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Central Galactic Concordance #3
Minder Rising
A covert agent asked to train a prodigy telepath discovers he must first keep the boy and his mother alive in a gleaming city full of danger.
An injured agent on the galactic capital planet must evade whoever is killing off his covert interrogations unit and make an impossible choice--save his own skin, or save an innocent woman and her prodigy son. Can he discover who is subverting the mission of the Citizen Protection Service, before they fulfill their dark plans?
A millennium into the future, the Citizen Protection Service tests all children for minder talents, and recruits the best. Injured agent Lièrén Sòng is recovering from a near-fatal crash in Spires, the gleaming capital city of the galaxy. He should be preparing to return to interrogating criminals for the Citizen Protection Service, but he's made unexpected friends with a woman and her son. The boy has strong telepathic talents similar to Lièrén's, and his attractive mother makes Lièrén long for the stability of family.
Imara Sesay works hard as a road crew chief in Spires and part-time bartender to provide for her son Derrit. For him, she even breaks her ironclad rule never to get close to a customer, when she trusts Lièrén to teach her son how to control his growing telepathic talents.
However, new fatalities in his covert unit make Lièrén suspect he isn't a lucky survivor, he's a loose end. He should pull away from Imara and Derrit to keep them safe. But when the local CPS Testing Center shows a more than usual interest in the boy, Lièrén must make an impossible choice--protect the boy, or run for his own life. Can he stay alive long enough to save Imara and her prodigy son?
An injured agent on the galactic capital planet must evade whoever is killing off his covert interrogations unit and make an impossible choice--save his own skin, or save an innocent woman and her prodigy son. Can he discover who is subverting the mission of the Citizen Protection Service, before they fulfill their dark plans?
A millennium into the future, the Citizen Protection Service tests all children for minder talents, and recruits the best. Injured agent Lièrén Sòng is recovering from a near-fatal crash in Spires, the gleaming capital city of the galaxy. He should be preparing to return to interrogating criminals for the Citizen Protection Service, but he's made unexpected friends with a woman and her son. The boy has strong telepathic talents similar to Lièrén's, and his attractive mother makes Lièrén long for the stability of family.
Imara Sesay works hard as a road crew chief in Spires and part-time bartender to provide for her son Derrit. For him, she even breaks her ironclad rule never to get close to a customer, when she trusts Lièrén to teach her son how to control his growing telepathic talents.
However, new fatalities in his covert unit make Lièrén suspect he isn't a lucky survivor, he's a loose end. He should pull away from Imara and Derrit to keep them safe. But when the local CPS Testing Center shows a more than usual interest in the boy, Lièrén must make an impossible choice--protect the boy, or run for his own life. Can he stay alive long enough to save Imara and her prodigy son?
234 pages, ebook
First published March 26, 2015
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Carol Van Natta
32 books314 followersCarol Van Natta writes science fiction and fantasy, including
Overload Flux, Minder Rising, Zero Flux, Pico's Crush,
and
Jumper's Hope,
the first five books in a space opera series;
In Graves Below (Magic, NM)
, a paranormal romance; and
Hooray for Holopticon
, a retro science fiction comedy. She shares her Fort Collins, CO home with a sometime mad scientist and various cats. Any violations of the laws of physics in her books is the fault of the cats, not the mad scientist. Be the first to know about new releases by signing up for her newsletter at bit.ly/CVN-news or read her blog at Author.CarolVanNatta.com, or find her on Facebook at CarolVanNattaAuthor.
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February 1, 2025
After devouring the previous two entries in this series, I was salivating for the latest sci-fi adventure into this exciting, colorful, and intriguing future world in the distant stars the author created. If you want it to make some sense scientifically while keeping the wonder of the inexplicable beside an action, suspense, and romance blend that will keep you turning pages, here you go.
Minder Rising is a standalone story connected to a series through the world of the Central Galactic Concordance. It shifts focus to a new setting and new characters, but just as much danger, suspense, future fun, developed characters, and slow-burn romance as the previous two (I say two because there is a prequel that is worth the read).
Lieren Song works for the Citizen Protection Service which is an organization to protect the people with mind or Minder powers from being in danger, but also protect null humans from the dangers of Minders gone bad. He is part of secret mission unit who track down the really bad ones. He has two Minder powers that he can employ in his work.
Unfortunately, he is put on light duty and office work while he recovers from a mission gone bad when his partner died and he nearly did. While he is recovering, he encounters single mom and bartender, Imara Sesay and her twelve year old boy who has strong Minder gifts. He spends time with regular people for the first time since he was sent away to train his Minder gifts for service and realizes his life is missing quite a bit.
But then he starts to realize that someone is disposing of everyone in his unit for an unknown reason even while he gets suspicious of the testing the CPS is doing on children to determine their Minder gifts, the strengths, and who gets placed. He has always been loyal to the system, but now sees that things aren't adding up particularly when Imara's son is on the verge of being tested and someone keeps trying to kill Lieren. Imara doesn't want to get involved with Lieren no matter how wonderful he is because he is not sticking around and she has to think of her son.
Another brilliant entry in the series. The plot is layered and well paced, exciting, but also develops well. The characters are, again, what drives the story most for me. They are involved in the action, but also progress through growth internally.
Lieren is an interesting hero. He's one of those little seen beta heroes. Sure, he's part of a special policing force who go after the big bads, but he's an interrogator who is brought in after the capture not a soldier. He's a rule follower and does his duty to the best of his ability. His loyalty to his team and his purpose are his whole life until the HALO jump fall that nearly kills him and brings him to the point of change. He's gentle, kind, polite, and self-effacing to a fault. He doesn't have to be in charge and, in fact, doesn't want to be. He is not threatened by Imara. He respects her quick analytical mind and planning ability and follows her lead several times without it being a difficulty. I loved that he didn't change in personality even as he worked through a crisis of conscience and fought for his life and those he cared about a few times. He has honor and integrity which gets used against him at times, but Imara and Darrit and his new circle of friends he is forming see this as strengths.
Imara is a great counterpart for Lieren. When she was married, she let her husband lead and trusted him to make the decisions and provide. She learned to step up when he was gone for her son and herself. She never wants to go back to that helpless and passive woman she was again. She works two jobs that require her to be tough and decisive and now fears her son's strong Minder talent when she is a low level Minder. She has strict rules about not getting involved with someone who can't commit to the long haul so tries to keep the attractive Lieren in the friend category. He is tough to keep there the way he warms her heart by being good to her son and herself.
There is a mystery and also a political intrigue element like the earlier ones. These drive the action to a pulse-pounding big scene and some good twists. Even though this is a standalone story, I could see how it fit perfectly with the other stories like they are all pieces of the same puzzle and each adds to the overall picture.
Nicole Poole's narration work is excellent as usual. She wowed me with not just all her voices including gender, but the woman had to add in accents from Indian to Scottish and more than one Asian language with some phrases. She didn't miss a beat. And, her grasp of tone and pace was spot on. I can't imagine enjoying this series without her telling me the stories.
In summary, this was another abso-fab entry in the series leaving me thirsty for more. Having sci-fi and suspense mashed with romance is the best blend ever and I highly recommend these.
My thanks to Tantor Audio for the opportunity to listen to this book in exchange for an honest review.
Minder Rising is a standalone story connected to a series through the world of the Central Galactic Concordance. It shifts focus to a new setting and new characters, but just as much danger, suspense, future fun, developed characters, and slow-burn romance as the previous two (I say two because there is a prequel that is worth the read).
Lieren Song works for the Citizen Protection Service which is an organization to protect the people with mind or Minder powers from being in danger, but also protect null humans from the dangers of Minders gone bad. He is part of secret mission unit who track down the really bad ones. He has two Minder powers that he can employ in his work.
Unfortunately, he is put on light duty and office work while he recovers from a mission gone bad when his partner died and he nearly did. While he is recovering, he encounters single mom and bartender, Imara Sesay and her twelve year old boy who has strong Minder gifts. He spends time with regular people for the first time since he was sent away to train his Minder gifts for service and realizes his life is missing quite a bit.
But then he starts to realize that someone is disposing of everyone in his unit for an unknown reason even while he gets suspicious of the testing the CPS is doing on children to determine their Minder gifts, the strengths, and who gets placed. He has always been loyal to the system, but now sees that things aren't adding up particularly when Imara's son is on the verge of being tested and someone keeps trying to kill Lieren. Imara doesn't want to get involved with Lieren no matter how wonderful he is because he is not sticking around and she has to think of her son.
Another brilliant entry in the series. The plot is layered and well paced, exciting, but also develops well. The characters are, again, what drives the story most for me. They are involved in the action, but also progress through growth internally.
