Joyce Carol Oates’s Black Girl / White Girl was immensely disappointing. Oates’s prose wasn’t as effortless as in her other works, but even if it was, it wouldn’t have been enough to save this novel, which fails to deliver what it promises. To be honest, I feel cheated: this novel made me angry, and not in the way that I think Oates meant it to.
The blurb on the back of this book cites the focus as “black girl” Minette Swift’s tragic death, although the main character and narrator is Genna Hewett-Meade, her “white girl” college roommate who is “painfully confronting her own past life and identity…and her deepest beliefs about social obligation in a morally gray world” 15 years after Minette’s death. The novel, it says, is “a searing double portrait of race and civil rights in post-Vietnam America.” All of this would be fine if any of it was what the novel was truly about. The reader instead suspects at the beginning and is told by the end that the novel is actually about Genna’s relationship to her white liberal, free-expressive, wire-tapped-by-the-FBI parents, in particular her father Max Meade who may or may not have at one point committed a crime in the name of his beliefs.
Minette Swift is a complex and well-rounded character. She doesn’t like to make friends, trying to keep Genna at an arms length so that she can focus on her grades, in which she struggles. She is a scholarship student who goes to church in town every Sunday, struggles to fit in on the college choir, and is gaining a steady freshman 15. In other words, she is a normal college student. Genna, a legacy student for whose relatives this college is named, gets high grades easily, and lives in the scholarship house because her parents would prefer she learn what the non-luxury college housing is like. Genna is fascinated with Minette, which includes stalking her, looking through her things, and attempting to shove her friendship onto her at every opportunity. Minette begins to be bullied - at first, with a stolen textbook thrown in the mud, later, with letters that tell her to go home using derogatory racist language. Minette is a fascinating, religious, believable character.
Until Oates ruins her. Because [spoilers] it turns out that Minette is the one who sent herself the letter with the n-word on it then reported it, and that she wrote the n-word also on her own door, possibly in order to escape the dorm in which she really was being bullied, possibly for racial reasons, but certainly because she is an introvert with a temper. Genna discovers this as her roommate. Genna lies for her. Later, Genna will visit her in her new dorm, on the night before Minette’s dorm burns down due to her own candles (which she is lighting for prayer) the night before Minette was to finally leave the college for health reasons. In the epilogue, Genna will say that while Minette was always praying for salvation, it is a shame that her “only salvation” was Genna. A white girl.
Minette Swift, along with the only interesting parts of the novel in which either Minette herself is described or in which Minette and Genna are compared in a outside, 3rd-pov omniscient sort of way, are all swallowed up by the storyline in which Genna “painfully confronts her own past life and identity and her deepest beliefs about social obligation.” It turns out none of these are about race. This confrontation is about [more spoilers] the fact that in the fever she contracted after Minette’s death - but more immediately after her father’s first visit to the university - she submits the - useless, as in her fever it would have went unrecorded as well as anonymous, making it make less and less narrative sense - testimony that allows the FBI to arrest her father and put him in prison for the murder of a black security guard many years ago. While in prison, her father is beaten up for being a white man.
I can’t describe how disappointed I was by this novel. Oates creates Minette Swift and then utterly abandons her for the bland character of Genna Hewett-Meade. If the point was to misdirect us so that we, like Genna, believe that we are hearing Minette rather than Genna’s story, then it worked. I feel cheated at the end of this novel, a feeling that began in the fourth chapter and steadily increased until my scrunched-up-nose faces at Genna’s “reflections” 15 years later and descriptions of her so proudly taking a job in Newark rather than at ivy leagues in the Epilogue. Is Oates aware how utterly well-meaning and condescending her main character is, and how little she grows? I hope so, because I have read and loved Oates’s novels before, and would like to believe that she is self-aware as well, even if it doesn’t show. (Update, as of 2019: I've followed her on Twitter now for a few years, and I'm fairly certain she is not self-aware of these aspects of her novel.)