Edit: dropped this rating down from 2.5 to a 1 because it's really not worth anyone's time.
Why the heck has this been rated so high? It's crap, especially compared to her excellent debut trilogy! The respect I had for Canavan's writing has largely evaporated. I hope this terrible book was simply a dud, and not that the Black Magician trilogy was a fluke.
Okay, gripe #1. Plants, animals and vehicles are given totally random names despite being albeit identical to things we have in this world. Why? Who bloody knows. To purposefully confuse the novel? Maybe! When a Reyna is 'a swift flighty animal used for riding' mate you are literally just describing a horse so for the love of god just say HORSE
This however is the only complex thing about the novel, which is otherwise let down by its sheer simplicity. The writing tells, not shows, to the point where it reads awkwardly and childishly. Dialogue is affected and stupid. Witness 16 year old Auraya on page 9:
'Even I, living in this tiny village, know of the famous Dunwayan Fire-Warrior Clan'.
Oh god. At this point I was already groaning. Entire paragraphs are wasted with people repeating each other's formal titles and greetings. It's all 'Welcome, Auraya of the White' this and 'She made the sign of the circle' that.
Excessive exposition from characters' internal monologues when they ponder over their emotions is also so overused it's stupid. Witness pages 42-44:
'Her father's letters were, by necessity, short. She felt a wary relief after she read more of them. We were careful, she thought. (Ok, point established.) We didn't say exactly what we were doing. (Yes, we got that.) Except for the first letter I sent, in which I had to make it plain what I wanted Father to do. (CLEARLY!?) Hopefully he burned that one. She sighed and shook her head. No matter how careful she and her father had been, the gods must know what they had done. They could see into the minds of all. Yet they still chose me, she thought. Of all the high priestesses, they chose someone who had broken the law and used a Dreamweaver's services. (We GET it. My god. Cut forward a page). I was so sure this would stand against me being chosen (are you STILL talking about this?!) I wanted so much to be part of the White....but the gods still chose me. What am I to make of that? (One paragraph later) Why would the gods do that? (Gahhh! Kill me!) (Okay screw this I'm not typing out the next 1.5 pages, suffice it to say IT IS ALL THE SAME)
*inhales deeply* yes calm
This is a shame, as it is character interaction and internal dialogue which is a key strength of the Black Magician trilogy. Worse, this (lack of) style here washes away much of the benefit gained by Canavan's core strength - her ability to create a large cast of relatable, distinct and likeable characters.
While the occasional stab is made at scenery description, in general very little world building has gone here, and we are left with a minimal sense of place and atmosphere. An entire continent! With no sense of place! Battle scenes are reduced to one liners such as 'She blasted him with magic'. Ooooh! Description stretches to things like 'There was a mountain range.' K thanks Trudi das cool I feel totally swept away. Not. And no, stupid animal names do not a substitute make.
We are supposed to blindly accept that the Pentadrians are evil, with literally zero realistic motive provided for their invasion. Mainly, because they wear black, carry pentacles (bwahahaha!) they are CLEARLY evil, right? Why are they evil, you ask? Because they just ARE BWAHAHAHAHA!!! Now stop asking stupid questions.
Also, did anyone else find it weird that the only explicitly PoC characters (apart from the creepy fish people) were the evil ones? Seriously? What is this, Tolkien?
Similarly, the Circlian gods are never developed past a blind acceptance that they are all mighty and all-benevolent, despite occasional hints that this might not be the case. The White are also happy skippy all benevolent all frolicking servant/king/priests, with no apparent flaws in their governance or self interest to make them more believable. They don't even really seem to dislike Dreamweaver's all that much! Apart from the 'truly regrettable' death of Mirar (Agh the terrible guilt upon Juran's unstained conscience! It's so hard being flawless!) everything they do is...utopian. Which is totes ridic.
There is no suggestion that (as I suspect-potential spoiler) the Pentadrians are exactly like the Circlians, and the war is all an evil ploy of two evil groups of gods. Further development on these any of these fronts would have made for a far stronger novel. Instead it is super one sided and crap.
What is left is a one road plot with no depth. And as a result in part of this lack of plot development, Canavan is forced to fish around for alternative, random, one-shot narrative voices (OTHER than her main characters!) in order to give the story depth. While it isn't unusual for writers to have one major POV and then a series of random minor one-shot POVs (Horowitz springs to mind), it IS weird to have a cast of major POVs (five if you count Auraya, Leiard, Danjin and Tryss) and STILL need more! This is messy, and a sign of poor writing in my opinion. If your main characters cannot give the story enough colour, you have a problem.
Now as for the actual characters. I wanted to like Auraya, but her chapters are let down by the overly affected exposition I've already discussed. She's also extremely bland, as other reviewed have mentioned. Same for Leiard. Though I got their attraction, it turned into love out of nowhere. And then became totally meh. Romantic love scenes are censored, but perfunctory brothel sex is not. Why!? Damnit WHY!!?!
Let's be real: Tryss' entire story line is extraneous to the plot, not to mention the most boring and childlike of the lot. It should have been cut, or a better way found to incorporate the Siyee. I never really got over the line 'He meant to fly on, but found himself circling, fascinated by the small dark hollow between her breasts.' YE GODS. The only POV I truly enjoyed was Emerahl's adventures in the brothel, though ironically this is also pointless up until the final chapter. Now, a novel about HER I would like to read. But with more sex.
All in all, a massive let down. Come on Canavan, we know you can do better than this.