So, maybe I live under a rock, but I had no clue that "M.K.F. Fisher" was a real person until 3/4 of my way in, which probably contributed towards some of my sour criticism of the text. I was pretty annoyed that Warlick seemed to "create" a character who wrote better than Warlick and readers never got to read those texts in the book. Now that I know she was a real person, I suppose I can go read her works to my heart's content, but this book was so dull that it really doesn't encourage me to do so. The plight of a woman writer who followed her "hunger" for life instead of being bound by society's restraints interested me, but, frankly, all she does is eat some exotic foods and fall in love with someone else. Obviously, doing these activities was far more sensational for her time period, but Warlick did not write in a way that effectively conveyed the scandal. The way that Gigi left her husband was far more "risky," but I was yet again disappointed to learn that all she did was quit acting and marry someone near her own age. Basically, real people are often extremely boring and should not have books written by them, or at least not by Warlick.
Don't get me wrong, I am still a loyal fan to Philippa Gregory and some historical fiction no matter how bombastic or repetitive she becomes. Yes, the Tudors (and all of their counterparts) were real people, but this was a time period when people's personal lives were not well-documented, so supposition of emotions is more accepted. Unfortunately for Warlick, the only emotion she was able to give any of her "characters" was depression. Everyone was depressed, from Gigi the ingenue to Tim's aging mother to Al and his prostitute (more on that scene later). Even Mary Frances, the only person who seems to get anything she really wants in the text, is always worrying about her life. When she felt no remorse for Tim and Gigi divorcing, I laughingly applauded her brazenness, only to be (once again) disappointed that she then leads such a bland existence, at least according to Warlick: "Oh, Tim. We ought to find me a conscience. There must be one of those around here somewhere" (32). I'd also love to know how much actual research Warlick did for this book considering everything, including the titles for the different periods of Mary Frances's life, can be directly compared almost verbatim to the Wikipedia page!
The transitions were terrible in this book to the point where I found myself wondering constantly what was going on. I don't know if Warlick suffers from an inability to structure sentences well or if she was unsuccessfully trying to present a hazy tone over the situations, but it was awful. Some reviewers on here (to my horror) are applauding her prose, to which I encourage them to ask me for some superior recommendations. Sure, Warlick describes food in detail, but so does a decent menu! The only interesting part that I wanted more on was Al with the prostitute he apparently had beaten.
Also, had this been a novel, I would have been thoroughly disappointed that Tim, Al, and Mary Francis did not live like brother husbands as he seemed to suggest!