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Between the Lines
What if you could hear the words behind the words?
Brad Weston’s life seems perfect. He’s GQ handsome, the chief of staff for a Republican California state senator, and enjoys the power and the promise of a bright future. And he’s in a comfortable relationship with his boyfriend of six years, Alex.
Sam Fuller is Brad’s young blond blue-eyed intern, fresh out of college, running from a bad breakup, and questioning his choices and his new life in politics. To make things worse, Sam also has a thing for the boss, but Brad is already taken.
While looking for a gift for his boyfriend, Brad wanders into a curiosity shop and becomes fascinated by an old wooden medallion. Brad's not a superstitious man, but when he takes out the medallion in his office, he sees the world in a whole new light.
And nothing will ever be the same.
Brad Weston’s life seems perfect. He’s GQ handsome, the chief of staff for a Republican California state senator, and enjoys the power and the promise of a bright future. And he’s in a comfortable relationship with his boyfriend of six years, Alex.
Sam Fuller is Brad’s young blond blue-eyed intern, fresh out of college, running from a bad breakup, and questioning his choices and his new life in politics. To make things worse, Sam also has a thing for the boss, but Brad is already taken.
While looking for a gift for his boyfriend, Brad wanders into a curiosity shop and becomes fascinated by an old wooden medallion. Brad's not a superstitious man, but when he takes out the medallion in his office, he sees the world in a whole new light.
And nothing will ever be the same.
104 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 10, 2015
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About the author
J. Scott Coatsworth
89 books187 followersScott lives with his husband in a leafy Sacramento, California suburb, in a cute yellow house with a pair of pink flamingoes in the front yard.
He has always been in the place between the here and now and the what could be. He started reading science fiction and fantasy at the tender age of nine, encouraged by his mother. But as he read the golden age classics and more modern works too, he started to wonder where all the queer people were.
When Scott came out at 23, he decided he wanted to create the kinds of stories he couldn't find at the bookstore. If there weren't gay characters in his favorite genres, he would reimagine them, filling them with a diverse universe of characters. He'd remake them to his own ends, and if he was lucky enough, someone would even want to read them.
Scott's brain works a little differently from most folks - he sees connections where others don't. Born an introvert, he learned how to reach outside himself and connect with other queer folks.
Scott's fiction defies expectations, transforming traditional science fiction, fantasy, and contemporary worlds into something fresh and surprising. He also created both Queer Sci Fi and QueeRomance Ink with his husband Mark, and is an associate member of the Science Fiction Writer's Association (SFWA).
His writing, both romance and genre fiction, brings a queer energy to his work, infusing them with love, beauty and strength and making them fly. He imagines how the world could be, and maybe changes the world that is, just a little.
Scott was recognized as one of the top new gay authors in the 2017 Rainbow Awards, and his debut novel "Skythane" received two awards and an honorable mention.
He has always been in the place between the here and now and the what could be. He started reading science fiction and fantasy at the tender age of nine, encouraged by his mother. But as he read the golden age classics and more modern works too, he started to wonder where all the queer people were.
When Scott came out at 23, he decided he wanted to create the kinds of stories he couldn't find at the bookstore. If there weren't gay characters in his favorite genres, he would reimagine them, filling them with a diverse universe of characters. He'd remake them to his own ends, and if he was lucky enough, someone would even want to read them.
Scott's brain works a little differently from most folks - he sees connections where others don't. Born an introvert, he learned how to reach outside himself and connect with other queer folks.
Scott's fiction defies expectations, transforming traditional science fiction, fantasy, and contemporary worlds into something fresh and surprising. He also created both Queer Sci Fi and QueeRomance Ink with his husband Mark, and is an associate member of the Science Fiction Writer's Association (SFWA).
His writing, both romance and genre fiction, brings a queer energy to his work, infusing them with love, beauty and strength and making them fly. He imagines how the world could be, and maybe changes the world that is, just a little.
Scott was recognized as one of the top new gay authors in the 2017 Rainbow Awards, and his debut novel "Skythane" received two awards and an honorable mention.
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August 4, 2015
I hate to crap on newish writers, but this just didn't work for me.
This novella was a pretty political story about homophobia in the Republican party and a budding romance between a chief of staff and his intern. For the majority of the story, the MCs are not dating or really interacting, which I found to be a bit odd. I also wasn't really into the plot in general, though I thought the concept was cool.
My first issue with the story is that the writing style was a little awkward. It felt a little too... planned? Ostentatious? Distant? Hard to describe, but I didn't connect at all with the author's voice.
However, my real issue was with the characters. I found Brad to be sort of mean-spirited and self-involved, and I wasn't rooting for him at all in the end. I'm not sure what Sam saw in him, and I'm not sure really why they even got together (no sex content, BTW). They didn't have a lot in common, and their interactions were stilted and formal.
There were also a lot of plot elements left unexplained or unexplored which I had an issue with.
Not horrible but not the story for me.
**Copy provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review*
This novella was a pretty political story about homophobia in the Republican party and a budding romance between a chief of staff and his intern. For the majority of the story, the MCs are not dating or really interacting, which I found to be a bit odd. I also wasn't really into the plot in general, though I thought the concept was cool.
