There are some spoilers in this review/rant.
Wow, I didn't know I was getting myself into a book that was 90% errands!
I wouldn't call this a horror. Nothing was remotely scary. Cozy mystery? That's more accurate, but also doesn't seem to quite fit. Probably because it didn't feel like a mystery either. This feels and reads like a YA, honestly.
This story was pretty boring and nothing was interesting. It was short but it was sort of a slog to read, because hardly anything was going on.
How old are the MCs? We're never told. They talk and act like teenagers, but Mason was in medical school for 4 years or almost 4 years until he dropped out.
Kiera annoys me. She decides to lie to these people, instead of telling the simple truth, like how a cut happened on her arm or shoulder, Mason asks her and she tries to say she accidentally stabbed herself... JUST TELL HIM YOU WERE ATTACKED BY GAVIN, GIRL. What is there for you to not tell the truth? Nothing! It'd be better for EVERYONE if it came out that Gavin was a horrible person going around attacking people with a KNIFE.
Kiera did not seem to be scared of any of the ghosts. If I was her and I saw a ghost outside my window, I would be freaking out and wanting to leave the area immediately.
And for some reason, she found it more important to help the ghosts and uncover the mysteries on why they're lingering, instead of finding out about herself. Make it make sense.
I did not really like any of the characters, except for maybe Adage, the pastor guy. Everyone felt over the top and it annoyed me. The MCs? Overly friendly/nice and got along with each other IMMEDIATELY. Sure Mason and Zoe already knew each other, but they had just met Keira and instantly liked her... They were all pouty about the idea of Keira leaving town, and Keira was also all pouty and mopey. THEY BARELY KNEW EACH OTHER. Kiera was in town for what? Maybe a week? Why are they all attached to each other like that? Kiera has amnesia but attached herself to two people and a cat that she had just met... ugh... and why was everyone giving Kiera stuff for free?! Food from the pastor makes sense, but from Zoe? Who was just grabbing them off the shelf of the grocery store to give to her for free? Nah...
I'm surprised Zoe wasn't fired from the store from all of her shenanigans.
Now onto Gavin. He's a stupid character and is written horribly. Gavin is also over the top with his evilness and his rich-kid bully attitude. I'm pretty sure he's an adult, same thing with the MCs, even though he's written to act like a 12 year old with his childish insults. He's literally a walking stereotype of an anime bully, and if you watched anime, then you'd know what I'm talking about.
Oh! A thing to add to the "anime" stereotype is that Kiera had suddenly unlocked her amazing fighting skills and took down the bully like she's an undercover agent! Wow! Amazing! Not!
It's just all extreme, rushed and felt quite unbelievable, but who knows? That's just my opinion.
Also, how many times does Darcy Coates have to mention Mason's "Piercing green eyes." or whatever, everytime he shows up. We don't have to hear about his eyes or chocolate brown hair all the time. He also feels like a stalker most of the book, by the way.
This crap was inconsistent. Kiera lost her memories, so she doesn't know what she likes or dislikes. Apparently she doesn't remember what chocolate tastes like, and she doesn't know whether she likes coffee or not, but then there seemed to be times where she KNEW whether she liked something or not. I don't know the extents of amnesia, but it just seemed like it was forgotten at times throughout the book.
I don't know if this is set in the USA or Australia. I know Darcy Coates is Australian, but some stuff Zoe says, makes it seem like it's the USA.
Darcy Coates goes back and forth between using American and Australian slang/words. Doesn't help set the location.
So the MCs trespassed onto the Crispins property, or whatever the surname is. They were caught by Dane, the only one living there by this point, and they scatter after Kiera yells run after she sees Dane raise a long and shiny hunk of metal, which turns out to be a gun. Anyways, Kiera leads Dane in the opposite direction away from Mason and Zoe and Dane follows, shooting at her! He's literally trying to murder her. I'm 99% sure you can't chase a trespasser to shoot them, and then proceed to claim "self-defense." They were no longer on the freaking property when he continued to shoot at her. I rolled my eyes so hard during this scene.
And then later, for some reason Dane called the freaking DOCTOR, about someone sneaking onto his property and not the freaking CONSTABLE. You would call the cops! Not your local general practioner! Sure sure, they're probably in some weird kahoots with each other, but that doesn't change the fact that you would call the cops for a trespasser. Dane probably knew it was illegal to chase after Kiera and continue shooting at her.
I don't know why but it's such a pet peeve of mine when characters start laughing over some stupid unfunny thing that a character said, and it happened a few times in this book.
I think I was slightly catfished with the synopsis. I came into this book expecting something completely different. But that's my fault, I guess.
Anyhow, there is a small positive to this novel, and it's that the cover is really nice! But other than that, there's really not much to praise.
Now, I'm not done with Darcy Coates. I have some more books of hers that I will eventually read. I just don't think I will continue this series. Book #1 definitely didn't sell me on it.