This whole series was a disappointment. I'm upset that I held out to the end. The world concept was so unique, I kept holding on hoping for the changes this book needed so badly. They never happened. This book has all the same problems of the first two and more.
*Spoiler warning beyond this point*
First off, why are Hirka and Rime still filled with self-doubt? If they had proper character growth, they would've gotten over that in the first book. I almost threw my book when I read, "[Rime] never wanted to sit on the Council in the first place. All he'd wanted was change. But what kind of change?" Right there. That is what is so, so wrong with this series. The two protagonists don't have goals. They just float around doing what they think is right in the moment and then think back on every action for the rest of the series wondering if they did the right thing. That entire question was the entire plot of the first book, it should have been asked and answered already.
He WAS in the position to bring change. Multiple times. Did he bring said change? No. He just reinstated the existing powers with himself as the head, made no changes, and made no attempts to make Eisvaldr stable. He shirked his responsibilities while there and quickly abandoned the entirety of Eisvaldr to go through a portal he had no way of knowing he'd come back from. He got so many chances yet never acted on them.
As for Hirka, she gets an entire chapter dedicated to her getting over herself and finally deciding to be and do what she wants. And then that's immediately followed by two chapters where all of that character development is thrown out the window. Both Hirka and Rime are weak-willed and have no driving force, yet somehow they both have the fate of infinite worlds teetering on their fingertips.
Lack of a clear, primary goal isn't a small flaw. It's huge. Giving your characters a primary goal is creative writing 101. Petterson didn't give them one. And the series suffered deeply because of it.
The only thing I can guess their goals were, were that they wanted to get into each other's pants. I'm serious. They couldn't be together because of The Rot, so they ran away for answers, to get rid of the power systems that would keep them apart, etc etc. That's why they never truly acted on anything, because they didn't know what they were truly doing it for. All those lives lost, the war, the massacres, it was all for that moment they had in that ice cave. And I didn't realize until the end, because the plot was the most unnecessarily convoluted thing in the world. If you think that's a primary goal, you're wrong. It needs to be something a lot stronger and clearer than that.
Petterson's shallow treatment of her main characters extends to all of her other characters as well. Lindri, Kolail, Graal, Skerri, Damayanti, Urd, all of Hirka's family, etc., all suffered from two dimensional writing.
Lindri felt like a last second addition. I honestly think Petterson finished her drafts, went through them, and added Lindri as a makeshift father figure.
Rime and Hirka's relationship with him doesn't make sense. Hirka only knew him for a week, yet she finds herself thinking of him frequently and with the intensity you would expect someone would feel for their beloved grandpa, not a week long acquaintance with a tea shop keeper she imposed herself onto.
As for Lindri's relationship with Rime, he shouldn't have had one. Once again, Petterson made the grave mistake of not giving her characters a goal, and that lack of a goal made it easy for her to change Lindri's character and attitude towards Rime completely, without reasonable events leading to such a drastic change. He literally becomes a replacement Svarteld for Rime. He does a complete 180 and goes from hating Rime and never wanting to see him again to becoming a mentor. And why? Because for some reason he suddenly "sees the good" in Rime, despite wanting nothing to do with him last book.
It's even worse when he not only forgives Rime, but becomes an apologist for him. Rime has done some god awful things and Lindri knew that in the last book and shunned him for it. Yet in this book, he sits down with Rime over tea, and practically tells him his victims made their own choices and that Rime isn't responsible for their manipulation, suffering, and deaths. The scene was such a painfully obvious write-in that attempted to redeem Rime to the readers, and it just fell so flat.
And on top of all that, we're expecting to believe he willingly died for Hirka and Rime to protect them, when all they did for him was cause him to lose all of his business!?
Another small detail that bothered me was the incompetence of the guards of Eisvaldr. In both the first and third books, when Eisvaldr is in states of emergencies, the guards continuously let everyone in unchallenged. Petterson specifically wrote in that the gates were on lockdown both times, and then immediately follows it up with either Rime or Hirka getting through unchallenged. It happened on my copy of the book on page seven. SEVEN! You'd think Petterson would at least try to bury it a bit more into the pages. The only reason it didn't happen in the second book was because they weren't there!
The whole world of the Umpiri needed to be explored a lot more, as well as Naiell and Graal's past. I would've much rather heard their story than the grinding complaints of Rime about his privilege, or of the morally misguided, self righteous thoughts of Hirka. The former and latter were extremely repetitive.
Hirka still never developed a respect for other people or their boundaries as I so desperately wanted her to. Her lack of respect was just as gross and frustrating as it was in the first two books.
Hirka is once again thrown into a world that's alien to her and what does she do? Try to understand them before judging or attempting to make any changes among them? Try to assimilate? No. She opts to immediately disrespect them. And when she finds out this disrespect of hers is putting a man's life in danger, does she stop? No, she continues, cries about it and acts like a victim when they're obviously upset by her total disrespect, and continues to behave like a spoiled brat. She laughs in the face of her mentor trying to teach her their ways, jeers at Skerri, who desperately tries to keep her from humiliating their House, and gets weirdly sexual and touchy with the exiled Umpiri. She needs a lecture on something called ethnocentrism, and then come back to the land of Umpiri.
And back to her touchiness. Her lack of boundaries and lack of respect towards other's boundaries continues to cross so many lines. She's honestly a creep. Literally on the same day she arrives among the Umpiri, she decides it's a good idea to drink out of the claws of an exiled Umpiri named Kolail. It was so fucking weird. When she lives among them, she's always touching or admiring her male relatives or Kolail. And later with Kolail, she pulls him out of a protest, performs a surgical removel of a shard of glass while creepily admiring his body, then she decides it's a good idea to sleep with her head resting on his legs even though she knew him for less than 48 hours and he made his discomfort of her clear. At one point, Kolail tells her point blank, "Who are you trying to get killed? Me or you?" She stupidly replies, "Does talking kill?" (She knows full well it does, but it won't be her they kill since her father is a high ranking Umpiri, it will be Kolail, an exile) he knows this too and replies, "Don't play dumb." Yet play dumb she does.
She has a huge amount of power over him and uses it to get touchy and to get her way, all under the guise of "helping" him and his cause. Who made this creep the main character? And for some reason, things always go her way, even though they really, truly shouldn't.
And I didn't mind Petterson making Hirka's two main enemies women. Well, I didn't mind until I found out why they were enemies: men. She literally wrote her female characters fighting over men. While Rime and other men were fighting for a kingdom, Hirka was fighting over sausage. (Yes, I know she came to fight for the kingdom too, but it was treated as a secondary goal for her).
First it was Skerri who hated Hirka for unknown reasons, until we find out it's because...wait for it!...she's jealous! Over what you might ask? Hirka's father. It was so stupid. All that tension just for the most sexist and lazy reason ever.
Then there was Damayanti. I was so. confused. when her and Hirka came face-to-face at the end. It was so unnecessary. Hirka literally just finished liberating the kingdom, fixing the flow of The Might, and achieving the ultimate honor of becoming Ravenborn, then when she's suddenly with Damayanti (who was very secondary in this book, so her sudden inclusion was out of the blue) she gloats....gloats about doing it with Rime. It was so weird.
All I can say about this series, after wasting so many hours reading through it all, is that it was badly written and weird.
I hate DNF'ing, but this was a prime lesson to me of the importance of knowing when to put a book down. I didn't for this one and suffered dearly.