I was diving into this second book full of excitement after I absolutely loved the first one, only to be really dismayed to realize that the first 30% (212 pages) deal with a new POV character, set in the Arabic inspired culture of Krasia. It took me a while to accept I would not learn more about Arlen, Leesha, and Rojer and their fates just yet, but I soon came to embrace Ahmann Jardir – his coming-of-age story and his rise to power.
I will say it was tough to see the religious indoctrination and fanaticism that is core to that culture. And the Krasian dictionary at the end shows just how fleshed out it is – and, admittedly, how confusing. The fact that the demon warriors are polygynous and harems exist might seem a fantasy to some and like sexism to others, but it actually does make sense within the story, as so many of the men fall to the corelings during the nightly battles. They really do need to replenish the numbers of their warriors. That doesn’t mean I liked it though. The overall treatment of women in that culture overall was jarring.
I was still mostly able to rationalize this portrayal of women but then we again have a woman who has been violated only to have consensual sex soon after. In book 1, one of the MCs was gang raped off page and a few days later, she initiated sex with another MC. In this book, another character is repeatedly raped by her father and then also has consensual, and even pleasurable, sex with someone. In both cases I had trouble getting past, not the rape itself, no matter how horrible, but the consensual sex. In book 1, I could somehow accept what the author was selling, but doing the same thing again? As a woman I have severe doubts that having sex and even orgasming soon after experiencing sexual assault is probable. And to make matters worse, instead of escaping her father’s clutches, she decides to have sex in the barn, where, surprise, her father finds them, thwarting their plans. That just did not make sense to me.
It is truly a shame that these issues marred my enjoyment of the novel when I did enjoy it immensely otherwise: the plot is really compelling and I am invested in the characters. My absolute favorite is Arlen; I came to love his coming-of-age story and his arc in general in book 1 and I love its continuation here. It was heartbreaking to see him return to people he previously abandoned, changed that he is. Far worse, though, was how the killing of demons made him into something other. I fear he won’t survive in the end.
As for the other characters, Leesha, the Herb Gatherer and Warder, was again one of my favorites. She has really come into her own, being both extremely capable and proactive. I will say, though, some of her actions were a bit dubious. Renna, a new MC and the victim of incest as mentioned above, has all my sympathies – her fate was tough to bear, but there is a turn for the better to look forward to. I’m also looking forward to seeing how her character will progress in the coming books. Rojer and his skill with his fiddle is an intriguing way to battle demons, since his music soothes or repels them. Each of the main MCs, Arlen, Leesha, and Rojer thus play an integral part in fighting the demons.
But it’s not just the characters – it’s also the plot that makes for an engaging read, as stated above. At the core of the plot is the ideological conflict between Arlen and Jardir, the self-declared Shar‘Dama Ka – the Deliverer: Arlen wants to make his extensive collection of wards to fight demons available to everyone, traveling far and wide to teach others, while Jardir seeks to conquer and thus unify all the northern duchies under his authoritarian rule. Then, after fighting humans in this so-called Sharak Sun (the Daylight War), he seeks to take on the demons in the Sharak Ka (the First War), a great war on demons, who are nighttime creatures. Jardir‘s conquest is based on religious beliefs as mentioned above, justifying the high casualties and large-scale rape. The fact that Arlen and Jardir were friends in the past makes this clash of ideologies especially tragic – but really intriguing. An actual clash of the characters is yet to come though.
All in all, I really did enjoy this second book of the Demon Cycle, issues notwithstanding. It was fast-paced, immersive and made me eager for more; I’m looking forward to continuing this journey.
Onward!