It isn't a secret that I rather dislike Timothy Zahn's "Star Wars" books; they're just never been quite what I've wanted to see in the EU. However, after reading "Survivor's Quest," I found that I was intrigued with the story of the ill-fated mission known as Outbound Flight. "Outbound Flight" fills in the gaps and tells that story...kind of. Spoilers follow.
"Outbound Flight" takes place sometime before the Clone Wars, during the time of the Old Republic. There are three main plots that all come together at the end: the story of Outbound Flight, Thrawn's first contact with humans from the Republic, and Doriana's attempts to ensure Outbound Flight's destruction.
Despite being the title of the book, Outbound Flight isn't the primary plot of the novel. The first hundred pages or so that deal with it are actually spent on a side mission in which C'boath and Lorana (eventually joined by Obi-Wan and Anakin) mediate a civil conflict on another planet. Afterward, the project is given the go-ahead and all supplies and personnel C'boath demands are provided. Not long after the gigantic craft launches, however, C'boath takes over, ruling in an arbitrary, cruel manner and sparking discontent among his fellow Jedi and Outbound Flight's colonists. The ship is soon confronted by the Chiss and almost destroyed, ending up in the position "Survivor's Quest" finds it (crashed with marooned survivors that hate Jedi).
The second plot, the one concerning Thrawn, gets the most attention. Jorj Car'das and his shipmates, Maris Ferasi and Dubrak Qennto, are captured and find themselves entangled in Chiss military politics. Their captor is none other than Thrawn, at this time commander of the Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet. Curious about one another, culture and language classes ensue and the situation becomes more difficult when a group of pirates, the Vagaari, become a threat to the Chiss. One thing leads to another and Thrawn's military genius and Doriana combine to destroy Outbound Flight. The first meeting of Thrawn and Sidious also occurs.
The third and by far least important story is that of Doriana, aide to Palpatine and servant to Darth Sidious. He's out to annihilate Outbound Flight before it can reach the Unknown Regions. Really, all he does is try to foil C'boath's negotiations early in the book, confront Thrawn with a Nemoidian fleet, provide Thrawn with the equipment to fight the Vagaari and Outbound Flight, and constantly praise Thrawn for being such a noble commander. He's more background than anything else, providing the tools necessary to move the plot along, and that's about it.
Unfortunately, I'll have to start my opinion of the overall story with a pretty big complaint. The title of book is "Outbound Flight," it claims to tell the story of a somewhat famous mission by the same name; however, most of the book is dedicated to Thrawn. It is very apparent that Zahn loves this character (more on that later), and anyone who has read his other books knows that Thrawn is associated with Outbound Flight, so he is expected to appear at some point in the story. Instead, he dominates the book with his story comprising at least half of the pages. Outbound Flight, the tale I wanted to read, is secondary to the author's pet character.
For the most part, the story of Outbound Flight itself is fairly interesting, at least as far as seeing how it leads to what is seen in "Survivor's Quest." It's actually pretty neat to watch the whole story unfold when you know what happens forty or so years down the road. There is one major problem with this story, however: Jorus C'boath. The whole plot hinges on C'boath being an obvious villain and the Jedi Counsel being completely stupid. Perhaps had Zahn dedicated more of the book to Outbound Flight, we could have seen a more fleshed out, ambiguously realistic C'boath and his fall to the Dark Side. Instead, this plot feels rushed and therefore doesn't live up to its potential. It also doesn't help that the first hundred pages or so aren't spent on Outbound Flight at all, but rather on a side mission for C'boath to get the funding and approval for the project, which could have been easily shortened or even skipped.
Writing-wise, Zahn has vastly improved since "Survivor's Quest." The writing itself was actually very enjoyable to read, largely because the phrases that the author used to repeat ad nauseam are absent from "Outbound Flight." Characters don't quirk eyebrows, wince, or comment wryly on things; no one ends an argument with "Point" or "Agreed." The action scenes were well written (though I would have appreciated more of them) and most of the dialogue is well done. Honestly, I can't really complain about the writing itself.
Characters are another story entirely and vary greatly.
My usual complaint with Zahn's books is that he tends to ignore movie and other book characters in favour of his own. Oddly, the opposite issue is present here. This is one case where the author probably could have used his own cast entirely with it still being connected to the "Star Wars" universe through Palpatine, the Jedi Counsel, the Republic, and other such entities. However, perhaps because it seems to be a necessity for prequel novels, Obi-Wan and Anakin are awkwardly shoved into the story, only to be conveniently removed just before Outbound Flight's destruction. The two aren't necessary at all, and it feels like Zahn was really stretching to include them. In regards to the characters themselves, they're really quite well-written; I could picture Obi-Wan actually saying his lines, and Anakin's hero-worship of the powerful C'boath is a nice little bit of foreshadowing of what is to come. Very in-character, yet so unnecessary.
As mentioned above, Zahn likes Thrawn (and by extension the Chiss) a little too much. He's simply too perfect. Seriously, the guy is almost never wrong (and when he does make a mistake, it's more the fault of others involved). While reading the large portions of the book devoted to this character, I got the impression that this plot line was written primarily to show just how brilliant Thrawn is, whether its his uncanny ability to pick up on languages, his masterful deductions from art, his prowess on the battlefield, or his carefully laid and perfectly executed plans. If you like Thrawn, then this probably won't be much of a problem, but I find him to be too perfect, almost Mary Sue-like. As if the majority of the book being devoted to this figure wasn't enough, several characters (Maris, Car'das, and Doriana) repeatedly praise the Commander for how noble, honourable, and honest he is. He's not a horrible character to read about on his own, but Zahn's tailoring of the situation to demonstrate Thrawn's brilliance, his dominance of the book, and other characters' praise of him make him almost unbearable.
There are a couple other character duds, the worst being C'boath's one-dimensional, evil persona, but I've already discussed that. Maris, Doriana, and to an extent Car'das seem present strictly to praise Thrawn and be convenient for the plot. Not all are bad, though.
I found Lorana Jinzler to be an intriguing character. The general opinion on her seems pretty mixed, but I enjoyed seeing her struggle with her confidence issues brought on by her Master's oppressive personality and, later, discovering her family. She wasn't a perfect Jedi and demonstrated character growth. She also seemed to illustrate a problem within the Jedi Order: how an inadequate Master can stunt a Padawan's potential. Along with Lorana, the various non-Jedi characters aboard Outbound Flight were also interesting, though I would have liked to see more of them. It also would have been nice to see more of Thrass, Thrawn's brother. Car'das, while sometimes falling victim to Thrawn-worship, does manage to do some useful, brave things that make the story that much better. As with most of Zahn's books, the cast is pretty large, and some of the characters really do shine.
On a random note, despite disliking the dominance of Thrawn, I very much enjoyed the language sessions and thought they were amusing and...dare I say...cute.
"Outbound Flight" is a great follow up to "Survivor's Quest" and answers a lot of questions that were presented in the previous book. Zahn's writing has improved and is very enjoyable, and the story of Outbound Flight itself is mostly interesting. However, Zahn's love of Thrawn really overpowers this novel and forces other plots (like that of Outbound Flight) to race to the finish, rather than telling their full story. There are some great characters and some that are a little flat, but the good ones really are good. The overwhelming obsession with Thrawn puts this book in the two-and-a-half star range, but finally getting to know the story of Outbound Flight, good writing, and some very intriguing characters bumps "Outbound Flight" to a solid 3 stars.
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