My first issue with the story is that the writing style was a little awkward. It felt a little too... planned? Ostentatious? Distant? Hard to describe, but I didn't connect at all with the author's voice.
However, my real issue was with the characters. I found Brad to be sort of mean-spirited and self-involved, and I wasn't rooting for him at all in the end. I'm not sure what Sam saw in him, and I'm not sure really why they even got together (no sex content, BTW). They didn't have a lot in common, and their interactions were stilted and formal.
There were also a lot of plot elements left unexplained or unexplored which I had an issue with.
Not horrible but not the story for me.
**Copy provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review*
July 21, 2015
A sweet, well-written urban fantasy. It could easily have been expanded into a longer novella, I think -- or perhaps a novel -- but the story as told is complete. The love story is well-done. And Coatsworth's style is very polished. A quick read I highly recommend.
July 13, 2021
Absolutely beautiful short story. I will read more from this author!
July 16, 2015
BRAD WESTON is the chief of staff for a Republican California state senator, and it seems like he has everything going for him. Sam Fuller, fresh out of college, is also working for the GOP as Weston’s aid. They work hard for their party, even when they face constant homophobia, but neither really knows how bad they’re discriminated against until Weston enters an antique shop, looking for a present for his boyfriend for their anniversary. The enchanted trinket he finds exposes Weston to all the hate in the world, and the revelations change their lives forever.
This was a great gay read, sweet and satisfying. It’s a novella (shorter than a novel), so I would highly recommend this as something to read during your public transport commute, or right before bed. Even though it’s light and fun, this book explores a few heavy contemporary gay issues, mostly around conservatism and being gay, open or otherwise.
Gay republicans have been spotlighted in the news, and so many of them are ridiculed by either their own party and/or the LGBTQ+ community. Sometimes I wonder what it would take for me to work in a party that doesn’t respect my social views/freedoms. Coatsworth offers some interesting perspectives on the matter.
Coatsworth has quite a few short stories and novellas out—including several free reads. Check out his website/blog: http://www.jscottcoatsworth.com. Besides having his own website, Coatsworth is also the founder of Queer Sci Fi, a social group devoted to LGBTQ+ speculative fiction. Readers, writers, and science fiction/fantasy lovers gather to discuss current affairs, have their work critiqued, explore literature, and create friendships. Check out their website: http://queerscifi.com.
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B. A. Brock is a reviewer for DSP and QSF. He enjoys reading, writing, running, family and food, and fills his life with bent bunk. He especially loves to discuss LGBTQ+ literature. His website is http://www.babrockbooks.com. You can find him on Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/BABrockBooks.
Dreamspinner Press–Where Dreams Come True… International publishers of quality gay romantic fiction since 2007. http://www.dreamspinnerpress.com
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Harmony Ink Press–LGBTQ+ Young Adult Fiction. http://www.harmonyinkpress.com
This was a great gay read, sweet and satisfying. It’s a novella (shorter than a novel), so I would highly recommend this as something to read during your public transport commute, or right before bed. Even though it’s light and fun, this book explores a few heavy contemporary gay issues, mostly around conservatism and being gay, open or otherwise.
Gay republicans have been spotlighted in the news, and so many of them are ridiculed by either their own party and/or the LGBTQ+ community. Sometimes I wonder what it would take for me to work in a party that doesn’t respect my social views/freedoms. Coatsworth offers some interesting perspectives on the matter.
Coatsworth has quite a few short stories and novellas out—including several free reads. Check out his website/blog: http://www.jscottcoatsworth.com. Besides having his own website, Coatsworth is also the founder of Queer Sci Fi, a social group devoted to LGBTQ+ speculative fiction. Readers, writers, and science fiction/fantasy lovers gather to discuss current affairs, have their work critiqued, explore literature, and create friendships. Check out their website: http://queerscifi.com.
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B. A. Brock is a reviewer for DSP and QSF. He enjoys reading, writing, running, family and food, and fills his life with bent bunk. He especially loves to discuss LGBTQ+ literature. His website is http://www.babrockbooks.com. You can find him on Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/BABrockBooks.
Dreamspinner Press–Where Dreams Come True… International publishers of quality gay romantic fiction since 2007. http://www.dreamspinnerpress.com
DSP Publications–Off the Beaten Path. Worth the Journey. http://www.dsppublications.com
Harmony Ink Press–LGBTQ+ Young Adult Fiction. http://www.harmonyinkpress.com
August 9, 2017
✩ ✩ ✩ ✩ FOUR-STAR ✩ REVIEW ✩ ✩ ✩ ✩
> > Judging a Book by it's Cover < <
Approximately half of the model's face and bust are shown in the foreground while a Capitol Building style building is faded as the backdrop. Catchy font and color for the title. Author's name is nearly missed. Synopsis is intriguing, despite the fact that I do not read Paranormal, Supernatural, SciFi or Fantasy... this sounds rather charming.
> > Looking Deeper < <
POV ~> Third Person
Brad is a Chief of Staff for one of California's Republican Senators. Sam has been his intern for the past five months or so.
