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The Kingsleys
Hearts Entwined
A gentleman and lady on the brink of matrimony…
Victoria loves Elijah.
Oliver loves Sophie.
Romance ought to be that simple. But with no dowry, Victoria cannot marry a pauper. Nor can Oliver wed the daughter of the woman who nearly ruined his parents’ life thirty years ago. Surely, a marriage based on mutual affection and friendship is enough.
Isn’t it?
But when all four are thrown together during a house party, Victoria and Oliver must decide between the duty to their families and following their own desires.
Whose heart must be broken?
Victoria loves Elijah.
Oliver loves Sophie.
Romance ought to be that simple. But with no dowry, Victoria cannot marry a pauper. Nor can Oliver wed the daughter of the woman who nearly ruined his parents’ life thirty years ago. Surely, a marriage based on mutual affection and friendship is enough.
Isn’t it?
But when all four are thrown together during a house party, Victoria and Oliver must decide between the duty to their families and following their own desires.
Whose heart must be broken?
286 pages, ebook
First published December 22, 2020
About the author
M.A. Nichols
41 books492 followersBorn and raised in Anchorage, M.A. Nichols is a lifelong Alaskan, though she briefly ventured south to get a fancy bachelor’s degree from Brigham Young University and a master’s degree from Utah State University—neither of which had anything to do with why she became an author, but they kept her alive while launching her publishing career.
As a child she despised reading, but thanks to her mother’s love and persistence, she saw the error of her ways and developed a deep and abiding obsession with books. Currently, she writes sweet historical romance and fantasy, but as a lover of many genres, she plans to explore more in the future.
As a child she despised reading, but thanks to her mother’s love and persistence, she saw the error of her ways and developed a deep and abiding obsession with books. Currently, she writes sweet historical romance and fantasy, but as a lover of many genres, she plans to explore more in the future.
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April 2, 2022
This is a story that took on a life of its own. When I started outlining it, I had a lot of different ideas of what would happen, but as I got to know the characters, they really shaped what happened, altering and changing it in ways I hadn't intended. And turned out much better! :)
I'm excited for you to get to know Oliver & Sophie and Victoria & Elijah. I adore this book!
I'm excited for you to get to know Oliver & Sophie and Victoria & Elijah. I adore this book!
August 28, 2022
Kisses-only Victorian. This had too much drama until the
story allowed several ladies to be more content & we saw
forgiveness. Not a cookie-cutter story. Slow in places but
still 4 stars.
This had two couples. Oliver was on the cusp of proposing
to Victoria. Her family experienced 'dun territory' & needed
an infusion of funds Oliver could supply. Victoria was crazy
in love w/ Elijah who served as a low-paying secretary with
ambitions to run for MP. Oliver & Sophie met at a ball 5
yrs prior & seemed compatible. But his parents (Mina+
Simon) clashed w/ Sophie's mom, Susannah, (with just
cause) & told him to cut the connection w/ Sophie. Whew!
The Nelson family hosted the aforementioned people at a
month long house party. Several folks shared unsolicited
verbal digs: Susannah, Hettie, Phyllis & Allen. Two played
a cruel joke on the hero's sister. At 1 point witchy Susannah
made a play for (30 yrs her junior) our hero Oliver!
Sophie (the h) & Victoria & others gained in confidence.
Most forgave: themselves for perceived faults or others.
My favorite scene? When Mina navigated a verbal rumble
with Susannah and won!
story allowed several ladies to be more content & we saw
forgiveness. Not a cookie-cutter story. Slow in places but
still 4 stars.
This had two couples. Oliver was on the cusp of proposing
to Victoria. Her family experienced 'dun territory' & needed
an infusion of funds Oliver could supply. Victoria was crazy
in love w/ Elijah who served as a low-paying secretary with
ambitions to run for MP. Oliver & Sophie met at a ball 5
yrs prior & seemed compatible. But his parents (Mina+
Simon) clashed w/ Sophie's mom, Susannah, (with just
cause) & told him to cut the connection w/ Sophie. Whew!
