I wasn't expecting this to be quite so dark! For anyone considering reading this, it is DARK AS HELL.
With that out of the way, there are plenty of things in the book that hit home effectively. Many parts of the world building are well thought out and realistic, and weirdly prescient.
I have a few issues:
1. Jacob Fire Cloud is an elderly Lakota medicine man who in many ways feels like a walking stereotype. I do not know if LeVar consulted with any Lakota tribe members when writing this character. He is dignified and tough, and definitely a positive character in the book, but he also embodies some tropes I am a little wary of.
2. The premise of dividing the elements among the races and dividing the races into 4 groups as a basis for your worldbuilding in modern America is a little odd. Parts of the story line up, but that concept seems to get dropped after its initial explanation in favor of sort of general mysticism as we approach the end, so the impact of that story is never fully realized.
3. The two female characters definitely have the most difficult stories/travels. I am torn whether that is realistic or whether it's making them too much of a victim. The adult woman contributes to the story constantly and effectively while needing to be rescued, while the 10 year old girl doesn't seem to serve much purpose in the plot, other than to be sympathetic.
Overall, I am torn about the book. It's dark and searing, and it does a lot well. The reality Burton describes in post-apocalypse America seems like only a couple major disasters away. Corporate greed, racism, corrupt medical establishment - they all seem far too familiar for comfort. It also leans on some tropes and some shock value to get the reader to feel what they want. I think I'm a 4 in terms of book quality, and probably a 3 in terms of my actual enjoyment of the book.
CW: There's a pretty brutal and graphic attempted SA of a child about 2 or 3 chapters in, so be prepared. Beyond that, gritty post-apocalypse fueled by racism, so violence, hints at cannibalism, slavery/imprisonment/slaughter of black folks, medical corruption, various references to and threats of SA, though none as graphic as the first one, poverty, hunger, war, body mutilation, illness, and injury, references to sex trafficking, some drug use, etc. Plus the weird stereotypes about the Lakota man, including a character spouting off things like "Well you're an Indian, you must have some way of healing them, right?"