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The Spirals of Danu
A Gathering of Twine
"Five stars- scared the hell out me" - Stephen King
"Everything about you is a lie."
In this first novel in his epic fantasy-horror series, The Spirals of Danu, Martin Adil-Smith introduces the reader to a cast of unlikely heroes; Professor George Tate, one of the mythical Twine, and his seemingly ageless assistant, Celus.
Freeman Sullivan submits his final book to his incredulous editor and tells the occult tale of George and Celus as they discover that every great global institution has been infiltrated by shadowy forces beyond mortal understanding.
Stalked at every turn by the sinister Raven Men, the friends must take their first steps towards the Citadel of The Last, and the divine evil that dwells within. Yet their cause is not without cost and their journey that will leave a trail of conspiracy and mayhem.
From the ashes of shattered lives will rise those who will help and hinder, as the mystery of Sumerland threatens to throw all creation into chaos. George, Celus, and even Freeman must choose their battles with care, for today's casualty may be tomorrow's enemy.
Because Freeman has realized George’s truth - that the walls between worlds are thinning and the shadows are lengthening, as Humanity braces for an evil beyond our comprehension.
"Everything about you is a lie."
In this first novel in his epic fantasy-horror series, The Spirals of Danu, Martin Adil-Smith introduces the reader to a cast of unlikely heroes; Professor George Tate, one of the mythical Twine, and his seemingly ageless assistant, Celus.
Freeman Sullivan submits his final book to his incredulous editor and tells the occult tale of George and Celus as they discover that every great global institution has been infiltrated by shadowy forces beyond mortal understanding.
Stalked at every turn by the sinister Raven Men, the friends must take their first steps towards the Citadel of The Last, and the divine evil that dwells within. Yet their cause is not without cost and their journey that will leave a trail of conspiracy and mayhem.
From the ashes of shattered lives will rise those who will help and hinder, as the mystery of Sumerland threatens to throw all creation into chaos. George, Celus, and even Freeman must choose their battles with care, for today's casualty may be tomorrow's enemy.
Because Freeman has realized George’s truth - that the walls between worlds are thinning and the shadows are lengthening, as Humanity braces for an evil beyond our comprehension.
261 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 27, 2013
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Martin Adil-Smith
10 books27 followersMartin Adil-Smith was born to a Persian mother and an English father in London, 1978. He completed a BA (Hons) in Criminology at Middlesex University in 1999, before pursuing a career in commercial Real Estate.
Martin’s literary heroes are Stephen King, HP Lovecraft, and Anne Rice. He is passionate about music, and in particular lesser known acts such as Paradise Lost, Fields of the Nephilim, and Serpico.
He lives in Scotland, with his wife and daughter and when he is not reading or listening to music, he pretends to write.
Martin’s literary heroes are Stephen King, HP Lovecraft, and Anne Rice. He is passionate about music, and in particular lesser known acts such as Paradise Lost, Fields of the Nephilim, and Serpico.
He lives in Scotland, with his wife and daughter and when he is not reading or listening to music, he pretends to write.
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October 1, 2013
If you enjoyed tense psychological thrillers The Shining and Imajica then you will love this.
A British Museum professor discovers lost inscriptions that tell a very different genesis story to the bible (and one that makes more sense because it explains why there is suffering), but his obsession with revealing his findings to the world could cost him everything.
However, not all is at it seems with his apparently ageless assistant, and their actions in pursuing the truth could have terrible consequences for those left in their wake.
A gripping read, with much of the story skilfully interwoven with true events (I had to go and look up if there really were mines under Edinburgh Airport - and there are!)... it really forces you to question who you can trust.
A British Museum professor discovers lost inscriptions that tell a very different genesis story to the bible (and one that makes more sense because it explains why there is suffering), but his obsession with revealing his findings to the world could cost him everything.
However, not all is at it seems with his apparently ageless assistant, and their actions in pursuing the truth could have terrible consequences for those left in their wake.
A gripping read, with much of the story skilfully interwoven with true events (I had to go and look up if there really were mines under Edinburgh Airport - and there are!)... it really forces you to question who you can trust.
July 9, 2014
This is the most engrossing and interesting novel I have ever read. I was hooked just a few pages in and literally stayed up all night until I finished it. The author mixes together fantasy, horror, sci-fi, thriller, mystery, and history (with a twist!), spices it up with perfect word choices and lush descriptions, and serves up a sumptuous literary feast. Sorry to sound trite, but it's the best way I can think of to describe it.
For years my favorite book was A Winter's Tale by Mark Helprin, as his imagery was simply beautiful. Adil-Smith surpasses this and every scene he writes puts the reader right into the story. As I do not want to spoil any of the delights awaiting other readers, I can only say that this novel will take you places you don't expect and will stay with you long after you read it. I've already read it twice and, once I get it back from the friend I lent it to, will be getting my "fix" before lending it out again.
If you like HP Lovecraft, Stephen King, or Dean Koontz, you will love Martin Adil-Smith. If these aren't your favorite authors, I would still recommend that you give it a try as it is simply a great story.