Lieren is an interesting hero. He's one of those little seen beta heroes. Sure, he's part of a special policing force who go after the big bads, but he's an interrogator who is brought in after the capture not a soldier. He's a rule follower and does his duty to the best of his ability. His loyalty to his team and his purpose are his whole life until the HALO jump fall that nearly kills him and brings him to the point of change. He's gentle, kind, polite, and self-effacing to a fault. He doesn't have to be in charge and, in fact, doesn't want to be. He is not threatened by Imara. He respects her quick analytical mind and planning ability and follows her lead several times without it being a difficulty. I loved that he didn't change in personality even as he worked through a crisis of conscience and fought for his life and those he cared about a few times. He has honor and integrity which gets used against him at times, but Imara and Darrit and his new circle of friends he is forming see this as strengths.
Imara is a great counterpart for Lieren. When she was married, she let her husband lead and trusted him to make the decisions and provide. She learned to step up when he was gone for her son and herself. She never wants to go back to that helpless and passive woman she was again. She works two jobs that require her to be tough and decisive and now fears her son's strong Minder talent when she is a low level Minder. She has strict rules about not getting involved with someone who can't commit to the long haul so tries to keep the attractive Lieren in the friend category. He is tough to keep there the way he warms her heart by being good to her son and herself.
There is a mystery and also a political intrigue element like the earlier ones. These drive the action to a pulse-pounding big scene and some good twists. Even though this is a standalone story, I could see how it fit perfectly with the other stories like they are all pieces of the same puzzle and each adds to the overall picture.
Nicole Poole's narration work is excellent as usual. She wowed me with not just all her voices including gender, but the woman had to add in accents from Indian to Scottish and more than one Asian language with some phrases. She didn't miss a beat. And, her grasp of tone and pace was spot on. I can't imagine enjoying this series without her telling me the stories.
In summary, this was another abso-fab entry in the series leaving me thirsty for more. Having sci-fi and suspense mashed with romance is the best blend ever and I highly recommend these.
My thanks to Tantor Audio for the opportunity to listen to this book in exchange for an honest review.
December 17, 2018
Completly different from the first one!
Much more slower paced and more focused on internal than external action.
Both MCs are completly ignorant of what's happening the first half of the book. Action starts in the last quarter.
Not bad, but I liked more the first one...
Much more slower paced and more focused on internal than external action.
Both MCs are completly ignorant of what's happening the first half of the book. Action starts in the last quarter.
Not bad, but I liked more the first one...
January 5, 2016
An enjoyable read that has a different, more low-key feel to it than the previous novel, but which manages to open up more of the Central Galactic Concordance universe for us.
In this one we more directly experience the shadier side of CPS and some of the control it has on the lives of the populace. I think this novel did a good job of showing that though CPS is currently pretty much an evil authoritarian psy-corp that enjoys broad powers and little oversight by its "masters" in the Central Government, it probably didn't start off that way. That among the monstrous psychopaths and amoral agents it seems to deliberately cultivate, there are still a number of genuinely good individuals who may simply have been duped in to believing the propaganda or are working from within to try and improve/ return things to the way they were intended to be.
I very much liked the characters and the slow relationship build-up, especially the continuing theme of little to no sex as the characters actually learn about each other as people. I wasn't sure I would since I loved the characters from the first novel so much, but Lieren and Imara are completely different to Luka and Mairwen and I think that helped a lot. Derrit was also an adorable and believable 12 year old and not at all a clumsy, annoying plot gimmick that is always underfoot like in some stories I've read. I think I'd like a glimpse of a more grown up Derrit in a future book to see what he makes of himself (also we definitely need more Rayle, he was awesome).
I did feel that the pace dragged just a tiny bit at about the 60% mark where Lieren seemed to do quite a bit of umming and ahhing over various things and almost fell in to the Great Miscommunication Trap prevalent in romance novels, but managed to skirt it at the last minute . Luckily it picked up again not too long after and had a surprisingly action bit towards the end before settling back in to the groove of things for the wrap-up and epilogue.
On the strength of 2 novels and a novella this author may be on her way to becoming one of my personal favourites, not just as a writer of sci-fi romance, but in general. There's just something pleasingly comfortable about her writing that keeps me going until far past my intended bedtime and her characters seem very animated and life like to me. I do look forward to seeing what she makes of the third in this series.
In this one we more directly experience the shadier side of CPS and some of the control it has on the lives of the populace. I think this novel did a good job of showing that though CPS is currently pretty much an evil authoritarian psy-corp that enjoys broad powers and little oversight by its "masters" in the Central Government, it probably didn't start off that way. That among the monstrous psychopaths and amoral agents it seems to deliberately cultivate, there are still a number of genuinely good individuals who may simply have been duped in to believing the propaganda or are working from within to try and improve/ return things to the way they were intended to be.
I very much liked the characters and the slow relationship build-up, especially the continuing theme of little to no sex as the characters actually learn about each other as people. I wasn't sure I would since I loved the characters from the first novel so much, but Lieren and Imara are completely different to Luka and Mairwen and I think that helped a lot. Derrit was also an adorable and believable 12 year old and not at all a clumsy, annoying plot gimmick that is always underfoot like in some stories I've read. I think I'd like a glimpse of a more grown up Derrit in a future book to see what he makes of himself (also we definitely need more Rayle, he was awesome).
I did feel that the pace dragged just a tiny bit at about the 60% mark where Lieren seemed to do quite a bit of umming and ahhing over various things and almost fell in to the Great Miscommunication Trap prevalent in romance novels, but managed to skirt it at the last minute . Luckily it picked up again not too long after and had a surprisingly action bit towards the end before settling back in to the groove of things for the wrap-up and epilogue.
On the strength of 2 novels and a novella this author may be on her way to becoming one of my personal favourites, not just as a writer of sci-fi romance, but in general. There's just something pleasingly comfortable about her writing that keeps me going until far past my intended bedtime and her characters seem very animated and life like to me. I do look forward to seeing what she makes of the third in this series.
August 19, 2015
While recovering from a near-fatal crash, agent Lièrén Sòng makes friends with Imara Sesay and her son only to discover that the CPS Testing Center is entirely too interested in her son’s talents and that he’s become a loose end in this thrilling sci-fi romance.
With unexpected deaths in his field unit, Lièrén begins to suspect that his crash wasn’t an accident after all and the reader can’t help but get caught up in this story as his eyes are opened to just how naïve and trusting he’s been. The friendship between Lièrén and Imara grows steadily stronger throughout the story as the romance kind of sneaks up on them because neither believes that a relationship is the realm of possibilities and the steady paced plot keeps anticipations high with suspense, turmoil and action while emotional issues adds depth to the story.
Intrigue builds lots of tension to the story as Lièrén begins to realize that he’s not a survivor…he’s a loose end and excitement builds as the danger to Lièrén escalates causing some intense attack scenes but with his realization he also begins to see another side to CPS and wonders just how far they will go and he’s running out of time if he wants to help Derritt and Imara. The well written scenes and details capture the imagination while the intriguing events keep the reader glued to the pages and unexpected twists keeps readers guessing throughout.
Suspense and expectation of what was coming kept me completely absorbed in the story from the very beginning especially with that thrilling and deadly opening scene although I should mention that some of the story is a little on the slower side but entertaining none the less and I have to say that Imara’s friend Rayle’s outgoing personality adds quite bit of fun to the story.
With unexpected deaths in his field unit, Lièrén begins to suspect that his crash wasn’t an accident after all and the reader can’t help but get caught up in this story as his eyes are opened to just how naïve and trusting he’s been. The friendship between Lièrén and Imara grows steadily stronger throughout the story as the romance kind of sneaks up on them because neither believes that a relationship is the realm of possibilities and the steady paced plot keeps anticipations high with suspense, turmoil and action while emotional issues adds depth to the story.
Intrigue builds lots of tension to the story as Lièrén begins to realize that he’s not a survivor…he’s a loose end and excitement builds as the danger to Lièrén escalates causing some intense attack scenes but with his realization he also begins to see another side to CPS and wonders just how far they will go and he’s running out of time if he wants to help Derritt and Imara. The well written scenes and details capture the imagination while the intriguing events keep the reader glued to the pages and unexpected twists keeps readers guessing throughout.
Suspense and expectation of what was coming kept me completely absorbed in the story from the very beginning especially with that thrilling and deadly opening scene although I should mention that some of the story is a little on the slower side but entertaining none the less and I have to say that Imara’s friend Rayle’s outgoing personality adds quite bit of fun to the story.
July 18, 2015
Continued fun
The beginning starts with a twist that doesn't really start to pay off until the end. We see a broader list of skills and get deeper into the CPS problem.
I wasn't as pleased with this book as with the first. 'Overload Flux' started and ran with a mystery while this one forecasted a problem and made you care enough about the characters to want to see them get through it. One was more of a detective novel with action; this one was more slow-paced thriller. Once the tension got higher it started to be more interesting.
It was slow for me to warm to the central character. Once additional information starts rolling in certain mannerisms and problems become obvious and he becomes more like able. Part of the problem may have been that I 'know' from the first novel that you can't trust the CPS, yet the character needs to slow walk to it himself. It made his decisions ring true in the end, but it was a little frustrating at the beginning.
