Dear dogs, this was AWFUL. Worse than the last one, and I didn’t think that was even possible. I’m not even sure where to start.
Okay.
So, first up: time travel to meet previous Heroes of Legend is a horrible, horrible trope, and the previous book was already a badly contrived and clumsy piece of shoe-horning, with leaking plot holes in every direction. And this one was worse, a directionless jumble of characterless waffle, poorly plotted, poorly written, and messy as all hell.
Second: it took a long standing, beloved and quintessential mythology and just pissed ALL over it. Some stuff was little and cosmetic - like, since when did Masters of the Towers have silver books? But some stuff was just unforgivable. Since when did Findandantilus target every mage? Talk about undermining Raistlin’s entire character and backstory. And then to claim that Raistlin had worn Red Robes since the Test! Had the Graygem gone back into the previous books and somehow rewritten his whole narrative arc? Since when was Mishakal Paladine’s consort (with the slightly inappropriate and uncomfortable image that creates)? Since when were there evil dragons in dragon orbs? That’s in direct contradiction to what was in the original stories (and why didn’t one escape when Tas did the smashing thing?)
Raistlin and Sturm were both blandly empty shadows of their former selves, and they got along almost without a hiccup, not falling out or conflicting fully at any point. The Shoikan Grove was SO SCARY that it bumped a minotaur on the head and covered him in leaves. And when a dragon attacks your Tower, you don’t think. ‘Oh look. it’s thirty feet long, with a forty-five foot wingspan’, you think, ‘FUUUUUUUUUUU...’ or the suitable Krynn equivalent.
And not only all that. The text was flat and clunky, tediously explaining absolutely everything, including the background twice in the first two chapters, and all the fucking sentences had exactly the same cadence, which drove me up the wall. There were no contractions, not even in speech, and people don’t talk like that. Fucksake, was this edited by AI? From an author's perspective, this is kindergarten stuff.
A plus point for Huma and Magius and their humour and slight unorthodoxy, very well done, but otherwise this was so bad it took me all my years of prior love to even finish it.
Did W&H actually write this? Or were they really, heavily constrained by umpteen levels of licensing bullshit. (Oooh no, we can't have an evil character! Oooh no, we can't have characters not getting along! Oooh no, the Shoikan Grove can't be really nasty, that's bad for our Brand!)
The whole thing just felt watered down, like the personalities and interactions and dialogue and relationships that made the first books so utterly magical had been thinned, or binned, and instead replaced with multiple levels of corporate sign off, sucking every ounce of life and light and energy and spontaneity clean from the text, and an unnecessarily complicated, ludicrously stupid plot that was clumsy at best, and a ruinous mess at worst.
I really, really hope the last book saves the day.