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Dare to Refuse Such a Man
“He is the kind of man, indeed, to whom I should never dare refuse anything which he condescended to ask.”– Mr Bennet, Pride and Prejudice Volume III, Chapter 17
IT HAD NEVER OCCURRED TO FITZWILLIAM DARCY that once he had chosen a bride, her father might dare to refuse his consent. When his dearest, loveliest Elizabeth is taken from him with only a curt note of explanation, he determines that, far from accepting her father’s rejection of his suit, he must instead find her again and make his case. After all, a woman worthy of being pleased is also worth fighting for.
SEVERAL MONTHS SHY OF HER MAJORITY, it is not so simple a thing to defy Mr Bennet’s will, but Elizabeth, for the sake of her future happiness, must try. With various allies in her corner, as well as foes standing against her, Elizabeth’s courage must rise against all attempts at intimidation. Even from her own, much beloved father.
IT HAD NEVER OCCURRED TO FITZWILLIAM DARCY that once he had chosen a bride, her father might dare to refuse his consent. When his dearest, loveliest Elizabeth is taken from him with only a curt note of explanation, he determines that, far from accepting her father’s rejection of his suit, he must instead find her again and make his case. After all, a woman worthy of being pleased is also worth fighting for.
SEVERAL MONTHS SHY OF HER MAJORITY, it is not so simple a thing to defy Mr Bennet’s will, but Elizabeth, for the sake of her future happiness, must try. With various allies in her corner, as well as foes standing against her, Elizabeth’s courage must rise against all attempts at intimidation. Even from her own, much beloved father.
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First published April 26, 2021
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Mary Smythe
18 books53 followersMary Smythe is a homemaker living in South Carolina with a rather useless BA in English collecting dust in a closet somewhere. She discovered the works of Jane Austen as a teenager, thanks to the 1995 BBC Pride and Prejudice miniseries featuring Colin Firth and Jennifer Ehle, and has since gone on to read everything written by Ms Austen at least once yearly, always wishing that there were more. She has been writing since 2001, but only discovered Jane Austen Fanfiction in the summer of 2018.
Dare to Refuse Such a Man is the first full-length novel she has ever completed, though she can boast a few shorter works in her library, as well.
Dare to Refuse Such a Man is the first full-length novel she has ever completed, though she can boast a few shorter works in her library, as well.
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September 14, 2025
Grow old with me! The best is yet to be. ~ Robert Browning
“Dare to Refuse Such a Man” opens with some sizzle at the Meryton Assembly. Can love be this easy?
Then, we look back a few months to a pleasant journey to Lambton where Elizabeth Bennet has accompanied her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. During the visit, Elizabeth happens upon a tall gentleman riding nearby as she enjoys the view of a small brook. Words are exchanged, later regretted, and then withdrawn. Love seems inevitable. Soon, Fitzwilliam Darcy is prepared to propose marriage. Acceptance is certain.
The trouble begins when Mr. Bennet arrives unexpectedly in Lambton and whisks Elizabeth back to Longbourn with little explanation for his actions. Mr. Bennet is a man on a mission and that mission does not include a wedding to a stranger in Derbyshire.
Thou art thy mother's glass, and she in thee
Calls back the lovely April of her prime...
~ William Shakespeare
Mrs. Bennet is rarely my favorite character in a JAFF story but in this story — ah, you just gotta love Mamma Bennet!
Quote from the book: Elizabeth was relieved when the carriage pulled up in front of her family home even if her heart and mind remained in Derbyshire … Elizabeth prepared to stand — only to be stopped by her father.
“Before we go in, I must insist you not tell anyone about your flirtation over the summer.”
Does anyone believe Mrs. Bennet will allow her husband to refuse consent to a marriage that will bring a daughter a wealthy husband? Not likely!
Mrs. Bennet may be a woman of mean understanding but she does understand one thing — the power of public opinion. And she knows exactly how to influence public opinion. Mrs. Bennet and Mrs. Phillips begin a campaign in Meryton that has immediate benefits. I especially enjoyed Mrs. Phillips’s contribution. And when Mrs. Bennet’s child is threatened? Mamma Tiger shows up! Loved her!
I read this story as it posted WIP at a fanfiction site. Here it is, polished for publication. I am happy to see a new author advance from the online pages. Congratulations, Mrs. Smythe!
An ounce of mother is worth a pound of clergy. ~ Spanish proverb
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
“Dare to Refuse Such a Man” opens with some sizzle at the Meryton Assembly. Can love be this easy?
Then, we look back a few months to a pleasant journey to Lambton where Elizabeth Bennet has accompanied her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. During the visit, Elizabeth happens upon a tall gentleman riding nearby as she enjoys the view of a small brook. Words are exchanged, later regretted, and then withdrawn. Love seems inevitable. Soon, Fitzwilliam Darcy is prepared to propose marriage. Acceptance is certain.
The trouble begins when Mr. Bennet arrives unexpectedly in Lambton and whisks Elizabeth back to Longbourn with little explanation for his actions. Mr. Bennet is a man on a mission and that mission does not include a wedding to a stranger in Derbyshire.
Thou art thy mother's glass, and she in thee
Calls back the lovely April of her prime...
~ William Shakespeare
Mrs. Bennet is rarely my favorite character in a JAFF story but in this story — ah, you just gotta love Mamma Bennet!
Quote from the book: Elizabeth was relieved when the carriage pulled up in front of her family home even if her heart and mind remained in Derbyshire … Elizabeth prepared to stand — only to be stopped by her father.
“Before we go in, I must insist you not tell anyone about your flirtation over the summer.”
Does anyone believe Mrs. Bennet will allow her husband to refuse consent to a marriage that will bring a daughter a wealthy husband? Not likely!
Mrs. Bennet may be a woman of mean understanding but she does understand one thing — the power of public opinion. And she knows exactly how to influence public opinion. Mrs. Bennet and Mrs. Phillips begin a campaign in Meryton that has immediate benefits. I especially enjoyed Mrs. Phillips’s contribution. And when Mrs. Bennet’s child is threatened? Mamma Tiger shows up! Loved her!
I read this story as it posted WIP at a fanfiction site. Here it is, polished for publication. I am happy to see a new author advance from the online pages. Congratulations, Mrs. Smythe!
An ounce of mother is worth a pound of clergy. ~ Spanish proverb
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 21, 2021
“If you don’t want something, refuse if! Refusal is your true way to the stars! Man rises by refusing with courage the things he finds inconvenient!” –Mehmet Murat ildan
Rating: clean with a bit of romantic heat: Mature-reader [PG->13] due to physical violence against a woman [non-sexual]: trigger warning: 32-chapters + epilogue: Source: I received an ARC [3-17-21] via Booksprout and the views and opinions expressed are my own. This review may contain *** spoilers *** ICNPID [I-could-not-put-it-down] and read it in one day. Yeah, I really liked it.
“Oh, my dear, love isn’t always the coup de foudre—the lightning strike [love at first sight]. Sometimes it happens quietly, so quietly you may not even notice.” –Julia Justiss, Convenient Proposal to the Lady
I love it when ODC [our dear couple] first encounter each other away from that blasted assembly and its horrid insult. Not that Darcy isn’t capable of insulting Elizabeth anywhere. It’s just refreshing to have him do it in a new milieu. Bless his heart. He just can’t help himself. The moth was soon drawn to the flame. This new twist was just adorable, romantic, swoon-worthy, and heated. They were quickly in love and making plans for the future. And, like any good love story, tragedy struck, and something horrid came between them with the intent to keep them apart, forever.
The title of the book sort of gives it away. My modern mind has a hard time with the dictatorial father demanding obedience from his underage daughter. She was his to do with as he pleased and it pleased him to separate her from Darcy, period. He was lord and master of his family and he didn’t have to explain or answer to anyone. When his plan was eventually revealed, Elizabeth was devastated. I couldn’t believe it. He had created this fantasy scenario in his mind and just knew how it would be. Oh-My-Goodness! What a foolish man. Things NEVER turn out as you envision them. He would soon have a rude awakening that would shake him to his core.
Like many others following this author on the various blog posts, I was able to read the prologue that grabs you by the throat. It was so swoon-worthy I nearly melted in my shoes. Darcy was at the assembly with Bingley and had finally found Lizzy after months of being apart. There was no insult this time. He created a scene Meryton had never experienced before and would not forget anytime soon. Wow! Talk about your fan points. I nearly broke my fan. Whew! Help me. That was well done. Speaking of insult, let’s just say Mr. Bennet was certainly insulting when he yanked Lizzy away from Darcy’s embrace with those scathing words, “she is promised to another.” WTH [what-the-heck] did Mr. Bennet mean by that?
“Fathers should make you feel safe.” –Karen Cushman, The Loud Silence of Francine Green
*** spoiler*** This is not a good father Bennet story. I need to relax my clenched jaw before I break a tooth. GRRR! I have NEVER disliked Mr. Bennet as I did in this story. He was horrid, unreasonable, dictatorial, refusing to see reason, logic, or hear sound advice. He knew what he knew [in his own mind] and it was law. Bennet wanted what every JAFF author writes about him. He wanted his solitude, his books, his port, and Elizabeth running Longbourn estate for him. Once Bennet realized they would not have a son, he began training Elizabeth at an early age on how to run Longbourn and she had been doing so ever since. Back in the day, there had been a conflict between Bennet and the elder Collins. Bennet quickly saw a solution to the entail and once that was satisfied, he relaxed and forgot about it. That is, until, Gardiner sent him a letter informing him of a young man from the north wanting to court his Elizabeth. All you-know-what hit the fan.