A few copyedit mistakes (missing words). Nothing to really spoil reading.
No sex, although there were plenty of euphemisms (hot-connect); most of them were used to proposition or in conversation.
Pre-ordering the next novel.
The beginning starts with a twist that doesn't really start to pay off until the end. We see a broader list of skills and get deeper into the CPS problem.
I wasn't as pleased with this book as with the first. 'Overload Flux' started and ran with a mystery while this one forecasted a problem and made you care enough about the characters to want to see them get through it. One was more of a detective novel with action; this one was more slow-paced thriller. Once the tension got higher it started to be more interesting.
It was slow for me to warm to the central character. Once additional information starts rolling in certain mannerisms and problems become obvious and he becomes more like able. Part of the problem may have been that I 'know' from the first novel that you can't trust the CPS, yet the character needs to slow walk to it himself. It made his decisions ring true in the end, but it was a little frustrating at the beginning.
A few copyedit mistakes (missing words). Nothing to really spoil reading.
No sex, although there were plenty of euphemisms (hot-connect); most of them were used to proposition or in conversation.
Pre-ordering the next novel.
December 20, 2018
I enjoyed Overload Flux, the first book in this series so much, that I dived right into book 2 after I finished it. Minder Rising has a very different tone and focus than the first book in the series, but I think the different approach totally worked here. We get to see a whole other side of the universe and a different perspective and it was great!
I had a great time reading Minder Rising. Minder Rising is quite gently paced and I mean that in a positive way. The plot points slowly emerge and progress and I loved seeing how it all played out. Where in book 1 the focus is more on the suspense and mystery and there's some action as well. This one is focused more on the characters and their stories and a hint of suspense. Which works great for this story and I really enjoyed the book and I thought it was interesting how different the tone was compared to book 1.
It's told from dual point of views, Lièrén got hurt in an accident and slowly he starts finding out truths and discovered that makes him doubt the CPS a bit more. Where Imara has a son who has a very strong minder talent and later in the book he has to go in for minder testing and the CPS becomes very interested in him.
I loved the character driven nature and the gentle pace of this book. I didn't connect as fast with the two main characters as I did with the main character in book 1, but the more I read the more they grew on me. And by the end of the book I was really fond of Lièrén and Imara and the side characters Derrit and Rayle were great too. The character really come to live in this book and I enjoyed reading about them and seeing them all interact with each other.
It was interesting to see Lièrén slowly figure out the truth of what happened to his field team unit and also some things that were going on in the CPS. He is quite the naive character at first and it's sad when that gets broken and he realizes what's really going on around him and how much he didn't notice at first. I liked how his personality was this fun combination of quirkiness and a sort of formal polite behavior that was uniquely Lièrén. At the end of the book he has to choose between his job and helping the women and kid he grew to care about and I was so curious to see how it all would play out. And I can only say that the conclusion was very satisfying and resolved all the plot point in a great way.
Imara is a great character too, she cares a lot about her son and she is a very confident and capable character. I liked her filer minder talent, which seems so handy and fit her. And there's a great twist surrounding her character later in the book. I liked how determined she was to do the best for her son, with working two books and also what she does later in the book to protect him. It really shows how far she is willing to go for him. I liked seeing that. Derrit was fun to read about too, I liked seeing him interact with his mother and Lièrén.
The romance is a very slow burn, but it worked here. I liked how they slowly got to know each other and even when they realized their mutual attraction it took them a long time to act on their feelings. I wouldn't have minded a bit more time seeing them as an actual couple as now there were very few scenes with that. And they made for such a great couple, I just wanted a bit more of it. But I am hoping we'll get to see them again in later books. I did think they were great for each other and this author really writes her romances well. Imara resists Lièrén for a long time because he is a transient, but she falls in love with him anyway as her heart doesn't listen to her head. And Lièrén knows his job will take him away from here and while thought he was fine with that he realizes he wants more out of his life.
While it's set in the same world as book 1, there is very little connection between the two books so far, but there are hints in how it all ties together. I think there is an overarching plot line that's slowly emerging and the main telling about that is done in the epilogues actually. There were a few times where they mentioned the case Luka worked on in book 1 as that's connected to Lièrén as well and Imara has met Luka, but that's basically it. I am very curious to see how the series progresses and if we will see the main characters from the first two books again.
I loved how we learn more about the world in this book. Because of the different setting and focus and Lièrén working for the CPS, so we learn a lot more about the CPS. It also was great to see more of this big planet which was the center of all the politics. It was a very different part of the universe we got to see and at the end there is a bit of other parts of the galaxy we get to see as well, which was pretty intriguing. The whole world feels so real and well thought out, even tough there is still so much to discover, which makes me even more excited to read more books in this series.
To summarize: this was another awesome book. It has a gentle pace and slow build romance that totally worked here. The tone and focus of this one is very different than book 1, but I liked how this provided a very different feel of the world and what's going on. While the main characters took some time to grow on me, by the end I was really fond of them and was sad to say goodbye to them. The slow build romance fits the pace of the book, although I was sad we didn't get to see more of them as a couple. The storylines surrounding Lièrén and the CPS and some difficult decisions he has to make were very interesting and I also liked how the plot line surrounding Derrit's minder talents progressed. This book gives another view of the world and I enjoyed my time spent with this book and learning more about this world. All in all this was a great book and I am hoping to pick up the next book soon.
Reread and audiobook review
After I finished listening to Overload Flux I dove right into Minder Rising afterwards. This is my re-read review and audiobook review as I read it in e-format the first time.
Just like the first time I was again surprised at the difference in tone that Minder Rising had compared to Overload Flux, but as I had now expected that I found I was able to enjoy it even more than the first read through. And while I love the first book a bit more than this one, Minder Rising is a great read and the difference in tone totally works for this story. Now knowing what's coming next some of the hints and events had more impact.
This series has so much happening and quite a bit of foreshadowing and early hints going on and that makes it a delight to re-read. And spending time with the characters I've grown fond of certainly helps too.
I really like Lièrén, Imara and also Imara's son Derrit and bartender Rayle (I had to look up both their names spelling from my previous review as someone due to the audio I had no idea how their names were spelled). The slow burn romance between Lièrén and Imara is so much fun to see unfold and I also liked seeing how Lièrén interacts with Derrit. I liked Rayle even more than in the first read. He's such a fun character to read about.
Seeing Lièrén go from naive and sheltered to opening his eyes to what the CPS does and finding what he can do about it is great to see. And also how he opens his heart and finds his home by surrounding himself with people he cares about. In a sense both Lièrén and Imara's lives really get upended and changed in this book and I love the last few chapters seeing where they end up.
Again the narration was so well done. I really like Nichole Poole's way of narrating and I think her style fits this book well. She handles the accents really well and it was fun to hear her pronounce the foreign words this book has. I had to get used to Lièrén's voice a bit for a while as it seemed a bit too close to Luka's voice from book 1, but I ended up liking it in the end. Imara. Derrit and Rayle's voice she handled really well and their voices really reflected their personalities. I am not sure if it's because of the audio or the re-read, but I find it easier to follow the story and the multiple threads and hints than when I first read it, which is great.
To summarize: I loved listening to Minder Rising. I really enjoyed the narration and as I love this series so much it's great to re-read it this way. I liked getting to spend some time with Lièrén, Imara, Derrit and Rayle. See imara and Lièrén fall in love. And see how Lièrén's life changes so much over the course of this book and seeing him become more aware of what the CPS is doing and fighting for what he believes is the right mission. All the little hints of foreshadowing are easier to spot now that I have an idea of what's coming next. Nichole Poole does a great job with the narration, she handles the accents so well and I like hearing how she pronounces the foreign words. On to Pico's Crush next!
I had a great time reading Minder Rising. Minder Rising is quite gently paced and I mean that in a positive way. The plot points slowly emerge and progress and I loved seeing how it all played out. Where in book 1 the focus is more on the suspense and mystery and there's some action as well. This one is focused more on the characters and their stories and a hint of suspense. Which works great for this story and I really enjoyed the book and I thought it was interesting how different the tone was compared to book 1.
It's told from dual point of views, Lièrén got hurt in an accident and slowly he starts finding out truths and discovered that makes him doubt the CPS a bit more. Where Imara has a son who has a very strong minder talent and later in the book he has to go in for minder testing and the CPS becomes very interested in him.
I loved the character driven nature and the gentle pace of this book. I didn't connect as fast with the two main characters as I did with the main character in book 1, but the more I read the more they grew on me. And by the end of the book I was really fond of Lièrén and Imara and the side characters Derrit and Rayle were great too. The character really come to live in this book and I enjoyed reading about them and seeing them all interact with each other.