For years my favorite book was A Winter's Tale by Mark Helprin, as his imagery was simply beautiful. Adil-Smith surpasses this and every scene he writes puts the reader right into the story. As I do not want to spoil any of the delights awaiting other readers, I can only say that this novel will take you places you don't expect and will stay with you long after you read it. I've already read it twice and, once I get it back from the friend I lent it to, will be getting my "fix" before lending it out again.
If you like HP Lovecraft, Stephen King, or Dean Koontz, you will love Martin Adil-Smith. If these aren't your favorite authors, I would still recommend that you give it a try as it is simply a great story.
July 9, 2014
I honestly had no idea how hooked I was going to be by this book. The scope and breadth of the story had me from the first chapter. There isn't really one central character to follow, as the story encompasses a conspiracy that encompasses the whole world. Every human being in Adil-Smith's universe is a part of the greater narrative of what can only be described as a conspiracy of godlike proportions. By the end of the book I was left with that feeling you get when your head is still in the story, but you are back in the 'real world' now. I missed the characters and had the need to know how it was all going to end. Two books in, and I still have that feeling. I still think about this story, months after having finished the first and second book. I can't wait to see where Adil-Smith takes me with the third instalment. Do yourself a favour. Buy. This. Book. You can thank me later. \m/
October 10, 2014
Maybe I am just becoming old and crotchety, but in recent years it has become positively de rigueur to compare authors to Lovecraft, or even that their work is inspired by his.
In itself, there is nothing wrong that... except when an author is just aping Lovecraft for an easy buck and falling well short of the "weird" standard. I find myself becoming increasingly frustrated and disappointed when reading such tomes, because I end up thinking "can't you come up with your own ideas?"
How refreshing it is then to read A Gathering of Twine, which takes Lovecraftian-Weirdness to a whole new level.
First off, let me just state that this is not for everybody; it is arcane; dense; quasi-mystical, and filled with conspiracy and shadow.
If that is your thing, then great, and if not then move along.
Secondly, this does not follow a traditional story format - partly because it is the first part of a two-parter, and secondly... well it posits that "the future can affect the past". As a result we begin (chronologically speaking) at the end of the story, with an aging writer submitting his final manuscript that shows "proof" of a malevolent Creator, and then the rest of the book is told as a series of interviews, but jumping years or even decades, and often not in sequential order.
There is a reason for all of it, but it does mean that you really have to pay attention. In amongst the arcane theology there is alliance, betrayal, a re-writing of the Genesis story, mass suicide, alcoholism, and the wickedly delightful Raven Men.
The atmosphere is best described as new-gothic in so far that the narrator is locked in a room high up in a skyscraper, as things that walk as humans (but aren't) wait for him below, and it is certainly oppressive crawling feeling when you begin to realize the amount of genuine history that is interwoven with this magical-reality.
Is this true Lovecraft? No, but that is not a bad thing. I would describe more as Inspired-Lovecraft insofar that it establishes its own gloriously dark cosmology, whilst having due regard to madness and tentacles.
Now, if you'll excuse, I'm off to praise He Who Lies Dead But Dreaming.
In itself, there is nothing wrong that... except when an author is just aping Lovecraft for an easy buck and falling well short of the "weird" standard. I find myself becoming increasingly frustrated and disappointed when reading such tomes, because I end up thinking "can't you come up with your own ideas?"
How refreshing it is then to read A Gathering of Twine, which takes Lovecraftian-Weirdness to a whole new level.
First off, let me just state that this is not for everybody; it is arcane; dense; quasi-mystical, and filled with conspiracy and shadow.
If that is your thing, then great, and if not then move along.
Secondly, this does not follow a traditional story format - partly because it is the first part of a two-parter, and secondly... well it posits that "the future can affect the past". As a result we begin (chronologically speaking) at the end of the story, with an aging writer submitting his final manuscript that shows "proof" of a malevolent Creator, and then the rest of the book is told as a series of interviews, but jumping years or even decades, and often not in sequential order.
There is a reason for all of it, but it does mean that you really have to pay attention. In amongst the arcane theology there is alliance, betrayal, a re-writing of the Genesis story, mass suicide, alcoholism, and the wickedly delightful Raven Men.
The atmosphere is best described as new-gothic in so far that the narrator is locked in a room high up in a skyscraper, as things that walk as humans (but aren't) wait for him below, and it is certainly oppressive crawling feeling when you begin to realize the amount of genuine history that is interwoven with this magical-reality.
Is this true Lovecraft? No, but that is not a bad thing. I would describe more as Inspired-Lovecraft insofar that it establishes its own gloriously dark cosmology, whilst having due regard to madness and tentacles.
Now, if you'll excuse, I'm off to praise He Who Lies Dead But Dreaming.
December 2, 2013
Several reviewers have compared the author of "A Gathering of Twine" to a gamut of fiction writers... all masters in their genre. I found these comparisons to be the source of the one real problem I had with this story; I couldn't get comfortable with the narrator's style.
I loved the basic premise - confirmation/verification of the true story of Mankind, how we came to be, how we developed as we did and came to the global situation the story is set, and finally, who makes it all happen as it did and does.
