ARC kindly provided by the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review
I honestly don't know how to rate this nor how to review this.
One the one hand, I liked the political message and the plot but on the other hand I didn't really like the characters and thought some things needed more depth. So to say I'm on the fence about A Chorus Rises is not an overstatement.
The book follows Naema who was, in a way, portrayed as the villain in A Chorus Rises' predecessor, A Song Below Water. This book posed as a redemption of some sort for her after getting slandered online for her actions and getting cancelled by many of her fans and her own Eloko community. Things start to spiral after a group of diehard fans of hers start exposing black women and girls as sirens online in her name. It's up to Naema to reconcile with the past in order to help fix the present and to stop the perpetrators before it's too late.
I liked the plot and the whole idea of this book: for there to be redemption for what I have always felt was a very misunderstood character. I wanted glimpses into Naema and yes while there was some justification for why she did the things she has done in book one, I wanted more of it, I wanted to understand it better... I wanter to understand her better but I felt like I still didn't get the layers to her character that I've always wanted. In that sense, the book didn't add anything to her for me and I kept wishing for character depth instead of the shallowness I seemed to get. Even with her character, there were bouts of characterisation, dialogue and behaviour that didn't seem to correlate sometimes. For example, sometimes Naema would be nice and pleasant and others she'd be arrogant and rude with no in between or any explanation for this change in behaviour. I wanted that to be dragged out a bit more, I wanted more of a transition from rude Naema into kind Naema instead of it going from A to B very quickly.
Following on with that point, Naema became one with her Eloko soul after immersing herself with her family and family history. I wanted that to be explored but I felt like I was just told that without it really being shown. I wanted to see those changes in characterisation and I wanted to see how becoming one with herself has changed Naema's outlook on self and identity. I felt like if there was more emphasis on that then it would've improved the book a lot and it would've created a lot of empathy towards Naema which I believe was the author's initial intention.
Pacing wise, I felt like things were either too slow or too fast as in, with the first half of the book, I felt like the pacing was slow, however, when it came to the end of the book, everything seemed to happen at once. It even took me a long time to process it all. The ending felt really rushed and everything was told to the reader regarding the plot. I believe myself to be quite attentive while reading however, when reading through all the things the cast of characters discovered, I was asking myself "wait did that actually happen? Did I read about that?" or "Hang on, oh that makes more sense" which shouldn't've happened considering all the conclusions made towards the end should've been drawn from previously revealed information in the book. There were lots of things I discovered at the end that really should've been revealed earlier. If those conclusions were drawn earlier and not towards the end, it would've made the book feel less rushed towards the end and would've created a steady flow of events.
Apart from that and the few grammatical errors I found (which is to be expected from a early ARC), I did enjoy the socio-political commentary and thought that was done well. I liked how we could also see Naema's thoughts and feelings towards Eloko, sirens and her Black community and thought that was handled by the author extremely well just like her previous novel, A Song Below Water also did.
ACTUAL RATING: 3.1 STARS