“There’s no bitch on earth like a mother frightened for her kids.” –Stephen King
OMG! Mrs. Bennet… who are you? Never underestimate the power of a determined woman. I think this was the most fun I’ve read of Mrs. Bennet and her power base. I had to laugh. She was hilarious at one point. I had no idea she was this good. Man, Mr. Bennet had a new respect for his wife and I just shook my head. You silly man, it could have been so different if you had just gotten off your duff and really looked at her. I’m off the subject. She had a part to play in the protection of her daughter and ‘I pity the fool’ that would get between her and her child. OMG! Who was this woman?
Georgiana’s story was almost a non-event. Yeah, she and Mrs. Younge did their thing and it happened off the page. Darcy was forced to quickly leave Meryton and that left Elizabeth vulnerable. In every tragic story, there is usually a white knight that comes to the rescue of the damsel in distress. I’ve never seen a white knight scene like this before. OMG! That was amazing. I am trying so hard to not spoil this reveal. What a scene.
The happy-ever-after was well worth the time and effort it took to achieve it. Not all relationships would survive the tornado of events. Lady Catherine would do her thing, have her say or know why. Collins just couldn’t help himself; he would follow the dictates of his patroness in all matters regardless of whether they were sound or not. Georgiana would learn a hard lesson and Wickham would not bother the Bennett family or any family for that matter. I highly recommend this for those who love conflict followed by an amazing happy-ever-after.
Rating: clean with a bit of romantic heat: Mature-reader [PG->13] due to physical violence against a woman [non-sexual]: trigger warning: 32-chapters + epilogue: Source: I received an ARC [3-17-21] via Booksprout and the views and opinions expressed are my own. This review may contain *** spoilers *** ICNPID [I-could-not-put-it-down] and read it in one day. Yeah, I really liked it.
“Oh, my dear, love isn’t always the coup de foudre—the lightning strike [love at first sight]. Sometimes it happens quietly, so quietly you may not even notice.” –Julia Justiss, Convenient Proposal to the Lady
I love it when ODC [our dear couple] first encounter each other away from that blasted assembly and its horrid insult. Not that Darcy isn’t capable of insulting Elizabeth anywhere. It’s just refreshing to have him do it in a new milieu. Bless his heart. He just can’t help himself. The moth was soon drawn to the flame. This new twist was just adorable, romantic, swoon-worthy, and heated. They were quickly in love and making plans for the future. And, like any good love story, tragedy struck, and something horrid came between them with the intent to keep them apart, forever.
The title of the book sort of gives it away. My modern mind has a hard time with the dictatorial father demanding obedience from his underage daughter. She was his to do with as he pleased and it pleased him to separate her from Darcy, period. He was lord and master of his family and he didn’t have to explain or answer to anyone. When his plan was eventually revealed, Elizabeth was devastated. I couldn’t believe it. He had created this fantasy scenario in his mind and just knew how it would be. Oh-My-Goodness! What a foolish man. Things NEVER turn out as you envision them. He would soon have a rude awakening that would shake him to his core.
Like many others following this author on the various blog posts, I was able to read the prologue that grabs you by the throat. It was so swoon-worthy I nearly melted in my shoes. Darcy was at the assembly with Bingley and had finally found Lizzy after months of being apart. There was no insult this time. He created a scene Meryton had never experienced before and would not forget anytime soon. Wow! Talk about your fan points. I nearly broke my fan. Whew! Help me. That was well done. Speaking of insult, let’s just say Mr. Bennet was certainly insulting when he yanked Lizzy away from Darcy’s embrace with those scathing words, “she is promised to another.” WTH [what-the-heck] did Mr. Bennet mean by that?
“Fathers should make you feel safe.” –Karen Cushman, The Loud Silence of Francine Green
*** spoiler*** This is not a good father Bennet story. I need to relax my clenched jaw before I break a tooth. GRRR! I have NEVER disliked Mr. Bennet as I did in this story. He was horrid, unreasonable, dictatorial, refusing to see reason, logic, or hear sound advice. He knew what he knew [in his own mind] and it was law. Bennet wanted what every JAFF author writes about him. He wanted his solitude, his books, his port, and Elizabeth running Longbourn estate for him. Once Bennet realized they would not have a son, he began training Elizabeth at an early age on how to run Longbourn and she had been doing so ever since. Back in the day, there had been a conflict between Bennet and the elder Collins. Bennet quickly saw a solution to the entail and once that was satisfied, he relaxed and forgot about it. That is, until, Gardiner sent him a letter informing him of a young man from the north wanting to court his Elizabeth. All you-know-what hit the fan.
“There’s no bitch on earth like a mother frightened for her kids.” –Stephen King
OMG! Mrs. Bennet… who are you? Never underestimate the power of a determined woman. I think this was the most fun I’ve read of Mrs. Bennet and her power base. I had to laugh. She was hilarious at one point. I had no idea she was this good. Man, Mr. Bennet had a new respect for his wife and I just shook my head. You silly man, it could have been so different if you had just gotten off your duff and really looked at her. I’m off the subject. She had a part to play in the protection of her daughter and ‘I pity the fool’ that would get between her and her child. OMG! Who was this woman?
Georgiana’s story was almost a non-event. Yeah, she and Mrs. Younge did their thing and it happened off the page. Darcy was forced to quickly leave Meryton and that left Elizabeth vulnerable. In every tragic story, there is usually a white knight that comes to the rescue of the damsel in distress. I’ve never seen a white knight scene like this before. OMG! That was amazing. I am trying so hard to not spoil this reveal. What a scene.
The happy-ever-after was well worth the time and effort it took to achieve it. Not all relationships would survive the tornado of events. Lady Catherine would do her thing, have her say or know why. Collins just couldn’t help himself; he would follow the dictates of his patroness in all matters regardless of whether they were sound or not. Georgiana would learn a hard lesson and Wickham would not bother the Bennett family or any family for that matter. I highly recommend this for those who love conflict followed by an amazing happy-ever-after.
June 28, 2021
I received an ARC of this story with a request for a review. This review is all my own words and opinions.
I loved this story. The author's talent at using Jane Austen's words in different situations and from different mouths delighted me. I also appreciated the rewriting of both Mr. Bennet's character/behavior and that of Mr. Collins. They are the main villains in this variation although both Wickham and Lady Catherine show up.
There are significant twists to events which I don't want to reveal but as the blurb relates Darcy's offer of marriage is refused, and not by Elizabeth. Both Darcy and Elizabeth show a lot of trust in each other when forces attempt to divide them permanently. Enter here Mrs. Bennet and her sister, Mrs. Philips. Their standings as sources of news/gossip come to offer a counter-force to what Bennet has declared. Then, also, Mrs. Philips has some say with her husband as in legal matters he can speed up or drag out paperwork. I adored how they painted a picture of Collins so as to make all ignore his claims, his "rantings". The Bennet sisters join on the side of their mother and Elizabeth.
And you will admire that Mr. Darcy does not take the easy way to gain Elizabeth as a wife by eloping to Gretna Green although it is suggested more than once. However, he points out the effect that would have on not only their reputations but also on her family and his sister.
The prologue has a startling effect and immediately drew me in. What Darcy does there as he uses that "reputation consideration"...propriety of the times...in his attempt to force Mr. Bennet's hand in a different way is not the actions of the man from canon.
Then there is a scene nearing the climax when Bennet realizes that his view of how Elizabeth's upbringing will make up for all his indolence smacks him over the head as he hears the opinion of the man Bennet would have for her husband and then sees that man's repulsive actions. This is quite startling! Wives have a place and it is not to offer any opinion or advice as to how an estate is run.
I highly recommend this story to all JAFF lovers.
I loved this story. The author's talent at using Jane Austen's words in different situations and from different mouths delighted me. I also appreciated the rewriting of both Mr. Bennet's character/behavior and that of Mr. Collins. They are the main villains in this variation although both Wickham and Lady Catherine show up.
There are significant twists to events which I don't want to reveal but as the blurb relates Darcy's offer of marriage is refused, and not by Elizabeth. Both Darcy and Elizabeth show a lot of trust in each other when forces attempt to divide them permanently. Enter here Mrs. Bennet and her sister, Mrs. Philips. Their standings as sources of news/gossip come to offer a counter-force to what Bennet has declared. Then, also, Mrs. Philips has some say with her husband as in legal matters he can speed up or drag out paperwork. I adored how they painted a picture of Collins so as to make all ignore his claims, his "rantings". The Bennet sisters join on the side of their mother and Elizabeth.
And you will admire that Mr. Darcy does not take the easy way to gain Elizabeth as a wife by eloping to Gretna Green although it is suggested more than once. However, he points out the effect that would have on not only their reputations but also on her family and his sister.
The prologue has a startling effect and immediately drew me in. What Darcy does there as he uses that "reputation consideration"...propriety of the times...in his attempt to force Mr. Bennet's hand in a different way is not the actions of the man from canon.
