up, he wants to save her and return her home, but she is ungrateful and rude and he is not very likable - wasn't he the hero of one of the previous books, he is not a character that I want to read about.
I wish the book took another turn and Nerissa found a better self.
This review is for a free copy courtesy of the publisher and NetGalley.
On a side note here is a perfect Ruaidri
June 26, 2018
Diciamo che mi sono sentita tenuta a leggerlo, avendo letto tutta la serie dedicata ai fratelloni de Montoforte. Ma in realtà questo libro nulla aggiunge o toglie alla completezza dell'intera saga, che è incominciata per me benissimo con il Selvaggio, poi è proseguita tra alti e bassi e ha subito un tonfo con il libro su Lucien, il Malvagio per eccellenza .
Non riesco ancora a perdonare la Harmon per aver sprecato un personaggio così splendido, un capofamiglia protettivo ma dedito agli inganni e alle macchinosità, e che è stato poi edulcorato per esigenze di trama.
In ogni caso, leggendo i precedenti volumi, Nerissa sembrava essere stata una delle tante vittime delle mire politiche ed economiche del fratello, e invece poi le cose, conoscendole meglio, paiono diverse.
Tuttavia l'unica sorella femmina, a parte essere bellissima, permane nell'ombra dei fratelloni, anche se le viene affiancato un comprimario, Ruaidri, di tutto rispetto (soprattutto per le ombre che gravano sul passato irlandese di lui).
Così la storia risulta amabile, alla fin fine, e una buona conclusione per una bella serie: c'è pure una parte ambientata tra le Colonie, che è una sorta di perfetta chiusura delle vicende, perchè ci riporta là dove tutto era partito.
La prima notte di nozze con Ruardri ferito ha quasi dell'eroico... :)))))
E Lucien? Mmh... Minaccia o promessa?
Non riesco ancora a perdonare la Harmon per aver sprecato un personaggio così splendido, un capofamiglia protettivo ma dedito agli inganni e alle macchinosità, e che è stato poi edulcorato per esigenze di trama.
In ogni caso, leggendo i precedenti volumi, Nerissa sembrava essere stata una delle tante vittime delle mire politiche ed economiche del fratello, e invece poi le cose, conoscendole meglio, paiono diverse.
Tuttavia l'unica sorella femmina, a parte essere bellissima, permane nell'ombra dei fratelloni, anche se le viene affiancato un comprimario, Ruaidri, di tutto rispetto (soprattutto per le ombre che gravano sul passato irlandese di lui).
Così la storia risulta amabile, alla fin fine, e una buona conclusione per una bella serie: c'è pure una parte ambientata tra le Colonie, che è una sorta di perfetta chiusura delle vicende, perchè ci riporta là dove tutto era partito.
La prima notte di nozze con Ruardri ferito ha quasi dell'eroico... :)))))
E Lucien? Mmh... Minaccia o promessa?
February 17, 2022
This is the book in the series I thought I would enjoy the least and ended up enjoying the most. The hero is very heroic and the insipid English lady isn’t insipid and not much of a lady (in the best possible way.) The plot is nicely paced, the action is glorious, the characters are wrought with a loving hand in exquisite detail. Everything falls into place in this one with the exception of a molehill painted as a mountain at the very end: the BIG secret that Ruaidri can’t tell his wife because she wouldn’t be able to continue loving him turns out to be ridiculous—dude, you kidnapped her from home and family, ruining her. She bludgeoned an English sailor while committing treason…and you can’t tell her you accidentally killed your friend in a duel where you were both equally armed? And that’s Lucien’s big trump card? This sort of thing insults a reader’s intelligence. Fortunately that idiocy was resolved quickly and the book ended wonderfully, or this review might have been totally different.
February 25, 2021
I just can’t get enough of this series! Danelle Harmons writing is perfect her way of telling this incredible stories is unique.The wit the banter the sweet building love between Ruaidri and Nerissa two people from two different worlds and ancestry it’s really fun reading how they fall for each other.I met Ruairdi in the first book Captain of my Heart of the Officers and Gentleman Series only briefly and I never would imagined for him to be a that good Hero.He’s perfect I loved him from head to toe( if you know what I mean 😉😙)And there is this clever connection between two series and all their characters.
