The first time I read it I really didn’t understand the plot (it’s getting late, and my mind is a bit fuzzy). But the last line made me read it again.
“One place suits one person, another place suits another person. For my part, I prefer to live in the country, like Timmy Willie.”
This quote struck me because even though I had been reading passively, it was the first time first-person narrative was used in the entire story. THE LAST LINE.
The tale is about two mice: one (johnnie town-mouse) who prefers living in urban areas while the other (timmy willie) likes his countryside rural district. They both try out each other’s lifestyles and eventually come to the conclusion that it’s natural for differences in opinion to occur.
But if the story is about mice, then why does the last line not say “one place suits one MOUSE, another place suits another MOUSE.” And since when do we care about you, Beatrix Potter, why do you we want to hear about “your part?” Is this a fucking memoir about your life as a nature-loving country boy? I’m here to read a story about mice and i am NOT here for your selfish nonsense, making a beautifully crafted story all about you.
In the end, the story is rich with plot, and despite the atrocity of the story’s end, it maintains enough quality to merit at least 3 stars, maybe 4 on a more forgiving day.