So I think just about any premise involving a young boy going to a school filled with magic and the extraordinary would set up an automatic comparison to Harry Potter, just as any obscure title would be compared to its genre's classic. Knowing that, I did not going in here drawing comparisons; I'm rating this book totally as its own work, giving it the respect it deserves. That being said, maybe I read this with the wrong perspective in mind because I found several issues with it.
First off, Max McDaniels is an interesting protagonist. I like that his friends have skills superior to his own, like Conner with his charisma or David with his intelligence. I liked that he tries to do the right thing, but there are several instances that allude to his past that really add complexity. Particular his anger was really interesting to read. I also loved his dad, and the characters I named earlier. However, there were so many characters in and a lot of them are disembodied because it's hard to keep track. Part of me wondered why so many names were thrown in there other than to world build, but I couldn't remember a characteristic, or a physical trait, or really anything. This pertained to students and teachers alike, I only remembered the main ones because the rest of it felt rushed, especially when at random intervals they would appear, do something minor, then disappear. Was that necessary? Did it drive the plot forward? It felt more like, "Oh hey it's be cool to have someone appear right now and say this, here's Faculty Member X. Okay I said my two cents, bye!" And... I don't know I felt like the story could be tightened.
I really enjoyed the beginning of the book because the pacing allowed me to get to know Max and his father, and set up for the story. When Neff slows down specific moments to relay information while still moving the story forward, he really does it well! But the pacing gets really wonky further in the book because so many concepts are being introduced! We're here now here's classes, here's 20 characters, now an obscure sport, now an awesome match and a dance in the same day, oh there's also pets... Did the author know he would have a series? Would there have been a better way to further flesh out some concepts because they are pretty interesting! But I have a vague idea of some because so much is thrown at you, which is really saying something in a 400 page book. And because so much is thrown at you, things are glossed over and you're expected to believe that "hey, this is now a thing." Hey, this regular human was assaulted, now they can just live at Rowan Academy when it was such a big deal to keep normal people in the dark about Old Magic and this world.
... Was it necessary for Max to have a pet? It didn't move the story forward and already there was so much happening, was that really something to focus on? I know I'm harping on the little things but there was attention placed on this when the idea could've been scrapped and more attention could've been paid to something else.
Also, the amount of information that is relayed didn't feel earned, if this makes sense. Half the time the faculty withheld information for... I'm not sure, safety? To not create a huge stir? Which then left the children in the dark, and after people were injured then information could be relayed? And instances where I'd really like to read more about, are summarized and we're being moved forward without creating a connection at all. And when it's convenient Max runs out of magical reserves, but in other instances he's all drained? I wish Max and crew went out and did things, but instead things are told to them, things happen to them, and the story doesn't feel character driven. I did like that David went out of his way to do research, but for how renounced the faculty is, they relied on the knowledge of a first year to get them through. If they were trying to keep secrets/appearances, shouldn't they have found his sources and then banned him from continuing?
I don't know. I love magic, the extraordinary and overall fantasy, but this story felt like a hot mess. I gave it two stars because I was invested enough in a good few characters which is why I saw it through to the end. Maybe these concepts are more elaborated on in the later books, or hey, maybe the issues I have aren't huge in the eyes of a younger audience. Either way, I might borrow the sequel from a friend but it's not on my priority list.