D.H writes that kind of book you don’t want them to end and I’m glad that we see all of her characters somewhere in her other books.This author’s my favorite of RH
D.H writes that kind of book you don’t want them to end and I’m glad that we see all of her characters somewhere in her other books.This author’s my favorite of RH
March 15, 2016
Danelle Harmon does another wonderful job with this book. She shows the growth of the main character, Nerissa, into a self confident woman. There are surprising twist that the reader would not expect. Danelle, also brings in the characters from her other books in the de Montforte Brothers and Sea Heroes series. Although you don't need to read the other books to thoroughly enjoy this one, I would recommend reading them. She fully develops each character in her books. The reader really feels like they know that character as a person.
March 18, 2016
A fitting ending !
Wonderful addition to a memorable series. The story of the last sibling of the deadline Montforte brothers and how she found her HEA males a truly amazing read. Lucien does come across as an arrogant aristocrat but hey it's just him! I especially loved the tie in to other books by the author and I loved the patriotic feeling reading about the beginning of our country inspire. Love loved loved it!!!!
Wonderful addition to a memorable series. The story of the last sibling of the deadline Montforte brothers and how she found her HEA males a truly amazing read. Lucien does come across as an arrogant aristocrat but hey it's just him! I especially loved the tie in to other books by the author and I loved the patriotic feeling reading about the beginning of our country inspire. Love loved loved it!!!!
November 26, 2023
The new best of the series...
Wellp, it happened. I've gone and gotten myself a new favorite of the series. Aside from a few noticeable grammatical errors (which I failed to spot in the previous entries, if they existed anyway), this book ended up wrangling its way to the top spot to replace my previous favorite (The Defiant One). It was a close call, though. The two were so neck and neck that I legit couldn't pick which one I liked the best until the absolute end. Once I realized how much more this story improved upon ALL of my previous complaints, and that it did so while utilizing tropes/features that I am such a sucker for, I couldn't NOT rate it 5-stars.
Gone are the random, overused bursts of exclamations either narratively or conversationally. Gone are the gargantuan time jumps that served more as a cheat code in advancing a story than anything else. The story had a wonderful pace to it with little to no boring or slow moments. There were many well-written scenarios that read so realistically, from something as simple (yet commonplace) as a love scene, the to the intimate horrors of battle. New characters were nicely developed, even in a supporting sense. It had a touch of everything: humor, drama, angst, tenderness. The love scenes were tastefully done, and not fueled by lust (which I hate). Now sure, parts of the actual premise were not the most original I've read, but the execution of it all was still so very well done and believable.
But by far, my most favorite feature of all was my now new favorite couple of Nerissa and Ruaidri, the latter of which playing the biggest role in my coming to that conclusion. The dude was the best sort of hero, with a bit of a dark side without fully giving in to it, the swashbuckling hero of strength with a gentle heart. I'm SUCH a sucker for Irish characters, particularly when I can "hear" their accents on page. I'm also a sucker for couples who aren't super perfect, the ones who bicker and yet still learn how to love. Ruaidri was perfectly written for Nerissa, and I love that he wasn't exaggerated to pull it off. Their relationship felt naturally developed, even despite the quickness of it. I'm just so glad Nerissa finally had her turn to love and bloom.
If I had to complain about ANYTHING, (and believe me, this is pettiness to the core), it would be the name of the hero, Ruaidri. I appreciate the Irish origin of the name, but my gawd, it was tough to adjust to. Another petty complaint was the unrealistic aftermath of a character falling down the stairs. And by unrealistic, I mean, no aftermath at all (aside from soreness? Gimme a break). I just couldn't buy that. Obviously, these things didn't derail the story at ALL, but hey, I had to mention SOMETHING, didn't I? All in all, I absolutely LOVED this one and consider it the perfect cherry on top to the de Montforte siblings' saga.
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Wellp, it happened. I've gone and gotten myself a new favorite of the series. Aside from a few noticeable grammatical errors (which I failed to spot in the previous entries, if they existed anyway), this book ended up wrangling its way to the top spot to replace my previous favorite (The Defiant One). It was a close call, though. The two were so neck and neck that I legit couldn't pick which one I liked the best until the absolute end. Once I realized how much more this story improved upon ALL of my previous complaints, and that it did so while utilizing tropes/features that I am such a sucker for, I couldn't NOT rate it 5-stars.
