The author does a marvelous job of expressing her love for the Hi-Line terrain and it's barren beauty. Very visual and intriguing.
I tried to like this book, Suspense! Intrigue! What could possibly be wrong with that? Boredom and being Cliche ridden maybe?
The main character, Jane, felt as flat and shallow as could be for the first 2/3 or so of the book. Reading her scenes was more like a grocery list than creating an empathic bond. By the time she came to life and started to develop a real personality I found it hard to care any more.
As to the relationships? With Annie the pathetic puppy dog love interest left me meh. Then Rae, ok a real love? But it seemed to be so forced, the character 'must' fall in love so they do. No romance, no common interests, again like evertything Jane, totally shallow.
Maybe it is because I read too much, but so much I saw here was like the classic meme, you see the gun in act one, you have to use it by act three.
In the opening chapters we are given:
-A MC that is 40some and acts like an 18(maybe 16) year old expecting daddy to take care of her like he always did? Yet she basically knows nothing of his empire and claims to be a Pulitzer winning journalist? /shudder
-Hardassed big city cop in a dying podunk town? Obvious Undercover agent.
-Family farm where people go in private to shoot a lot that is on an under-patrolled border? OK, I thought Militia involved with smuggling, got Terrorists involved with smuggling.
-A tiny town with a one room school house and 5 homes, yet shows money? HINT HINT! Someone is waving bait!
It would have served for Annie to get a couple chapters of her own. For as evil and misguided as she was, she was still far deeper and more complex than Dear Jane. Instead Annie becomes literally a throw away character.
Oh yeah, Jane hadn't seen Annie in, Three, Five or Ten+ years? Take your pick, all are used.