It was interesting to see Lièrén slowly figure out the truth of what happened to his field team unit and also some things that were going on in the CPS. He is quite the naive character at first and it's sad when that gets broken and he realizes what's really going on around him and how much he didn't notice at first. I liked how his personality was this fun combination of quirkiness and a sort of formal polite behavior that was uniquely Lièrén. At the end of the book he has to choose between his job and helping the women and kid he grew to care about and I was so curious to see how it all would play out. And I can only say that the conclusion was very satisfying and resolved all the plot point in a great way.
Imara is a great character too, she cares a lot about her son and she is a very confident and capable character. I liked her filer minder talent, which seems so handy and fit her. And there's a great twist surrounding her character later in the book. I liked how determined she was to do the best for her son, with working two books and also what she does later in the book to protect him. It really shows how far she is willing to go for him. I liked seeing that. Derrit was fun to read about too, I liked seeing him interact with his mother and Lièrén.
The romance is a very slow burn, but it worked here. I liked how they slowly got to know each other and even when they realized their mutual attraction it took them a long time to act on their feelings. I wouldn't have minded a bit more time seeing them as an actual couple as now there were very few scenes with that. And they made for such a great couple, I just wanted a bit more of it. But I am hoping we'll get to see them again in later books. I did think they were great for each other and this author really writes her romances well. Imara resists Lièrén for a long time because he is a transient, but she falls in love with him anyway as her heart doesn't listen to her head. And Lièrén knows his job will take him away from here and while thought he was fine with that he realizes he wants more out of his life.
While it's set in the same world as book 1, there is very little connection between the two books so far, but there are hints in how it all ties together. I think there is an overarching plot line that's slowly emerging and the main telling about that is done in the epilogues actually. There were a few times where they mentioned the case Luka worked on in book 1 as that's connected to Lièrén as well and Imara has met Luka, but that's basically it. I am very curious to see how the series progresses and if we will see the main characters from the first two books again.
I loved how we learn more about the world in this book. Because of the different setting and focus and Lièrén working for the CPS, so we learn a lot more about the CPS. It also was great to see more of this big planet which was the center of all the politics. It was a very different part of the universe we got to see and at the end there is a bit of other parts of the galaxy we get to see as well, which was pretty intriguing. The whole world feels so real and well thought out, even tough there is still so much to discover, which makes me even more excited to read more books in this series.
To summarize: this was another awesome book. It has a gentle pace and slow build romance that totally worked here. The tone and focus of this one is very different than book 1, but I liked how this provided a very different feel of the world and what's going on. While the main characters took some time to grow on me, by the end I was really fond of them and was sad to say goodbye to them. The slow build romance fits the pace of the book, although I was sad we didn't get to see more of them as a couple. The storylines surrounding Lièrén and the CPS and some difficult decisions he has to make were very interesting and I also liked how the plot line surrounding Derrit's minder talents progressed. This book gives another view of the world and I enjoyed my time spent with this book and learning more about this world. All in all this was a great book and I am hoping to pick up the next book soon.
Reread and audiobook review
After I finished listening to Overload Flux I dove right into Minder Rising afterwards. This is my re-read review and audiobook review as I read it in e-format the first time.
Just like the first time I was again surprised at the difference in tone that Minder Rising had compared to Overload Flux, but as I had now expected that I found I was able to enjoy it even more than the first read through. And while I love the first book a bit more than this one, Minder Rising is a great read and the difference in tone totally works for this story. Now knowing what's coming next some of the hints and events had more impact.
This series has so much happening and quite a bit of foreshadowing and early hints going on and that makes it a delight to re-read. And spending time with the characters I've grown fond of certainly helps too.
I really like Lièrén, Imara and also Imara's son Derrit and bartender Rayle (I had to look up both their names spelling from my previous review as someone due to the audio I had no idea how their names were spelled). The slow burn romance between Lièrén and Imara is so much fun to see unfold and I also liked seeing how Lièrén interacts with Derrit. I liked Rayle even more than in the first read. He's such a fun character to read about.
Seeing Lièrén go from naive and sheltered to opening his eyes to what the CPS does and finding what he can do about it is great to see. And also how he opens his heart and finds his home by surrounding himself with people he cares about. In a sense both Lièrén and Imara's lives really get upended and changed in this book and I love the last few chapters seeing where they end up.
Again the narration was so well done. I really like Nichole Poole's way of narrating and I think her style fits this book well. She handles the accents really well and it was fun to hear her pronounce the foreign words this book has. I had to get used to Lièrén's voice a bit for a while as it seemed a bit too close to Luka's voice from book 1, but I ended up liking it in the end. Imara. Derrit and Rayle's voice she handled really well and their voices really reflected their personalities. I am not sure if it's because of the audio or the re-read, but I find it easier to follow the story and the multiple threads and hints than when I first read it, which is great.
To summarize: I loved listening to Minder Rising. I really enjoyed the narration and as I love this series so much it's great to re-read it this way. I liked getting to spend some time with Lièrén, Imara, Derrit and Rayle. See imara and Lièrén fall in love. And see how Lièrén's life changes so much over the course of this book and seeing him become more aware of what the CPS is doing and fighting for what he believes is the right mission. All the little hints of foreshadowing are easier to spot now that I have an idea of what's coming next. Nichole Poole does a great job with the narration, she handles the accents so well and I like hearing how she pronounces the foreign words. On to Pico's Crush next!
July 18, 2017
Great sequel
It's a great sequel to Overload Flux, and I'm glad I was able to read it so close to reading the first one. The characters were wonderful and not ones I will soon forget. In this book, there is a new set of characters, making me miss the ones from the first book, but I do like the new take on this story. It has a new dimension. The plot starts out a little slow and brings up a lot of backstory, but the action is there. Not disappointed in the least.
It's a great sequel to Overload Flux, and I'm glad I was able to read it so close to reading the first one. The characters were wonderful and not ones I will soon forget. In this book, there is a new set of characters, making me miss the ones from the first book, but I do like the new take on this story. It has a new dimension. The plot starts out a little slow and brings up a lot of backstory, but the action is there. Not disappointed in the least.
March 20, 2023
Fascinating series. I'm hooked.
September 15, 2015
A science fiction romance novel such as Carol Van Natta’s Minder Rising: Central Galactic Concordance Book 2 has to do two things. It has to develop characters which can reveal the magnetism of inter-personal relationships and it has to invent a world-scale setting in which that magnetism can take place. More than in any other romance sub-genre, in a science fiction romance the setting takes a central place, and if there is anything which is not clear about the setting, the reader’s interest can become distracted from the developing relationship.
In this novel the Central Galactic Concordance is an interplanetary system of governance, regulating over five hundred planets and providing an impersonal power which controls the lives of all the inhabitants of those worlds. It is the third central character in the storyline, taking the role of the inimical authority, bringing into the narrative all that is threatening and destructive to affection and love.
The first flowering of attraction between the protagonists is necessarily slow because for both of the main characters other factors have become dominant. Special security agent Lièrén Sòng is attempting to survive in a social system which, he slowly realises, has betrayed him completely, and Imara Sesay struggles to protect her gifted young son, Derrit, from the predatory clutches of the same system. All three characters are “minders” that is, they all possess distinctive mental powers to a greater or lesser degree. In the case of Sòng the powers are known and are used in support of the system and in the case of the mother and son they unfold as the action progresses.
This is a recipe for success, both in the science fiction genre and equally in the romance genre, and to a very large extent Van Natta develops all the potential of her plot. She is a stylish and accomplished author who writes with confidence and authority, and develops the action at a pace which perfectly suits the storyline, except perhaps at the outset of the book. At the beginning of the first chapter the reader is introduced to a great deal of world references and nomenclature which are not clearly explained and which are sometimes confusing in their effect, as is the great amount of background detail which, while necessary, could perhaps have been spread more evenly across the opening pages.
A highly packed introduction courts the danger of not fixing the reader’s attention; however, by the end of the first chapter the action is unfolding smoothly, the conflict is becoming apparent and the reader’s interest and anticipation are engaged.
It is impossible to have a truly successful romance story without convincing characters. If an author cannot create believable figures to support the storyline then they ought not to take on the challenges of this particularly demanding genre. More than in any other genre the characters must be not only self-aware but also intensely aware of each other. Although they are individuals, the magnet of mutual attraction draws them together and the author has to be able to depict that essential aspect of a romance story with persuasive clarity.
Van Natta’s characters are very strong and quickly take on the solid yet complex identities that are needed to support not only the romance theme but also to make the reader believe completely in the world where the storyline is played out. Sòng’s growing realisation of his isolation within the system, a realisation which turns him from cooperation to opposition, is particularly well handled. Imara’s more pragmatic determination not to allow the system to overcome her life identifies her as the perfect partner to accompany Sòng into the future. Even the secondary characters are well-shaped, particularly the flamboyant and exhibitionist Rayle who carries his own line of interest through the full course of the action.
In Minder Rising Carol Van Natta has brought together two genres, giving each a similar weighting in the development of the plot. The book is not science fiction with a romantic interest nor is it a romance incidentally placed in a different world. It is a highly satisfactory and successful integration of the two, resulting in an enjoyable story very well told against a setting which is completely believable.
