So I'm asking each of you to rethink your commitment to the Jedi. If you can't place the good of the order above all else and follow the direction chosen by your superiors, I'm asking you to leave.
A disappointing conclusion to what started out as an interesting Star Wars trilogy. Though not lacking in redeeming qualities, Dark Nest III: The Swarm War is too preoccupied with nonsensical developments and filler plots to bring the trilogy's many interesting concepts and storylines to a satisfying end, resulting in a diminished setting and more questions being raised than answered.
And yet it all started out so well. Following up on a novel characterized by plot-developmental inertia, The Swarm War's prologue makes good on its title's promise: The Chiss-Killik War has begun, and Jaina Solo is caught in the middle of a devastating desert skirmish, newly formed glass particles embellishing the smoke-engulfed front as both sides race toward a suspicious instrument found on the battlefield. This and Jaina's following subplot are where TSW shines the most. Denning simply excels at writing on-foot combat scenarios, with everything culminating in the Battle of Tenupe - a multiple chapter-long onslaught full of memorable setpieces, twists, and moments of emotion. There was no real emotional edge to individual Killiks (or rather, their nests) in the previous books, so naturally this one makes up for that by warming the reader up to Jaina's companions before mercilessly slaughtering one after another in a sequence so outrageous it kind of becomes morbidly hilarious. again. Troy Denning: truly the butcher of the EU. Still, I appreciate that Jaina's subplot made me further sympathize with the Killiks' plight.
On the topic of well-executed characters, Jacen Solo in this novel might be my favorite iteration of his in Dark Nest, albeit with some caveats. It's quite fascinating how Troy Denning handled the man after his sojourn: Previously, in book 1, he's a Mystery Man, someone who lacks the warmth of his NJO portrayal but still acts out of the pure good of his now esoterically-inclined heart; this is then twisted into book 2's darker, more morally dubious Jacen, finally more utilitarian than his peers. Swarm War, then, moves away from the mysterious back into the mundane with a distinctly different POV voice. This Jacen jokes, he worries, he's no longer an enigma but rather a young adult faced with impossible-to-navigate situations on multiple fronts. Jacen has become relatable again... at least for the most part. The "the gang watches Revenge of the Sith on DVD" plotline is still here, and it is more or less exclusively in here that Jacen Solo awkwardly becomes morally dubious again. Whereas Mara and Luke are left aghast at Anakin's manipulative behavior towards Padmé, Jacen only sees someone who wishes to provide for his family. The parallels are clear, as are Denning's intentions behind these scenes, but personally, I still find all of this a bit iffy. There has got to be a better way of showing that Jacen has changed than literally having him react to scenes from Revenge of the Sith.
These two diverging sides of the character also put into question if Denning truly did plan out his Legacy of the Force story in 2005 already. Jacen's questionable acts in TUQ made me think as much, but then you get to TSW, where he is no longer emotionally detached and his weird Vader apologia serves to facilitate Luke's break with the Force philosophy he has been allegedly following instead of any development on Jacen's end. In that regard Jacen's conflict with Luke is closer to the rift between the other Jedi Masters than the aberration it would become in the next series, really.
If Jacen is one of the highlights to be found in here, then Luke is the defining low point. There have been bad portrayals of the character before, but no previous work has ever made him quite as unlikable, both in terms of his actions and disposition. So, the Jedi Masters are at conflict, and Luke has had enough of that and proclaims himself the Jedi Grand Master, the definitive Jedi patriarch. Apparently, the Jedi following their own conscious was a well-intentioned, but ultimately wrong approach, as arguing over how to approach a situation is less important than approaching it in the first place, and as the Masters are clearly obviously totally inept buffoons when left to their own devices, they need not just a strong leading figure at all times, but are also required to commit to being Jedi fully, or leave the Order altogether (and yes, this was initially meant as a diversion but the results are the same either way). This is a dubious development on multiple levels. Making Luke Skywalker of all people into a staunch authoritarian, the Jedi Cal Omas, is so self-evidently antithetical to the character that I do not even have to comment on it. What makes it worse, however, is how it reflects on the other Jedi: Remember how Jaina Solo, Corran Horn, and Tyria Sarkin used to have a career in the "regular" New Republic/Galactic Alliance military? Remember how Tenel Ka was monarch of an entire star cluster, how Danni Quee was a scientific researcher who turned to humanitarian work after the War? You can kiss all of that goodbye, as anyone who does not resemble a generic Prequel-era Jedi is no longer allowed to exist in this universe (heck, Danni is brought back out of obscurity quite literally just so Luke can accept her resignation in what is her undignified very last appearance in the EU). To top things off, this entire development does not even make sense within this trilogy itself - one of Luke's main points of contention with pseudo-Vergere's teachings, after all, was how they led the Jedi to cynical utilitarianism, but now he's fully embracing that both in theory and practice, while still chastising Jacen about the same? What?
