While this novel was certainly an improvement from The Stolen Throne, many of the elements I found distasteful and obnoxious in the first book recur in Gaider's second DA novel. It amazes me how often Gaider repeats himself, frequently word for word, throughout the novel; his descriptions and evaluations are redundant, as if he and his editor were aiming for most words printed rather than most effective language. On one hand, the characters themselves were much more interesting, although they once again lack depth and I found most of their motives either unbelievable or conflicting to their own characterization. I believe I got farther along in this novel before growing completely bored (I had about 90 pages left when boredom settled in), but once again nothing much happened, at least not in a coherent way, in terms of plot or character development. In fact, it didn't seem like much happened even in regard to setting; certainly we're given more fight scenes and new enemies/threats for our characters to face, but it all feels rather hollow and shallow upon completion of the novel.
A few of my biggest frustrations:
Gaider works so hard to make it clear that the Grey Wardens don't like their Commander, and yet there's no evidence to explain why they choose to follow her anyway. Their motivations for following her commands and putting up with her icy personality seem only to go as far as "because she's the Commander so she gets to decide." Do they respect her, and why? It's clear to the reader that her Warden's find her distasteful, specifically for treating people like objects, tools be used and discarded, not as actual lives worth valuing. So, why do they follow her? What has she done despite her decisions to earn their trust, their loyalty? Outside of hefting a two-handed sword well, I didn't get a clear answer.
In addition, I found the moment in the novel when Maric and the Wardens get trapped in the Fade by a(it sounded like a pride) demon particularly tedious and lackluster. Firstly, it couldn't get any less interesting to read the same plot six times in a row with only character names and scenery changes. I think Gaider was hoping if the characters all witnessed the loss of each others' loved ones, maybe it would be enough to band them together and deepen our love for them as readers? Well, it failed. Fiona's nightmare had the most potential for engrossing the reader, but it was so predictable and simultaneously so shallow, I found myself caring for the characters less than I had before opening the book's cover. Secondly, this moment in the novel took so long and added absolutely nothing to the overall novel; it didn't contribute to or re-enforce characterization in a clever way (turned out to be quite shallow, obvious and at best, redundant), it didn't contribute to the setting of the novel (the experience was completely out of context and I imagine anyone new to the world of Thedas would have a "WTF, why" moment), nor did it contribute to the plot (it deviated from it in the most horribly way). Thirdly, if you've played Origins, this entire moment in the Fade exactly mirrors your character's own journey, only in far less interesting detail- wake up in the Fade, realize you're dreaming and that you don't like your dream enough to keep it, wander around other dreams to rescue your companions, fight the (sloth in the game, pride in the book) demon in order to escape.
I'll continue to read the rest of the Dragon Age novels not because I think they're well written or make any unique contributions to the fantasy genre, but because I enjoy the game so much and I'll take any hints I can find about how the lore in the game developed and where it may go in future games. Having read this book, I can say the only potentially shocking "secret truth" revealed was so poorly executed and vague, I'm not sure if it is actually true: Fiona the Grey Warden, First Enchanter of Montsimmarid, may or may not be Allistar's mother.
Don't bother reading this book, whether you like DA or not, and certainly if you enjoy fantasy and action novels - go read The Riddlemaster of Hed instead. Thank goodness I borrowed this novel.