Reviewed By Judith Rook
In this novel the Central Galactic Concordance is an interplanetary system of governance, regulating over five hundred planets and providing an impersonal power which controls the lives of all the inhabitants of those worlds. It is the third central character in the storyline, taking the role of the inimical authority, bringing into the narrative all that is threatening and destructive to affection and love.
The first flowering of attraction between the protagonists is necessarily slow because for both of the main characters other factors have become dominant. Special security agent Lièrén Sòng is attempting to survive in a social system which, he slowly realises, has betrayed him completely, and Imara Sesay struggles to protect her gifted young son, Derrit, from the predatory clutches of the same system. All three characters are “minders” that is, they all possess distinctive mental powers to a greater or lesser degree. In the case of Sòng the powers are known and are used in support of the system and in the case of the mother and son they unfold as the action progresses.
This is a recipe for success, both in the science fiction genre and equally in the romance genre, and to a very large extent Van Natta develops all the potential of her plot. She is a stylish and accomplished author who writes with confidence and authority, and develops the action at a pace which perfectly suits the storyline, except perhaps at the outset of the book. At the beginning of the first chapter the reader is introduced to a great deal of world references and nomenclature which are not clearly explained and which are sometimes confusing in their effect, as is the great amount of background detail which, while necessary, could perhaps have been spread more evenly across the opening pages.
A highly packed introduction courts the danger of not fixing the reader’s attention; however, by the end of the first chapter the action is unfolding smoothly, the conflict is becoming apparent and the reader’s interest and anticipation are engaged.
It is impossible to have a truly successful romance story without convincing characters. If an author cannot create believable figures to support the storyline then they ought not to take on the challenges of this particularly demanding genre. More than in any other genre the characters must be not only self-aware but also intensely aware of each other. Although they are individuals, the magnet of mutual attraction draws them together and the author has to be able to depict that essential aspect of a romance story with persuasive clarity.
Van Natta’s characters are very strong and quickly take on the solid yet complex identities that are needed to support not only the romance theme but also to make the reader believe completely in the world where the storyline is played out. Sòng’s growing realisation of his isolation within the system, a realisation which turns him from cooperation to opposition, is particularly well handled. Imara’s more pragmatic determination not to allow the system to overcome her life identifies her as the perfect partner to accompany Sòng into the future. Even the secondary characters are well-shaped, particularly the flamboyant and exhibitionist Rayle who carries his own line of interest through the full course of the action.
In Minder Rising Carol Van Natta has brought together two genres, giving each a similar weighting in the development of the plot. The book is not science fiction with a romantic interest nor is it a romance incidentally placed in a different world. It is a highly satisfactory and successful integration of the two, resulting in an enjoyable story very well told against a setting which is completely believable.
Reviewed By Judith Rook
June 28, 2015
Minder Rising is the second book in Carol Van Natta’s Central Galactic Concordance series. It takes place in a futuristic galaxy where special mental talents are a part of life for many of the citizens. Lieren Song is one such person. Tested as a young boy and recruited into the Citizen Protection Service (CPS), a recent accident has forced him into a temporary leave while recovering from his injuries.
While on leave, Lieren spends some of his time in a bar and befriends the staff, most particularly the lovely bartender Imara Sesay, as well as her son Derrit. Derrit’s own minder talents are growing and Lieren volunteers to help Derrit to control his abilities. To Lieren, he is not only teaching, he is spending time in the bar with Imara.
In the meantime, several suspicious deaths of Lieren’s CPS team members are making him nervous. And since he is still alive, he is likely a suspect – or maybe a target.
To solve the mystery, Lieren becomes a geek detective. That is, he uses technology to collect and analyze data. This is not my favorite fictional problem-solving method. Even though I readily admit it is legitimate, it is not all that interesting to read about. On the plus side, Lieren’s findings set up some of the later more exciting action.
The characters of Minder Rising are very much the highlight of the book. Because of his accident and the physical predicament it left him in, Lieren’s strength is not immediately evident at the beginning. In fact, he seems to be mentally adrift at first, his only anchor – his daily visits to the bar where he enjoys his friendship with Imara and her son. But as events unroll, Lieren is forced to toughen up. It was gratifying to see Lieren growing stronger both physically and mentally when circumstances dictated the need.
The relationship between Lieren and Imara is a slow burner. Both recognize that Lieren’s stay is only temporary and, for that reason, they spend a lot of time trying to avoid getting close. Ultimately Derrit is the magnet that draws the two together. I must admit, I was a bit disappointed that the connection between Lieren and Imara was largely based on Derrit. I kept looking for something more for them. On the other hand, I am usually a sucker for a cute kid in a story.
In this series, the Central Galactic Concordance (CGC) is a culturally diverse body. Though the cultures are earth-based, they include many nationalities, religions and lifestyles. Just take a look at the cover for Minder Rising. You see three different skin colors on it. When reading, I rarely pay attention to appearance, but the author uses other devices to introduce elements of diverse cultures, one of which is language. In Spires, the governing seat of CGC, Mandarin is a common language. Thankfully, translations are provided! I like seeing these cultural features in the story.
As I mentioned, Minder Rising is book two in the Central Galactic Concordance series. The first was Overload Flux, which I have read and really enjoyed. Each book can be read as a standalone. Both end with an epilogue in which the point of view is that of a powerful female character that was not a major character in the book. In each epilogue, the Ayorinn legacy is mentioned. Ayorinn was (or is?) a famous oracle in the CGC. So, having enjoyed Overload Flux and Minder Rising, I am definitely looking forward to book three in this series!
I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. Originally reviewed for Smart Girls Love Sci Fi.
While on leave, Lieren spends some of his time in a bar and befriends the staff, most particularly the lovely bartender Imara Sesay, as well as her son Derrit. Derrit’s own minder talents are growing and Lieren volunteers to help Derrit to control his abilities. To Lieren, he is not only teaching, he is spending time in the bar with Imara.
In the meantime, several suspicious deaths of Lieren’s CPS team members are making him nervous. And since he is still alive, he is likely a suspect – or maybe a target.
To solve the mystery, Lieren becomes a geek detective. That is, he uses technology to collect and analyze data. This is not my favorite fictional problem-solving method. Even though I readily admit it is legitimate, it is not all that interesting to read about. On the plus side, Lieren’s findings set up some of the later more exciting action.
The characters of Minder Rising are very much the highlight of the book. Because of his accident and the physical predicament it left him in, Lieren’s strength is not immediately evident at the beginning. In fact, he seems to be mentally adrift at first, his only anchor – his daily visits to the bar where he enjoys his friendship with Imara and her son. But as events unroll, Lieren is forced to toughen up. It was gratifying to see Lieren growing stronger both physically and mentally when circumstances dictated the need.
The relationship between Lieren and Imara is a slow burner. Both recognize that Lieren’s stay is only temporary and, for that reason, they spend a lot of time trying to avoid getting close. Ultimately Derrit is the magnet that draws the two together. I must admit, I was a bit disappointed that the connection between Lieren and Imara was largely based on Derrit. I kept looking for something more for them. On the other hand, I am usually a sucker for a cute kid in a story.
In this series, the Central Galactic Concordance (CGC) is a culturally diverse body. Though the cultures are earth-based, they include many nationalities, religions and lifestyles. Just take a look at the cover for Minder Rising. You see three different skin colors on it. When reading, I rarely pay attention to appearance, but the author uses other devices to introduce elements of diverse cultures, one of which is language. In Spires, the governing seat of CGC, Mandarin is a common language. Thankfully, translations are provided! I like seeing these cultural features in the story.
As I mentioned, Minder Rising is book two in the Central Galactic Concordance series. The first was Overload Flux, which I have read and really enjoyed. Each book can be read as a standalone. Both end with an epilogue in which the point of view is that of a powerful female character that was not a major character in the book. In each epilogue, the Ayorinn legacy is mentioned. Ayorinn was (or is?) a famous oracle in the CGC. So, having enjoyed Overload Flux and Minder Rising, I am definitely looking forward to book three in this series!
I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. Originally reviewed for Smart Girls Love Sci Fi.
February 24, 2016
CPS agent Lièrén Sòng is recovering from a he’s-got-lots-of-new-vat-grown-internal-organs injury, doing clerical work by day and drinking soda at night at the Quark and Quasar pub. The bartender, Imara Sesay, works two jobs to help support her and her son Derrit, and the two of them have become friends during his convalescence. After an unpleasant bar incident, Imara asks Lièrén to help her son control his minder talents before his government aptitude test, and Lièrén agrees. Meanwhile, members of Lièrén’s team are dying suspiciously. Imara and Lièrén get closer while he uncovers damning information about the local CPS testing program and his own team. Can he both stay alive and help her keep her son safe? Is there any future for a road crew chief and man subject to military deployment?