The Nelson family hosted the aforementioned people at a
month long house party. Several folks shared unsolicited
verbal digs: Susannah, Hettie, Phyllis & Allen. Two played
a cruel joke on the hero's sister. At 1 point witchy Susannah
made a play for (30 yrs her junior) our hero Oliver!
Sophie (the h) & Victoria & others gained in confidence.
Most forgave: themselves for perceived faults or others.
My favorite scene? When Mina navigated a verbal rumble
with Susannah and won!
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September 9, 2022
A hard book to put down
I had to finish it once is started. Love all the little side stories and loves you find. Great story!
I had to finish it once is started. Love all the little side stories and loves you find. Great story!
January 26, 2021
I will admit I was a bit nervous going into this book since the author's books don't tend to be super long and there were not only one, but two love stories that she had to tell in this book. I worried that there would not be enough time to give each couple the time to give them the love story they deserved. I had no need to fear though, because the author knocked it out of the park with this book. Both love stories felt very well developed by the end and I adored each couple once it was over. Not only that, but it brought back main characters from previous books which was so nice. I just fell so in love with this book. I tried to read it all in one sitting because I couldn't bear the thought of having to wait to see how it ended, though in the end I was unable to and it took a lot of internal struggle to find the strength to put it down. I would definitely recommend this book and if you haven't already hurry and go read it, you won't regret it.
December 28, 2020
Explorations of the heart
This series follows the children of Nichols Regency series. In this novel the past well and truly comes home to roost. The entwined hearts of eight people engage us in their journeys to self knowledge, for good or ill. It is clever that the two young women who yearn for the same man are not heroine and villain. Rather both are lovely people trying to find their way through the maze created by the often opposing pulls of duty and desire. The other characters are not just there to take up space. The tension between malice and kindness plays out in the house party. Although romances usually guarantee a HEA, at one stage I thought it was impossible for the author to untangle the threads. But it angle them she does with integrity and honesty. No deus ex machina required.
This series follows the children of Nichols Regency series. In this novel the past well and truly comes home to roost. The entwined hearts of eight people engage us in their journeys to self knowledge, for good or ill. It is clever that the two young women who yearn for the same man are not heroine and villain. Rather both are lovely people trying to find their way through the maze created by the often opposing pulls of duty and desire. The other characters are not just there to take up space. The tension between malice and kindness plays out in the house party. Although romances usually guarantee a HEA, at one stage I thought it was impossible for the author to untangle the threads. But it angle them she does with integrity and honesty. No deus ex machina required.
January 7, 2021
3 main characters
At first I was nervous about the 3 main points of view, but the author does very good job differentiating between the three and it's a beautiful tale with the double story. Very well done!
At first I was nervous about the 3 main points of view, but the author does very good job differentiating between the three and it's a beautiful tale with the double story. Very well done!
December 30, 2020
So much romance!
As always, loved this authors story! This time there were several romances spun and it was fun to watch them all get tied with a bow at the end.
As always, loved this authors story! This time there were several romances spun and it was fun to watch them all get tied with a bow at the end.
December 25, 2020
First I would like to state that I received this book through the Goodreads giveaway in exchange for an honest review. I would like to thank the author for giving me this opportunity and honor in being able to read this book. When I received this book I began reading it at once. I really enjoy the authors writing style, pulls you into the book from the very beginning and you don't want to put the book down. It kept me on the edge of my seat reading from cover to cover. A most wonderful read and I recommend this book
December 25, 2020
Throughly enjoyed the storyline and read
March 1, 2021
**Actually a 4.5-rating**
Even though this is not a fully fleshed out 5-rating, as many of Nichols books have been for me, even when it loses a star-shine in rating, there is worthy story unfolding within. Had this been handled by a lesser Author, maybe my rating would've fallen into the 4s-or lower. Under Nichols's sly tutelage, it's difficult to find that either story lacks credence or an importance of sorts.
