Oh beautiful, he said, for spacious skies, for amber waves of grain, for purple mountain majesties, and penury and pain.
Many ambitious writers have chased the elusive concept of writing the Great American Novel [GAT], a challenge launched in 1868 in a critical essay on literature. For my money, Wallace Stegner comes real close to do exactly this in his early novel, a semi-autobiographical study of where he comes from and who he is.
The Mason family journey westward in the early 20th century is presented as emblematic for second or third generation immigrants who leave their established farms on the East Coast in search of liberty and riches in the still undeveloped West. It seems appropriate that the GAT should deal with that other over-used concept: the rags to riches American Dream, as seen here through the eyes of a child in the lives of his parents, Elsa and Bo Mason.
He was born with the itch in his bones, Elsa knew. He was always telling stories of men who had gone over the hills to some new place and found the land of Canaan, made their pile, got to be big men in the communities they fathered. But the Canaans toward which Bo’s feet had turned had not lived up to their promise. People had been before him. The cream, he said, was gone. He should have lived a hundred years earlier.
Bo Mason is convinced that the Big Rock Candy Mountain is real and waiting for him. He drags his family from North Dakota to Saskatchewan, from Seattle to Los Angeles, then from Montana to Salt Lake City in search of his get rich quick pipe dream. Something always seems to go wrong with Bo Mason’s projects, mostly because his schemes fall outside the letter of the law when he is running an illegal drinking place in a dry state or smuggling hard liquor during the Prohibition era. If not chased by the law, Bo appears cursed by the Gods, like in an ancient Greek tragedy: his crop fails from severe draught, his family falls ill in the 1918 flu epidemic, his older son Chester follows in his footsteps from one disastrous project to the next, his younger son Bruce is a wimp who hates him, his wife Elsa is broken hearted over their nomadic lifestyle.
There was somewhere, if you knew where to find it, some place where money could be made like drawing water from a well, some Big Rock Candy Mountain where life was effortless and rich and unrestricted and full of adventure and action, where something could be had for nothing.
Bo Mason is not afraid of hard work, forced into cutting timber or homestead farming in order to provide for his wife and children, whom he loves dearly. Sooner or later though, Bo gets tired of slow and steady and hatches another plan to make a lot of money with little effort, abandons them for another shot at that Candy Mountain.
In counterpoint to Harry [Bo] Mason’s restlessness is his wife’s dream of a real home. Elsa herself went westward from her family farm in search of a better life, but her dreams are those of a homemaker, of a white picket fence and children playing in the yard while she cooks and cleans a small, cosy cottage. She doesn’t ask Bo for a mink coat or fancy jewelry, just for a feeling of security and trust.
You never like what you’ve got, she was thinking. [...]
You had to stay in a place to make it a home. A home had to be lived in every day, every month, every year for a long time, till it was worn like an old shoe and fitted the comfortable curvatures of your life.
Elsa is the true anchor of the Mason family, something Bo seems to take for granted and her children need to learn to appreciate under the onslaught of their father’s dominating presence. She has her doubts and her moments of rebellion, but she chooses to remain true to her heart that always quickens at the sight of her husband, and true to her Scandinavian family roots of steadfastness, endurance and moderation.
She didn’t want much. Yet it seemed to her sometimes as if life had conspired to keep from her exactly that one thing that she desired, and as if her husband and her children, who were the single indispensable part of her day-dreams, should be the ones to destroy what she had been working for.
You knew of no one responsible, unless whoever or whatever ran the world was really what it seemed sometimes, a mean, vindictive force against which you beat yourself to rags, so that sometimes you felt like a drowning sailor trying to climb into a lifeboat and having your fingers hammered off the gunwale time after time, until there was nothing to do except go down or make up your mind to stay afloat somehow, any way you could.
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If a man could understand himself and his own family, Bruce thought, he’d have a good start toward understanding everything he’d ever need to know.
The novel is episodic, with each section detailing a specific period in this family saga. After the early chapters of Elsa and Bo courtship and their first failed attempts to settle down in one place, the story is picked up by their younger son Bruce, a sensitive and introspective boy who looks upon the world with eyes filled with wonder.
... standing in the yard above his one clean footprint, feeling his own verticality in all that spread of horizontal land, he sensed that as the prairie shrank he grew. He was immense. A little jump would crack his head on the sky, a stride would take him to any horizon.