My squees
Lièrén is not a conventional hero. He’s deferential without any irony, polite and honorable. It’s so good to see East Asian males as a desirable subject. He’s running Confucian firmware on his brain, too: he respects his elders for being such, wouldn’t think to break the rules as anything but a late resort, and values his extended family greatly. He doesn’t think of himself as a good person due to the things he’s done in CPS service, but he’s principled and disciplined.
Imara isn’t a conventional heroine. She may work two jobs and be a widow supporting a kid, but she’s not downtrodden or victimized. When she’s in her element on the road or at the bar, she’s competent. When scary things happen, she’s scared, but thinks quickly to deal with it. Imara feels like a complete character, her actions feel believable. She's world-wiser than Lièrén since she's older and not the semi-sheltered agent used to living in hotels and ships, but they fit together well. Their romance is a slow burn, with both of them mindful of the obstacles to their togetherness. The rest of the story is also paced that way, starting sedately and growing progressively faster.
The secondary characters are memorable too. Derrit, Lièrén’s family, Imara’s deceased husband, the other bartender, Imara’s road crew, and the CPS officers all have their own agendas and drive the action. Some of them are good people who did harmful things, and some are morally dark gray but try to do some good deeds. Everybody’s more than plausible. Even the organizations are nuanced, there are good and bad people in the bureaucracies. No Evil Empire here. The truth is that there are lots of players in problematic organizations, most well-meaning and trying to do their best jobs, some malicious, and some who are not quite competent.
My grumbles
I had to read the last few chapters more than once to check whether I’d missed anything. Did Lièrén ever tell Imara what was up with his job and his team dying? He is keeping secrets from her, but I imagine she’d ask, “so what was with those people trying to mess you up?” I am curious as to how he’d answer. Because of the time lapse some developments seem a bit sudden. Maybe they could have felt a bit less so if I’d known the extent of the contact Imara and Lièrén had during their separation.
My squees
Lièrén is not a conventional hero. He’s deferential without any irony, polite and honorable. It’s so good to see East Asian males as a desirable subject. He’s running Confucian firmware on his brain, too: he respects his elders for being such, wouldn’t think to break the rules as anything but a late resort, and values his extended family greatly. He doesn’t think of himself as a good person due to the things he’s done in CPS service, but he’s principled and disciplined.
Imara isn’t a conventional heroine. She may work two jobs and be a widow supporting a kid, but she’s not downtrodden or victimized. When she’s in her element on the road or at the bar, she’s competent. When scary things happen, she’s scared, but thinks quickly to deal with it. Imara feels like a complete character, her actions feel believable. She's world-wiser than Lièrén since she's older and not the semi-sheltered agent used to living in hotels and ships, but they fit together well. Their romance is a slow burn, with both of them mindful of the obstacles to their togetherness. The rest of the story is also paced that way, starting sedately and growing progressively faster.
The secondary characters are memorable too. Derrit, Lièrén’s family, Imara’s deceased husband, the other bartender, Imara’s road crew, and the CPS officers all have their own agendas and drive the action. Some of them are good people who did harmful things, and some are morally dark gray but try to do some good deeds. Everybody’s more than plausible. Even the organizations are nuanced, there are good and bad people in the bureaucracies. No Evil Empire here. The truth is that there are lots of players in problematic organizations, most well-meaning and trying to do their best jobs, some malicious, and some who are not quite competent.
My grumbles
I had to read the last few chapters more than once to check whether I’d missed anything. Did Lièrén ever tell Imara what was up with his job and his team dying? He is keeping secrets from her, but I imagine she’d ask, “so what was with those people trying to mess you up?” I am curious as to how he’d answer. Because of the time lapse some developments seem a bit sudden. Maybe they could have felt a bit less so if I’d known the extent of the contact Imara and Lièrén had during their separation.
January 28, 2016
Originally published at West Coast Book Reviews.
I received a copy from the author in exchange for my honest opinion.
Minder Rising is the second in Van Natta's Central Galactic Concordance series. The third, Pico's Crush, is expected around the end of January and follows characters introduced in the first book, Overload Flux. Minder Rising can be read standalone, though I highly recommend reading Overload Flux as well.
As with Overload Flux, characters drive Minder Rising. Though we only learn a few general details about Lièrén's past, he smoothly adapts his skills to investigating the threat to his unit. As a bartender and road construction crew boss, Imara does not come off as classic heroine. She's tough, clever, honest and has my respect as a realistic female lead. Her son Derrit displays a good balance between his childhood and his fierce devotion to protect his mother following the loss of his father.
As I read, I became aware interactions between Lièrén and Imara lacked copious sidelong glances, urgent heartbeats and salacious inner voices oogling each other's physical appearance. As I came to know them, I understood having those sorts of inner dialogues would be out of character. Lièrén comes from a big, respectful family and Imara is cautious to avoid involvement with someone she considers a 'transient' out of concern for Derrit. While I appreciated their inner maturity, I wouldn't have minded seeing them enjoy more emotionally close moments together.
I'm very fond of the supporting characters in this book, particularly the flamboyant, charming and instantly likeable Rayle. I don't think I'll ever tire of a well done character who fits the "social glue" role in a story. He's nosy, which he can't help since he's an empath, but he only uses it out of a desire to help others even if they're not ready for it.
*crosses fingers and wishes for more Rayle*
In addition to the great characters, I loved imagining the glass-like construction of the Spires and the layers of plot tied together throughout. I also liked learning about something one character has done through the eyes of another. It happened several times and I found it to be more suspenseful than if we saw the setup with one character and the discovery by another. Van Natta also build up the world of minders and the CPS in a way that grows on what I learned in Overload Flux while giving a complete and thorough world descriptions to someone starting the series with Minder Rising.
I definitely recommend this series.
I received a copy from the author in exchange for my honest opinion.
Minder Rising is the second in Van Natta's Central Galactic Concordance series. The third, Pico's Crush, is expected around the end of January and follows characters introduced in the first book, Overload Flux. Minder Rising can be read standalone, though I highly recommend reading Overload Flux as well.
As with Overload Flux, characters drive Minder Rising. Though we only learn a few general details about Lièrén's past, he smoothly adapts his skills to investigating the threat to his unit. As a bartender and road construction crew boss, Imara does not come off as classic heroine. She's tough, clever, honest and has my respect as a realistic female lead. Her son Derrit displays a good balance between his childhood and his fierce devotion to protect his mother following the loss of his father.
As I read, I became aware interactions between Lièrén and Imara lacked copious sidelong glances, urgent heartbeats and salacious inner voices oogling each other's physical appearance. As I came to know them, I understood having those sorts of inner dialogues would be out of character. Lièrén comes from a big, respectful family and Imara is cautious to avoid involvement with someone she considers a 'transient' out of concern for Derrit. While I appreciated their inner maturity, I wouldn't have minded seeing them enjoy more emotionally close moments together.
I'm very fond of the supporting characters in this book, particularly the flamboyant, charming and instantly likeable Rayle. I don't think I'll ever tire of a well done character who fits the "social glue" role in a story. He's nosy, which he can't help since he's an empath, but he only uses it out of a desire to help others even if they're not ready for it.
*crosses fingers and wishes for more Rayle*
In addition to the great characters, I loved imagining the glass-like construction of the Spires and the layers of plot tied together throughout. I also liked learning about something one character has done through the eyes of another. It happened several times and I found it to be more suspenseful than if we saw the setup with one character and the discovery by another. Van Natta also build up the world of minders and the CPS in a way that grows on what I learned in Overload Flux while giving a complete and thorough world descriptions to someone starting the series with Minder Rising.
I definitely recommend this series.
June 20, 2015
Minder Rising is a great new story written by Carol Van Natta. The setting is in The Central Galactic Concordance, her interesting Science Fiction Romance series. Minder Rising is set in the same world as OverLoad Flux but it works very well as a stand-alone.
I loved the characters and how their inter-action moves the story along. Lieren Song does not start as that strong a character. He seem to be just drifiting along as he recovers from a near fatal accident. Things change as he becomes involved in the lives of Imara Sesay and her son Derrit. He quits drifting and becomes involved in a way he would have never expected.
Imara Sesay is a strong chracter from the beginning. Her son is her big concern and when she asked Lieren for help the lives of the three become very intertwined. There are also some very interesting side characters that also help drive the story.
Minder Rising is character driven. The characters and their actions make this to a story filled with danger and tension. As the story progresses secrets come out, betrayals are revealed and both Imara and Lieren start to question how they want to live their life. The story starts slowly and builds to a fast pace by the end. It kept me reading and unable to put it down.
There is romance but it is the slow burning kind. I loved how the story kept throwing Lieren and Imara together and the romance grew from there. Neither acting on the attraction adds to the tension.
Both Lieren and Imara have back story and there is a need for world building. Each are smoothly woven into the story as needed.