I used to love ensemble romantic stories. Or maybe we call them dual romances or tandem love stories. This starts with Sophie and Oliver...in a most engrossing and scintillating moment of sharing The Dark Corner Shadows at a house party neither wants to be at. I love that. And I love how easily Oliver and Sophie connected, possibly so instantly to be assured of Love At First Sight.
I was hooked on Sophie and Oliver from the very minute they met. They were what drew me deeper and kept me reading along the way.
Except...it is the dreaded case of Romeo and Juliet... Sophie is the daughter of Oliver's Mom's lifetime nemesis... the woman her husband nearly ruined their marriage for. Talk about a leap of faith and the world they live in being so small... when Oliver learns he has called on a young lady he is forbidden to even be near or get to know better...his father begs him to stop and go no further.
So even thought Oliver had planned to spend a lovely day with Miss Sophie Banfield...he sends her flowers and a short, curt letter of refusal to even further their acquaintance. Sophie is rejected merely because of the past her Mother has wrought in her wake.
Next...it is 5yrs later... Sophie, Her parents, Mr. & Mrs. Banfield and one of her bachelor brothers, Allen...arrive at a house party in the country. Along the way, Sophie learns not only is she in the presence of a lovely young woman, Miss Victoria Caswell...Miss Caswell is quite soon-to-be-engaged to a Mr. Oliver Kingsley...and so begins our story.
Let me clear this up a bit, just like in Book 2...we also have an Adult/Parent marriage of Mina and Simon Kingsley to view along with the newer budding romances of the younger folk. This married couple is Oliver's parents; they have been invited to the same house party as their son might become engaged. And just like in Book 2, the parents of one of the love interests is kind of involved in whether their son can find his safe space and happy place with their blessing or not.
There is a lot of history and trauma...so much damaged left behind by Sophie's mother...and unfortunately, even though Sophie is a different person...with a kindness, compassion and a soul, than her own vindictive mother...she cannot help but often be painted by the same brush. People expect Sophie to be much like her own mother, and she is not. In fact, Sophie is almost an outcast in her own family. And time and time again...Mina & Simon will tell Oliver...and also Lily, their daughter who is also at this house party to steer clear of Sophie. Leave her alone because she is a sly one, just like her mother.
I felt like poor Sophie could never catch a break. I also felt like poor Oliver and Lily, too, found such a peace offering in the breath-of-fresh-air that Sophie was to them, each at different times, in different ways...always as a good friend, but also, with their best interests at heart. How sad that Sophie was allowing her own mother to overshadow her own brilliance and shine. Thank God for Victoria and her being able to knock some sense into Oliver, making him realize he could be happier with Sophie.
My problems became with Victoria...and her true love interest of Mr. Elijah Dixon. When we arrive at the house party...Victoria is now locked into not just having her [maybe] fiance in the midst but also the man she genuinely has feelings for. Something about this felt a bit incomplete in a way because Victoria and Mr Dixon have a "built-in" relationship readers were never privy to...so it comes as a stunner when she is way-more welcoming to Mr Dixon than to her own soon-to-be-fiance, Mr. Kingsley.
I realize Victoria had a lot of weight on her shoulders, with the idea in her head she had to marry WELL [ a rich man, not a pauper] so her sisters could all have better dowries...but it was so clear to me where Victoria's heart was placed. And when she tried really hard to turn Oliver's own feelings around where she knew they belonged, I was confused why she wouldn't confess her own...to Mr. Dixon, right to Oliver's face.
Not that Victoria was deceiving anyone but herself, because after rejecting Oliver...she really tries to circle the left-over wagon train in marriageable bachelors in trying to find a viable rich husband to marry. And, yeah, eventually, she is not just rejected herself...from a man she outright proposes to whom she does not love... Oliver himself turns the tables and tells her outright, "You love another. And just like you helped me to see the light, let me do the same for you." While I was happy and pleased for Victoria, and Elijah...I was not as invested as I would've liked to have been.