Then there is a scene nearing the climax when Bennet realizes that his view of how Elizabeth's upbringing will make up for all his indolence smacks him over the head as he hears the opinion of the man Bennet would have for her husband and then sees that man's repulsive actions. This is quite startling! Wives have a place and it is not to offer any opinion or advice as to how an estate is run.
I highly recommend this story to all JAFF lovers.
November 1, 2021
So I felt like I was slumming, in a literary kind of way, when reading this JAFF (Jane Austen fanfiction). One of my GR friends *waves to Shifra* loves JAFF and gave this one 5 stars, and I was all, hey, it's on Kindle Unlimited so why not?
In this variant of the Pride and Prejudice story, Elizabeth meets up with Darcy much earlier, when she's staying with her aunt and uncle Gardiner up in the area of Pemberley for several weeks one summer. Their initial meetings lead to some tension between them, but without Elizabeth's family in the way, the two of them come to an understanding much quicker and with far less drama. That is, until Elizabeth's father catches wind of her romance.
Mr Bennet doesn't even know who Darcy is, other than a rich guy who is - thinks Mr Bennet - certainly untrustworthy with his favorite daughter's affections. Plus, Mr Bennet has his own plans for Elizabeth's future. So he immediately takes steps to squelch their romance. Of course, it's not that easy.
I've read my share of JAFF (usually to my regret). This was a particularly odd version because Mr Bennet and Mr Collins have SERIOUSLY different characters than they do in the original, to their detriment. (I know, it's hard to believe Mr Collins' character could be worse, but Mary Smythe found a way.) It's necessary to make the plot here work, but I could never really get on board with this one. On the plus side, Mrs Bennet got a character upgrade from the original.
The writing style is okay, if rather uneven, and the book had a few funny and interesting scenes. It was weirdly fun seeing various famous lines from P&P pop up in the narrative, except they often came out of the mouths of different characters. So if you're a fan of P&P fanfic (and not picky about character makeovers or historical accuracy), you … could do worse?
In this variant of the Pride and Prejudice story, Elizabeth meets up with Darcy much earlier, when she's staying with her aunt and uncle Gardiner up in the area of Pemberley for several weeks one summer. Their initial meetings lead to some tension between them, but without Elizabeth's family in the way, the two of them come to an understanding much quicker and with far less drama. That is, until Elizabeth's father catches wind of her romance.
Mr Bennet doesn't even know who Darcy is, other than a rich guy who is - thinks Mr Bennet - certainly untrustworthy with his favorite daughter's affections. Plus, Mr Bennet has his own plans for Elizabeth's future. So he immediately takes steps to squelch their romance. Of course, it's not that easy.
I've read my share of JAFF (usually to my regret). This was a particularly odd version because Mr Bennet and Mr Collins have SERIOUSLY different characters than they do in the original, to their detriment. (I know, it's hard to believe Mr Collins' character could be worse, but Mary Smythe found a way.) It's necessary to make the plot here work, but I could never really get on board with this one. On the plus side, Mrs Bennet got a character upgrade from the original.
The writing style is okay, if rather uneven, and the book had a few funny and interesting scenes. It was weirdly fun seeing various famous lines from P&P pop up in the narrative, except they often came out of the mouths of different characters. So if you're a fan of P&P fanfic (and not picky about character makeovers or historical accuracy), you … could do worse?
September 6, 2021
A Very Good Debut!
4.5* rounded up to 5*
At the outset I have to say that the opening Prologue of this book, which describes the events at the Meryton Assembly is grab-your-immediate-attention memorable. I won’t spoil that for you and I hope others won’t either. It’s soooo good! So begins the first of many diverting and entertaining twists in this very non-canon Pride and Prejudice variation. Beyond the Prologue, the story actually begins in Derbyshire where Elizabeth and Darcy first meet. As he is about to propose, Mr. Bennet comes to retrieve his daughter and, for his own indolent, selfish, and misguided reasoning, takes her back to Longbourn with a broken heart. He will not consent to their marriage. What to do? Darcy follows his love back to Hertfordshire, of course!
With a little help from their friends, and despite others trying to circumvent them, Darcy and Elizabeth are determined to continue their courtship and eventually marry—even if they must wait until Elizabeth becomes of age. Mr. Bennet continually refuses to consent and give his blessing.
Other entertaining twists from canon include the meeting with the officers on the walk to Meryton, and Elizabeth’s improved relationship with her mother, as the two of them, along with her sisters and Aunt Philips work together to thwart Mr. Bennet’s ultimate purpose. The scene between Lizzy and Mrs. Bennet upon the latter’s discovery of her broken-hearted daughter was very moving and brought me to tears.
I have determinedly attempted to not give spoilers in this review and write it so as to provide teasers only, and entice others to read this very good debut by Mary Smythe. I can say Mr. Bennet will baffle and frustrate you, Mrs. Bennet and Aunt Philips will endear you to them, and you’ll be happy with Elizabeth’s younger sisters. I loved this Darcy and Elizabeth. The way Ms. Smythe took pieces and situations from canon and wove them around different characters I thought was especially well done.
While it didn’t take away from this excellent story, I did find the book just a tad heavy on the narrative side, and a couple of sections seemed repetitive. As a lover of dialogue, I found there were instances where a bit more conversation instead of narration could have conveyed the story in a more expressive manner. That said, the narration in and of itself is good and well-written.
I most definitely loved this sometimes moving and emotional, engagingly entertaining and often humorous read. I do highly recommend it, and it’s one I will read again. I will also look forward to more from this author.
I received an ARC from the publisher via Booksprout, and am freely providing my honest review.
September 6, 2021 - Audiobook
Fabulous book, read by an outstanding narrator, Stevie Zimmerman. She’s absolutely the best for JAFF books.
4.5* rounded up to 5*
At the outset I have to say that the opening Prologue of this book, which describes the events at the Meryton Assembly is grab-your-immediate-attention memorable. I won’t spoil that for you and I hope others won’t either. It’s soooo good! So begins the first of many diverting and entertaining twists in this very non-canon Pride and Prejudice variation. Beyond the Prologue, the story actually begins in Derbyshire where Elizabeth and Darcy first meet. As he is about to propose, Mr. Bennet comes to retrieve his daughter and, for his own indolent, selfish, and misguided reasoning, takes her back to Longbourn with a broken heart. He will not consent to their marriage. What to do? Darcy follows his love back to Hertfordshire, of course!
With a little help from their friends, and despite others trying to circumvent them, Darcy and Elizabeth are determined to continue their courtship and eventually marry—even if they must wait until Elizabeth becomes of age. Mr. Bennet continually refuses to consent and give his blessing.
Other entertaining twists from canon include the meeting with the officers on the walk to Meryton, and Elizabeth’s improved relationship with her mother, as the two of them, along with her sisters and Aunt Philips work together to thwart Mr. Bennet’s ultimate purpose. The scene between Lizzy and Mrs. Bennet upon the latter’s discovery of her broken-hearted daughter was very moving and brought me to tears.
I have determinedly attempted to not give spoilers in this review and write it so as to provide teasers only, and entice others to read this very good debut by Mary Smythe. I can say Mr. Bennet will baffle and frustrate you, Mrs. Bennet and Aunt Philips will endear you to them, and you’ll be happy with Elizabeth’s younger sisters. I loved this Darcy and Elizabeth. The way Ms. Smythe took pieces and situations from canon and wove them around different characters I thought was especially well done.
While it didn’t take away from this excellent story, I did find the book just a tad heavy on the narrative side, and a couple of sections seemed repetitive. As a lover of dialogue, I found there were instances where a bit more conversation instead of narration could have conveyed the story in a more expressive manner. That said, the narration in and of itself is good and well-written.
I most definitely loved this sometimes moving and emotional, engagingly entertaining and often humorous read. I do highly recommend it, and it’s one I will read again. I will also look forward to more from this author.
I received an ARC from the publisher via Booksprout, and am freely providing my honest review.
September 6, 2021 - Audiobook
Fabulous book, read by an outstanding narrator, Stevie Zimmerman. She’s absolutely the best for JAFF books.
August 11, 2024
2022-Listened on audiobook- Absolutely fantastic story and performance!!!
Don't mess with Mama Bennet - or is that mama bear?
Biggest kudos to this first time author. She did a fantastic job right out the gate!
There are few JAFFs in which Mrs. Bennet isn't a brash embarrassment. In this story, not only she shows strength and protectiveness for her daughters, but enlists Mrs. Philips in to her plan of action. It was a pleasure to see this different side of the relationship between E and her mama. In a way the supporting cast have a larger roll to play and more dynamic, than ODC after they have already fallen in love.
In regards to ODC, it was also a pleasure not seeing them have the typical misunderstandings, etc, but just meet, and grow from there. In fact this E seemed far less cynical than usual and perhaps a little more highly strung. Darcy, has conviction from the get go. No waffling, just goes to get his girl.
It was difficult reading this Mr. Bennet. It all gets explained and makes sense. But a man with the decisions he made cannot claim to love anyone other than himself. Because it was all done for his best comfort and ease.
Definitely a reread!!
Don't mess with Mama Bennet - or is that mama bear?
Biggest kudos to this first time author. She did a fantastic job right out the gate!