Gone are the random, overused bursts of exclamations either narratively or conversationally. Gone are the gargantuan time jumps that served more as a cheat code in advancing a story than anything else. The story had a wonderful pace to it with little to no boring or slow moments. There were many well-written scenarios that read so realistically, from something as simple (yet commonplace) as a love scene, the to the intimate horrors of battle. New characters were nicely developed, even in a supporting sense. It had a touch of everything: humor, drama, angst, tenderness. The love scenes were tastefully done, and not fueled by lust (which I hate). Now sure, parts of the actual premise were not the most original I've read, but the execution of it all was still so very well done and believable.
But by far, my most favorite feature of all was my now new favorite couple of Nerissa and Ruaidri, the latter of which playing the biggest role in my coming to that conclusion. The dude was the best sort of hero, with a bit of a dark side without fully giving in to it, the swashbuckling hero of strength with a gentle heart. I'm SUCH a sucker for Irish characters, particularly when I can "hear" their accents on page. I'm also a sucker for couples who aren't super perfect, the ones who bicker and yet still learn how to love. Ruaidri was perfectly written for Nerissa, and I love that he wasn't exaggerated to pull it off. Their relationship felt naturally developed, even despite the quickness of it. I'm just so glad Nerissa finally had her turn to love and bloom.
If I had to complain about ANYTHING, (and believe me, this is pettiness to the core), it would be the name of the hero, Ruaidri. I appreciate the Irish origin of the name, but my gawd, it was tough to adjust to. Another petty complaint was the unrealistic aftermath of a character falling down the stairs. And by unrealistic, I mean, no aftermath at all (aside from soreness? Gimme a break). I just couldn't buy that. Obviously, these things didn't derail the story at ALL, but hey, I had to mention SOMETHING, didn't I? All in all, I absolutely LOVED this one and consider it the perfect cherry on top to the de Montforte siblings' saga.
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May 31, 2021
A bird, once released from its cage, flies freely away!
Wow!!! The Wayward One is my next favorite in the De Montforte series. Lady Nerissa De Montforte is now the only sibling left of the De Montforte's not married. She is still reeling from a broken heart. In book 4 (The Wicked One) her brother, Lucien, sends her beloved, Perry Brookhampton, to Spain in a ruse meant for Perry to come to his senses and ask Nerissa for her hand in marriage upon his return. Instead, the ship he's on is attacked and because of his injuries unable to speak and becomes a prisoner of war. He is eventually rescued but no longer the same man and because Lucien sent him on this ruse, he wants nothing to do with the De Montforte family. Nerissa, heartbroken and angry at Lucien for interfering in her life, is just going thru the motions of daily life. She feels trapped like a bird in a cage... to duty and station of her life. Her brothers are well meaning but are smothering her. Andrew sees his sad sister and because his wife is expecting, decides to ask Nerissa to accompany him to London in hopes of helping Nerissa smile again. Andrew has invented a type of explosive better and more powerful than gun powder. The British Navy is very interested in procuring it. British Naval Officer, Christian Lord, holds a party at his home for Andrew to speak and demonstrate his new invention. While there, Nerissa comes across Ruaidri O'Devir, Captain Lord's brother-in-law. They do not realize he's is a Continental Navy Officer fighting for America. He appears to be drunk and just visiting his sister. He is really there to get his hands on the explosive and or Andrew for the American cause. He is asked to leave the party so everyone thinks he actually leaves. Meanwhile, everyone has gone outside to see this demonstration. He slips back in the house and watches for the demonstration of the explosive from the second floor. Andrew, fearing for Nerissa's safety tells her to wait inside. She is frustrated and feels suffocated but does what he says. She goes inside to the second floor and runs into Ruaidri. Both are surprised but speak. She then gets frustrated, is on her way downstairs when the explosion goes off and she falls down the stairs. Ruaidri sees her crumpled, unconscious, looking fragile and a plan forms in his mind. He picks her up and takes off into the night thus beginning their story, however, you have to read the book to see how their lives unfold. You won't be disappointed!