Well, I was not invested in Victoria & Elijah like I was so much more invested in...not just Sophie and Oliver...but man, the horrible pranks being pulled on Lily...by so-called "friends" and just...my heart broke over and over for Mina and also Simon. But I also was a bit upset that they kept denying Sophie could be anything but JUST LIKE MOTHER DEAREST...because she was so far from her mother. My heart broke often for Sophie would could not seem to catch a damn break...but Thank God Oliver and Lily both wised up and knocked some sense into their parents.
I was a bit pleasantly surprised though when we got the scene of Victoria having to come to her parents one morning...to admit that she loved a Pauper...a man who only worked as a clerk in an office but had dreams in Politics. Even though her parents dissolved that conversation into one of their bickering arguments...what I loved was when Victoria's father follows as she exits, chases after his daughter and sheds some light on his honest truths.
This is what I mean about any lesser Author would've kept Victoria's parents bickering and yelling. But Nichols creates one of the more poignant scenes, I think...of a character I wasn't as invested in until THAT VERY MOMENT. Her father confesses he married for "money" and it got him nothing. At least not the happiness and fulfillment he expected. And sometimes maybe you sacrifice the want with a true need. Victoria loved and NEEDED Mr. Elijah Dixon...and if she chose any other man for her husband...there would not just be a sadness but a hole so huge inside her of something missing...if she did not make a sound and solid choice. What makes her happy...money or true love? [psst, Victoria's father was so much more willing to not just help her but also her sisters when their times came along with their own dowries...he hated himself for putting such pressure on his girls...to strong arm them into marriage...]
So, my gosh...while this may have been one helluva crowded book...the fact that Nichols writes such memorable fascinating and engrossing characters. But she also re-introduces you to the prior couples you had forgotten you adored from past books...Like Tabby and Graham...how wonderful to see them yet again, but also that Mina had a steadfast champion in sister-in-law Tabby...who was willing to give Sophie's Mother a word or two in a severe cut-down that was much needed.
Nichols writes such unforgettable characters that seeing them pop into later books starts to become something of a wonderful Family Reunion you never knew you wanted. Last book...my love for Mary & Ambrose got deeper [if that were possible]...and Nichols reminded me of why Mina and Simon were my first "loves" of her couples from Regency Love series. But what is even more powerful and interesting is that...the children of these couples have every bit of what made me love their parents...and still love them...maybe even more intense than before.
There is something unique and awe-inspiring about such flawless writing like this...where even in the midst of me not as fascinated by a certain character or her love interest...I was still finding myself captivated by something as mundane as her own father having compassion and a consciousness in this kind of a patriarchal world...daughters being "sold" into marriages that maybe would never make them happy...where another Author would've vilified Mr. Caswell...and kept him as someone who couldn't find a way to make his oldest daughter happy, with the man she fell in love with.
Oh, and this was kind of awkward to be somewhat set BEFORE Book 1... which is Lily's book...which was weird to see a younger Lily in this story. But no rules say the book series HAD to be in chronological order...hehehe, and that is okay...What goes on in this book towards Lily almost fuels her own book...and too bad I have already re-read it or I would immediately go on into it...wanting Lily to find her well-deserved ounce of happiness.
Even though this is not a fully fleshed out 5-rating, as many of Nichols books have been for me, even when it loses a star-shine in rating, there is worthy story unfolding within. Had this been handled by a lesser Author, maybe my rating would've fallen into the 4s-or lower. Under Nichols's sly tutelage, it's difficult to find that either story lacks credence or an importance of sorts.
I used to love ensemble romantic stories. Or maybe we call them dual romances or tandem love stories. This starts with Sophie and Oliver...in a most engrossing and scintillating moment of sharing The Dark Corner Shadows at a house party neither wants to be at. I love that. And I love how easily Oliver and Sophie connected, possibly so instantly to be assured of Love At First Sight.