While on lunch, Brad planned on buying a gift for his boyfriend for their six-year anniversary, which was the next day. He discovered a shop he'd never noticed before, despite walking the same route numerous times each day, every work day. Inside, he was drawn to an ancient carved-wood medallion, a medallion that turned out to be charmed. Brad began to hear the untold truths behind the spoken words of those around him and was surprised to learn some of the things that were really going on. Sam noticed that Brad was off-center and was determined to be a friend to the man, regardless of Brad trying to push him away. The majority of the story only spanned three days, but there were the implied several months of working together and the shared experience of being cheated on to help the men have something more in common. As with most short stories, it was difficult to feel a bond between the characters or find the dynamics in the plot. This was no different. It went from Brad barely acknowledging Sam's existence to proclaiming love and moving in together. I'm assuming, given the new jobs and time it took to procure a new residence that some time elapsed, but no time frame was really given.
Regardless, the main characters were likable and the plot had potential. It could definitely have used a little beefing up, maybe another 100 pages would've been good to build their relationship a little more.
There was the slightest hint of a whimsical, charming magic at play and a few bigoted slurs within the story, but outside of that, it made for a light contemporary quick read.
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Rating: [PG-13] ~ Score: 3.825 ~ Stars: 4
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⭐ ⭐ **** Disclosure of Material: I received a copy of this book from the Author/Publisher with the hope that I would voluntarily leave unbiased and unsolicited feedback. I was not asked, encouraged, or required to leave a review - nor was I compensated in any way. I am posting this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255: "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising". ***** ⭐ ⭐
> > Judging a Book by it's Cover < <
Approximately half of the model's face and bust are shown in the foreground while a Capitol Building style building is faded as the backdrop. Catchy font and color for the title. Author's name is nearly missed. Synopsis is intriguing, despite the fact that I do not read Paranormal, Supernatural, SciFi or Fantasy... this sounds rather charming.
> > Looking Deeper < <
POV ~> Third Person
Brad is a Chief of Staff for one of California's Republican Senators. Sam has been his intern for the past five months or so.
While on lunch, Brad planned on buying a gift for his boyfriend for their six-year anniversary, which was the next day. He discovered a shop he'd never noticed before, despite walking the same route numerous times each day, every work day. Inside, he was drawn to an ancient carved-wood medallion, a medallion that turned out to be charmed. Brad began to hear the untold truths behind the spoken words of those around him and was surprised to learn some of the things that were really going on. Sam noticed that Brad was off-center and was determined to be a friend to the man, regardless of Brad trying to push him away. The majority of the story only spanned three days, but there were the implied several months of working together and the shared experience of being cheated on to help the men have something more in common. As with most short stories, it was difficult to feel a bond between the characters or find the dynamics in the plot. This was no different. It went from Brad barely acknowledging Sam's existence to proclaiming love and moving in together. I'm assuming, given the new jobs and time it took to procure a new residence that some time elapsed, but no time frame was really given.
Regardless, the main characters were likable and the plot had potential. It could definitely have used a little beefing up, maybe another 100 pages would've been good to build their relationship a little more.
There was the slightest hint of a whimsical, charming magic at play and a few bigoted slurs within the story, but outside of that, it made for a light contemporary quick read.
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Rating: [PG-13] ~ Score: 3.825 ~ Stars: 4
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⭐ ⭐ **** Disclosure of Material: I received a copy of this book from the Author/Publisher with the hope that I would voluntarily leave unbiased and unsolicited feedback. I was not asked, encouraged, or required to leave a review - nor was I compensated in any way. I am posting this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255: "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising". ***** ⭐ ⭐
July 23, 2015
Cool premise, but from beginning to end, there was a disconnect between reader and characters because of the writing style. On top of that it was too short, so there wasn't a lot of depth in the story. Things weren't questioned, things happened, and then the story ended. A lot of stuff that could have made this wonderful was just shrugged off.
An okay read, but only that.
Mr. Coatsworth, keep writing though. I'm glad you've started writing and following your dream, so let nothing hold you back!
An okay read, but only that.
Mr. Coatsworth, keep writing though. I'm glad you've started writing and following your dream, so let nothing hold you back!
July 25, 2015
“The truth will set you free, but first it will make you miserable,” ~ James A Garfield
If possible, would you really want the ability to know what people are thinking between the lines of what they say? With the help of a magical medallion, Brad Weston is able to hear what people really think of him and it hurts. Brad finds the people he respected and trusted, who he thought felt the same way about him, harbor awful thoughts about him. Brad's world shifts on its axis, everything he thought he knew is not what others think about him. It causes him to doubt himself and he mistrusts what everyone else says or does. Brad needs to reorder his life and isn't below using the medallion to help him.
Despite the Republican party's stance on LGBT rights and other matters Brad holds dear, he has gained what he thinks is a well-respected position with them as a state senator's chief of staff. His boss dumps a lot of her work on Brad, but it seems to go with the territory. Until the medallion revealed her inner thoughts, Brad would have never believed they are, at best, bigoted and condescending. It is quite a blow to Brad's ego. As if that weren't bad enough, his boyfriend of five years, Alex, is acting peculiar and dismissive and is gone more than usual. The medallion is supposed to be a five-year anniversary present. Sadly, Alex disappoints and hurts Brad deeply when the medallion shows him Alex's true feelings. Feeling totally lost, Brad doesn't know in which direction to turn, but he still has the medallion which he's learned to depend upon to show him the truth. Just as he's about to give up, Sam, the intern in his office, makes a move in his direction and won't take no for an answer. Brad wonders if he can trust Sam, or anyone for that matter, to be truthful and turns to the medallion for answers.
