It is important to note that the majority of the themes explored in this book deal with sensitive subject matters. My review, therefore, touches on these topics as well. Many people might find the subject matters of the book as well as those detailed in my review overwhelming. I would suggest you steer clear of both if this is the case. Please note that from this point forward I will be writing about matters which contain reflections on violence, psychological distress, the suggestion of sexually performed acts by a minor, intimate relationship between an authority figure & a minor, dated & derogatory terminology, suicidal ideations, self-harm of a minor, & others.
In the same way that burnt toast takes away from the desire & hopes held in the pallet of the consumer so too did this book strip me of the ability to regard it with any level of seriousness. The impossibility that this book was anything other than satire leads me to feel a level of comedic humour otherwise unachievable by a story that is brimmed with sensitive & morose subject matters.
On Sequoia Crescent there lives a family that appears as any Play-Doh family might; a wife, a husband, a daughter, & a large expensive home wrought with the pebble-dense thoughts of the inhabitants. The story that follows the introduction to these characters is narrated by the matriarch, Claire, as she seeks to leverage some sympathy from her demise which she brought on to herself by remaining the epitome of pretentious, imbecilic, & vapid.
In the face of this story, one might ask themselves what the appealing feature of such a dementedly irritating plot might be & I should like to highlight that I came across this book while looking to read stories written by Canadian authors. I have a great appreciation for the bizarre, especially in literature, & therefore felt that this book would be right up my alley. When Claire begins to hear a hum she goes insane, in the literal medical meaning of the word. I was intrigued by the topic & admit to having high hopes for this book.
I hesitate to be outwardly snarky in this review because I acknowledge that there is a chance that I am not understanding the book or what the author sought to achieve by writing this story. I pride myself in always approaching a review with the class that is due when critiquing a piece of literature; being someone who revels in the practice of reading, the book world at large, & holds the authors that I have loved in very high esteem, I should not want to come across as ignorant in my sarcasm of any book, even one such as this. Yet, while reading this book I found myself laughing outwardly, as though what was being written were truly the most hilarious thing I had ever read. I do not think the author intended for the discussions surrounding The Hum (as they call it) to be taken lightly & this leads me to question the actual intention of the writer.
When a character drones endlessly about topics that have been deemed politically correct—the acceptance of gender, sexual attraction, fashion choices, cultural variations, etc.—in such a way as to leave me feeling irritated, I am not led to believe that these subject matters were broached with the intention of shedding light on the positive performance adopted by the character. For example, Claire is a woman who reads as morbidly stupid. Her inner monologues express her high esteem of herself & that her passion for literature is what allowed the students that she teaches to read books that were not simply written by White men going on about the same subjects as they always write about. What does this mean? How are we to interpret this? I assume that what Claire might have meant was that she was well-read & sought to include literature within the curriculum that broaden the horizons of every student. Yet, we never see her do that. Instead, she employed a speech pattern that saw her diminishing the efforts of a specific group in the hopes of appearing more accepting & forward-thinking.
One could dismiss William Wordsworth for being, physically, who he was or one could accept that the man had an exceedingly superb talent for words while simultaneously highlighting any other poet who showcased a talent like no other. What I am saying is that Claire’s character was written as outwardly shallow. It is no secret that many school systems have put forth a specific set of books within their curriculums while leaving many pondering their worth. I, for one, cannot call to mind any of the plot from Arthur Miller’s “The Crucible” (1953) yet it was taught to me by a wonderful teacher—the book did nothing for me. There have been ample books that I have come across in my later years that have moved me beyond recognition & which also contain stunning reflections of society, that I did not learn about in school. All this to say, one needs to sharpen one’s argument if one is seeking to put oneself forth as the pillar for all literary change while simultaneously acknowledging that a single teacher does not necessarily have the power to alter a school-district-imposed curriculum.
This is but one example of Claire’s character seeking to put herself apart from the others—whomsoever these ‘others’ might be. Her approach does not come across as authentic, kind, or intelligent. One can acknowledge that change needs take place while also acknowledging that much of the general population has been amplifying such change without shouting it from the rooftops, as Claire does in her inner monologues. Other examples of this behaviour are seen when Claire interacts with her daughter or presents reflections on her relationship with her daughter. There seems to be no room for anyone else to have any experiences that may reach the heights of Claire’s experiences with regard to Ashley. No one loves their child as much as Claire, no one will go to batt for their child as Claire would, & no one is as malleable as Claire, point-blank.
Does this leave room for the reader to adopt sympathy toward Claire? The introductory section of the book sees Claire reflect on the turn of events that led her to be where she is now; the loss of the confidence of those she loves & the reputation she upheld in her community. Yet, she grants the reader no opportunity to believe her. Claire spends every moment of her written recollections telling the reader that she, essentially, hated her life. She didn’t intend to get pregnant but, she is the best mother in the world. She didn’t want to have a house, but her house is the grandest & most stunning in all the wealthy suburban neighbourhoods. She didn’t want to be a teacher, but she is the smartest & most forward-thinking teacher in every school district.
How am I meant to feel any level of sympathy for a character whom I know is going to be experiencing physical distinctions from the majority of the populace, so much so that her life is critically altered to no return? There is no instance in this book where I felt that any of what happened was something I should care about. The same can be said for every other character save Paul, Claire’s husband. The middle section of the book saw many people from the community gathering together in the hopes of taking part in a circle-jerk in which their own hypotheses of The Hum were approved & congratulated. Though the author writes at length about the discussions that these characters had, nothing is actually said. Every character that sits in Howard & Jo’s home could be speaking to themselves alone; conversations are shared words, ideas & dialogue, these characters do not partake in that.
What was the purpose of having so many people in such a short book be so one-dimensional? Not a single character proved to be a well-rounded individual, such as one the reader might recognize from their own lives. To ensure that a story is believable one must have at least a single character that distinguishes themselves from the gloom of the backdrop. Did I care when Tom was telling Claire to stop talking about her personal experiences so that they could attempt to pinpoint where The Hum was originating? No. Did I care when Claire yelled at Tom? No. I did care to hear about Howard’s theory & I did care for there to be discussions that could advance the plot yet, neither of these was fully granted the opportunity to bloom.
Was the intention to present a satirical story in which the main character showcases every demeaning characteristic of a person that resides comfortably on a planet unbeknownst to us all? If this book had put forth the main character with some gumption, some depth to her person & perhaps a personality that did not make me feel eager to see her downfall, there might have been something going for this story. Where things stand, the author held a plot that was intriguing yet was unable to fulfill the attempt at writing a story to coincide with a horror in a way that saw it succeed.
I remain filled to the brim with questions yet, I care not for answers. Claire sees her life return to normal without much consequence. People died but she simply walks home to the husband she treats like rotting trash so that he can tend to her as he has always done. The majority of the characters in this book are spoiled beyond repair & this renders the book banal. Claire’s experience being the outlier in her home where she treats the other two (2) people living there like accessories to her rise to fame, is ridiculous.
Why should I care about developing sentiments of sorrow for a person who spends their time telling me that she doesn’t really like her husband as a person & whom I see write about how they performed aggression against their spouse when they did not hear the same hum as she did? What is redeeming about this person? This leads me to my initial points; perhaps I have not understood something innate, something very important within the plot & the presentation of this book. Perhaps, everything I expressed was meant to come across this way.
Regardless, I did not enjoy this book. The characters were superfluous, privileged puddles of mud, deigned in a plot that upheld the grandiose ideologies embedded in the intricately subpar writing style of a person whose intentions I am unable to grasp.