I liked Freeman Sullivan and his publisher. I loved George Tate and, in a completely different way - Celus. In fact, I could suspend disbelief in favor of the majority of characters throughout the book.
What kept this from being a great read, versus a very good read was that... well; allow me to make an author comparison, after all - Dante. Dante's "Inferno" is considered by many to be a masterpiece of epic poetry, and I'm certain that the critics are better able to make such claims than I. As it was when I read Dante's Inferno, so it was with A Gathering of Twine. I became lost and confused in the intricacies of the plot twists and turns; so much so that I could not make the necessary connections to reach closure at the end.
As to a recommendation; if you understood and liked Dante's Inferno - you'll like or love "A Gathering of Twine". As for me, I remain intrigued by the premise to such a degree that I plan on reading the book again when I have more time. Maybe then I can come back, upgrade the star level and give the book a stronger recommendation.
I loved the basic premise - confirmation/verification of the true story of Mankind, how we came to be, how we developed as we did and came to the global situation the story is set, and finally, who makes it all happen as it did and does.
I liked Freeman Sullivan and his publisher. I loved George Tate and, in a completely different way - Celus. In fact, I could suspend disbelief in favor of the majority of characters throughout the book.
What kept this from being a great read, versus a very good read was that... well; allow me to make an author comparison, after all - Dante. Dante's "Inferno" is considered by many to be a masterpiece of epic poetry, and I'm certain that the critics are better able to make such claims than I. As it was when I read Dante's Inferno, so it was with A Gathering of Twine. I became lost and confused in the intricacies of the plot twists and turns; so much so that I could not make the necessary connections to reach closure at the end.
As to a recommendation; if you understood and liked Dante's Inferno - you'll like or love "A Gathering of Twine". As for me, I remain intrigued by the premise to such a degree that I plan on reading the book again when I have more time. Maybe then I can come back, upgrade the star level and give the book a stronger recommendation.
October 15, 2013
This is a totally offbeat story that reminds me of the finest tales Cthulhu Mythos by Lovecraft, with a generous amount of gothic doom in the vein of Poe.
The story follows the obsession of an archaeologist, as it his determination to reveal "the true origins of man" costs him his job, his marriage and even his health.
And yet the story moves beyond that, to encompass the consequences of his actions and how they affect all those around him.
The chapters are perfectly designed, taking no more than an hour each (I have children, so bite size portions suit me!), but keeps you wanting to read more.
If you enjoyed Stephen King's “Everything’s Eventual” and “Four Past Midnight”, then you will love this.
Recommended.
The story follows the obsession of an archaeologist, as it his determination to reveal "the true origins of man" costs him his job, his marriage and even his health.
And yet the story moves beyond that, to encompass the consequences of his actions and how they affect all those around him.
The chapters are perfectly designed, taking no more than an hour each (I have children, so bite size portions suit me!), but keeps you wanting to read more.
If you enjoyed Stephen King's “Everything’s Eventual” and “Four Past Midnight”, then you will love this.
Recommended.
October 7, 2014
This is a tale of creeping shadows, questionable sanity, and uneasy allies.
Is our world being secretly run by an arcane order bent causing misery and chaos? Or are these these just the incoherent rambling of Freeman Sullivan as he struggles to complete his final book.
This book reminds me of many authors from different genres, and thus is difficult to categorize - yes, this is horror, but it is the horror that you don't see; is it the shadow under your bed, it is the movement in your wardrobe.
No-one can doubt the scope and the scale; the main story is set in the near future (2030 something), but recounts events of 100+years before, and entwine many families and friends. In that regard, it reminded me of James Clavell's work, and to a lesser degree The Dark Tower saga - a massive world filled with politics, deceit, and questionable religion.
Then there is overarching themes; dead God's returning (Lovecraft), secret societies and conspiracy (Dan Brown/ Twilight Zone/ X-Files), and the terrible things that people will do in a crisis (Stephen King/ Clive Barker/ Graham Masterton/ Dean Koontz).
Finally there is the characterizations. They are textured, with back stories and history, and a great deal of love and care is shown, which reminds me of Anne Rice's early work.
This is a gripping and compelling story, but one that does not fit neatly into any one category. It certainly does make you think, and that is just one of it's many strengths.
Is our world being secretly run by an arcane order bent causing misery and chaos? Or are these these just the incoherent rambling of Freeman Sullivan as he struggles to complete his final book.
This book reminds me of many authors from different genres, and thus is difficult to categorize - yes, this is horror, but it is the horror that you don't see; is it the shadow under your bed, it is the movement in your wardrobe.
No-one can doubt the scope and the scale; the main story is set in the near future (2030 something), but recounts events of 100+years before, and entwine many families and friends. In that regard, it reminded me of James Clavell's work, and to a lesser degree The Dark Tower saga - a massive world filled with politics, deceit, and questionable religion.
Then there is overarching themes; dead God's returning (Lovecraft), secret societies and conspiracy (Dan Brown/ Twilight Zone/ X-Files), and the terrible things that people will do in a crisis (Stephen King/ Clive Barker/ Graham Masterton/ Dean Koontz).