Sam appreciates the opportunity to intern in the senator’s desk, but it's not his life's ambition. He's more comfortable in jeans and a T-shirt, but, as his mother tells him, it's time for him to grow up. He sees the internship as a stepping stone to something bigger and more suitable for him. Until then, he's willing to play the game, even though it keeps him in the closet. Sam is interested in Brad, who is his boss and acknowledges Sam's existence by the special cup of coffee he brings him every morning. Right after Brad's awful revelations of truth, he runs out of his office and right into Sam, literally knocking him down. Sam sees his distress and tries to comfort him but Brad, blind with rage, tries to reject him. Sam won't be deterred and steers Brad somewhere where they can talk.
This is a brief but well-written love story about two men working in politics, but with different outlooks; for Sam it's just an internship, but for Brad, it's where his future lies, despite some of the party's attitudes being in conflict with his beliefs. Brad is still idealistic enough to think he can make a difference, even though the Republican party's ideals have shifted from governing and into bargains, bribes, and donations. The medallion is an excellent way to show Brad where he is in life, rather than where he hopes to be and gives him the opportunity to change it. If you like politics, gay men, magical medallions, truth, and honesty, then you may enjoy 'Between the Lines.' Thank you, J. Scott, for the informative insight into politics and for reminding us that honesty is the best policy.
NOTE: This book was provided by Dreamspinner Press for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
If possible, would you really want the ability to know what people are thinking between the lines of what they say? With the help of a magical medallion, Brad Weston is able to hear what people really think of him and it hurts. Brad finds the people he respected and trusted, who he thought felt the same way about him, harbor awful thoughts about him. Brad's world shifts on its axis, everything he thought he knew is not what others think about him. It causes him to doubt himself and he mistrusts what everyone else says or does. Brad needs to reorder his life and isn't below using the medallion to help him.
Despite the Republican party's stance on LGBT rights and other matters Brad holds dear, he has gained what he thinks is a well-respected position with them as a state senator's chief of staff. His boss dumps a lot of her work on Brad, but it seems to go with the territory. Until the medallion revealed her inner thoughts, Brad would have never believed they are, at best, bigoted and condescending. It is quite a blow to Brad's ego. As if that weren't bad enough, his boyfriend of five years, Alex, is acting peculiar and dismissive and is gone more than usual. The medallion is supposed to be a five-year anniversary present. Sadly, Alex disappoints and hurts Brad deeply when the medallion shows him Alex's true feelings. Feeling totally lost, Brad doesn't know in which direction to turn, but he still has the medallion which he's learned to depend upon to show him the truth. Just as he's about to give up, Sam, the intern in his office, makes a move in his direction and won't take no for an answer. Brad wonders if he can trust Sam, or anyone for that matter, to be truthful and turns to the medallion for answers.
Sam appreciates the opportunity to intern in the senator’s desk, but it's not his life's ambition. He's more comfortable in jeans and a T-shirt, but, as his mother tells him, it's time for him to grow up. He sees the internship as a stepping stone to something bigger and more suitable for him. Until then, he's willing to play the game, even though it keeps him in the closet. Sam is interested in Brad, who is his boss and acknowledges Sam's existence by the special cup of coffee he brings him every morning. Right after Brad's awful revelations of truth, he runs out of his office and right into Sam, literally knocking him down. Sam sees his distress and tries to comfort him but Brad, blind with rage, tries to reject him. Sam won't be deterred and steers Brad somewhere where they can talk.
This is a brief but well-written love story about two men working in politics, but with different outlooks; for Sam it's just an internship, but for Brad, it's where his future lies, despite some of the party's attitudes being in conflict with his beliefs. Brad is still idealistic enough to think he can make a difference, even though the Republican party's ideals have shifted from governing and into bargains, bribes, and donations. The medallion is an excellent way to show Brad where he is in life, rather than where he hopes to be and gives him the opportunity to change it. If you like politics, gay men, magical medallions, truth, and honesty, then you may enjoy 'Between the Lines.' Thank you, J. Scott, for the informative insight into politics and for reminding us that honesty is the best policy.
NOTE: This book was provided by Dreamspinner Press for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
July 25, 2015
FiveStars
This was short enough I read it in about an hour. It's a fun read with a bit of humor, a bit of drama, and a bit of magic. I loved the snappy dialog and the smooth writing style.
I'll admit, I didn't like either Brad or Sam at first. But as their stories unfolded, Sam's actions were understandable, and the revelation of who he was under the surface was great. Brad had a lot of growth for such a short tale.
Anything else I say would be spoilers, so you'll just have to trust me that this one is worth reading for the surprises.
I was given this in return for an honest review by Inked Rainbow Reads.
