maybe 2 stars, if i was kinder... alas, i am not... prepare for a bit of a rant, and i don't care if you agree, or like it, or disagree, or despise me for it, or anything (but if you want to discuss the whys and wherefores send me an email)... i HATE it when authors can't do a book properly, and REALLY HATE it when an author chooses to do two books because they can't do the first one properly... there is a lot going on in SLJ world of The Long Lives (i will skip the Hungarian because i an, and because i thought it was overused and smacked of "i know something you don't"), so one could argue for two books... go ahead... the first book was great, not horror, more thriller (and not in the Michael Jackson sense), and should have been the end BECAUSE SLJ could have just made ONE book, albeit longer, possibly 700 or so pages though likely about 500 or so, and done the concept properly... instead he writes a second book that doesn't actually require reading the first but merely a list of terms and cast of characters since lots of book 2 was in book one... fluff... that could be book 2's title... an addendum, another title... taking advantage of my fan base, possibly... so much to love about this, but so much to hate about its delivery... nowhere near enough ABOUT The Long Lives, just a jumble of things that require some sort of Excel spreadsheet (or Leah's OCD; um, where the hell does THAT come in and matter?!?!?) to collect and collate and understand... a mess... too many POVs (PsOV??), and why so many consecutive chapter headings that STAYED IN THE SAME PLACE??? aarrrggggghhhhh... anyone who has read both books could do some reorganizing and probably improve this superbly... i just didn't give a shite about Leah, and how in the absolute fuckallwhatthefuck does the egg thing just get dropped in?!?!? maybe that's my central gripe (no eye-rolling please) there is just too much randomness, so many add-ins and other things and unbelievable happenings (yep, i can accept The Long Lives/Hungarian VampireMonsters, but reanimating characters to tug at readers heart-strings is just stupid and trite and lacks any tiny iota of necessary... if you can viciously murder and dismember and slashify someone, then be OK with the gutwrenching emotional/psychological human element that results... un-killing is stupid, trying to convince your reader "they didn't ACTUALLY die 'cuz you saw how i tricked you so many times about who was who and when that who was who when they were actually not who you thought they were when you thought they were who you wanted them to be" is insulting and sophomoric (notice how i managed to sneak in 'sophomoric' into the review of the second book?!?!? hahahahaha! anyway... just too long of a review, huh? color me BADD, um, wait, unhappy, yeah, color me unhappy...