Finally there is the characterizations. They are textured, with back stories and history, and a great deal of love and care is shown, which reminds me of Anne Rice's early work.
This is a gripping and compelling story, but one that does not fit neatly into any one category. It certainly does make you think, and that is just one of it's many strengths.
September 3, 2016
A tale of epic fantasy, with an amazing occult twist on it.
One for deep thinkers.
One for deep thinkers.
July 18, 2015
There are three types of cheapo Amazon kindle books. Firstly is the one you regret spending 99c on because it's just so bad you don't make it through the whole thing or get through it painfully with your one star rating ready to dish out. The second is the average book that you are relieved you only spent 99c on, but enjoyed all the same and you are content with your purchase. And then you have the 99c books that are so wonderful that you congratulate yourself that you only spent 99c and discovered a masterpiece...
Unfortunately this is not one of those masterpieces, yet is absolutely not one of the cruddy ones. This was an enjoyable book... But I didn't love it.
Picture this, an old man named Freeman has been writing a conclusion to a number of popular books he wrote years ago. Finally after missing deadline after deadline he takes his almost finished manuscript into his editorial office and confesses he has totally changed his viewpoint. He now believes in a creator, when his books have been totally the opposite. Unconvinced, his publisher goes through the evidence with him about this creator. And so begins this tale. It is a collection of stories, all intertwining with each other. All supposedly leading to the proof of a creator, but not in the traditional sense.
I admit It is really well written. It weaves in and out of situations and times, the characters are mostly interesting and there are so many different atmospheres in the book. It is creepy at times, other times funny or engrossing. However the next minute it drags on needlessly and you feel yourself just wanting to get through it.
I liked the mythology of it, and did get swept away in the "where does this all come from" aspect of it. I also think it's clever that the author took real events and shaped them in a way that it fit his story.
Silly me not really researching this Amazon purchase was not a stand alone novel, and the story actually continues into another book. Not sure if it captivated me enough to read the conclusion to be honest. The need for an answer does not necessarily outweigh having to read another novel.
Although I have read some reviews of his other work and it is all well received. Perhaps another time.
Unfortunately this is not one of those masterpieces, yet is absolutely not one of the cruddy ones. This was an enjoyable book... But I didn't love it.
Picture this, an old man named Freeman has been writing a conclusion to a number of popular books he wrote years ago. Finally after missing deadline after deadline he takes his almost finished manuscript into his editorial office and confesses he has totally changed his viewpoint. He now believes in a creator, when his books have been totally the opposite. Unconvinced, his publisher goes through the evidence with him about this creator. And so begins this tale. It is a collection of stories, all intertwining with each other. All supposedly leading to the proof of a creator, but not in the traditional sense.
I admit It is really well written. It weaves in and out of situations and times, the characters are mostly interesting and there are so many different atmospheres in the book. It is creepy at times, other times funny or engrossing. However the next minute it drags on needlessly and you feel yourself just wanting to get through it.
I liked the mythology of it, and did get swept away in the "where does this all come from" aspect of it. I also think it's clever that the author took real events and shaped them in a way that it fit his story.
Silly me not really researching this Amazon purchase was not a stand alone novel, and the story actually continues into another book. Not sure if it captivated me enough to read the conclusion to be honest. The need for an answer does not necessarily outweigh having to read another novel.
Although I have read some reviews of his other work and it is all well received. Perhaps another time.
April 1, 2014
How far would you go to reveal a lie? Would you sacrifice your marriage, your family and even a part of your sanity just to prove you were right?
As always, Martin Adil-Smith gives the reader a lot to think about, creating a philosophical battle inside the story and making the reader doubt the reality. What actually is true and what is a lie in our world? Maybe the truth we are taught to believe is just skillfully spun bundle of half-lies and half-truths. A big fat lie where nothing is as it seems. The author has a talent of planting the seed and getting the reader’s mind confused, turning everything upside down; our religion, the reality, God…
If you love dark fantasy and thrillers that really hits the nerve. This is definitely your book! A masterpiece of a horror story and a must read…but, you better leave the lights on!
Highly recommended!
As always, Martin Adil-Smith gives the reader a lot to think about, creating a philosophical battle inside the story and making the reader doubt the reality. What actually is true and what is a lie in our world? Maybe the truth we are taught to believe is just skillfully spun bundle of half-lies and half-truths. A big fat lie where nothing is as it seems. The author has a talent of planting the seed and getting the reader’s mind confused, turning everything upside down; our religion, the reality, God…
If you love dark fantasy and thrillers that really hits the nerve. This is definitely your book! A masterpiece of a horror story and a must read…but, you better leave the lights on!
Highly recommended!
October 19, 2014
A Gathering of Twine (The Spirals of Danu) by Martin Adil-Smith is an epic fantasy about Freeman, a writer who tells a most dangerous tale.
The elderly Freeman hurries to a meeting with his book publisher. He totes a briefcase stuffed with incriminating papers concerning his next story. Three shadowy mystery men trail him, people who want to keep the truth from reaching Freeman’s considerable following.
