I really didn't care for the way Grubbs treated Bill-E, especially since he refused to ever take any responsibility for what he could have done to help him out. Teenagers do have power over one another, and he could have done a lot more than stand around and watch Loch's actions. Also, since so much time was taken to show Loch as this horribly unlikable person, I really didn't care when he died. I felt bad for Bill-E, and had a few times when I wondered if Bill-E had actually pushed Loch, but that Loch died, I just didn't care.
Also, Juni as a plant for Lord Loss didn't really shock me like I expect that it was supposed to. It's hard to believe that she would suddenly show up and she knows more magic and spells than Dervish. Also, the way she kept putting the negative ideas of Dervish giving up into Grubbs's head helped to make it obvious that she wasn't the same sweet woman from Slawter. And are we to believe that Dervish is really so blinded by love that he doesn't see that there's something wrong with her?
I did, however, like seeing Grubbs fight his turning. We're told about the curse in a way, previously, that made it seem impossible to do anything but succumb to it. Was it because he's a magician? Or could anyone with enough awareness really fight it? That was an interesting thing to ponder.
I usually love the Grubbs and Dervish books, but this one really let me down. There just wasn't much for me to hold onto with this book. I'm hoping that Demon Apocalypse is better, and that there's a decent ending instead of another "to be continued."