Wow!!! The Wayward One is my next favorite in the De Montforte series. Lady Nerissa De Montforte is now the only sibling left of the De Montforte's not married. She is still reeling from a broken heart. In book 4 (The Wicked One) her brother, Lucien, sends her beloved, Perry Brookhampton, to Spain in a ruse meant for Perry to come to his senses and ask Nerissa for her hand in marriage upon his return. Instead, the ship he's on is attacked and because of his injuries unable to speak and becomes a prisoner of war. He is eventually rescued but no longer the same man and because Lucien sent him on this ruse, he wants nothing to do with the De Montforte family. Nerissa, heartbroken and angry at Lucien for interfering in her life, is just going thru the motions of daily life. She feels trapped like a bird in a cage... to duty and station of her life. Her brothers are well meaning but are smothering her. Andrew sees his sad sister and because his wife is expecting, decides to ask Nerissa to accompany him to London in hopes of helping Nerissa smile again. Andrew has invented a type of explosive better and more powerful than gun powder. The British Navy is very interested in procuring it. British Naval Officer, Christian Lord, holds a party at his home for Andrew to speak and demonstrate his new invention. While there, Nerissa comes across Ruaidri O'Devir, Captain Lord's brother-in-law. They do not realize he's is a Continental Navy Officer fighting for America. He appears to be drunk and just visiting his sister. He is really there to get his hands on the explosive and or Andrew for the American cause. He is asked to leave the party so everyone thinks he actually leaves. Meanwhile, everyone has gone outside to see this demonstration. He slips back in the house and watches for the demonstration of the explosive from the second floor. Andrew, fearing for Nerissa's safety tells her to wait inside. She is frustrated and feels suffocated but does what he says. She goes inside to the second floor and runs into Ruaidri. Both are surprised but speak. She then gets frustrated, is on her way downstairs when the explosion goes off and she falls down the stairs. Ruaidri sees her crumpled, unconscious, looking fragile and a plan forms in his mind. He picks her up and takes off into the night thus beginning their story, however, you have to read the book to see how their lives unfold. You won't be disappointed!
May 17, 2019
By far, this was my absolute favorite of the entire de Montforte Brothers series. Nerissa is probably the most well-rounded character of the entire cast throughout all five books. She is the youngest, but very aware of herself and what she wants. She should be, really, considering that her eldest brother has spent most of her life keeping her in a gilded cage. Lucien wants to protect her, but ultimately he just ends up confining her in a life she isn't passionate about. She has no real choices of her own, and is often frustrated.
While her brother, Andrew's, latest invention makes a big bang, Nerissa finds herself tumbling - literally - into an unexpected adventure. Despite the terrifying nature of waking up to find herself a prisoner on a foreign naval vessel, Nerissa handles herself with great aplomb. Truly, I feel Lucien would be proud of her if he would just take a moment to really see her as a person (as opposed to the china doll she often feels like).
Her grace and poise under stressful circumstances catches the attention and earns the admiration of the vessel's Captain, Ruaidri. As he and Nerissa spend time together over their days on the ship, they learn a great deal about each other, and have a subtle growth of character within themselves.
I especially loved the almost insidious nature of the changes. It felt much more romantic to me than a whirlwind escapade lasting a week or so. This story read as a wonderful, slow burn.
The only thing keeping this from a five-star review is the way Lucien's character backpedaled. At the end of his story in the fourth book, he seemed to have grown and learned a great deal through his trials. Yet in this book, he is exactly the same domineering, high-handed, inconsiderate brute he was in the very first book. What happened to his growth? He even travels all the way to America to accost a man on Nerissa's "behalf," without ever once stopping to speak to her about it! Considering that is a six-week journey, I just felt like all of the progress made over four books was lost in this character. That was disappointing.
Aside from that one thing, this was one of my favorite books of the whole year. I highly, highly recommend it!
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While her brother, Andrew's, latest invention makes a big bang, Nerissa finds herself tumbling - literally - into an unexpected adventure. Despite the terrifying nature of waking up to find herself a prisoner on a foreign naval vessel, Nerissa handles herself with great aplomb. Truly, I feel Lucien would be proud of her if he would just take a moment to really see her as a person (as opposed to the china doll she often feels like).