The author makes his meeting, and at his publisher Danielle’s urging, Freeman makes a most startling claim. His simple statement mocks the existence of a creator and the societal underpinnings of all we hold dear. Does Freeman have proof? Hoo boy, does he ever.
A Gathering of Twine unfolds as if picking apart a snarled ball of yarn. It has many threads, and they unwind Freeman’s story with text from ancient stone tablets that reference modern day conventions. Next are firsthand accounts of people mixed up with supernatural events, and sprinkled within are biblical and other holy book references.
Adil-Smith finishes the story with a fascinating explanation of the Jonestown incident with the unsettling tape-recorded confession of a Jim Jones follower. Their faith started with convincing visions of heaven. But after peeling away the magical veneer, underneath was the hell described eons ago in Freeman’s ancient stone tablets. Drinking the poison-laced purple fruit drink was truly the lesser of the Jonestown’s evils.
Fantasy fans that enjoy well-told twisty yarns would enjoy being tangled up in A Gathering of Twine. Be warned, there are chilly ruined lives in this story, and the delicious devils are so convincing. They will have you reaching for that purple drink in no time.
The elderly Freeman hurries to a meeting with his book publisher. He totes a briefcase stuffed with incriminating papers concerning his next story. Three shadowy mystery men trail him, people who want to keep the truth from reaching Freeman’s considerable following.
The author makes his meeting, and at his publisher Danielle’s urging, Freeman makes a most startling claim. His simple statement mocks the existence of a creator and the societal underpinnings of all we hold dear. Does Freeman have proof? Hoo boy, does he ever.
A Gathering of Twine unfolds as if picking apart a snarled ball of yarn. It has many threads, and they unwind Freeman’s story with text from ancient stone tablets that reference modern day conventions. Next are firsthand accounts of people mixed up with supernatural events, and sprinkled within are biblical and other holy book references.
Adil-Smith finishes the story with a fascinating explanation of the Jonestown incident with the unsettling tape-recorded confession of a Jim Jones follower. Their faith started with convincing visions of heaven. But after peeling away the magical veneer, underneath was the hell described eons ago in Freeman’s ancient stone tablets. Drinking the poison-laced purple fruit drink was truly the lesser of the Jonestown’s evils.
Fantasy fans that enjoy well-told twisty yarns would enjoy being tangled up in A Gathering of Twine. Be warned, there are chilly ruined lives in this story, and the delicious devils are so convincing. They will have you reaching for that purple drink in no time.
October 12, 2014
For anyone who enjoys conspiracies and complex plots then I could not recommend this book more. It starts with a gripping introduction about an author being followed to his editor’s office after we discover he has killed what we can only assume to be a man at this stage, which immediately sparks intrigue into what the main character had gotten himself into.
The book then unravels as you become as desperate to unravel the truth as the editor in the story. I was not disappointed as the fictional author and Mr Adil-Smith seemed equally desperate to tell me.
The story then follows different accounts of people’s memories that all lead to one big truth, (yet to get to the end of it as there was a nice little cliffhanger finish!) It was almost like a short story collection and some I enjoyed more than others. But the clever way in which Mr Adel-Smith wrote the accounts meant that when they interlinked it became fun, in a sense, to spot where the truth was as the stranger’s stories merged. It was like solving the mystery myself.
Combine slick writing techniques like that along with the very realistic and thoroughly explored concepts of an evil God, deja-vu part of actually rewriting our past and The Man purposefully refusing to let us leave the status quo and you won’t be able to deny that this book is a page turner.
The book then unravels as you become as desperate to unravel the truth as the editor in the story. I was not disappointed as the fictional author and Mr Adil-Smith seemed equally desperate to tell me.
The story then follows different accounts of people’s memories that all lead to one big truth, (yet to get to the end of it as there was a nice little cliffhanger finish!) It was almost like a short story collection and some I enjoyed more than others. But the clever way in which Mr Adel-Smith wrote the accounts meant that when they interlinked it became fun, in a sense, to spot where the truth was as the stranger’s stories merged. It was like solving the mystery myself.
Combine slick writing techniques like that along with the very realistic and thoroughly explored concepts of an evil God, deja-vu part of actually rewriting our past and The Man purposefully refusing to let us leave the status quo and you won’t be able to deny that this book is a page turner.
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August 19, 2014This is the first in the series I've read on recommendation from a friend. It's wonderfully written as a fantasy. When I first opened this book I had no clue what to expect, but when you take it in the spirit of The Shining or Hellraiser and allow yourself to go with the flow, it's a very good read.
There is only a minimal distance between the protagonists and the reader, which is intriguing. The book rolls through slowly gaining momentum. You are on the outside watching a man whose secrets cost him his marriage, his friends, his relationship with his kids... and ultimately his health.
It won't be for everyone. It's not an instantly gratifying read. It's a book you have to want to read and embrace for its own charms. You have to be willing to take "A Gathering..." at face value understanding that all will be revealed in good time. The characterization is subtle and develops gradually where the tone and style is a much a part of the protagonist's personality as his own thoughts and actions.
