1.75⭐️
When historian and Boer goat shifter Adiel stops to get gas on his way to Fox Hollow, he doesn’t expect to catch the flirtatious eye of an attractive twink, for said twink to play a game of road tag with him, or for his thoughts to be almost completely obsessed by him. When hot twink happens to be the photographer hired to work with him to chronicle Fox Hollow's supernatural sites and people and seems to share his attraction, Adiel is alternately elated and dismayed. It’s risky enough hooking up with coworker, hooking up with a coworker as gorgeous and free-spirited as his cheating ex screams disaster. Joel, a Tennessee fainting goat, feels the same way except his baggage comes from his ex always accusing him of cheating. Each man’s goat, however, shares no such hesitation and recognizes their mate. When their insecurities lead them into danger, the only thing that can save them is learning to trust themselves and their fated love.
This story just didn’t work for me. I have a complicated relationship with Brice’s writing; I admire her enthusiasm for the genre and usually the worldbuilding and lore in her stories. Where I tend to struggle is execution. Sometimes, the humor falls flat; or the writing is a bit sloppy in its repeated beats or choppy pacing. But the most prevalent culprit is that, as imaginative as her work can be, she has a tendency to use “the big misunderstanding” in the most obvious, unimaginative ways. And I hate to say it, but her worst tendencies are present here. “Gruff” is a short novel that doesn’t use its time wisely; e.g. there’s almost as much time spent on Adiel “chubbing up” thinking about the jailbait-looking stranger and Joel’s perspective of their tag game as there is with them on their only date. The story relies so heavily on them being fated mates, they’ve fallen in love after a few interactions.
To be fair, everything in this story is pretty insta: insta ride-or-die friendship, insta-oh these things are definitely what you’ll be facing, etc., while too much time is given to try-hard banter, repetitive inner monologues and unnecessary conversations. Moreover, Joel and Adiel are too similar in their insecurities (which is the bulk of their personality development)—both are out of touch with their beast, want to settle down but feel inadequate, had a long term relationship that created the perfectly opposite baggage to explode in their faces for the BM trope, etc., making new information feel redundant. Imo, the other Fox Hollow entries are much more engaging and entertaining.