Her grace and poise under stressful circumstances catches the attention and earns the admiration of the vessel's Captain, Ruaidri. As he and Nerissa spend time together over their days on the ship, they learn a great deal about each other, and have a subtle growth of character within themselves.
I especially loved the almost insidious nature of the changes. It felt much more romantic to me than a whirlwind escapade lasting a week or so. This story read as a wonderful, slow burn.
The only thing keeping this from a five-star review is the way Lucien's character backpedaled. At the end of his story in the fourth book, he seemed to have grown and learned a great deal through his trials. Yet in this book, he is exactly the same domineering, high-handed, inconsiderate brute he was in the very first book. What happened to his growth? He even travels all the way to America to accost a man on Nerissa's "behalf," without ever once stopping to speak to her about it! Considering that is a six-week journey, I just felt like all of the progress made over four books was lost in this character. That was disappointing.
Aside from that one thing, this was one of my favorite books of the whole year. I highly, highly recommend it!
Read this and more of my reviews at:
www.memoirsofabookwyrm.com
July 4, 2021
Revolutionary War Story with an Irish Hero
Set in 1779, this is the story of Irish Captain Ruaidri O' Devir, a commander in the American Continental Navy, selected by John Adams to sail to England and steal a new explosive formula developed by an English nobleman.
Lady Nerissa de Montforte, the youngest sibling in an aristocratic English family, is excited to accompany her brother to a demonstration of his new explosive invention. When her brother sends her to safety so she will not feel the device’s impact, it provides the perfect opportunity for Ruaidri to abduct her, thinking he will ransom her for the formula.
Having experienced the brutality of being impressed into serving the British navy, Ruaidri is contemptuous of all English and particularly the aristocracy. Nerissa finds the Irish captain both arrogant and attractive. Neither counts on falling in love, but they do and very quickly while the British Navy is searching the seas to reclaim her and do away with the Irishman.
This is a well-told story of second chances set against the time of America’s War of Independence. Nerissa’s fiancé jilted her and Ruaidri’s first love betrayed him with his best friend. In addition she is from wealth and title; he is from a poor Irish family. So, both carry baggage into their already problematic relationship. But Ruaidri is noble of heart, if not birth, and also a gentleman, so we want him to get the girl.
Harmon has included some exciting scenes of battles at sea with vivid descriptions and accurate nautical terminology. Those who love authenticity in their historical romances will appreciate her attention to detail.
This is book 5 in the de Montforte Brothers series and I recommend reading them I order. Also, Harmon’s various series are related and characters from one series may appear in another. From the beginning of The Wayward One, couples and characters from the earlier stories appear, some remaining to be characters in this story. If you want to understand who they are, best to begin at the beginning.
Set in 1779, this is the story of Irish Captain Ruaidri O' Devir, a commander in the American Continental Navy, selected by John Adams to sail to England and steal a new explosive formula developed by an English nobleman.
Lady Nerissa de Montforte, the youngest sibling in an aristocratic English family, is excited to accompany her brother to a demonstration of his new explosive invention. When her brother sends her to safety so she will not feel the device’s impact, it provides the perfect opportunity for Ruaidri to abduct her, thinking he will ransom her for the formula.
Having experienced the brutality of being impressed into serving the British navy, Ruaidri is contemptuous of all English and particularly the aristocracy. Nerissa finds the Irish captain both arrogant and attractive. Neither counts on falling in love, but they do and very quickly while the British Navy is searching the seas to reclaim her and do away with the Irishman.
This is a well-told story of second chances set against the time of America’s War of Independence. Nerissa’s fiancé jilted her and Ruaidri’s first love betrayed him with his best friend. In addition she is from wealth and title; he is from a poor Irish family. So, both carry baggage into their already problematic relationship. But Ruaidri is noble of heart, if not birth, and also a gentleman, so we want him to get the girl.
Harmon has included some exciting scenes of battles at sea with vivid descriptions and accurate nautical terminology. Those who love authenticity in their historical romances will appreciate her attention to detail.
This is book 5 in the de Montforte Brothers series and I recommend reading them I order. Also, Harmon’s various series are related and characters from one series may appear in another. From the beginning of The Wayward One, couples and characters from the earlier stories appear, some remaining to be characters in this story. If you want to understand who they are, best to begin at the beginning.
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