5 stars
Amy
ThreeStar
Between the Lines was about Brad getting an unusual medallion for his longtime boyfriend for their anniversary. This medallion has the ability to let Brad hear other peoples thoughts. What was supposed to be a gift turned out to be a lifesaver for Brad himself. Brad learned what people were thinking about not only him but about things in the political sector that he was working it. It also led to some peoples demise, which was probably the best part of the book. This short story had a lot of potential but seemed familiar at the same time, like I had read or seen something similar before. I didn’t feel the chemistry between Brad and Sam and when things finally clicked the story was over. It was just ok for me, could have had more romance or spice.
I was given this in return for an honest review by Inked Rainbow Reads.
Angie
ThreeandHalfStars
This short story was very well written. A political adventure that rivals episodes of The West Wing, which would be why I loved it. What I struggled with was the focus; if it was a romance or a political commentary, with a paranormal twist, of course, because why not and done in such an amazing way.
The ending of this piece seemed far to fast-paced compared the beginning, and it started to feel a bit like instalove to me, which I’m not a fan of. However, I loved the budding relationship, particularly with Sam’s character, and how that was interwoven throughout the politics. Brad never seemed interested in Sam to me, at least not in a romantic way, so the ending just didn’t click.
I was given this in return for an honest review by Inked Rainbow Reads.
~AJ
This was short enough I read it in about an hour. It's a fun read with a bit of humor, a bit of drama, and a bit of magic. I loved the snappy dialog and the smooth writing style.
I'll admit, I didn't like either Brad or Sam at first. But as their stories unfolded, Sam's actions were understandable, and the revelation of who he was under the surface was great. Brad had a lot of growth for such a short tale.
Anything else I say would be spoilers, so you'll just have to trust me that this one is worth reading for the surprises.
I was given this in return for an honest review by Inked Rainbow Reads.
5 stars
Amy
ThreeStar
Between the Lines was about Brad getting an unusual medallion for his longtime boyfriend for their anniversary. This medallion has the ability to let Brad hear other peoples thoughts. What was supposed to be a gift turned out to be a lifesaver for Brad himself. Brad learned what people were thinking about not only him but about things in the political sector that he was working it. It also led to some peoples demise, which was probably the best part of the book. This short story had a lot of potential but seemed familiar at the same time, like I had read or seen something similar before. I didn’t feel the chemistry between Brad and Sam and when things finally clicked the story was over. It was just ok for me, could have had more romance or spice.
I was given this in return for an honest review by Inked Rainbow Reads.
Angie
ThreeandHalfStars
This short story was very well written. A political adventure that rivals episodes of The West Wing, which would be why I loved it. What I struggled with was the focus; if it was a romance or a political commentary, with a paranormal twist, of course, because why not and done in such an amazing way.
The ending of this piece seemed far to fast-paced compared the beginning, and it started to feel a bit like instalove to me, which I’m not a fan of. However, I loved the budding relationship, particularly with Sam’s character, and how that was interwoven throughout the politics. Brad never seemed interested in Sam to me, at least not in a romantic way, so the ending just didn’t click.
I was given this in return for an honest review by Inked Rainbow Reads.
~AJ
August 13, 2015
A Joyfully Jay review.
3.75 stars
So this is a book that knows how to work the confines of short story to its advantage. Everything is here that needs to be. The plot requires a bit of a leap, but if you go with it, then it absolutely works. The writing itself is great. It has a certain flow to it, a smoothness, which works really well. I found myself carried away by the words, absorbed in the story.
Both the MCs, too, were well developed for the amount of space that they had to work with. Brad is a real type A personality, he likes things neat and tidy, and he values fiscal responsibility. Which is why he’s a Republican even though he’s gay. Yes, I would have liked to know a little bit more about his reasoning here, because that can’t be the only reason, but for what it was, it worked, and I was able to accept it. There were a couple of instances where he seemed to go to extreme emotions, and that had me a bit confused, but overall, I really liked him and the way he was portrayed.
Read Kris’ review in its entirety here.
3.75 stars
So this is a book that knows how to work the confines of short story to its advantage. Everything is here that needs to be. The plot requires a bit of a leap, but if you go with it, then it absolutely works. The writing itself is great. It has a certain flow to it, a smoothness, which works really well. I found myself carried away by the words, absorbed in the story.
Both the MCs, too, were well developed for the amount of space that they had to work with. Brad is a real type A personality, he likes things neat and tidy, and he values fiscal responsibility. Which is why he’s a Republican even though he’s gay. Yes, I would have liked to know a little bit more about his reasoning here, because that can’t be the only reason, but for what it was, it worked, and I was able to accept it. There were a couple of instances where he seemed to go to extreme emotions, and that had me a bit confused, but overall, I really liked him and the way he was portrayed.
Read Kris’ review in its entirety here.
July 23, 2015
Brad is the chief of staff for a Republican California state senator, who is openly gay and in a six year relationship. Sam works with Brad and is half in love with him, the only problem he has is Alex the boyfriend.
Brad seems like a great guy who doesn’t realize how blind he is the world around him. Sam might be new to politics but he knows it’s best to keep things close to the vest in his new environment. Brad is the guy we all want, hardworking, loving and most of all loyal. His world changes quickly and the blinders fall off as well. Though he might be heartbroken; disappointment is the better word to describe his situation in his personal and professional life. I won’t go into more details because everyone knows I hate to give out spoilers.