Book 3 is coming out in the fall of 2015. According to the author some of the characters from book 1 will reappear so if you have not read OverLoad Flux you might want to pick it up next. I do know tht you don’t want to miss reading all the books in the series.
I loved the characters and how their inter-action moves the story along. Lieren Song does not start as that strong a character. He seem to be just drifiting along as he recovers from a near fatal accident. Things change as he becomes involved in the lives of Imara Sesay and her son Derrit. He quits drifting and becomes involved in a way he would have never expected.
Imara Sesay is a strong chracter from the beginning. Her son is her big concern and when she asked Lieren for help the lives of the three become very intertwined. There are also some very interesting side characters that also help drive the story.
Minder Rising is character driven. The characters and their actions make this to a story filled with danger and tension. As the story progresses secrets come out, betrayals are revealed and both Imara and Lieren start to question how they want to live their life. The story starts slowly and builds to a fast pace by the end. It kept me reading and unable to put it down.
There is romance but it is the slow burning kind. I loved how the story kept throwing Lieren and Imara together and the romance grew from there. Neither acting on the attraction adds to the tension.
Both Lieren and Imara have back story and there is a need for world building. Each are smoothly woven into the story as needed.
Book 3 is coming out in the fall of 2015. According to the author some of the characters from book 1 will reappear so if you have not read OverLoad Flux you might want to pick it up next. I do know tht you don’t want to miss reading all the books in the series.
June 9, 2015
There are two standalone stories so far in The Central Galactic Concordance series, including Overload Flux and this second story, Minder Rising, and I’ve really enjoyed them both. In this one, an agent for the Citizen Protection Service, Lieren Song, narrowly escapes death in a crash, and as he’s recovering, he makes friends with the workers in the hotel tavern he’s been frequenting. He’s very attracted to Imara Sesay, the bartender, but since he’s only there for a short time, determines to resist the urge to start anything more than a friendly acquaintance. He’s happy to acquiesce to her request to teach her son Derrit how to control his minder talents, since the boy is already very talented and needs training. When others in his field unit begin to drop like flies, he suspects there’s more going on than just accidents, and he’s most likely next. Then the local CPS Testing Center entangles Imara and Derrit in an impossible situation, and Lieren knows he’ll need to get creative in order to help them and keep himself alive as well. I loved the diverse characters, the intrigue and action, and the lovely relationships that build all through the story. It takes a bit of time to build up to the action in this story, which is understandable since Lieren is recovering from very serious injuries. Imara is no slouch when it comes to taking care of herself, and her young son is pretty awesome too, which is refreshing. The scenes with the irrepressible Rayle, who is a server in the tavern, as well as a dancer, were always a lot of fun; what a great secondary character. I certainly look forward to reading more from this author, especially in this unique and interesting world.
September 8, 2015
I cannot finish this book. It is just not holding my interest at all. Carol's first book, Overload Flux, was amazing. I couldn't put it down. This book is just the opposite. I can't seem to get through more than a few pages at a time before I get bored and move on to something else. I have been working on this book for weeks,and I am only 47% through it. I hope it's just me. It is rare that I DNF a book, but I have two kindles with literally hundreds of books between them left to read. I don't have time to keep muddling through books that don't hold my attention.
The characters are well developed. I have no complaints along that front. My problem is that almost halfway through the book nothing has happened to keep me turning the pages. There is no feeling of "I have to know what happens on the next page." Maybe after I have read some of the hundreds of books I have on my Kindle I will return to it and see if I can finish it, but as of right now it is nowhere on my list of priorities.
The characters are well developed. I have no complaints along that front. My problem is that almost halfway through the book nothing has happened to keep me turning the pages. There is no feeling of "I have to know what happens on the next page." Maybe after I have read some of the hundreds of books I have on my Kindle I will return to it and see if I can finish it, but as of right now it is nowhere on my list of priorities.
July 8, 2015
Minder Rising is the second book in the Central Galactic Concordance trilogy.
In this book we meet Lièrén Sòng, twister extraordinaire(?), of the Citizen Protection Service (CPS), who has been sidelined by a glitter accident that killed his teammate. We also meet bartender Imara Sesay and her son, Derrit, and the server in the bar where Imara works, Rayle.
In this small world we discover how well a man can hide from himself and the worlds, and what can be done about it, while making friends and discovering things and trying to stay out of trouble.
I enjoyed this book. It's similar to the first, but different as well. You watch someone who drank the kool-aid discover what's happening behind the kool-aid stand.
The "romance" is more muted in this story, and while there are brief brushes with it, it's not a major part of the story until the end. It's more like a muted thread of music.
I very much enjoyed this book, and will be looking for the third.
In this book we meet Lièrén Sòng, twister extraordinaire(?), of the Citizen Protection Service (CPS), who has been sidelined by a glitter accident that killed his teammate. We also meet bartender Imara Sesay and her son, Derrit, and the server in the bar where Imara works, Rayle.
In this small world we discover how well a man can hide from himself and the worlds, and what can be done about it, while making friends and discovering things and trying to stay out of trouble.
I enjoyed this book. It's similar to the first, but different as well. You watch someone who drank the kool-aid discover what's happening behind the kool-aid stand.
The "romance" is more muted in this story, and while there are brief brushes with it, it's not a major part of the story until the end. It's more like a muted thread of music.
I very much enjoyed this book, and will be looking for the third.
July 19, 2016
Great "Spin-off" BUMMER??
I really liked this book and all the characters. Why BUMMER? Well, it means the author now has two sets of marvelous lines to follow and sometimes this means that perhaps one may suffer. I hope this isn't the case, but one is never sure if importance is the same for the author. I believe this author has the skill and talent to see all the lines successfully carried through and this whole environment could take on epic dimensions, akin to the Liaden universe, and become a vast multi-generational source for constant enjoyment. The author has, with the first two books, assured her standing as a superb writer and exemplary story teller. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves good writing, good story, great characters, and some romance, mystery, and intrigue. If you like Sharon Lee, Niall Teasdale, Chris Reher, etc, you will like these stories.
I really liked this book and all the characters. Why BUMMER? Well, it means the author now has two sets of marvelous lines to follow and sometimes this means that perhaps one may suffer. I hope this isn't the case, but one is never sure if importance is the same for the author. I believe this author has the skill and talent to see all the lines successfully carried through and this whole environment could take on epic dimensions, akin to the Liaden universe, and become a vast multi-generational source for constant enjoyment. The author has, with the first two books, assured her standing as a superb writer and exemplary story teller. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves good writing, good story, great characters, and some romance, mystery, and intrigue. If you like Sharon Lee, Niall Teasdale, Chris Reher, etc, you will like these stories.
June 11, 2016
If you love character driven romantic suspense, pick this one up! The female lead (Imara) and her good friend (Rayle) jump off the page. The male lead (Lièrén) takes a while to shine, but when he does, I think he’ll win your heart. Particularly since he finds a way to help the woman he’s fallen for _without_ taking over. Building on her strengths rather than flaunting his own. This is very refreshing to see.
This is a very sex-positive story but does not delve too far into ‘hot’ romance (which I appreciate – I’d rather focus on the romance, not the sex). I also appreciate the proper accenting of the pinyin used for Chinese names and dialog!
This is a very sex-positive story but does not delve too far into ‘hot’ romance (which I appreciate – I’d rather focus on the romance, not the sex). I also appreciate the proper accenting of the pinyin used for Chinese names and dialog!
May 29, 2015
A solid second book in this series even though the pace was felt slower than the first book. Still has lots of intrigue and twists and keep you engrossed in the storyline though the romance was a lot lighter and sweeter than the first novel. Interesting world building and I'm looking forward to the next instalment.
October 16, 2017
Although I gave this 2 stars, there are some very strong positives in this novel. They just didn't come together in a way that made what I consider to be an entertaining story. First, the world-building is great and feels detailed and well-developed. Also, the characters feel real and have detailed histories, right down to the relationships with multiple generations of their families. There's also an interesting mechanic in the various version of psychic powers of the minders. Also, the writing itself is technically well crafted and easy to read. Finally, if you're interested in such things, there is a strongly diverse cast of characters both racially and sexually.
So, what were the weaknesses?
First, a purely cosmetic issue is the cover. The 70's disco look gave me the impression of a fun, crazy sci-fi story, which this was not.
Second, I believe this novel is listed in the wrong genre. This story is categorized on Amazon as Science Fiction --> Galactic Empire / Galactic Engineering. This gives the impression of a space opera. However, I would argue both from the events of the first and last chapters, that this is primarily a romance story within a science fiction setting. This idea is further supported by the fact that so much of the story (well over half) is concerned specifically with the budding romance of the main characters.
Finally, ignoring the prologue, there are no plot developments of note until a minor one the 45% point in the story, and then again around the 60%, where the plot finally activates. Other than these points we are treated to well-developed characters chatting with friends and family in a detailed world with virtually no threats worthy of our attention. So, for a science fiction story, I would suggest that the pacing needs reworking, although for a romance it's probably fine. Personally, I only managed to get through the story because all other aspects were so well written and crafted.