If you're unsure get a second-hand copy or try a sample on kindle. It’s worth giving it a chance.
There is only a minimal distance between the protagonists and the reader, which is intriguing. The book rolls through slowly gaining momentum. You are on the outside watching a man whose secrets cost him his marriage, his friends, his relationship with his kids... and ultimately his health.
It won't be for everyone. It's not an instantly gratifying read. It's a book you have to want to read and embrace for its own charms. You have to be willing to take "A Gathering..." at face value understanding that all will be revealed in good time. The characterization is subtle and develops gradually where the tone and style is a much a part of the protagonist's personality as his own thoughts and actions.
If you're unsure get a second-hand copy or try a sample on kindle. It’s worth giving it a chance.
April 17, 2014
If you buy this expecting a light tale, you'll be disappointed. A Gathering of Twine is a deeply complex book. The stories within it are plied together as if spun wool or silk and demand your total attention.
Whatever effort it takes to read this is totally worth it. The world described is complex and detailed. Mr. Adil-Smith's use of real life events begged for fact checking, yet, I didn't want to detour from reading. Whether accurate or literary license, it didn't matter because the story compelled me to continue. Be warned, the book does have a cliffhanger. Usually, this bothers me too much to give a five star. However, knowing The Beggar of Beliefs has already been released helps my impatience and returns this book to the five stars it richly deserves.
This is a must read for anyone who's a fan of J.R.R Tolkien's style set in our world. I completely recommend this book.
Whatever effort it takes to read this is totally worth it. The world described is complex and detailed. Mr. Adil-Smith's use of real life events begged for fact checking, yet, I didn't want to detour from reading. Whether accurate or literary license, it didn't matter because the story compelled me to continue. Be warned, the book does have a cliffhanger. Usually, this bothers me too much to give a five star. However, knowing The Beggar of Beliefs has already been released helps my impatience and returns this book to the five stars it richly deserves.
This is a must read for anyone who's a fan of J.R.R Tolkien's style set in our world. I completely recommend this book.
March 12, 2014
For "V" fans
I saw a photo of Stephen King reading this, and thought I would give it a go... and I was not disappointed. Dark, sinister, and creepy as hell - this is a rollercoaster into madness and obsession and the titular characters race to uncover the lie at the heart of our world, but in the process pay with their marriages and relationship with their children. Fan of Poe and Anne Rice will love this.
I saw a photo of Stephen King reading this, and thought I would give it a go... and I was not disappointed. Dark, sinister, and creepy as hell - this is a rollercoaster into madness and obsession and the titular characters race to uncover the lie at the heart of our world, but in the process pay with their marriages and relationship with their children. Fan of Poe and Anne Rice will love this.
August 2, 2014
Gripping! Don't-turn-the-lights-out horror at it's inventive finest..Mr. Adil-Smith takes the title of his book literally; there are many strands of witness material that interweave themselves into the rest of the story to make a very dramatic whole. He weaves a story that has her on the edge of her seat. Great gripping read !!!!
July 27, 2016
“A Gathering of Twine (The Spirals of Danu)” by Martin Adil-Smith is an intellectually stimulating fantasy story set in a grim futuristic world, resembling more an existence than a life. Our hero, writer Freeman Sullivan, is on his way to see his editor, Danielle, and their discussion of his work enters philosophical and religious territory. The plot of the story and reality immediately intertwine as the findings of the character Tate relate to the world and its creation, a power battle between good and evil that relies on a group of people, the Twine.
It is a strange but fascinating story that will give philosophers and seekers of the truth a lot to think about. Stimulating and founded in its religious research the story however is much more than seeking of the truth. It is also a thriller as archaeologist Tate in the book within the book is being manipulated and tricked.
The book is only the first part of the story and the second, which I accidentally read first, will bring some great surprises and more intrigue to come.
Adil-Smith is a talented, creative and highly original writer, whose fiction is both entertaining and stimulating. You do not have to follow all the musings to enjoy this book, but if you do, you will get even more out of it. If you don’t, it is still a trip to a fascinating and inventive creation of a world.
Quite impressive.
It is a strange but fascinating story that will give philosophers and seekers of the truth a lot to think about. Stimulating and founded in its religious research the story however is much more than seeking of the truth. It is also a thriller as archaeologist Tate in the book within the book is being manipulated and tricked.
The book is only the first part of the story and the second, which I accidentally read first, will bring some great surprises and more intrigue to come.
Adil-Smith is a talented, creative and highly original writer, whose fiction is both entertaining and stimulating. You do not have to follow all the musings to enjoy this book, but if you do, you will get even more out of it. If you don’t, it is still a trip to a fascinating and inventive creation of a world.
Quite impressive.
April 29, 2014
A Bizarre and edgy puzzle!
