This series is terrible. Seriously. I know, you're thinking "well then why are you reading it??" Here's why: I'm on vacation, I have a limited number of things on my Kindle, and that coupled with my general OCD is enough to make me power through. But it's okay, because at this point I'm laughing. It's like a horrible B-movie, and I love those - watch and laugh.
As I've mentioned on earlier books in the series, this author desperately needs an editor. Both because there are horrible grammatical errors, but also because this book has so much repetition, I'm just stunned. During fight scenes, you can read some variation of the word "shriek" 6 times in 4 sentences. Something like this:
Kyra shrieked as she felt pain in her back. Shrieking, she spun around and stabbed her attacker with a shriek. He shrieked and fell to the ground, dead."
I'm totally not exaggerating, either.
Half the chapters in this series ends with some character or other facing imminent death. With some (I'm looking at you, Dierdre), each time they express how it is the worst death they can imagine. This is particularly laughable, because when we first met Dierdre, for example, she was rescued from a dungeon, where she was repeatedly raped and tortured. Later, she nearly falls to her death, where she thinks it is the most horrible death she can imagine.
... Really??
A couple chapters later, she is on the verge of drowning, and she laments that she cannot imagine a worse death. And then a couple chapters later, she's on the verge killed by a charge from the enemy army... and again, she expresses her fear over it being the worst death she can imagine.
At this point, I was just laughing so hard I was crying.
This series has untrained children flailing around with weapons, and felling enemies by the dozens... when we've seen those same enemies destroying fully trained adult warriors. It has TSTL characters making the same mistakes over and over and over. The main character makes the exact same poor decision 3 times, and is on the verge of death 3 times - fortunately, the plot armor is strong in this series, because despite every other chapter ending with imminent death, no one dies - and then later congratulates herself on always following her instincts.
A random boy/ancient mysterious warrior (Kyle) constantly drops everything and runs - across the continent - to her rescue. I don't know why he ever leaves her side. And then, adding insult to injury, in the end of the last book, the author had Kyle rescue Kyra, planting himself between two charging armies to rescue her idiot ass (and I don't know why they just, like, paused and let him do that)... and that situation ends (in book 4) with Kyle being captured by one of the enemies after he kills thousands of soldiers (not an exaggeration... thousands. Everyone in this book kills hundreds of soldiers on a bad day... thousands when they are having a great one.). The last we see him in book 4, he's netted and carried off by the lead troll, Vesuvius.
In this book, that fight is rewritten. I guess the author decided she didn't want him to be captured, so we saw the same fight, starting up with him sending the idiot rescued heroine off on her horse. He fights, kills thousands... and then the dragons come. He hides under his mountain of bodies, to not be killed by the dragons, and the trolls are forced to retreat. And Kyle just goes on his merry way, free, as if none of the end of book 4 ever happened.
What the fuck?
And that's not the first time this has happened in this series. The last time, the Troll leader (Vesuvius) died attacking Kyra and Duncan's fort. We saw the woefully undermanned soldiers left to hold Velios charge to meet the Troll army, and Duncan's right hand guy die tragically, taking Vesuvius with him.
Next book, Vesuvuis was leading the army in an attack elsewhere.
I honestly just assumed that it was a copyedit error, because this series is filled with them. But after the author pulled this crap with Kyle, I can only assume that she changed her mind about killing him off, and decided to just pretend it never happened. Apparently that's a-okay in her book.
And honestly, it's a shame. The core of this story could be a good one, but it is so overwhelmed with repetition, poor editing, and TSTL characters that the good idea at the center is just wasted. This series is a shitshow.
Oh well, I guess we'll see how it ends. *laugh*