You know you're in some kind of trouble when the blurb on the inside names HG Wells as "Henry" Wells (his name was Herbert, for those who didn't know). Then comes the story itself...the novella The Time Machine is the best piece of literature I've ever read. So this was always going to be judged by fiercer standards. The core story is there, but Wells' ideas and theories are muted in favour of "enhancing" the interaction with Eloi. In the novella, he never fully learns their language, but here, he and Weena have all kinds of conversations, some of which are quite banal. The scene were Weena does a little dance was frankly unneeded.
But the tale plays out largely as you'd expect, but then we come to an additional section set about 300 years in the future from now, where the Time Traveller lands in the middle of a war between Southdom and Northdom. Really, Wells is having a fit somewhere...but after this unwanted interlude, the story concludes much like it does in the novella.
In other words, this tale takes liberties with the source material, dumbs a few things down and pads it out with B-rate "sci-fi" silliness. I strongly recommend you read the novella - it's available online in most places, legally for free (Wikisource is one), and it's not very big, so it'll only be the work of a few hours.
But if you must read this, be warned it's a pale imitator.