Up front disclosure. I read most of James Patterson’s books and have for several years. Some might ask why and that’s another whole discussion best saved for another day. I have really enjoyed some, liked some, and didn’t really care for others. On a personal level, I must admit that his Women’s Murder Club series – focused on the professional and personal lives of four women in San Francisco - has been very hit and miss over the last couple of years with more weak outings than not.
This year’s outing - “The 23rd Midnight”- has three primary plots – Lindsey’s police team’s hunt for a serial killer, Cindy’s troubled book tour, and Yuki’s courtroom case involving a battered wife. This time it’s Claire’s turn to play more of a supporting role.
It starts off with a new serial killer that refers to himself as Blackout, committing a horrendous double murder.
At the same time, Cindy Thomas, news reporter and author is attending the first event on her tour promoting her new book on the life of serial killer, Evan Burke, who is serving life in prison. Her fellow members of the Women’s Murder Club – Lindsay, Yuki, and Claire – show up to support her and indulge in a celebratory dinner afterwards.
However, their dinner is interrupted when Detectives, Lindsay Boxer and Rich Conklin, are called away to a murder scene where an attendee who argued with Cindy’s at her signing has been found murdered. Then the next morning Lindsay receives a video from the killer, calling himself Blackout, and wanting to share his deadly work with her, as well as his admiration for his mentor, Evan Burke.
While Lindsay, Conklin, Brady and the rest of the detective team race to find the identity of this new killer, Yuki is also facing her own courtroom challenge in defending a who has been brutally beaten by her husband who left her to die. To make matters worse, Cindy is trying to continue her book tour visits to popular independent bookstores, but it seems that Blackout is following her and targeting those in attendance.
Then the worst possible horror, Cindy goes missing…
For those who are avid readers and fans of this series, I have some good news. Not great, but still, good.
In my opinion, this series, written by Patterson and Paetro since the fifth book has been really hit and miss over the last five to eight outings. At times, it has lost steam, including superficial and ludicrous serial killer villains, repetitive and formulaic storylines that have grown old, and stagnant growth in most of the primary characters.
The good news is that is a pretty good book. Not a great one, but a solid improvement over several of the previous half dozen, building on the multi-book arc involving Evan Burke.
This book stayed consistently busy, moving back and forth between the multiple storylines, and keeping a strong pacing the whole way and avoiding the choppiness and messiness of recent outings. There were focused storylines that developed from beginning to end. The Blackout serial killer plot was predictable, but the delivery wasn’t bad, and the way things were wrapped up in the end provided a nice sense of closure that sometimes is found lacking in this series. I loved the final scene with Lindsay, Brady, and Burke. Well done. Even the court case that Yuki was defending started off in what seemed like a one-sided expected outcome, but Patterson and Paetro found some ways to add in some worry and concern before the ending resolution.
What I also liked was seeing some character conflict and development built into the storylines. I want to see these characters learn and grow from their challenges. Examples include Lindsay dealing with her stress as a police officer and working through them with her counselor. Also, Cindy has been playing a key role in authoring Burke’s life story and going on a publicity tour. Spending so much time n his evil world has forced her to pay a deep personal price that she may not be able to come back from. There are a couple of other developments, but to avoid any spoilers, I will keep them to myself.
What I would add though, is that I think it would be good to give Yuki a different kind of storyline. It seems that every plotline she’s involved with is prosecuting the case of her career. It’s time to develop her in other ways that are outside of the courtroom. Show that she’s more well-rounded and has other aspects to be explored.
Truth be told, I had low expectations when starting this novel, but I came away pleasantly surprised and pleased with it. Again, it’s not great, but good. Patterson and Paetro played around enough with their established formula and structure to provide a better casual read.
Overall, my rating is a solid 3 out of 5 stars. I might even be convinced to go as high as 3.5 stars, but Goodreads doesn’t do half stars in its scoring.
More importantly, I hope that next year’s outing – a title with “24’ in it – builds on their momentum and doesn’t take a step back again… Let’s be hopeful…