I just finished reading “Gathering of Twine” BY Martin Adil-Smith. Reading this book was a bizarre, yet familiar experience. At times, I felt like I was involved with a “Raiders of the Lost Ark” movie. In other areas of the story, I was reminded of the “Da Vincci Code” books. Some of the characters are similar to those written about by Stephen King and Dean Koontz. They are dark, brooding, cold, and brutal. This is balanced out with characters that will have you cheering for them when the going gets tough. I felt like I was watching an intense movie, but there was always a subtle feeling that this author was trying to teach me something, open my mind in some tricky way. I really enjoyed that aspect of his writing style. Martin Adil-Smith is very descriptive, and I have a feeling he is extremely intelligent. If you like edgy, intense, reading material, (that may keep you up at night) then this book is for you.
Danice Akiyoshi
Author of “Connected Hearts”
I just finished reading “Gathering of Twine” BY Martin Adil-Smith. Reading this book was a bizarre, yet familiar experience. At times, I felt like I was involved with a “Raiders of the Lost Ark” movie. In other areas of the story, I was reminded of the “Da Vincci Code” books. Some of the characters are similar to those written about by Stephen King and Dean Koontz. They are dark, brooding, cold, and brutal. This is balanced out with characters that will have you cheering for them when the going gets tough. I felt like I was watching an intense movie, but there was always a subtle feeling that this author was trying to teach me something, open my mind in some tricky way. I really enjoyed that aspect of his writing style. Martin Adil-Smith is very descriptive, and I have a feeling he is extremely intelligent. If you like edgy, intense, reading material, (that may keep you up at night) then this book is for you.
Danice Akiyoshi
Author of “Connected Hearts”
July 9, 2014
This is a creeping crawling tale of shadows that seep into our lives, and makes the reader shiver from start to finish, reminding me of the great works of Stephen King and Poe.
The story weaves the lives of many disparate (and desperate) characters together, as a disgraced archaeologist seeks out "The Twine" (the saviours of Humanity... but they don't know/ believe it), whilst the demons from a Hell-like Eden orchestrate some of the most significant events in human history, and keep a blindfold across our eyes.
Despite the great pace, I thought that the real strength lay in the characterizations, and the journey that a cast of thousands take over the course of a century. The detail is beautiful, and the final scene in the jungle, left me feeling physically winded.
If you like Lord of The Rings and Stephen King's "Dark Tower series", you will love this.
Definitely one for lovers of dark fantasy.
The story weaves the lives of many disparate (and desperate) characters together, as a disgraced archaeologist seeks out "The Twine" (the saviours of Humanity... but they don't know/ believe it), whilst the demons from a Hell-like Eden orchestrate some of the most significant events in human history, and keep a blindfold across our eyes.
Despite the great pace, I thought that the real strength lay in the characterizations, and the journey that a cast of thousands take over the course of a century. The detail is beautiful, and the final scene in the jungle, left me feeling physically winded.
If you like Lord of The Rings and Stephen King's "Dark Tower series", you will love this.
Definitely one for lovers of dark fantasy.
May 12, 2018
Overall, 3.5 stars. The writing is not great: it’s rife with rapid POV shifts, anachronisms, Britishisms spoken by Americans (e.g., torches instead of flashlights), etc. That said, the world-building is top-notch and the story itself is suspenseful. The author is really good at incorporating mundane details into the fantastical to give the story authenticity. It ends abruptly but I liked it enough to get the next one!
June 28, 2014
It was a fascinating story. At first, I had some difficulties getting into it but then, I loved it. It begins as Freeman, an elderly writer meets with his publisher with his unfinished manuscript. He then begins to tell her a fantastic story about a strange world and even stranger beings. I am looking forward to reading everything the author has to offer.
September 10, 2016
A great book that makes the reader think as the story twists and turns back and forth in history. A page-turning story with a shocking ending.
October 17, 2015
Strange and engaging ! I l love this book probably the best £0.99 I've spent. Although the story does jump around a lot, I was hooked from page 1. Looking forward to how it ends in book 2
June 10, 2017
This reminds me of The X Files or The Twilight Zone, except with dead gods instead of aliens.
Deceptive and creepy on every level (an 80yr old man as a hero? Kudos for pulling it off), this is a story about the paranormal secret societies that operate behind the thin veneer of our world.
Recommended.
Deceptive and creepy on every level (an 80yr old man as a hero? Kudos for pulling it off), this is a story about the paranormal secret societies that operate behind the thin veneer of our world.
Recommended.
June 9, 2017
Terrific read. Gripping narrative - it's like Lovecraft/Cthulhu for the Stranger Things generation.
Lots of conspiracy and paranoia to keep you turning the pages into the small hours.
Lots of conspiracy and paranoia to keep you turning the pages into the small hours.
January 3, 2018
A shivering good read that blends history and horror together.
February 25, 2019
i love this book
May 16, 2014
Everything You Know Is Wrong (Weird Al Yankovic)
What if all of the things you took for granted in the grand scheme of things was exactly the opposite of what you’d been taught?
What if there was a world that exists parallel to our own, and can easily (and foolishly) be accessed by those who know the right words?
These are the stories of what happens when that world meets our own. It is told from the perspective of an author who, at the risk of losing his own life, relates all of what he has learned and researched to a skeptical publisher. What he tells her wins her over, quite against her original feelings and beliefs.
