After reading the sequel to the fifth child, I felt HIGHLY insulted. If you've read The Fifth Child, please, skip this. I never tell anyone not to read a book. In fact, this is the first book review I have ever written on a public forum. I really could not keep me mouth shut about it. Seriously, do not pick this up.
When I read the fifth child, I was struck by Lessing's prose, character development, and social commentary (Although most folks feel that it was commentary focused on people who are "not like us", I felt it was showing us the conflict a mother has when she has a monster for a son).
In the Fifth Child, Ben came into the world screaming, fighting, hissing, spitting. He killed animals and tried to kill members of his family. He was thought of as some sort of alien being whom no one understood. There was something clearly wrong with Ben.
Now, in Ben, in the World, we see an 18 year old with feelings and tears. He responds to small acts of kindness with a kind of wonder and gratefulness. What? No, that's not right. Wait...no.
At the end of the original, Ben was 15, the de facto leader of a gang of other kids in his high school, and barely spoke. Each member of his extremely large family tried to be kind and offer love, but it seemed that emotions were alien to him and he had neither need nor desire.
Lessing pissed me off when she deviated from his characterization. There was something NOT right with that child. He was an anomaly. He hurt people. He had no kind feelings toward anyone (except a band of misfits who treated him like shit most of the time, and that's only maybe--we don't know what the hell this kid was thinking). To give him this human quality ruined everything for me. Lessing has a mastery of prose. She writes so fluidly, beautifully. It's wasted on this garbage book. I can't believe Ben is human. Say what you will, but I don't think he was supposed to be. If he was, then Lessing made a fool out of me. The kid was born a month early fully grown--kicking his mother so hard that you could actually see her stomach moving when he was one or two months in vitro. Sorry, not human. Monster.
This was worse than "The Son of Rosemary".
Also, the abundance of cliches and overdone plots (hooker(s) with a heart of gold, if only someone could understand me, etc.) was a major turn off. Save your time. Ugh.