To read the rest of the review check out our website http://www.exquisitereviews.com/index...
Brad seems like a great guy who doesn’t realize how blind he is the world around him. Sam might be new to politics but he knows it’s best to keep things close to the vest in his new environment. Brad is the guy we all want, hardworking, loving and most of all loyal. His world changes quickly and the blinders fall off as well. Though he might be heartbroken; disappointment is the better word to describe his situation in his personal and professional life. I won’t go into more details because everyone knows I hate to give out spoilers.
To read the rest of the review check out our website http://www.exquisitereviews.com/index...
October 19, 2015
3.5 stars
This short story was very well written. A political adventure that rivals episodes of The West Wing, which would be why I loved it. What I struggled with was the focus; if it was a romance or a political commentary, with a paranormal twist, of course, because why not and done in such an amazing way.
The ending of this piece seemed far to fast-paced compared the beginning, and it started to feel a bit like instalove to me, which I’m not a fan of. However, I loved the budding relationship, particularly with Sam’s character, and how that was interwoven throughout the politics. Brad never seemed interested in Sam to me, at least not in a romantic way, so the ending just didn’t click.
~I received this book from Inked Rainbow Reads in exchange for an honest review~
August 10, 2016
I received a free copy via Inked Rainbow in exchange for an honest review.
This was short enough I read it in about an hour. It’s a fun read with a bit of humor, a bit of drama, and a bit of magic. I loved the snappy dialog and the smooth writing style.
I’ll admit, I didn’t like either Brad or Sam at first. But as their stories unfolded, Sam’s actions were understandable, and the revelation of who he was under the surface was great. Brad had a lot of growth for such a short tale.
Anything else I say would be spoilers, so you’ll just have to trust me that this one is worth reading for the surprises.
This was short enough I read it in about an hour. It’s a fun read with a bit of humor, a bit of drama, and a bit of magic. I loved the snappy dialog and the smooth writing style.
I’ll admit, I didn’t like either Brad or Sam at first. But as their stories unfolded, Sam’s actions were understandable, and the revelation of who he was under the surface was great. Brad had a lot of growth for such a short tale.
Anything else I say would be spoilers, so you’ll just have to trust me that this one is worth reading for the surprises.
July 18, 2015
This was too short and I was confused for a minute when they moved in with each other because the way the story was written it was like right after they went on theit first date. But I got it after reading the part like 3 times.
September 9, 2019
Not bad. It was a quick entertaining read with a slight paranormal element. I was a little conflicted at the beginning at the thought of a gay Republican (isn’t that an oxymoron?) but the story ultimately proved my point. The story provides an inside look at the dirtiness of politics. I’m not sure what Sam saw in Brad because the story never really took us there but clearly pure honest Sam was able to overlook the fact that Brad had no trouble playing in the dirt. The ending was ok, but I found it somewhat odd that they’d move in together before either one had said “I love you.”
Oh, and if this takes place in Sacramento, why does the front cover depict the U.S. Capitol? There are some similarities, but also very distinct differences.
Oh, and if this takes place in Sacramento, why does the front cover depict the U.S. Capitol? There are some similarities, but also very distinct differences.
April 3, 2018
I liked this urban fantasy set in the seedy world of politics. I'd have liked some more interaction between Sam and Brad earlier in the story (maybe showing us that coffee scene rather than telling us about it) to base their eventual relationship on.
But overall a enjoyable way to pass an hour or so.
But overall a enjoyable way to pass an hour or so.
January 31, 2020
On the face of it, a political story but truly about how one would react on seeing beyond the facade of social barriers and false kindness. Brad, a Sacramento-based senator's chief of staff is given a medallion that is bewitched and finds he's being lied to on all sides except maybe not all his encounters are deceitful. Nicely done.
February 12, 2025
A short, set largely in the offices of a republican senator. An elegant ending to a relationship, the start of a new one and two people changing careers in a moderately tumultuous way... The page count is made up of several short pieces linked together with a peripheral nd to one of the main characters in the novella.
Enjoyable is perhaps not an adequate description of a charming piece.
Enjoyable is perhaps not an adequate description of a charming piece.
January 28, 2019
I really like the author's writing style, which is very descriptive and imaginative. This story was a bit too political for me but it was also very entertaining with a nice paranormal twist and packed a lot of events for such a short story.
Totally worth reading.
Totally worth reading.
September 14, 2022
This was a great read, a little deep in American politics, which confuses me, but the intrigue along with the mystical medallion and Brad's romance woes made this a very enjoyable novella. My second with this author, loving how his mind works.
July 16, 2017
No sex, just sweet. Just the way I like it :)
February 10, 2018
3.75 *
November 1, 2018
Just missed the mark for me. I think the author tried to squeeze too much in to such a short story. And the ending was totally wishy washy.
October 24, 2021
Re-Read Review October 2021:
I really don't have anything to add to my original review other than I loved it even more the second time around. In fact I appreciated the subtle blending of paranormal, fantasy, and romance even more than the first time around that I upped the rating to 5 bookmarks instead of my original 4-1/2. I guess I can't really pinpoint what it was that gave it that extra nudge but Between the Lines really spoke to me this time. 4-1/2 or 5, either rating, this short novella is a fun bit of magic that definitely delights.