Because the stories he relates are astounding. From the sighting of an other-worldly humanoid to the happenings at Jonestown, he weaves a story that has her on the edge of her seat. And the strangest thing of all is–
he has proof’
From the steles found at Maiden Castle to the eyewitnesses’ reports at various times of the intertwining of the two worlds, he makes an irrefutable argument for this fact:
The world as we know it is far different from what was intended.
This is an exceptional book. I would highly recommend that it be read without any other reading materials for distractions. Mr. Adil-Smith takes the title of his book literally; there are many strands of witness material that interweave themselves into the rest of the story to make a very dramatic whole. It needs–no, requires–a perception that comes with singleness of mind. It is definitely worth the pay-off. I was amazed throughout. Mr. Adil-Smith has taken many different personalities and situations, and has combined them into a seriously good read.
I will be awaiting the chance to read the next volume in the series, “The Beggar of Beliefs”.
What if all of the things you took for granted in the grand scheme of things was exactly the opposite of what you’d been taught?
What if there was a world that exists parallel to our own, and can easily (and foolishly) be accessed by those who know the right words?
These are the stories of what happens when that world meets our own. It is told from the perspective of an author who, at the risk of losing his own life, relates all of what he has learned and researched to a skeptical publisher. What he tells her wins her over, quite against her original feelings and beliefs.
Because the stories he relates are astounding. From the sighting of an other-worldly humanoid to the happenings at Jonestown, he weaves a story that has her on the edge of her seat. And the strangest thing of all is–
he has proof’
From the steles found at Maiden Castle to the eyewitnesses’ reports at various times of the intertwining of the two worlds, he makes an irrefutable argument for this fact:
The world as we know it is far different from what was intended.
This is an exceptional book. I would highly recommend that it be read without any other reading materials for distractions. Mr. Adil-Smith takes the title of his book literally; there are many strands of witness material that interweave themselves into the rest of the story to make a very dramatic whole. It needs–no, requires–a perception that comes with singleness of mind. It is definitely worth the pay-off. I was amazed throughout. Mr. Adil-Smith has taken many different personalities and situations, and has combined them into a seriously good read.
I will be awaiting the chance to read the next volume in the series, “The Beggar of Beliefs”.
May 29, 2014
A Gathering of Twine (The Spirals of Danu )is a gripping novel; one that some might find challenging to read but is well worth the effort. The author's writing style and techniques make this a page turner. As reader, you find yourself determined to unravel the complex story that alternately takes you back, across and forward in time in search of truth.
At the onset of the novel, the writer uses his fictional author, Freeman, scriptural references and vivid characters to remind readers, "A chain of events has been set in motion..." . These unnamed events are shrouded in fear, deceit, and supernatural forces that seem to be overpowering the world. The reader becomes an integral part of this attention commanding chain of events in search of answers. Questions of good and evil; free will versus pre-destined fate; and reality versus fantasy cause the reader to question and evaluate personal beliefs as they might be influenced by such powerful forces.
The author's style is reminiscent of Alfred Hitchcock. When reading I felt an overriding sense of doom but anticipated an unexpected twist in the story line. That unexpected twist was revealed at the end when I learned that the conclusion of the story is in the author's next novel.
I commend Mr. Adil-Smith for this page turning novel and can't wait for mystery to reveal itself in the next novel in his series!
At the onset of the novel, the writer uses his fictional author, Freeman, scriptural references and vivid characters to remind readers, "A chain of events has been set in motion..." . These unnamed events are shrouded in fear, deceit, and supernatural forces that seem to be overpowering the world. The reader becomes an integral part of this attention commanding chain of events in search of answers. Questions of good and evil; free will versus pre-destined fate; and reality versus fantasy cause the reader to question and evaluate personal beliefs as they might be influenced by such powerful forces.
The author's style is reminiscent of Alfred Hitchcock. When reading I felt an overriding sense of doom but anticipated an unexpected twist in the story line. That unexpected twist was revealed at the end when I learned that the conclusion of the story is in the author's next novel.
I commend Mr. Adil-Smith for this page turning novel and can't wait for mystery to reveal itself in the next novel in his series!
October 3, 2014
First Book of Two Volumes
It's the year 2033. The world is a different and unfriendly place. Fresh water is worth its weight in gold. Sections of the population lose themselves in a virtual reality.
Controversial writer Freeman Sullivan knows the chain of events have been set into motion. He has found proof of a Creator and the shocking Divine Plan. Those who must prevent him from communicating his message are after him.
Martin Adil-Smith's A Gathering of Twine weaves fascinating strands of horror, science fiction, and fantasy. The story concludes in The Beggar of Beliefs.
It's the year 2033. The world is a different and unfriendly place. Fresh water is worth its weight in gold. Sections of the population lose themselves in a virtual reality.
Controversial writer Freeman Sullivan knows the chain of events have been set into motion. He has found proof of a Creator and the shocking Divine Plan. Those who must prevent him from communicating his message are after him.
Martin Adil-Smith's A Gathering of Twine weaves fascinating strands of horror, science fiction, and fantasy. The story concludes in The Beggar of Beliefs.
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