I was hooked on Sophie and Oliver from the very minute they met. They were what drew me deeper and kept me reading along the way.
Except...it is the dreaded case of Romeo and Juliet... Sophie is the daughter of Oliver's Mom's lifetime nemesis... the woman her husband nearly ruined their marriage for. Talk about a leap of faith and the world they live in being so small... when Oliver learns he has called on a young lady he is forbidden to even be near or get to know better...his father begs him to stop and go no further.
So even thought Oliver had planned to spend a lovely day with Miss Sophie Banfield...he sends her flowers and a short, curt letter of refusal to even further their acquaintance. Sophie is rejected merely because of the past her Mother has wrought in her wake.
Next...it is 5yrs later... Sophie, Her parents, Mr. & Mrs. Banfield and one of her bachelor brothers, Allen...arrive at a house party in the country. Along the way, Sophie learns not only is she in the presence of a lovely young woman, Miss Victoria Caswell...Miss Caswell is quite soon-to-be-engaged to a Mr. Oliver Kingsley...and so begins our story.
Let me clear this up a bit, just like in Book 2...we also have an Adult/Parent marriage of Mina and Simon Kingsley to view along with the newer budding romances of the younger folk. This married couple is Oliver's parents; they have been invited to the same house party as their son might become engaged. And just like in Book 2, the parents of one of the love interests is kind of involved in whether their son can find his safe space and happy place with their blessing or not.
There is a lot of history and trauma...so much damaged left behind by Sophie's mother...and unfortunately, even though Sophie is a different person...with a kindness, compassion and a soul, than her own vindictive mother...she cannot help but often be painted by the same brush. People expect Sophie to be much like her own mother, and she is not. In fact, Sophie is almost an outcast in her own family. And time and time again...Mina & Simon will tell Oliver...and also Lily, their daughter who is also at this house party to steer clear of Sophie. Leave her alone because she is a sly one, just like her mother.
I felt like poor Sophie could never catch a break. I also felt like poor Oliver and Lily, too, found such a peace offering in the breath-of-fresh-air that Sophie was to them, each at different times, in different ways...always as a good friend, but also, with their best interests at heart. How sad that Sophie was allowing her own mother to overshadow her own brilliance and shine. Thank God for Victoria and her being able to knock some sense into Oliver, making him realize he could be happier with Sophie.
My problems became with Victoria...and her true love interest of Mr. Elijah Dixon. When we arrive at the house party...Victoria is now locked into not just having her [maybe] fiance in the midst but also the man she genuinely has feelings for. Something about this felt a bit incomplete in a way because Victoria and Mr Dixon have a "built-in" relationship readers were never privy to...so it comes as a stunner when she is way-more welcoming to Mr Dixon than to her own soon-to-be-fiance, Mr. Kingsley.
I realize Victoria had a lot of weight on her shoulders, with the idea in her head she had to marry WELL [ a rich man, not a pauper] so her sisters could all have better dowries...but it was so clear to me where Victoria's heart was placed. And when she tried really hard to turn Oliver's own feelings around where she knew they belonged, I was confused why she wouldn't confess her own...to Mr. Dixon, right to Oliver's face.
Not that Victoria was deceiving anyone but herself, because after rejecting Oliver...she really tries to circle the left-over wagon train in marriageable bachelors in trying to find a viable rich husband to marry. And, yeah, eventually, she is not just rejected herself...from a man she outright proposes to whom she does not love... Oliver himself turns the tables and tells her outright, "You love another. And just like you helped me to see the light, let me do the same for you." While I was happy and pleased for Victoria, and Elijah...I was not as invested as I would've liked to have been.
Well, I was not invested in Victoria & Elijah like I was so much more invested in...not just Sophie and Oliver...but man, the horrible pranks being pulled on Lily...by so-called "friends" and just...my heart broke over and over for Mina and also Simon. But I also was a bit upset that they kept denying Sophie could be anything but JUST LIKE MOTHER DEAREST...because she was so far from her mother. My heart broke often for Sophie would could not seem to catch a damn break...but Thank God Oliver and Lily both wised up and knocked some sense into their parents.