Original Review October 2019:
4-1/2 Stars
First off I just want to say that as this is a short story/short novella I am not going to speak towards the specifics of the plot as I don't want to give anything away(you know my adage "I don't do spoilers"😉). Second, this is my first J Scott Coatsworth read but it definitely won't be my last. If you're like me and a little late to the party(as Between the Lines was released in 2015) I was fascinated by the subtle blending of fantasy and reality.
Between the Lines is not your typical full-blown paranormal that I tend to spotlight throughout October here on my blog but it's the said subtleties that intrigued me. We've all had moments when we wished we knew what the other person was really thinking despite the words they let us hear and that's what Between is all about. Then there's the idea of accepting we already knew the truth just needed a little outside help to prove it to ourselves. Now I realize some might think that sounds like a spoiler but it really isn't because as so often in literature, the ending isn't always in question, it's the journey getting from page one to the end.
Could Brad's journey in Between the Lines been better had it been a longer novella or even a full-length novel with more detail at each discovery? Sure, because Brad is a likable character(mostly😉) who deserves happiness but truthfully I liked that it was a short tale because sometimes a story can be bogged down by too much detail. In my opinion Between the Lines is perfect length for this journey of discovery. As I often say in short tales, this gem may be short on quantity but it is long on quality.
I really don't have anything to add to my original review other than I loved it even more the second time around. In fact I appreciated the subtle blending of paranormal, fantasy, and romance even more than the first time around that I upped the rating to 5 bookmarks instead of my original 4-1/2. I guess I can't really pinpoint what it was that gave it that extra nudge but Between the Lines really spoke to me this time. 4-1/2 or 5, either rating, this short novella is a fun bit of magic that definitely delights.
Original Review October 2019:
4-1/2 Stars
First off I just want to say that as this is a short story/short novella I am not going to speak towards the specifics of the plot as I don't want to give anything away(you know my adage "I don't do spoilers"😉). Second, this is my first J Scott Coatsworth read but it definitely won't be my last. If you're like me and a little late to the party(as Between the Lines was released in 2015) I was fascinated by the subtle blending of fantasy and reality.
Between the Lines is not your typical full-blown paranormal that I tend to spotlight throughout October here on my blog but it's the said subtleties that intrigued me. We've all had moments when we wished we knew what the other person was really thinking despite the words they let us hear and that's what Between is all about. Then there's the idea of accepting we already knew the truth just needed a little outside help to prove it to ourselves. Now I realize some might think that sounds like a spoiler but it really isn't because as so often in literature, the ending isn't always in question, it's the journey getting from page one to the end.
Could Brad's journey in Between the Lines been better had it been a longer novella or even a full-length novel with more detail at each discovery? Sure, because Brad is a likable character(mostly😉) who deserves happiness but truthfully I liked that it was a short tale because sometimes a story can be bogged down by too much detail. In my opinion Between the Lines is perfect length for this journey of discovery. As I often say in short tales, this gem may be short on quantity but it is long on quality.
August 12, 2015
Readers will fall in love with Sam and Brad, two guys living a fast-paced life of politics in California. This story is more than just your average work place romance full of unrequited love and falling for the boss. Sure Sam has a thing for Brad, but the fact that Brad's in a long-term relationship makes him a bit off limits. There's a sense of longing on Sam's part, but he's accepted it...kind of. There's no predicting what happens after Brad purchases the medallion - that's really what makes all the difference.
The medallion is a brilliant twist on a familiar trope, adding a paranormal edge to conventional elements. I was anxious to see what would happen each time Brad wraps his hand around it, and I found myself wondering what it would be like to truly see the thoughts of people around me. Would l like it? What would they be thinking? After seeing what happens in Between the Lines, I've pretty much decided ignorance is bliss, although for Brad it does have a silver lining.
The romantic side of the story isn't your typical case of instant attraction or love at first sight. Brad's in a long-term, committed relationship which presents all kinds of problems of its own, and it's only later that he even begins to notice his sexy intern. Coatsworth delivers fun, quirky, political situations mixed with infidelity and heartache. What he doesn't include are graphic sexual situations. In fact, there's very little sexual content at all aside from references to various encounters. This is a relief for readers looking for more substance than skin, but if you're looking for hot, steamy encounters, this might fall short. Either way, it's a story not to be missed!
The medallion is a brilliant twist on a familiar trope, adding a paranormal edge to conventional elements. I was anxious to see what would happen each time Brad wraps his hand around it, and I found myself wondering what it would be like to truly see the thoughts of people around me. Would l like it? What would they be thinking? After seeing what happens in Between the Lines, I've pretty much decided ignorance is bliss, although for Brad it does have a silver lining.
The romantic side of the story isn't your typical case of instant attraction or love at first sight. Brad's in a long-term, committed relationship which presents all kinds of problems of its own, and it's only later that he even begins to notice his sexy intern. Coatsworth delivers fun, quirky, political situations mixed with infidelity and heartache. What he doesn't include are graphic sexual situations. In fact, there's very little sexual content at all aside from references to various encounters. This is a relief for readers looking for more substance than skin, but if you're looking for hot, steamy encounters, this might fall short. Either way, it's a story not to be missed!