So, what were the weaknesses?
First, a purely cosmetic issue is the cover. The 70's disco look gave me the impression of a fun, crazy sci-fi story, which this was not.
Second, I believe this novel is listed in the wrong genre. This story is categorized on Amazon as Science Fiction --> Galactic Empire / Galactic Engineering. This gives the impression of a space opera. However, I would argue both from the events of the first and last chapters, that this is primarily a romance story within a science fiction setting. This idea is further supported by the fact that so much of the story (well over half) is concerned specifically with the budding romance of the main characters.
Finally, ignoring the prologue, there are no plot developments of note until a minor one the 45% point in the story, and then again around the 60%, where the plot finally activates. Other than these points we are treated to well-developed characters chatting with friends and family in a detailed world with virtually no threats worthy of our attention. So, for a science fiction story, I would suggest that the pacing needs reworking, although for a romance it's probably fine. Personally, I only managed to get through the story because all other aspects were so well written and crafted.
October 27, 2018
I really wanted to love this book. The characters are so unique for romance genre, the plot and world building are exquisite, but somehow the whole thing isn't as enjoyable as I thought. I think my disappointment is mostly due to romance part. In the previous book, Carol Van Natta was a genius in subtle emotions and the result was elegant and engrossing. In this book romance part felt as an afterthought that could be omitted and still you'll have a piece of one good science fiction novel.
To be fair, I should say what I loved about this book:
1. Hero is Asian, smart and true to his emotions. There is this scene when he is building queries in data base and checking out inconsistent data entries and it was so much better than every pistol-firing, swords-clashing scene that I've ever read.
2. Heroine is smart, unapologetic, resourceful but also kind and caring. I do love to read about mature people.
3. World-building - just imagine a world where people can live in whatever configuration they find comfortable, you can drink, smoke and take whatever drugs you think are ok for you while sitting in a family-typ bar and people are living in a multicultural society respecting each other. Wouldn't it be nice? It's a great stage for a complex plot the author is spinning.
To be fair, I should say what I loved about this book:
1. Hero is Asian, smart and true to his emotions. There is this scene when he is building queries in data base and checking out inconsistent data entries and it was so much better than every pistol-firing, swords-clashing scene that I've ever read.
2. Heroine is smart, unapologetic, resourceful but also kind and caring. I do love to read about mature people.
3. World-building - just imagine a world where people can live in whatever configuration they find comfortable, you can drink, smoke and take whatever drugs you think are ok for you while sitting in a family-typ bar and people are living in a multicultural society respecting each other. Wouldn't it be nice? It's a great stage for a complex plot the author is spinning.
June 18, 2018
Hmmm. Very different to book 1 in the series. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed it; but it wasn't the gun-toting action adventure the first one was. I'm not sure how to class it to be honest - mystery romance? Slice of life for secret agents?!
Anyway: I think the biggest niggle with this book was that I struggled to understand all of the "minder" talents and skills. Even after finishing the book I'm still a bit baffled by "twisting" and "shielding". It didn't over bother me - I'm usually a fan of submersion into the world building rather than having a couple of characters "talk it through" - but it did occasionally leave me a bit bothered by the fact that the characters just managed to pull the necessary skill out of the bag to save the day
Overall, I enjoyed this. Once the mystery kicked in, it was really good fun. Not as much fun as book 1; but not enough to knock a star off. Have picked up book 3!
Anyway: I think the biggest niggle with this book was that I struggled to understand all of the "minder" talents and skills. Even after finishing the book I'm still a bit baffled by "twisting" and "shielding". It didn't over bother me - I'm usually a fan of submersion into the world building rather than having a couple of characters "talk it through" - but it did occasionally leave me a bit bothered by the fact that the characters just managed to pull the necessary skill out of the bag to save the day
Overall, I enjoyed this. Once the mystery kicked in, it was really good fun. Not as much fun as book 1; but not enough to knock a star off. Have picked up book 3!
September 7, 2020
What a fantastic read!
With great world-building (the city of Spires, with its high transparent platforms and pilars, made me think, in reverse, of the underground city from Asimov's Caves of Steel), a cleverly crafted plot, likable and relatable characters who will learn a lot about themselves (I especially enjoyed finding out about all the talents the characters possess, and how they use them while interacting with each other), I can only recommend this book.
Sure, the romance takes a backseat compared to the first book in the series, but it suits the story and both main characters's personalities. I couldn't imagine them going a lot faster or doing much more! It was just the right balance to make them believable.
So I'm off to read the next novel!
With great world-building (the city of Spires, with its high transparent platforms and pilars, made me think, in reverse, of the underground city from Asimov's Caves of Steel), a cleverly crafted plot, likable and relatable characters who will learn a lot about themselves (I especially enjoyed finding out about all the talents the characters possess, and how they use them while interacting with each other), I can only recommend this book.
Sure, the romance takes a backseat compared to the first book in the series, but it suits the story and both main characters's personalities. I couldn't imagine them going a lot faster or doing much more! It was just the right balance to make them believable.
So I'm off to read the next novel!
May 26, 2020
This was a sweet story about an unlikely hero whose work an an interrogator has kept him isolated and lonely, until he befriends a single mother and her twelve year old son. The pacing is on the slow side as the hero gradually unravels several instances of corruption and conspiracy, but I enjoyed it because that let the growing friendships take center stage. He isn't a typical action hero (he is more of a mild mannered IT guy), so he mostly tries to avoid danger and protect his friends rather than attacking head on. The romance is very mild, with no explicit scenes or sex - the story is about finding family more than it is about romance.
July 16, 2020
Being idealistic, naive and gullible is painful enough when dealing with scammers, but when dealing with co-workers and friends? I'm sure it hurt Lieren to discover that his so-called co-workers and friends made him their patsy. At least, his acquaintance with Imara and Derrit made him sit up and recognize his problems, but white knight that he is, Lieren could not just deal with his problems. He had to take on theirs as well. Lots of bureaucratic convolutions, political shenanigans, personal introspection and not-so-panicked action make this science fiction romantic suspense police procedural a read not to put down.
July 4, 2019
This book was entirely different and new characters as compared to book 1.
Again we have a long pining cheesy love thing that has to be "fixed" by the end of the book, but I guess that's just what this book is part of the genre of, which is why I usually avoid anything that actively promotes itself as romance. My bad.
The main character was too noble and naive to exist, especially as he was supposed to be a covert agent. The author gives us some plot stuff and explanations for why he is still that stupidly naive, but it's still ridiculous.
Again we have a long pining cheesy love thing that has to be "fixed" by the end of the book, but I guess that's just what this book is part of the genre of, which is why I usually avoid anything that actively promotes itself as romance. My bad.
The main character was too noble and naive to exist, especially as he was supposed to be a covert agent. The author gives us some plot stuff and explanations for why he is still that stupidly naive, but it's still ridiculous.
August 30, 2019
Although the plots of these books seem heavy with characters that are important only for a moment or two, and I still haven't figured out all of the "classifications" of minder talents, I still really enjoyed this book.
CPS Agent Lieren Song is recuperating in a hotel after a near fatal crash. He befriends bartender Imara Sesay, waiter Rael, and Imara's talented son, Derrit. As he recuperates, he discovers that his team in the CPS was up to a lot of wrong, and also uncovers issues in how talented children are "recruited" to join the CPS.
I enjoyed this story.
CPS Agent Lieren Song is recuperating in a hotel after a near fatal crash. He befriends bartender Imara Sesay, waiter Rael, and Imara's talented son, Derrit. As he recuperates, he discovers that his team in the CPS was up to a lot of wrong, and also uncovers issues in how talented children are "recruited" to join the CPS.
I enjoyed this story.
January 22, 2024
Wahoo! I finally finished a book again. I was happy this was my foray back into reading. Van Natta comes up with fully realized characters and I like how their skills complimented each other, making the story that much more believable. It has been months since I read the first one and so getting back up to speed on what kind of skills people in this world have and the politics was a little harder to get into but it was manageable. Hopefully the library gets the 3rd book so I can continue the series :)
June 7, 2017
Slow to start
This book starts slow and pretty much stays that way until a chapter or two at the end. Then it feels rushed. The couple's connection comes late and just doesn't seem to click. Hate to say, but the first book was much better. Will try the next in the series, but if not better I won't stay with it.
This book starts slow and pretty much stays that way until a chapter or two at the end. Then it feels rushed. The couple's connection comes late and just doesn't seem to click. Hate to say, but the first book was much better. Will try the next in the series, but if not better I won't stay with it.
May 23, 2018
Look if you haven't figured out I'm a sucker for single parents, skulduggery, conspiracy, chosen family, and bio or chosen family that will go to bat for their loved ones then I don't know what to tell you. I'm so happy with the story the periodic used of a rather out-of-date adjective didn't even faze me.
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