There are few JAFFs in which Mrs. Bennet isn't a brash embarrassment. In this story, not only she shows strength and protectiveness for her daughters, but enlists Mrs. Philips in to her plan of action. It was a pleasure to see this different side of the relationship between E and her mama. In a way the supporting cast have a larger roll to play and more dynamic, than ODC after they have already fallen in love.
In regards to ODC, it was also a pleasure not seeing them have the typical misunderstandings, etc, but just meet, and grow from there. In fact this E seemed far less cynical than usual and perhaps a little more highly strung. Darcy, has conviction from the get go. No waffling, just goes to get his girl.
It was difficult reading this Mr. Bennet. It all gets explained and makes sense. But a man with the decisions he made cannot claim to love anyone other than himself. Because it was all done for his best comfort and ease.
Definitely a reread!!
May 2, 2021
Moving & Gripping. This is the JAFF complete package; it's got a compelling conflict, humor, heart, wit & dare I say- a little razzel dazzel.
Amongst the best JAFFs I've read.
This yarn is one you do not need reviews promising it gets good to motivate you to keep reading- pick it up & 5 pages in tops & you are enthralled.
Synopsis:
The summer before P&P events Lizzy is in Lambton with the Gardiners. Mrs G's dad was the local rector and they have gone to lure him back to London and into retirement. Mr James Morton is the eligible new curate set to replace, and of course he takes an interest in our girl Lizzy, which is not reciprocated.
Lizzy is off cavorting in the woods- as is the wont of saucy nymphs- when a strapping gentlemen approaches her on horse back and- spoiler alert- it's Darcy. They have this meet cute and let me tell you their every interaction is utterly charming and on character.
Darcy is pretty much a goner from the first he meets Lizzy and he does put an admirable fight with his feelings, but he soon enough overcomes his scruples.
Lizzy and Darcy still have a slight learning curve, but soon they start communicating, & anytime that variable is present misunderstanding is suffocated, & ODC understanding is inevitable; however we get an obstinate Mr Bennet!
The nile is not just a river in Egypt- tis Mr B's state of mind- he can't handle when his best laid out plan goes awry and clings to it even as it rots in his doomed grasp.
He will turn away Darcy's suit no matter how advantageous and will refuse to be reasoned with or moved.
Darcy is admirable & persistent and has no plan of surrendering Lizzy.
Darcy to Mr B:
What follows is a 'civil war' in the Bennet household- sides will be taken, schemes will be hatched, generals will rise- most surprisingly Mrs B proves to be a great asset & strategic mind, and would surely make Napoleon shake in his boots; that is if Napoleon ever stood in the way of one of her daughters and an advantageous marriage. That's her trigger.
That Which Sparked Joy:
♡'Favorite Shakespeare work' guessing game.
♡Georgiana playing matchmaker between her friend & brother.
♡Prose delightful, the writing overall just beautiful, evocative, & quotable. The characterizations & idiosyncrasies were on fleek.
♡Romantic!! Every ODC interaction enthralled me, i.e.
♡The way author cleverly reworks OG scenes and quotes is inspired. She manages to keep the prejudice & refusal but reallocates the role to Mr B, allowing our ODC to be star crossed lovers. I am a sucker for ODC vs World conflict.
♡Amazing civil war conflict of the Bennets- great conflict overall. I especially adored that Mrs B had an outlet for her talents and virtues to be put on display, she was awesome.
That Which Courted Disdain:
I haven't a qualm- much less two to rub together.
The Brass Tacks:
➭Wow! I loved every bit of this, and I am blown away this is authors 1st work! I can’t wait to see what else Ms. Smythe has in store for JAFF.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Amongst the best JAFFs I've read.
This yarn is one you do not need reviews promising it gets good to motivate you to keep reading- pick it up & 5 pages in tops & you are enthralled.
Synopsis:
The summer before P&P events Lizzy is in Lambton with the Gardiners. Mrs G's dad was the local rector and they have gone to lure him back to London and into retirement. Mr James Morton is the eligible new curate set to replace, and of course he takes an interest in our girl Lizzy, which is not reciprocated.
Lizzy is off cavorting in the woods- as is the wont of saucy nymphs- when a strapping gentlemen approaches her on horse back and- spoiler alert- it's Darcy. They have this meet cute and let me tell you their every interaction is utterly charming and on character.
Darcy is pretty much a goner from the first he meets Lizzy and he does put an admirable fight with his feelings, but he soon enough overcomes his scruples.
Lizzy and Darcy still have a slight learning curve, but soon they start communicating, & anytime that variable is present misunderstanding is suffocated, & ODC understanding is inevitable; however we get an obstinate Mr Bennet!
The nile is not just a river in Egypt- tis Mr B's state of mind- he can't handle when his best laid out plan goes awry and clings to it even as it rots in his doomed grasp.
He will turn away Darcy's suit no matter how advantageous and will refuse to be reasoned with or moved.
Darcy is admirable & persistent and has no plan of surrendering Lizzy.
Darcy to Mr B:
What follows is a 'civil war' in the Bennet household- sides will be taken, schemes will be hatched, generals will rise- most surprisingly Mrs B proves to be a great asset & strategic mind, and would surely make Napoleon shake in his boots; that is if Napoleon ever stood in the way of one of her daughters and an advantageous marriage. That's her trigger.
That Which Sparked Joy:
♡'Favorite Shakespeare work' guessing game.
♡Georgiana playing matchmaker between her friend & brother.
♡Prose delightful, the writing overall just beautiful, evocative, & quotable. The characterizations & idiosyncrasies were on fleek.
♡Romantic!! Every ODC interaction enthralled me, i.e.
“I have a certain partiality for animals as well as first-hand knowledge of the consequences of curiosity going awry.”
“Indeed?”
“Oh, yes,” Miss Bennet proudly admitted, straightening up into a prim posture which belied her playful mien. “It may surprise you to learn this, but I am a great deal of trouble.”
♡The way author cleverly reworks OG scenes and quotes is inspired. She manages to keep the prejudice & refusal but reallocates the role to Mr B, allowing our ODC to be star crossed lovers. I am a sucker for ODC vs World conflict.
♡Amazing civil war conflict of the Bennets- great conflict overall. I especially adored that Mrs B had an outlet for her talents and virtues to be put on display, she was awesome.
That Which Courted Disdain:
I haven't a qualm- much less two to rub together.
The Brass Tacks:
➭Wow! I loved every bit of this, and I am blown away this is authors 1st work! I can’t wait to see what else Ms. Smythe has in store for JAFF.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
April 6, 2021
5+ stars!
This book is pitch-perfect in so many ways. There's still plenty of pride and prejudice, but in this book, it's not Elizabeth or Darcy who are guilty - it's Mr. Bennet.
The plot is way off-canon but clever and credible. What do you think happens when Elizabeth and Darcy first meet in surroundings more comfortable to Darcy than the Meryton Assembly and with no other Bennets around to expose how dysfunctional Elizabeth's family is? Instead, he meets only the Gardiners who, despite being in trade, are genteel and well-mannered. Darcy and Elizabeth have various opportunities to get to know each other when she and her aunt and uncle have an extended stay with Mr. Burns, Mrs. Gardiner's elderly father. His home is the Kympton parsonage, as he's held the living there for years, and now it's time for him to retire.
The timeline is somewhat altered, as Darcy decides Mr. Burns's successor will be Mr. Morton, Kympton's curate. (No Ramsgate.) Mr. Morton has a romantic interest in Miss Bennet, and the Gardiners are encouraging the match. Once Georgiana meets Elizabeth, the two immediately warm to each other, and their friendship helps push Darcy and Elizabeth together.
Just when Darcy's about to pop the question, Mr. Bennet turns up unexpectedly, having finally gotten around to reading his correspondence telling him about the interest this rich gentleman is taking in his Lizzy. Unlike canon, this Mr. Bennet DOES "dare to refuse such a man."
What's ingenious is that Mr. Bennet's character isn't completely out of synch with canon. Marrying Mrs. Bennet for love was a disappointing mistake he doesn't want his daughter to repeat. And his indolence has led him to make a convenient agreement (never revealed to anyone else in his family) that Elizabeth will inherit Longbourn by marrying his heir and thereby save her mother and sisters from the hedgerows. Even without meeting Mr. Collins, Mr. Bennet is certain that his clever Lizzy will be able to manipulate her husband. She's actually been more the master at Longbourn than her father for years. Knowing how much Elizabeth loves Longbourn, its tenants, and the surrounding neighborhood, he believes this is a wonderful gift.
Mrs. Bennet is similarly consistent with Jane Austen's creation. Who is Mr. Collins compared to the rich Mr. Darcy with his ten thousand a year? Who cares about the Longbourn entail when her second oldest daughter can marry a man with the means to easily support them all? It's fun to read as she springs into action to support Elizabeth in defiance of her husband, and her methods are perfectly in character.
Mr. Collins is probably altered the most. However, even his heinous actions here are directed by his beloved patroness, Lady Catherine de Bourgh. He would never question her wisdom.
Ms. Smythe writes beautifully, and the book is edited to perfection. Iconic quotes and scenes appear, but usually with twists that change things up nicely. The story moves at a brisk pace, starting in Derbyshire (Pemberley) and then moving to Hertfordshire (Longbourn and Netherfield). It takes the page time necessary to turn up the heat on the romance between Elizabeth and Darcy and to build up the angst when they're apart. The tension reaches its peak with Darcy having to race away to London and deal with one emergency while another is brewing at Longbourn.
