3 generous and hesitant stars...
“Damn it, Eve, don’t ask me to choose between you and my garden!” “Why not?” she shouted back, uncaring that the rest of the house might hear their argument. Her heart was a bloody mess on the carpet between their feet now. “I have a right, don’t I, to mean more than a garden? To be the first in someone’s eyes—in your eyes?” Harte's Folly is Asa Makepeace's heart and soul. The magnificent garden was burned down a year ago. But with the help of an investor, The Duke of Montgomery, it is slowly being rebuild. There are no problems, except the Duke's disapproving sister, Eve Dinwoody. Managing the purse strings of Harte's folly, Eve finds herself constantly butting heads with the infuriating pleasure garden owner who does not take kindly to being managed. Bawdy Asa Makepeace is everything Eve does not want and need to stay away from... But he is also the only man who makes her feel things she thought she would not feel in her lifetime.
Sweetest Scoundrel is another book from Elizabeth Hoyte's Maiden lane series. This book tells the story of Eve Dinwoody and Asa Makepeace. This is the third book I've read from the series and I don't think I would read any more from it.
Meet Eve Dinwoody, a Duke's bastard but with the upbringing of a legitimate aristocrat. She is her brother's man of business. She liked her quiet existence. Suffering from trauma, she has long accepted that she was not "normal". She is prim and proper, everything a Duke's daughter and sister ought to be. She is considered plain looking and she's nothing really special.
Meet Asa Makepeace, a man disowned by his father. Ever since being disowned, Harte's folly had been his whole life. It was the only thing important to him. And he will do everything to rebuild it and make sure it's even a bigger success the second time around. He's not the typical hero in historical romances who are either aristocrats or very rich self made men. He's an average guy. Not the most handsome. Not very rich either. All he has is Harte's folly. It's quite rare actually. I'm not very sure I like it. He's passionate about his pleasure garden, I'll give him that. He's quite the dirty talker too, in and outside of bed.
Eve and Asa did not get along immediately. They are both stubborn. But the bargain they made brings them closer. Eve insisted that she handles his books...and demanded that Asa models for her paintings, in exchange, she won't cut his credit off. There were many intimate scenes. Slowly, Asa discovers Eve's story and why she was the way she was. Along the story there are sabotages, a villain, indenial of feelings and finally some happily ever after.
The heroine was okay. She wasn't my favorite type of heroine. I feel like the way her trauma was handled was not written very well. It felt very sudden and the pacing was weird. She was sensible and proper. And sadly, she bored me. Her trauma of violence is relatable, it is the aspect of her that I connected with. But other than that, she's not outstanding and memorable. She was so starched at first, and there are times when I like starched characters but they must be written well. But it was so cute when she started trusting the hero and warming up to him. Although she was not a favorite of mine, she deserved her happily ever after.
As for the hero, I liked him well enough. He was not a tortured hero that we so often see in romantic novels. He's passionate about his pleasure garden, it's his mistress. He's not described as someone handsome and he's not rich either. If we're being practical, he's not such an ideal man. But I liked him because, despite his harsh and violent ways, he was very gentle with the heroine and had so much patience with her. The way he takes care of her along the story is just very sweet.
As for the book, there are the main characters getting to know each other, opening up and helping one another. Aside from that, there was sabotage which made me so frustrated. And of course, a classic Elizabeth Hoyt novel must have a villainous character. The villain from the very start is predictable so there isn't an element of surprise and the way they're dealt with doesn't get dragged on. And of course, the sudden realization of love. This time, not during a life and death situation but because of the heroine wanting to leave the continent. Noticing a pattern in Elizabeth Hoyt's books and I am not very sure that I'm a big fan of it.
It feels like there was so much going on in the book yet there was nothing exciting. It felt so all over the place — that it was so hard to think of a synopsis for it. The problem with Elizabeth Hoyt books is that I do not connect very much with her characters. All the books I've read from her so far have only been average, at least for me. She writes well, the words flow well and I keep turning the pages, yet there is something lacking. I do not feel giddy, I do not feel sad and I do not feel much anything over her books. I was expecting this to be more angsty and maybe that's the problem. I keep on expecting Elizabeth Hoyte to deliver something that I will truly like and I end up disappointed each time.
The star of this book was the hero. He was such a delight to read about. He wasn't perfect, in fact, he was kind of an a-hole. But he was endearing in his own way. Another problem I have with Elizabeth Hoyt books is that her intimate scenes happen so unexpectedly. Asa was a dirty talker and t'was nice. But I felt like there was so much steamy scenes in here that I started reading fast just to get it over with. Her books feel so lust-driven rather than love-driven. Because of that,the love realizations and declarations are baffling. I think Hoyt needs to give her characters more time to develop and have interactions that aren't based on lustful thoughts and doings for the love declarations to be plausible.
Overall, this was just an okay book. Another three stars book. I did not really feel anything but I have to give it credit for keeping me entertained for the night. The characters were nice enough for me to root for their HEA but if they did not get their happy ending, I wouldn't weep over it. That's how her books feel to me. I needed to connect better with her characters and the world and I just don't which is sad. Perhaps, when I read Hoyte again in the future, it'll be a better experience.
Some quotes:
“You’ll be haunting my tomorrows evermore.”
“Stubborn, cynical, violent, and sometimes mean. And yet a man who had tenderly shown her how to love. No one had ever cared so much for her.”
“What I want and what I can have are two entirely different things. Most men learn that somewhere along the way.”
“She was glad—so glad—that he’d come here—that he’d come to her. No man had ever sought her out before, pursued her—so carefully—yet so persistently. It was lovely to be wanted.”
“I like you; I might even, given the chance, love you.” She was watching him, so she saw the flicker of alarm in his green eyes. She shook her head. “But I won’t let myself, since that’s not what you want. But you, Asa, you deserve more than a business in your life.”