Overall, this book was disappointing. It started out strong, and I was intrigued by the premise. I loved the idea of a journal that showed Thoreau had someone else with him at Walden Pond, and I especially loved that the heroine had risen from such a difficult background to achieve what she had. Unfortunately, things started going south somewhere around the halfway point. My sympathy for the heroine began to wane about the time she had sex with a teenage boy. Yes, he was nineteen, and yes he came after her, and yes he seemed to understand the game. But...big BUT...he was nineteen and she was twenty-eight and that nine-year difference can better be represented in dog years. Not to mention that she was already involved in a sexual relationship with the man she really cared about. To jump into bed with a teenager because she was hurt and lonely was so not OK. Especially given Patrick's subsequent obsession with her--which any thinking adult could have anticipated--and his statement that made it seem like he'd been a virgin at the time. Maybe the author was trying to make a point about the Cahill clan always making bad decisions, but this decision didn't hurt the heroine as much as it did a young man she should have cared for enough to turn away.
More importantly, I didn't think the story arc was all it could have been. There was too much recapping of information that had already been presented. It seemed like the author told us 150 times that Aine was from Kentucky, that her family was cursed, that they sold hillbilly heroine, that her granny got her out of there, etc., over and over. By contrast, information that should have been presented was withheld until far too late in the story (I'm sorry, she was accused of what toward her little brother? How does that not warrant a mention before the final act of the story?) I understand that Aine was an unreliable narrator (actually, she was a certifiable narrator) but why keep presenting the same information over and over? And at such odd times. At one point, Aine is in the middle of a haunting episode and starts thinking about how Thoreau should have married her aunt. Really? Is that what you're thinking as a malevolent spirit tries to destroy you and everyone you love? Then came the end of the story when the author seemed to be pointing the reader to the conclusion that Aine, rather than the victim of a haunting, was the delusional victim of severe mental illness, leaving me to wonder why I spent so much time listening to the story.
Nor did I think the writing quality was all it could have been. I understand that this is not an offering from a major publishing house, but surely there's someone there who knows what "belie" means? "But the dread that wedged heavy in my breast belied my fears." Yeah, no. There were also numerous problems with verb tenses. Why authors struggle with this, I will never understand. How can writers be so uninformed about their own language? Regardless, sentences that should have been in past progressive or past perfect were in simple past. Annoying. And not the sort of thing I want to encounter in the books I read. Unfortunately, the audio recording was not great either. The narrator's southern accent seemed to come and go, and there was one section of the book where it seemed like every other sentence was re-dubbed, making for an irritating listening experience.
Overall, this book had potential, and I was intrigued enough by Aine's story to stick with it, but it could have been much better. The cliffhanger ending would seem to indicate that there will be a sequel, but I'm sure I will have forgotten about this book long before the next one comes out.