As Bruce grows up and excels at school, going back to the East Coast for law studies [a reaction to his father's illicit pursuits?], he becomes more and more interested in the questions about his origins and his relationship with his parents. His hatred of Bo Mason is as strong as his admiration of his mother. It would take years for his analytical mind to be able to overcome his primary emotions – to see his parents as living people, with their qualities and faults, dreams and disappointments, ups and downs.
People, he had said, were always being looked at as points, and they ought to be looked at as lines. There weren’t any points, it was false to assume that a person ever was anything. He was always becoming something, always changing, always continuous and moving, like the wiggly line on a machine used to measure earthquake shocks. He was always what he was in the beginning, but never quite exactly what he was; he moved along lines dictated by his heritage and environment, but he was subject to every sort of variation within the narrow limits of his capabilities.
I was captivated by the richness of detail and the lived-in, authentic vibe of the setting, not surprisingly given the autobiographical origin of the story. The novel has the authority of the eye-witness about it, coupled with the lyrical turn of phrase that will become emblematic for Wallace Stegner’s later novels.
It’s a long story, extremely detailed, but I never felt the need to put it down and chase something lighter. Part of the attraction is the eventful and perilous journey of Bo Mason from one crazy project to the next. Part of it is my enthusiasm for the prose of Stegner.
The final chapters turn from history to analysis, as the Mason family seems to go from one tragedy to the next one in quick succession. They should have been slower going, but the good work put in the previous pages still kept me glued to the book as I followed Bruce reasoning out his feelings and trying to put his family saga in the larger context of a nation in search of its identity and its heart.
We’re all slaves to something, just like Babbitt.
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What is your husband a slave to, Mrs. Mason? To himself, Mrs. Webb, to himself. To his notion that he has to make a pile, be a big shot, have a hundred thousand dollars in negotiable securities in his safety deposit box, drive a Cadillac car, have seven pairs of shoes with three-dollar trees for each pair, buy three expensive Panamas during a summer and wear a diamond worth fifteen hundred dollars in his tie.
The grim overview of the toxicity of the American Dream is tempered by the image of Bo Mason as the original pioneer, the driving force of progress into pristine land, waiting to be developed. [If you can ignore, like the author seems to gloss over the plight of the Native Americans, the slavery, the destruction of the environment. Only the ruthlessness and the lawlessness of the conquering of the West is kept here]
He was a man who never knew himself, who was never satisfied, who was born disliking the present and believing in the future. He was not, by any orthodox standard, a good husband or a good father. [...]
Yet this Harry Mason, violent and brutal and unthinking, this law-breaker and blasphemer, kept for over a quarter century the love of as good a woman as ever walked, my mother ...
This final portrait of his father is much longer and deserves to be quoted in full, but the constraints of an internet review and the need to avoid spoilers made me give here only the paragraph headers. It is also important to me, because it underlines the need to consider Bo Mason in relation to his wife, and not as a stand-alone force.
“Love is a thing that works both ways,” Elsa said quietly. “We have to give other people a chance to love us before we find them lovable, sometimes.”
Elsa had more than her fair share of regrets and tragedies in her life, including domestic violence, penury and abandonment. Bo Mason is instinctively attracted to her, but seems unable to see where her strength comes from. For me, Elsa is the true rock candy her husband should have been chasing. He probably knew this, but he was a slave, as she eventually comes to understand, of his ambitions.
How did a tree sink roots when it was being dragged behind a tractor? Or was an American expected to be like a banyan tree or a mangrove, sticking roots down everywhere, dropping off rooting appendages with lavish fecundity? Could you be an American, or were you obliged to be a Yankee, a hill-billy, a Chicagoan, a Californian? Or all of them in succession?
This search for the true roots of a nation divided by bigotry, pipe-dreams and violence should be even more relevant in this year 2024 than it was in the post-war, post-Depression year of 1943 when it was first published.
The introspective journey of Bruce Mason, his search for roots and meaning, his efforts of reconciling the amoral and violent Bo with the steadfast and level-headed Elsa, could mark a way out of the divisiveness that seems hell bent in destroying the very fabric of the nation.
Some day you’ll learn that you can’t have people exactly the way you want them and that a little understanding is all you need to make most people seem halfway decent.