I could almost accept all of this given the narrative potential it brings to the table, but what makes Luke's portrayal irrevocably terrible is the way he interacts with other people. Luke is just perpetually angry, demanding, and demeaning when he deals with Jacen especially. There is just so much pent up anger and contempt towards his nephew in Luke here. You know something is wrong when the character who sympathizes with Vader is ten times more relatable than your supposed hero protagonist, agonizing over the ramifications of his Force vision while the one who is supposedly in the right chews out anyone who even dares to have a dissenting view on things. This is just pathetic. Luke was given such a satisfying, logical, and easy opportunity for retirement with his "Frodo wound" in The Unifying Force, but no, the show must go on, and obviously Star Wars novels only sell when they have movie characters on the cover.
That is one of my two fundamental problems with The Swarm War. The other has to do with its function as a story finale, as most plot threads are glossed over, wasted, or even fully ignored. This novel squanders its every good idea. I think this is most obvious in its three central villains, two of which do not make a physical appearance until the last 50 pages of this 360 page novel. They are quite literally confined to two chapters, Alema and Raynar in one each and Lomi in two, and that's on top of the previous book having already felt like the set-up for this one to go fully in-depth with them. Alema appears, gets killed (but obviously not really) in an admittedly well-written but fight with Leia that is nevertheless devoid of character development or the like - thus once more squandering the genuine potential her character had. Raynar almost works, Luke initially defeating him by way of logic rather than brute force, but then Lomi's addition to the scene has him devolve into another physical threat that is dealt with and then promptly written out of the story. That is quite literally it; Raynar is knocked out, taken in by Luke and then the novel ends. The Joiner King's final chapter gave a better resolution to the character. Finally, Lomi Plo is the worst of them all, given more page time to work with than the other two but still failing to establish anything in terms of personality or motivation. Other characters that lack resolutions include Jaina and Zekk, who are apparently still mentally linked the way Joiners are; Mara Jade, whose plot dealing with her past is completely dropped (it was supposed to be a red herring, sure, but faded into the background nonetheless); Nek Bwua'tu, who was established as the main military guy in the previous book only to be quietly dropped in favor of a returning Pellaeon, who is inexplicably the GA military's Supreme Commander now; Cal Omas, who appears in all of one chapter; Jag Fel, who, after this trilogy systematically decimated his entire life, has now been declared MIA; and finally the Chiss and Killiks as a whole, the former ending this trilogy as undistinguished a political force as they entered it, while the latter's fate as a sentient civilization has been dealt with in the background. If The Unifying Force is the best ending a Star Wars story ever got, tying up (almost) every loose end in a most satisfactory way, then The Swarm War is the polar opposite, despite having only three and not NINETEEN whole novels to deal with. It's not like this is masterful sequel-baiting a la Star by Star, either, at least not wholly so. Obviously Alema and Jag are deliberately taken out of the story here to be reintroduced at a later point, but I cannot fathom making the same argument for the Killiks or Lomi Plo. This is just a lousy resolution to what could have been a great story. But hey, at least the Squibs are back. Because that's what this story was in dire need of. What a waste.
This is not an irredeemably bad book; I gave it two out of five stars, after all. Some of Denning's virtues as a writer still shine through, and there are slivers of depth here and there. But I cannot deny just how disappointingly disastrous of a finale this is, a direction that damaged the post-Return of the Jedi setting more than it expanded it. Troy Denning's weakest Star Wars work, as of 2005.