I was a bit pleasantly surprised though when we got the scene of Victoria having to come to her parents one morning...to admit that she loved a Pauper...a man who only worked as a clerk in an office but had dreams in Politics. Even though her parents dissolved that conversation into one of their bickering arguments...what I loved was when Victoria's father follows as she exits, chases after his daughter and sheds some light on his honest truths.
This is what I mean about any lesser Author would've kept Victoria's parents bickering and yelling. But Nichols creates one of the more poignant scenes, I think...of a character I wasn't as invested in until THAT VERY MOMENT. Her father confesses he married for "money" and it got him nothing. At least not the happiness and fulfillment he expected. And sometimes maybe you sacrifice the want with a true need. Victoria loved and NEEDED Mr. Elijah Dixon...and if she chose any other man for her husband...there would not just be a sadness but a hole so huge inside her of something missing...if she did not make a sound and solid choice. What makes her happy...money or true love? [psst, Victoria's father was so much more willing to not just help her but also her sisters when their times came along with their own dowries...he hated himself for putting such pressure on his girls...to strong arm them into marriage...]
So, my gosh...while this may have been one helluva crowded book...the fact that Nichols writes such memorable fascinating and engrossing characters. But she also re-introduces you to the prior couples you had forgotten you adored from past books...Like Tabby and Graham...how wonderful to see them yet again, but also that Mina had a steadfast champion in sister-in-law Tabby...who was willing to give Sophie's Mother a word or two in a severe cut-down that was much needed.
Nichols writes such unforgettable characters that seeing them pop into later books starts to become something of a wonderful Family Reunion you never knew you wanted. Last book...my love for Mary & Ambrose got deeper [if that were possible]...and Nichols reminded me of why Mina and Simon were my first "loves" of her couples from Regency Love series. But what is even more powerful and interesting is that...the children of these couples have every bit of what made me love their parents...and still love them...maybe even more intense than before.
There is something unique and awe-inspiring about such flawless writing like this...where even in the midst of me not as fascinated by a certain character or her love interest...I was still finding myself captivated by something as mundane as her own father having compassion and a consciousness in this kind of a patriarchal world...daughters being "sold" into marriages that maybe would never make them happy...where another Author would've vilified Mr. Caswell...and kept him as someone who couldn't find a way to make his oldest daughter happy, with the man she fell in love with.
Oh, and this was kind of awkward to be somewhat set BEFORE Book 1... which is Lily's book...which was weird to see a younger Lily in this story. But no rules say the book series HAD to be in chronological order...hehehe, and that is okay...What goes on in this book towards Lily almost fuels her own book...and too bad I have already re-read it or I would immediately go on into it...wanting Lily to find her well-deserved ounce of happiness.
January 10, 2021
As the third book in the Victorian Love Series (timeline wise, the events in this story happen the earliest in the series), this follows the love stories of Oliver Kingsley (oldest child of Mina and Simon Kingsley from Flame and Ember), Victoria Cassell, Sophie Banfield, and Elijah Dixon and ultimately an almost-engaged pair and their conflict to follow their hearts or choose their families. While this story was not bad, it didn't manage to capture and move me the way the The Honorable Choice did and I didn't connect with the protagonist in the way that I did with Lily from A Stolen Kiss. Oliver, Sophie, Victoria, and Elijah all have hindrances to their happily ever afters, but at times, it all felt like their issues were drawn out a tad too much and not connecting to their conflict or the characters made reading this a trying task at times. While it worked successfully in The Honorable Choice, the various point-of-views got pretty confusing at times. There was one scene in particular from Victoria's POV that was incredibly hard to follow, but I actually thought it worked to capture her frantic feelings in that moment.