Excellent debut novel! Highly recommend. Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This book is pitch-perfect in so many ways. There's still plenty of pride and prejudice, but in this book, it's not Elizabeth or Darcy who are guilty - it's Mr. Bennet.
The plot is way off-canon but clever and credible. What do you think happens when Elizabeth and Darcy first meet in surroundings more comfortable to Darcy than the Meryton Assembly and with no other Bennets around to expose how dysfunctional Elizabeth's family is? Instead, he meets only the Gardiners who, despite being in trade, are genteel and well-mannered. Darcy and Elizabeth have various opportunities to get to know each other when she and her aunt and uncle have an extended stay with Mr. Burns, Mrs. Gardiner's elderly father. His home is the Kympton parsonage, as he's held the living there for years, and now it's time for him to retire.
The timeline is somewhat altered, as Darcy decides Mr. Burns's successor will be Mr. Morton, Kympton's curate. (No Ramsgate.) Mr. Morton has a romantic interest in Miss Bennet, and the Gardiners are encouraging the match. Once Georgiana meets Elizabeth, the two immediately warm to each other, and their friendship helps push Darcy and Elizabeth together.
Just when Darcy's about to pop the question, Mr. Bennet turns up unexpectedly, having finally gotten around to reading his correspondence telling him about the interest this rich gentleman is taking in his Lizzy. Unlike canon, this Mr. Bennet DOES "dare to refuse such a man."
What's ingenious is that Mr. Bennet's character isn't completely out of synch with canon. Marrying Mrs. Bennet for love was a disappointing mistake he doesn't want his daughter to repeat. And his indolence has led him to make a convenient agreement (never revealed to anyone else in his family) that Elizabeth will inherit Longbourn by marrying his heir and thereby save her mother and sisters from the hedgerows. Even without meeting Mr. Collins, Mr. Bennet is certain that his clever Lizzy will be able to manipulate her husband. She's actually been more the master at Longbourn than her father for years. Knowing how much Elizabeth loves Longbourn, its tenants, and the surrounding neighborhood, he believes this is a wonderful gift.
Mrs. Bennet is similarly consistent with Jane Austen's creation. Who is Mr. Collins compared to the rich Mr. Darcy with his ten thousand a year? Who cares about the Longbourn entail when her second oldest daughter can marry a man with the means to easily support them all? It's fun to read as she springs into action to support Elizabeth in defiance of her husband, and her methods are perfectly in character.
Mr. Collins is probably altered the most. However, even his heinous actions here are directed by his beloved patroness, Lady Catherine de Bourgh. He would never question her wisdom.
Ms. Smythe writes beautifully, and the book is edited to perfection. Iconic quotes and scenes appear, but usually with twists that change things up nicely. The story moves at a brisk pace, starting in Derbyshire (Pemberley) and then moving to Hertfordshire (Longbourn and Netherfield). It takes the page time necessary to turn up the heat on the romance between Elizabeth and Darcy and to build up the angst when they're apart. The tension reaches its peak with Darcy having to race away to London and deal with one emergency while another is brewing at Longbourn.
Excellent debut novel! Highly recommend. Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 29, 2021
This is a well thought out variation!
"I suppose you must be the rich man who trifled with my Lizzy over the summer?" (quote from the book)
You will never be so shocked at the Meryton Assembly as you will be in this variation! What has led Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet to this point? Just let me say, it is unique, beautifully composed and completely tantalizing!
"The music washed over him like the rapids of a trickling brook, cool and soothing to his aching head, which swirled with befuddled thoughts." (quote from the book)
Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet first meet in Derbyshire where Elizabeth is helping Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner settle her father's affairs at the Lambton parsonage. As always, he never makes a good first impression but Elizabeth is a bit more willing to give him leeway as she does hear much good about him. I loved each of their unexpected meetings and enjoyed watching their relationship grow. And I was just as upset as Elizabeth when she was ordered to return home to Longbourn, with no explanation why, without saying good-bye to Darcy.
"Almost at the same moment, her feet propelled her back towards the parlour door, inching away from the place where her hopes lay bleeding upon the floor..." (quote from the book)
The battle lines are soon drawn at Longbourn and sides are chosen. Who will win and who will lose? How is scandal averted? There are definite twists and turns in this plot that propel the story forward. I came to appreciate Mrs. Bennet in a whole new light and Mr. Darcy was a man on a mission...a mission of love.
"Many people underestimated Mrs. Bennet, believing her incapable of circumventing her husband's will." (quote from the book)
This is a wonderful debut novel that ticked all the boxes for me. I loved how the tension in the story was nicely balanced with Elizabeth and Darcy's love for each other. I even enjoyed the cross-over of some characters from another Austen novel. And when Lady Catherine has her share in the conversation, I loved the following description:
"Lady Catherine straightened in her seat and she puffed up like an angry hen. The sharp beaky quality of her nose added to this image..." (quote from the book)
I highly recommend this novel! Brava, Ms. Smythe!
April 30, 2021
I LOVED LOVED 98% of this book but the last 2% made me cross.
This is an awesome story. It is quite unique and compelling. It features a Bastard Bennet© - Mr Bennet. It gives Mrs. Bennet agency and a brain and has a darling Darcy.
This is an awesome story. It is quite unique and compelling. It features a Bastard Bennet© - Mr Bennet. It gives Mrs. Bennet agency and a brain and has a darling Darcy.
October 13, 2024
Seriously heartfelt longing and angst
“He is the kind of man, indeed, to whom I should never dare refuse anything which he condescended to ask.”– Mr Bennet, Pride and Prejudice Volume III, Chapter 17
It had never occurred to Fitzwilliam Darcy that once he had chosen a bride, her father might dare to refuse his consent. When his dearest, loveliest Elizabeth is taken from him with only a curt note of explanation, he determines that, far from accepting her father’s rejection of his suit, he must instead find her again and make his case. After all, a woman worthy of being pleased is also worth fighting for.
Several months shy of her majority, it is not so simple a thing to defy Mr Bennet’s will, but Elizabeth, for the sake of her future happiness, must try. With various allies in her corner, as well as foes standing against her, Elizabeth’s courage must rise against all attempts at intimidation. Even from her own, much beloved father.
This is a good read with significant angst. The characters are well drawn. Darcy is lovely - steadfast and devoted. Mr Bennet’s behaviour is petty and spiteful. So much so, that Elizabeth cannot believe she is supposed to be her father’s favourite daughter. Unsurprisingly, Mr Collins is dreadful.
Mrs Bennet is a revelation! She gets to show how smart (and devious) she can be. It is good to see such a lovely relationship between Elizabeth and Mrs Bennet.
The ending is very satisfying and I thoroughly recommend this book to all readers of Jane Austen variations.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. All views expressed are my own.
“He is the kind of man, indeed, to whom I should never dare refuse anything which he condescended to ask.”– Mr Bennet, Pride and Prejudice Volume III, Chapter 17
It had never occurred to Fitzwilliam Darcy that once he had chosen a bride, her father might dare to refuse his consent. When his dearest, loveliest Elizabeth is taken from him with only a curt note of explanation, he determines that, far from accepting her father’s rejection of his suit, he must instead find her again and make his case. After all, a woman worthy of being pleased is also worth fighting for.
Several months shy of her majority, it is not so simple a thing to defy Mr Bennet’s will, but Elizabeth, for the sake of her future happiness, must try. With various allies in her corner, as well as foes standing against her, Elizabeth’s courage must rise against all attempts at intimidation. Even from her own, much beloved father.
This is a good read with significant angst. The characters are well drawn. Darcy is lovely - steadfast and devoted. Mr Bennet’s behaviour is petty and spiteful. So much so, that Elizabeth cannot believe she is supposed to be her father’s favourite daughter. Unsurprisingly, Mr Collins is dreadful.
Mrs Bennet is a revelation! She gets to show how smart (and devious) she can be. It is good to see such a lovely relationship between Elizabeth and Mrs Bennet.
The ending is very satisfying and I thoroughly recommend this book to all readers of Jane Austen variations.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. All views expressed are my own.
November 5, 2021
What If Mr. Bennet Obstinately Refused Mr. Darcy’s Suit?
Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Elizabeth Bennet and the Gardiners are brought to Lambton a year earlier and by chance become acquainted with Mr. Darcy and his sister (who did not go to Ramsgate on holiday). Both Mr. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s admiration and attraction for each other are quick to develop and blossom. And they are just on the brink of sealing their happiness with a formal engagement when Mr. Bennet intervenes and quite dramatically yanks Elizabeth’s away from Mr. Darcy vowing that he will never give permission for them to marry…
MY THOUGHTS:
MR. BENNET! How could you?! I was immediately intrigued by the idea of Mr. Bennet being placed in the role of antagonist. It is always diverting to see such a switch-up and to see Mr. Darcy have a different type of adversary. And I loved witnessing Elizabeth’s and Darcy’s journey to falling in love in Lambton in this story. Given the book description I thought this would take place beforehand or be very brief, but I was pleasantly surprised to see every bit of Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s courtship and interactions together. Which were incredibly swoony and sweet – filled with playful banter and earnest exchanges. Along with Pemberley’s lake and Mr. Darcy’s private book room, the stone bridge in Lambton is one of my new favorite fictional locations to visit.