August 11, 2015
loved this story, and omg if this could be true what a different world we could live in!!
Brad is looking for an anniversary present for his boyfriend Alex during his lunch, and finds a little shop. Inside he is drawn to a medallion at the back of the shop. The old lady in the shop actually gives the medallion to Alex, telling him it belonged with him and Alex.
When he got back to work in the senators office, he looks at the medallion in more detail, and notices a hand-scribbled note with it that read "What lies beneath is seldom seen, but grasp this firmly and truth you'll glean".
Brad went out after work with his colleagues, when Alex said he was working overtime, and as he left work he pocketed the medallion.
When he sat with someone, he then grasped the medallion which was in his picket, and then strange things began to happen........ he could hear their reply, but he could also hear what they were thinking too.... and quite often they would say one thing and think something else.
Now is the time we really find out what the medallion can do, and some of what Brad hears, makes him take a good long look at his life, and this then gives him the courage to try and change things.... but not always in a good way!
Complimentary Copy provided by the author/publisher for honest review.
Reviewed by Dawn at Gay Media Reviews
Brad is looking for an anniversary present for his boyfriend Alex during his lunch, and finds a little shop. Inside he is drawn to a medallion at the back of the shop. The old lady in the shop actually gives the medallion to Alex, telling him it belonged with him and Alex.
When he got back to work in the senators office, he looks at the medallion in more detail, and notices a hand-scribbled note with it that read "What lies beneath is seldom seen, but grasp this firmly and truth you'll glean".
Brad went out after work with his colleagues, when Alex said he was working overtime, and as he left work he pocketed the medallion.
When he sat with someone, he then grasped the medallion which was in his picket, and then strange things began to happen........ he could hear their reply, but he could also hear what they were thinking too.... and quite often they would say one thing and think something else.
Now is the time we really find out what the medallion can do, and some of what Brad hears, makes him take a good long look at his life, and this then gives him the courage to try and change things.... but not always in a good way!
Complimentary Copy provided by the author/publisher for honest review.
Reviewed by Dawn at Gay Media Reviews
August 27, 2015
Original review on Molly Lolly
Four stars!
I enjoyed this story. I loved how Brad had to decide if he wanted to hear the true thoughts of people or not. It raises an interesting philosophical question as well. I liked how that decision was described in the story. I felt bad for Brad and how he was treated. At the same time, he stood up for himself and what he believes in. He didn’t just roll over and take it. I was glad Brad wound up happy in the end. I would love to see him married in the future to his boyfriend. And his boyfriend’s writing career take off. Just a tiny little epilogue will do. Definitely a quick, enjoyable read.
Four stars!
I enjoyed this story. I loved how Brad had to decide if he wanted to hear the true thoughts of people or not. It raises an interesting philosophical question as well. I liked how that decision was described in the story. I felt bad for Brad and how he was treated. At the same time, he stood up for himself and what he believes in. He didn’t just roll over and take it. I was glad Brad wound up happy in the end. I would love to see him married in the future to his boyfriend. And his boyfriend’s writing career take off. Just a tiny little epilogue will do. Definitely a quick, enjoyable read.
April 30, 2017
This was a short quick read that was ok. Brad Weston’s life seems perfect. He is the chief of staff for a Republican California state senator, and enjoys the power and the promise of a bright future. And he’s in a comfortable relationship with his boyfriend of six years, Alex. Sam Fuller is Brad’s young blond blue-eyed intern, fresh out of college, running from a bad breakup, and questioning his choices and his new life in politics. To make things worse, Sam also has a thing for the boss, but Brad is already taken. This was a political story about homophobia in the Republican party. I also didn't like either MC. This was my first time reading this author. The book was well written with no errors in grammar or spelling.
July 31, 2015
Started off feeling like a fun take on a Love Potion #9 story, where a shop magically appears just long enough for someone to obtain a weird magical artifact. Said artifact then shakes up their life and gives them the impetus to make some long-needed changes.
I didn't like how petty Brad became as he began making his changes.
The rest of it was fun. And much better written than I've come to expect from these quirky little short stories.
Favorite Quote:
the moment when the lines of his mundane life suddenly snarled, snapped, and ultimately recombined into something quite different.
I didn't like how petty Brad became as he began making his changes.
The rest of it was fun. And much better written than I've come to expect from these quirky little short stories.
Favorite Quote:
the moment when the lines of his mundane life suddenly snarled, snapped, and ultimately recombined into something quite different.
December 7, 2017
While there isn't much development between Brad and Sam, I liked how the story played out. A mystery store visited and an old medallion given to Brad opens his eyes to what is going on around him. In revenge for the backstabbing at work, Brad unleashes an information bomb. Brad finds out about his cheating boyfriend and Sam offers his support as he recently went through it himself. An offer of friendship leads to Sam and Brad getting together. As a last gift, the remnant of the medallion's magic assures Brad that his current relationship is true.
January 10, 2016
Reviewed for Prism Book Alliance
2.5stars rounded down
Between the Lines is my first title from J Scott Coatsworth. I can see potential in his storytelling, and I will likely give him another shot. However, as far as Between the Lines goes I am pretty neutral, at best, disappointed at worst.
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