I normally don't say this, but for the first time, I felt that there was too much presence of the protagonists from the previous series (Mina and Simon). Given the major conflict in Oliver's loveline, they're 100% needed, but their continued presence seemed to draw too much attention away from the main 4 characters. I often mentally compared their presence to Ambrose and Mary in The Honorable Choice. While Ambrose and Mary were very present, I didn't feel like it took away from Conrad and Ruby's story. Mina and Simon had such a strong presence that I feel like they should be promoted to the 4th and 5th main characters because their point of views were put forward more strongly than Elijah Dixon's.
When it boils down to it, I did enjoy the story and I would recommend it. However, when compared to the other M.A. Nichols' stories I've read, I probably won't pick this up to re-read as often as I did the others as I feel its the weakest of the Victorian Love series thus far.
I normally don't say this, but for the first time, I felt that there was too much presence of the protagonists from the previous series (Mina and Simon). Given the major conflict in Oliver's loveline, they're 100% needed, but their continued presence seemed to draw too much attention away from the main 4 characters. I often mentally compared their presence to Ambrose and Mary in The Honorable Choice. While Ambrose and Mary were very present, I didn't feel like it took away from Conrad and Ruby's story. Mina and Simon had such a strong presence that I feel like they should be promoted to the 4th and 5th main characters because their point of views were put forward more strongly than Elijah Dixon's.
When it boils down to it, I did enjoy the story and I would recommend it. However, when compared to the other M.A. Nichols' stories I've read, I probably won't pick this up to re-read as often as I did the others as I feel its the weakest of the Victorian Love series thus far.
February 20, 2026
Soothing and with character growth.
A beautifully narrated book. I always prefer to listen to this author's books and one of the reasons why is the voice artist. She always uses the same one and I love her work. She has a way of making you feel as relaxed as a well fed baby with her smooth voice.
Love polygons can be annoying if poorly written but this was such a gentle lovely read. Yes there are unsavoury characters but their shenanigans only add to the beauty of the story instead of leaving you with a permanent sour taste in your mouth. The author handles their existance artfully.
The story is part of a series and 2 of the main characters in this are the children of characters from a previous book (Flame and Ember). I would highly recommend reading that before this as it allows you to truly understand why the main characters find themselves in quite a bind. Flame and Ember made me fall in love with this author's work so it would be absolutely worth the go.
The story is rich in character development which I love, though I would have truly prefered if one of the secondary characters was made a main character in order to enrich the story further. Because he was not a main character I felt one of the main female characters' story limped quite a bit. And so two stars were lost in my rating.
So brings me to Victoria's love story with her beau. I would have really enjoyed exploring their story more. He should have had a POV too and we should have learned more about their interactions and the journey of their attachment in order to inspire more empathy for their plight as readers. It would have helped make this a 5 star read for me. Because it was missing, Victoria's plight just became super repetitive towards the end as she kept having to carry their part of the story by herself. There wasn't much more that could be added to make it more gripping without seeing his side of things. Not to mention every time she was with him they spent more time in kisses than in actual relating so I honestly didn't feel like theirs was much of a match to fight for to be honest. There was nothing going on between them on page to convince the reader that he was the perfect match for Victoria apart from just taking her word for it. More needed to happen on page with him.
Though there is quite a bit of kissing and some slight chatter about desire, there is no lewd talk or forray into bedrooms and the like. Always a win in my book!
A beautifully narrated book. I always prefer to listen to this author's books and one of the reasons why is the voice artist. She always uses the same one and I love her work. She has a way of making you feel as relaxed as a well fed baby with her smooth voice.
Love polygons can be annoying if poorly written but this was such a gentle lovely read. Yes there are unsavoury characters but their shenanigans only add to the beauty of the story instead of leaving you with a permanent sour taste in your mouth. The author handles their existance artfully.
The story is part of a series and 2 of the main characters in this are the children of characters from a previous book (Flame and Ember). I would highly recommend reading that before this as it allows you to truly understand why the main characters find themselves in quite a bind. Flame and Ember made me fall in love with this author's work so it would be absolutely worth the go.