I thoroughly enjoyed the unique and fleshed out portrayals of various characters in this variation. Mr. Bennet took his indolence and selfishness to new levels with such unreasonable obstinance and misguided views. I greatly appreciated how Ms. Smythe clearly conveyed his catalysts and convictions to the reader. Even though he was hateful, unfeeling, and an idiot – we can comprehend his thoughts and actions. Thus making the alterations to Mr. Bennet’s character both plausible and understandable.
Other characters I enjoyed were: Georgiana Darcy – with her sweet friendship towards Elizabeth and nosy interest in her brother’s affairs, Mr. Morton – I always love when Mr. Darcy has some competition, Mr. Darcy – for his patience, persistence, and fierce protection of Elizabeth, and the Gardiners – because they are wonderfully supportive and sane. But the character who I think may deserve MVP recognition in this variation is none other than Mrs. Bennet! I don’t want to spoil all the great developments that happen with her character, but suffice to say she proves herself to be very savvy, sly, and a steadfast champion for her children. I absolutely adored her (and Mrs. Phillips!) What clever cats!
My only quibble would maybe be about Georgiana’s and Mrs. Younge storyline, which felt a little uneven or like something was missing. This was a very minor storyline though and didn’t deter my enjoyment.
With credible deviations and refreshingly new obstacles Mary Smythe delivers a most praiseworthy debut novel filled with determination, duty, and deep devotion. I loved Ms. Smythe’s nuanced style and thoughtful character developments and I am all anticipation to see what she writes next!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Elizabeth Bennet and the Gardiners are brought to Lambton a year earlier and by chance become acquainted with Mr. Darcy and his sister (who did not go to Ramsgate on holiday). Both Mr. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s admiration and attraction for each other are quick to develop and blossom. And they are just on the brink of sealing their happiness with a formal engagement when Mr. Bennet intervenes and quite dramatically yanks Elizabeth’s away from Mr. Darcy vowing that he will never give permission for them to marry…
MY THOUGHTS:
MR. BENNET! How could you?! I was immediately intrigued by the idea of Mr. Bennet being placed in the role of antagonist. It is always diverting to see such a switch-up and to see Mr. Darcy have a different type of adversary. And I loved witnessing Elizabeth’s and Darcy’s journey to falling in love in Lambton in this story. Given the book description I thought this would take place beforehand or be very brief, but I was pleasantly surprised to see every bit of Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s courtship and interactions together. Which were incredibly swoony and sweet – filled with playful banter and earnest exchanges. Along with Pemberley’s lake and Mr. Darcy’s private book room, the stone bridge in Lambton is one of my new favorite fictional locations to visit.
I thoroughly enjoyed the unique and fleshed out portrayals of various characters in this variation. Mr. Bennet took his indolence and selfishness to new levels with such unreasonable obstinance and misguided views. I greatly appreciated how Ms. Smythe clearly conveyed his catalysts and convictions to the reader. Even though he was hateful, unfeeling, and an idiot – we can comprehend his thoughts and actions. Thus making the alterations to Mr. Bennet’s character both plausible and understandable.
Other characters I enjoyed were: Georgiana Darcy – with her sweet friendship towards Elizabeth and nosy interest in her brother’s affairs, Mr. Morton – I always love when Mr. Darcy has some competition, Mr. Darcy – for his patience, persistence, and fierce protection of Elizabeth, and the Gardiners – because they are wonderfully supportive and sane. But the character who I think may deserve MVP recognition in this variation is none other than Mrs. Bennet! I don’t want to spoil all the great developments that happen with her character, but suffice to say she proves herself to be very savvy, sly, and a steadfast champion for her children. I absolutely adored her (and Mrs. Phillips!) What clever cats!
My only quibble would maybe be about Georgiana’s and Mrs. Younge storyline, which felt a little uneven or like something was missing. This was a very minor storyline though and didn’t deter my enjoyment.
With credible deviations and refreshingly new obstacles Mary Smythe delivers a most praiseworthy debut novel filled with determination, duty, and deep devotion. I loved Ms. Smythe’s nuanced style and thoughtful character developments and I am all anticipation to see what she writes next!
Austenesque Reviews
October 9, 2023
What an amazing debut for this author. I'm wishing Mary Smythe all the best success, best luck, and a persistent Muse in order to encourage her future as an author. I highly recommend this one.
This was un-put-downable. In reading the many JAFF books I've read over the years, I've rarely hated Mr Bennet quite this much. Murderously so. I've also rarely loved Mrs Bennet so much! Mr Bennet blindly hung on to his plan even after he could obviously see what an imbecile Collins was, he still believed his own plan would work. You can guess what his plan is. It took something egregiously shocking before Mr Bennet woke up to the fact that he'd made a mistake. But by then the damage was done as far as his relationship with Lizzy was concerned. His humbling was a family disaster with repercussions that would last the rest of his life. If only Mr Bennet had put forth the effort he went to to enforce his choice upon Elizabeth and denying Darcy repeatedly, into his own estate and its finances they all would've been in a far far better place. Instead his effort was all to secure his own laziness.
The hatefulness which Mr Bennet employed to discourage Elizabeth from believing in Darcy's suit was on such a wretched scale that I kept thinking he, Bennet, had a personal history with Darcy's family and therefore was on a vendetta against him. It was that bad. And talk about crushing someone's opinion of yourself. That person being your 'favorite' daughter. I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop.
To balance this train wreck of Mr Bennet's we have our Hero, Mr Darcy. His never giving up on his Elizabeth, his love and persistence gives us a much needed shot in the arm that keeps her (and us, too) thinking things will turn out right in the end.
I haven't said much about the plot because every other reviewer has already. In my opinion the writing was excellent and I'm looking forward to whatever Mary Smythe puts her pen to in the future.
This was un-put-downable. In reading the many JAFF books I've read over the years, I've rarely hated Mr Bennet quite this much. Murderously so. I've also rarely loved Mrs Bennet so much! Mr Bennet blindly hung on to his plan even after he could obviously see what an imbecile Collins was, he still believed his own plan would work. You can guess what his plan is. It took something egregiously shocking before Mr Bennet woke up to the fact that he'd made a mistake. But by then the damage was done as far as his relationship with Lizzy was concerned. His humbling was a family disaster with repercussions that would last the rest of his life. If only Mr Bennet had put forth the effort he went to to enforce his choice upon Elizabeth and denying Darcy repeatedly, into his own estate and its finances they all would've been in a far far better place. Instead his effort was all to secure his own laziness.
The hatefulness which Mr Bennet employed to discourage Elizabeth from believing in Darcy's suit was on such a wretched scale that I kept thinking he, Bennet, had a personal history with Darcy's family and therefore was on a vendetta against him. It was that bad. And talk about crushing someone's opinion of yourself. That person being your 'favorite' daughter. I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop.
To balance this train wreck of Mr Bennet's we have our Hero, Mr Darcy. His never giving up on his Elizabeth, his love and persistence gives us a much needed shot in the arm that keeps her (and us, too) thinking things will turn out right in the end.
I haven't said much about the plot because every other reviewer has already. In my opinion the writing was excellent and I'm looking forward to whatever Mary Smythe puts her pen to in the future.
April 27, 2021
Lizzy and Darcy wish to marry. Will their greatest foe stop them?
Lizzy’s greatest foe is her father.
Interesting what-if. 3.5 stars rounded to 4 stars because it’s the author’s first book. I had a hard time connecting to the story. The beginning is a prologue and it’s not obvious how it connects to the first chapter(s). Seemed hard to determine where the story was set, how the time line moved, etc. I didn’t become comfortable until chapter 5 or 6.
There is a section when Darcy leaves Lizzy for London for ok reasons but her situation at home was tense or worse and Darcy leaving her with so little regret didn’t ring true. But I guess the characters can’t hear the menacing background music like readers of the story can.
All in all an ok story. I will watch the author’s next book.
Lizzy’s greatest foe is her father.
Interesting what-if. 3.5 stars rounded to 4 stars because it’s the author’s first book. I had a hard time connecting to the story. The beginning is a prologue and it’s not obvious how it connects to the first chapter(s). Seemed hard to determine where the story was set, how the time line moved, etc. I didn’t become comfortable until chapter 5 or 6.
There is a section when Darcy leaves Lizzy for London for ok reasons but her situation at home was tense or worse and Darcy leaving her with so little regret didn’t ring true. But I guess the characters can’t hear the menacing background music like readers of the story can.
All in all an ok story. I will watch the author’s next book.
April 28, 2021
What if Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy had first met in Derbyshire, where he was comfortable amongst those he knew and she was not surrounded by her unfortunate relations? In Dare to Refuse Such a Man, their gradual, mutual admiration and devoted companionship are truly lovely. There are countless elements to love about this story. The prologue is a delicious tease of the tempest to come. Mrs. Bennet putting her scheming skills to good use is a wonder to behold, and there are some highly satisfying comeuppances. Several unexpected points of view provide enlightening perspectives not often found in Pride and Prejudice variations. I particularly adored the affectionate interactions between our dear couple that reflected their steadfast loyalty and abiding love for each other. This unputdownable, delightfully romantic tale had me laughing and sighing and even crying—quite an accomplishment!
