I wavered between a 2 or 3 stars, probably more of a 2.5 star rating. The story is an ok mystery, but I did have some issues. I don’t see how Charlotte’s business stays afloat when she’s got customers lined up but allows herself to be pulled off in two different directions to investigate things and then leaves the shop with one person to take care of everybody.
Word usage: “”Not Arlo.” Delilah frittered her hand.” Fritter means to waste time, money, or energy on trifling matters, to dwindle or diminish, to divide something into small pieces—how do you ‘fritter’ a hand? Also, “Inside, shiny iridescent fish finned about.” A fin is a flattened appendage used for propelling, steering, and balancing. Fish ‘swim’ about, they do not ‘fin’ about.
Most of the time the writing is pretty good, but sometimes it’s pretty amateurish (i.e. “The girls abandoned their tiff and sprinted to their mother. They threw their arms around her.”)
I’m also getting a bit tired of Charlotte fuming over not knowing Jordan’s full back story. They aren’t even going steady, yet she thinks she should know every little thing about him. If they get serious and he has something in his past that IS her business, that is one thing, but so far, no, she pushes to hard and is too nosy. I’d dump her myself. And boy does she jump to worst case scenarios with no provocation.
Rebecca is way overboard. Yes, she wants to help Ipo, but talk about bossy.
And the author uses the word ‘scuttled’ when referring to walking way too often. Besides the regular sprint, strode, hurried, step, and move, characters bolt, hustle, scuttle, shuffle, shuttle, sashay, scoot, hurtle, swagger, traipse, scamper, sidle, scurry, flit, trundle, bustle, scamper, etc. I’m all for using a thesaurus to avoid repetition, but sometimes things can be overdone.