TL;DR: Wade’s book is worth the purchase, but there are some severe problems that the reader should watch out for.
I want to be kind to this book. I really do. Part of me thinks this book has greatness in it.
Wade presents so much useful information about the subject of religion and evolution. For instance, he shows compelling biological reasons that religion might evolve in the human species, offers a brief history of the three major monotheisms in the context of this discussion, and offers insight into why people might become suicide bombers from a biological perspective. His work strikes the right tone with this information, as it doesn’t feel judgmental; he cautiously states that some of the theories he summarizes in the book are still being reviewed by scholars and even goes so far as to offer competing theories for the sake of completeness. I know few writers who would be willing to do this, and I admire him for his thoroughness.
To put this in the fairest terms I know: If you want a good summary of religion, and if you want that summary from a biological background, then this is your book. Wade is a great source of information.
And now here is the list of ‘However’s.
However, the writing is atrocious in some spots. However, the project is perhaps too ambitious and overwhelms the books. However, Wade does what some academics might call ‘reaching’ in his work. Let me address these one by one.
First, let’s talk about the writing. Early in the book I almost gave up because I felt I wouldn’t be able to stand it for the full length. His writes what I call machine-gun sentences. They are simple constructs. They work like this. They get the job done. He doesn’t always do this. It was enough to be apparent. I felt my brain going numb. It was bad. I didn’t like it. Get the point yet? In his defense he didn’t do this throughout the entire book, but it was especially noticeable in the early sections.
I noted two other issues too: Wade needs to work on how to present a topic sentence in a paragraph, and he needs to be careful of the Oxford comma. (If these issues make your eyes roll back in your head, skip to the line below.) In several places in the book, Wade leads into a paragraph with a sentence that throws the entire thing off. For instance, in one section he starts by discussing Taliban dancers, but then offers three more sentences that make broad claims about dancing and music in general:
“Even the Taliban, who banned most forms of music in Afghanistan, allowed men to sing a capella. Music and dancing give participants a vigorous sense of community. The shared emotions evoked by the rhythmic activity create feeling of exultation that bind the group to a common purpose. The origin of music has long been mysterious, but its social role, as a pillar of ritual, may have been the reason the natural selection has made sensitivity to music a universal property of the mind” (82).
From an organizational standpoint, it is unclear whether these sentences are 1) about Taliban dancers, or 2) broad statements that just happen to be in a paragraph with a sentence that has nothing to do with them. In either case, the lessons from a basic college writing class need to be applied better, as this lack of organization makes the book difficult to read in some spots.
As concerns the second issue, Wade does not use the Oxford comma; this makes some of his thoughts difficult to read because the items in the list of long, complicated strings. PLEASE NOTE: I do realize these are technical hang-ups that not everyone is interested in, but I noted from the flap that Wade is an editor. I would expect more.
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Now let’s move to the ambition of the book. The book can roughly be divided into three major sections. The first deals with the evolution of religion, the second with the aforementioned histories of the great monotheisms, and the last with some of the social, political, and other miscellaneous implications of the first and second section. Maybe this is a bold claim on my part, but I honestly feel the first and third sections should have been the main focus of this book and that the second could (and should) have been its own book. The topic on the cover seemed to indicate to me that the author was going to write about biology, religion, and social functions. The history portions were great (and well written—they kept me reading), but they felt a bit out of place in the general discussion. I do understand his project and why he would wish to include a thorough understanding of the monotheisms, but the general principles of his ideas as concerns these institutions would have served just as well.
Last, I must note Wade’s attempts to enter the discourse surrounding evolution, religion, and language are a mixed bag. He only sketches the ideas of some of the thinkers he uses (Pinker, Fitch, etc.) without offering enough information to truly dispel/engage with the ideas these things present. Again, the book needs more—it could have been much longer, and it feels like a sketch. I don’t know what the situation is behind the scenes here (maybe someone told him to do it this way; maybe he didn’t have more time; etc.), but the book suffers for it.
Okay, so to summarize: I would encourage potential readers to buy this book, though I would also note that they should be prepared for some significant hiccups along the way. Wade’s work shows a great deal of promise, but it cannot fully deliver on the promises that it sets forth on the cover. I really have strong, mixed feelings—I am disappointed, but I also admire much of what the author has done.