I received a copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 10, 2021
I really enjoyed this book! It starts with Elizabeth meeting Darcy in Derbyshire while travelling with the Gardiners. Their first meeting is not very promising but soon they start to see more of each other and fall in love. Darcy is about to propose but Mr Bennet interferes and causes ODC so much pain. I suffered with them and felt like killing Mr Bennet many times during this story. He becomes this miserable and hurtful father who can't accept that what he's doing is wrong. His actions cause Elizabeth, Darcy and their family not only huge emotional pain, but also physical, when he brings a most despicable Mr Collins to his home and forces Elizabeth to endure his company. In the end, of course, love prevails and ODC have their happiness and Mr Bennet is left to regret his behavior for the rest of his life.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 24, 2022
Enjoyable
I quite enjoyed this story but really disliked Mr Bennett's petulant nature, his cruelty towards his declared favorite, his selfishness and his arrogance.
I quite enjoyed this story but really disliked Mr Bennett's petulant nature, his cruelty towards his declared favorite, his selfishness and his arrogance.
June 2, 2021
Between 4-4.5. This was a really great book and a pleasure to read! I have watched this book with growing interest as it has been garnering much praise since it’s recent release and I was not disappointed as I personally experienced it’s delightful offerings. I must admit that I was skeptical and almost alarmed in the beginning by the lack of propriety and the unbelievable behavior of some characters and right away started questioning the merits of a book where people were behaving so completely out of character. My misgivings were mostly placated, however, as the events leading up to this startling scene were revealed and maybe even somewhat justified.
I loved the romance between D&E and the page time that they were given. It was a nice change to see them united almost from the beginning and having them work through their troubles together instead of in opposition to each other through the majority of the story. Their relationship was wonderfully sweet, fun, full of devotion and just charming.
While Mr. Bennet was a piece of work, Mrs. Bennet was absolutely fabulous in this book! It was such a delightful surprise and so cleverly done. We got a chance to admire and love Mrs. B for just being Mrs. B. No personality transplant needed for her to wiggle her way into our hearts. I loved the depth the author gave her without having to remove her shortcomings or make her into something unrecognizable. It was especially wonderful because in a time in history when women really didn’t have many rights or even a lot of say in their own lives on a legal basis, it showed a resourcefulness that helped the ladies make the most of the power and influence that they did have and were thus able to capitalize on that power and affect the circumstances to their advantage in the ways that were available to them. After all, a timeless truth is that perception is often more important and always more popular that actual truth or fact!😂
In addition to the endearing Mrs. Bennet, I appreciated the whole female sect of the Bennet family, including Mrs. Phillips. Again, the author was incredibly brilliant as she was able to take the Bennet woman and present them in the best possible light while staying true to the characters Austen created. She didn’t need to make them perfect and flawless paragons for us to appreciate them. It was so touching how each of Elizabeth’s sisters rallied around her in their own individual ways when she experienced a difficult ordeal towards the end of the book. With as wonderful as the sisters were, Mrs. Bennet once again steals the show. I was cheering her on during this scene and wanted to step into the book to help her and stand beside her!
Overall, I highly recommend this book. It is very engaging and hard to put down. The characters were very well done and enjoyable with lots of depth, wit and personality!
I loved the romance between D&E and the page time that they were given. It was a nice change to see them united almost from the beginning and having them work through their troubles together instead of in opposition to each other through the majority of the story. Their relationship was wonderfully sweet, fun, full of devotion and just charming.
While Mr. Bennet was a piece of work, Mrs. Bennet was absolutely fabulous in this book! It was such a delightful surprise and so cleverly done. We got a chance to admire and love Mrs. B for just being Mrs. B. No personality transplant needed for her to wiggle her way into our hearts. I loved the depth the author gave her without having to remove her shortcomings or make her into something unrecognizable. It was especially wonderful because in a time in history when women really didn’t have many rights or even a lot of say in their own lives on a legal basis, it showed a resourcefulness that helped the ladies make the most of the power and influence that they did have and were thus able to capitalize on that power and affect the circumstances to their advantage in the ways that were available to them. After all, a timeless truth is that perception is often more important and always more popular that actual truth or fact!😂
In addition to the endearing Mrs. Bennet, I appreciated the whole female sect of the Bennet family, including Mrs. Phillips. Again, the author was incredibly brilliant as she was able to take the Bennet woman and present them in the best possible light while staying true to the characters Austen created. She didn’t need to make them perfect and flawless paragons for us to appreciate them. It was so touching how each of Elizabeth’s sisters rallied around her in their own individual ways when she experienced a difficult ordeal towards the end of the book. With as wonderful as the sisters were, Mrs. Bennet once again steals the show. I was cheering her on during this scene and wanted to step into the book to help her and stand beside her!
Overall, I highly recommend this book. It is very engaging and hard to put down. The characters were very well done and enjoyable with lots of depth, wit and personality!
May 28, 2023
My favorite part about this book is how Mrs. Bennet and her sister Mrs. Philips become Darcy’s allies when Mr. Bennet stubbornly refuses to grant him Elizabeth’s hand in marriage. This was a unique and well written story, but at almost 400 pages it was a bit too long.
September 13, 2022
Good Book
I loved the love story between Darcy and Lizzy. What was wrong with Mr Bennett and Mrs Bennett was awesome. Finally gossip was done for good. I liked the twist on the elopement and the words of the hunsford proposal!!
I loved the love story between Darcy and Lizzy. What was wrong with Mr Bennett and Mrs Bennett was awesome. Finally gossip was done for good. I liked the twist on the elopement and the words of the hunsford proposal!!
July 22, 2021
4,5 rounded up to 5
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Dare to Refuse Such a Man develops a very innovative and fun trope. What if Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy fall madly in love but Mr. Bennet refuses to accept Mr. Darcy’s proposal?
What if Mr. Bennet goes beyond his refusal, and does everything in his power to separate Elizabeth from Mr. Darcy? What if all he truly wants is for Elizabeth to marry Mr. Collins? What could be his motivations?
In Dare to Refuse Such a Man Mr. Darcy we will see a very different Mr. Bennet, one who is not Elizabeth’s support, but her antagonist. I found this very interesting, but I confess that what I loved the most was to see Mrs. Bennet taking up the role we usually see associated with him.
In this story Mrs Bennet becomes Elizabeth’s ally and reveals an intelligence many thought did not exist. We often see Mr. Bennet as a caring father who will do everything for Elizabeth, and with his support she feels safe from Mrs Bennet, who is usually the antagonist, but in this book it’s the other way around and I absolutely loved it. I was not expecting Mrs Bennet to be such a friend to Elizabeth and to help her so much. It was refreshing, interesting, and funny because Mrs Bennet is very smart in this book, but her intelligence is turned towards her goal, which in this case, is to have Elizabeth marrying Mr. Darcy.
The strategies Mrs. Bennet finds to help Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy are very funny and I was impressed with her ability to manipulate the entire Meryton society to her favour. This was definitely the highlight of the book for me.
I love angsty books, but I also love to read stories where Elizabeth and Darcy join forces against an external antagonist, which is exactly what happened in this book. They must find the strength in their love to persistently follow their dreams and never give up. I believe this will be very appealing to most readers, especially the ones who do not like angst in their novels.
There were a few details such as Wickham or Lady Catherine’s later appearances in the book which I could live without, and even if it was not a quibble, I would not have minded to have a smaller book without those secondary interferences at a time when our couple is already strongly attached to one another.
Summing up, Dare to Refuse Such a Man is a low angst novel where our dear couple must join forces to fight for their love. It is a sweet and uncomplicated novel that will appeal to most readers. I recommend it to those looking for a sweet romance with some humour in it.
Published at: https://frompemberleytomilton.wordpre...
Dare to Refuse Such a Man develops a very innovative and fun trope. What if Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy fall madly in love but Mr. Bennet refuses to accept Mr. Darcy’s proposal?
What if Mr. Bennet goes beyond his refusal, and does everything in his power to separate Elizabeth from Mr. Darcy? What if all he truly wants is for Elizabeth to marry Mr. Collins? What could be his motivations?
In Dare to Refuse Such a Man Mr. Darcy we will see a very different Mr. Bennet, one who is not Elizabeth’s support, but her antagonist. I found this very interesting, but I confess that what I loved the most was to see Mrs. Bennet taking up the role we usually see associated with him.
In this story Mrs Bennet becomes Elizabeth’s ally and reveals an intelligence many thought did not exist. We often see Mr. Bennet as a caring father who will do everything for Elizabeth, and with his support she feels safe from Mrs Bennet, who is usually the antagonist, but in this book it’s the other way around and I absolutely loved it. I was not expecting Mrs Bennet to be such a friend to Elizabeth and to help her so much. It was refreshing, interesting, and funny because Mrs Bennet is very smart in this book, but her intelligence is turned towards her goal, which in this case, is to have Elizabeth marrying Mr. Darcy.
The strategies Mrs. Bennet finds to help Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy are very funny and I was impressed with her ability to manipulate the entire Meryton society to her favour. This was definitely the highlight of the book for me.
