Lady Perdita "Poppy" Selby marries John, the Duke of Fletcher. It's love! ROLL CREDITS—ha, just kidding. Fletch and Poppy are having Marital Strife because John wants teh sex and Poppy just lies there. They go their separate ways for most of a year before Poppy discovers that she's allergic to hair powder and John discovers that a prostitute won't make his Boner Pop. This, obviously, results in the Sex of True Love©.
1. Fletch's introduction—a man who refuses to communicate using words and is looking for an affair—makes it SUPER HARD to think he's a worthy hero. I mean, even the prologue had me flinching because Fletch refuses to USE HIS WORDS LIKE A BIG BOY and instead expects Poppy to just go along with whatever he wants. Or to talk to her friends. Or to divine it from the moon & the stars. AAAARGH.
2. I liked seeing Poppy strike out on her own and do the things she wanted to do. That said, I did not get nearly enough of the emotional weight of this striking out. She goes and has some adventures...and then the book cuts right to one of its 300 other plots without allowing her growth to happen on page. Instead, we're told that she's growing into her own and my response to that is annoyance. PUT IT ON PAGE.
Also, Poppy's itchy head is presented as a the only reason she wasn't enjoying sex. A) USE YOUR DAMN WORDS POPPY. I forgive her this slightly more because of her mother and just how sheltered she was. STILL. B) I JUST—REALLY? REALLY? REALLY.
3. I have Thoughts on the mother plot. Mostly that I am SO HAPPY to see a story that lets the character cut off a toxic relationship. Yes, there's guilt, and yes, there's regret, but there's also that overwhelming sense of rightness, of freedom. So that was worth a solid round of applause for me as a disgruntled reader of Happy Family Books.
HOWEVER, undercutting that decision with Fletch's plot to disgrace her in society was ridiculous and frustrating. I think (and please acknowledge the size of the benefit of doubt I am giving this thing) that it was an attempt to keep her from forcing herself back into Poppy's life, as well as a revenge for Poppy's abuse at her hands. Except...it completely undermines Poppy's original decision to cut her out. Does Fletch not think that Poppy has the backbone needed to stand up to her mother? Does he think that she'll just allow things to go back to how they were? If he does, then that's hugely problematic because—here's that problem AGAIN—USE YOUR FUCKING WORDS, FLETCH. TALK TO YOUR WIFE YOU PIECE OF TRASH!!
Also, there was this whole "Poppy gets severe anxiety when faced with disagreements" thing which first of all, makes PERFECT SENSE in light of her shitty mother, but second of all, was dropped due to too much other shit. So I'm giving negative points for acknowledging the realities of long-term emotional abuse without actually following through on them. SHAME.
4. The 300 other plot points were, ultimately, not great and distracted from the main romance. Which I think wasn't enough to carry a full book, hence the 300 other plot points. My complaints, in no particular order:
+I liked Charlotte and thought she was deserving of her own book / novella. I was more into her story than I was into Poppy's at points because she USED HER WORDS and ugh her strange attachment to Villiers! Fighting with him to keep him alive! Her sensation of being "set", of being trapped in what and who she was! BE STILL MY SOUL.
+Jemma's ongoing drama was—fine.
+WHAT ABOUT LOUISA, HUH? She's introduced and since I've already read the next few books, I know she's dropped again like nothing. UGH I LIKED HER.
+Having the results of the second chess matches wrapped up OFF PAGE is EXTREMELY FRUSTRATING. Either waste my time entirely or don't bother: don't give me half a story and then summarize. How utterly disappointing.
It's a good thing I read book 3 before this one.