I love angsty books, but I also love to read stories where Elizabeth and Darcy join forces against an external antagonist, which is exactly what happened in this book. They must find the strength in their love to persistently follow their dreams and never give up. I believe this will be very appealing to most readers, especially the ones who do not like angst in their novels.
There were a few details such as Wickham or Lady Catherine’s later appearances in the book which I could live without, and even if it was not a quibble, I would not have minded to have a smaller book without those secondary interferences at a time when our couple is already strongly attached to one another.
Summing up, Dare to Refuse Such a Man is a low angst novel where our dear couple must join forces to fight for their love. It is a sweet and uncomplicated novel that will appeal to most readers. I recommend it to those looking for a sweet romance with some humour in it.
April 26, 2021
Wonderful
Who could dare to refuse such a wonderful and eligible suitor as Fitzwilliam Darcy? Mr. Bennet is faced with letting Lizzy choose love or enforcing the future he’s planned for her. Who will be the victor in this war of Wills? Absolutely marvelous book and I read it in one sitting without stopping because I was dying to know the whole story.
Who could dare to refuse such a wonderful and eligible suitor as Fitzwilliam Darcy? Mr. Bennet is faced with letting Lizzy choose love or enforcing the future he’s planned for her. Who will be the victor in this war of Wills? Absolutely marvelous book and I read it in one sitting without stopping because I was dying to know the whole story.
February 26, 2023
Premise: What if Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth's greatest obstacle wasn't themselves, but Mr. Bennet's approval?
This variation starts the summer before the original Pride and Prejudice, with Elizabeth travelling to Derbyshire with her aunt and uncle Gardiner. She is helping them with the kids while they help her aunt as she tries to cajole her father into retiring and moving with the family to London. Mrs. Gardiner's father currently had the position of rector of Kympton.
It's interesting to see how the initial interactions between Elizabeth and Darcy can go in such a different manner when Mr. Darcy is more comfortable on his home turf, and they don't get off to such an antagonistic start. Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy meet while she is out on one of her early morning walks, dirty and disheveled. Georgiana and Elizabeth become friends, and Georgiana plays a bit of matchmaker when she sees her brother's interest in Elizabeth. He knows about the status of her family, but he is viewing the polite behaviors of her aunt and uncle, instead of her immediate family. He pretty quickly gets over these concerns (and seems to have far less concern for his family's reaction than in the original novel). He openly courts Elizabeth and is on the verge of asking her to marry him.
In bursts Mr. Bennet, pulling Elizabeth away from Derbyshire and announcing his disapproval of her marrying Mr. Darcy. Mr. Bennet is not forthcoming with a reason for his disapproval, and the Gardiners are shocked and Elizabeth heartbroken.
Things I Liked:
- It was nice to have the whole story where the problem with Elizabeth and Darcy's relationship wasn't themselves, but an outside force.
- I liked that Mrs. Bennet's character had the exact same personality, but that in this story it was used to forward the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy instead of get in the way of it.
- Elizabeth's game of guessing people's favorite work of Shakespeare was pretty delightful.
- Many of the key scenarios from the original P&P were in this story, but weaved into the story in a different way. One example that I particularly liked was When Lady Catherine came to see Elizabeth. It made much more sense in this case, as Darcy had publicly proposed at this point.
Things I Didn't Like:
- Mr. Collins and Mr. Bennet's characters were pretty extreme, so much so that it was a little hard to believe.
- There were a few parts of the story that felt like they didn't weave together well, for example Mr. Morris's initial interest in Elizabeth didn't really serve much purpose in this story.
This variation starts the summer before the original Pride and Prejudice, with Elizabeth travelling to Derbyshire with her aunt and uncle Gardiner. She is helping them with the kids while they help her aunt as she tries to cajole her father into retiring and moving with the family to London. Mrs. Gardiner's father currently had the position of rector of Kympton.
It's interesting to see how the initial interactions between Elizabeth and Darcy can go in such a different manner when Mr. Darcy is more comfortable on his home turf, and they don't get off to such an antagonistic start. Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy meet while she is out on one of her early morning walks, dirty and disheveled. Georgiana and Elizabeth become friends, and Georgiana plays a bit of matchmaker when she sees her brother's interest in Elizabeth. He knows about the status of her family, but he is viewing the polite behaviors of her aunt and uncle, instead of her immediate family. He pretty quickly gets over these concerns (and seems to have far less concern for his family's reaction than in the original novel). He openly courts Elizabeth and is on the verge of asking her to marry him.
In bursts Mr. Bennet, pulling Elizabeth away from Derbyshire and announcing his disapproval of her marrying Mr. Darcy. Mr. Bennet is not forthcoming with a reason for his disapproval, and the Gardiners are shocked and Elizabeth heartbroken.
Things I Liked:
- It was nice to have the whole story where the problem with Elizabeth and Darcy's relationship wasn't themselves, but an outside force.
- I liked that Mrs. Bennet's character had the exact same personality, but that in this story it was used to forward the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy instead of get in the way of it.
- Elizabeth's game of guessing people's favorite work of Shakespeare was pretty delightful.
- Many of the key scenarios from the original P&P were in this story, but weaved into the story in a different way. One example that I particularly liked was When Lady Catherine came to see Elizabeth. It made much more sense in this case, as Darcy had publicly proposed at this point.
Things I Didn't Like:
- Mr. Collins and Mr. Bennet's characters were pretty extreme, so much so that it was a little hard to believe.
- There were a few parts of the story that felt like they didn't weave together well, for example Mr. Morris's initial interest in Elizabeth didn't really serve much purpose in this story.
March 26, 2021
TITLE: Opposition to her marriage comes from a surprising source—her father!
SETTING: A delightful variation-on-the-theme of Elizabeth Bennett and Fitzwilliam Darcy, in which Mrs. Bennett takes a surprising leading role! After meeting accidentally several times in various locations as Elizabeth takes a holiday with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner, our Hero and heroine begin to develop a tendre for each other. We are introduced to various secondary characters, including Darcy’s sister Georgiana, who will herself become a more prominent character later in this story.
CRITIQUE: Interesting underlying melodies run in counterpoint to our main theme of the love story of Elizabeth and Darcy. The characters are especially well developed in this book, which increases the reader’s enjoyment of the story. Not just one villain, but several, play their hand at trying to come between our H & h, making for interesting reading. This clean romance does end with our H & h finding their HEA. An excellent first book for Ms. Smythe! I look forward to reading her future work.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
SETTING: A delightful variation-on-the-theme of Elizabeth Bennett and Fitzwilliam Darcy, in which Mrs. Bennett takes a surprising leading role! After meeting accidentally several times in various locations as Elizabeth takes a holiday with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner, our Hero and heroine begin to develop a tendre for each other. We are introduced to various secondary characters, including Darcy’s sister Georgiana, who will herself become a more prominent character later in this story.
CRITIQUE: Interesting underlying melodies run in counterpoint to our main theme of the love story of Elizabeth and Darcy. The characters are especially well developed in this book, which increases the reader’s enjoyment of the story. Not just one villain, but several, play their hand at trying to come between our H & h, making for interesting reading. This clean romance does end with our H & h finding their HEA. An excellent first book for Ms. Smythe! I look forward to reading her future work.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 8, 2021
I really enjoyed this one. The first meeting of ODC is completely different and Darcy is much more charming. Mr Bennet poops on the party by refusing consent because he has a secret plan for Elizabeth. I Can’t say too much because of spoilers but his plan is not a good one. There is a HEA and it is very satisfying. Mrs Bennet is pretty good in this version, not a largo. But a mother who loves her 5 daughters.
May 2, 2021
This was an interesting "what if"; story where Darcy and Elizabeth come to an early understanding, but Mr. Bennet refuses his consent. Why is the question - this is the one part of the story which transferred Elizabeth's stubbornness and pride squarely to Mr. Bennet who has a "you will obey me, I'm your father and I know what's best" attitude times 100. I really did not like Mr. Bennet in the this story, but his character served his purpose and allowed the reader to really enjoy the teamwork (best word I could think of) between Elizabeth, Darcy, Mrs. Bennet and Mrs. Philips (yes this is correct) to bring Darcy and Elizabeth a HEA. I really enjoyed how Mrs. Bennet (and even Mrs. Phillips) were written in this story. Their strategy and implementation was hysterical at times. Overall, a fun story to read that was well-written.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 6, 2021
I would give the beginning of this book 5 stars but the last 20% of it 3. It was a mix for me but started brilliantly.
May 17, 2021
I rarely give 5 stars
But this story is both very original and well written, and I enjoyed it immensely!! Such a fascinating change of roles for Mr and Mrs Bennet in a way I couldn't have imagined, but it was perfectly done. I look forward to more of this author's variations!
But this story is both very original and well written, and I enjoyed it immensely!! Such a fascinating change of roles for Mr and Mrs Bennet in a way I couldn't have imagined, but it was perfectly done. I look forward to more of this author's variations!
May 3, 2021
Well that's a story loved it.
ODC go through the wringer with this one.
Ms Smythe sure knows how to turn the screws.
Excellent excellent excellent.
ODC go through the wringer with this one.
Ms Smythe sure knows how to turn the screws.
Excellent excellent excellent.
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July 30, 2023I usually really like this author and this book started out great. Then it got very slow. I will try again another time.
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