The story is rich in character development which I love, though I would have truly prefered if one of the secondary characters was made a main character in order to enrich the story further. Because he was not a main character I felt one of the main female characters' story limped quite a bit. And so two stars were lost in my rating.
So brings me to Victoria's love story with her beau. I would have really enjoyed exploring their story more. He should have had a POV too and we should have learned more about their interactions and the journey of their attachment in order to inspire more empathy for their plight as readers. It would have helped make this a 5 star read for me. Because it was missing, Victoria's plight just became super repetitive towards the end as she kept having to carry their part of the story by herself. There wasn't much more that could be added to make it more gripping without seeing his side of things. Not to mention every time she was with him they spent more time in kisses than in actual relating so I honestly didn't feel like theirs was much of a match to fight for to be honest. There was nothing going on between them on page to convince the reader that he was the perfect match for Victoria apart from just taking her word for it. More needed to happen on page with him.
Though there is quite a bit of kissing and some slight chatter about desire, there is no lewd talk or forray into bedrooms and the like. Always a win in my book!
September 20, 2025
Heart Entwined by M.A. Nichols delivers a classic romance centered on forbidden love and love at first sight, a combination that isn’t quite my cup of tea.
The romance between Oliver and Sophie feels straightforward—lacking the internal struggles that often add depth to a love story. They meet, fall in love instantly, without truly knowing each other, and the primary conflict stems from external obstacles rather than their own dynamic.
On the positive side, Nichols excels at weaving the couple’s beliefs and values into their story, a hallmark of her work that grounds the romance in authenticity. Additionally, the novel offers a parallel forbidden love story that rivals the main couple in prominence. I found myself more invested in this secondary couple—both as individuals and as a pair—due to their compelling characterization. This dual romance adds a layer of richness, almost like getting two love stories for the price of one. The secondary romance, centered on Victoria (Oliver’s intended), is particularly engaging, largely because her point of view (POV) brings depth to her arc.
The book features four POVs: Oliver, Sophie, Victoria, and Mina (Oliver’s mother). While Victoria’s POV elevates the secondary romance, making it a standout, Mina’s perspective feels somewhat superfluous. The only moment in Mina’s POV that resonated was her eventual pity toward Susanna, but this could have been conveyed through dialogue rather than a dedicated perspective.
Beyond the romance, the plot is engaging, particularly the family feud that complicates the young couple’s relationship and the bullying that Victoria’s friend inflicts on Sophie and Lily. These elements add tension and stakes, making the story more than just a romance.
Overall, Heart Entwined is a solid read, but doesn’t shine as brightly as Nichols’ The Honorable Choice or A True Gentleman. Still, it surpasses Flame and Ember in execution.
The romance between Oliver and Sophie feels straightforward—lacking the internal struggles that often add depth to a love story. They meet, fall in love instantly, without truly knowing each other, and the primary conflict stems from external obstacles rather than their own dynamic.
On the positive side, Nichols excels at weaving the couple’s beliefs and values into their story, a hallmark of her work that grounds the romance in authenticity. Additionally, the novel offers a parallel forbidden love story that rivals the main couple in prominence. I found myself more invested in this secondary couple—both as individuals and as a pair—due to their compelling characterization. This dual romance adds a layer of richness, almost like getting two love stories for the price of one. The secondary romance, centered on Victoria (Oliver’s intended), is particularly engaging, largely because her point of view (POV) brings depth to her arc.
The book features four POVs: Oliver, Sophie, Victoria, and Mina (Oliver’s mother). While Victoria’s POV elevates the secondary romance, making it a standout, Mina’s perspective feels somewhat superfluous. The only moment in Mina’s POV that resonated was her eventual pity toward Susanna, but this could have been conveyed through dialogue rather than a dedicated perspective.
Beyond the romance, the plot is engaging, particularly the family feud that complicates the young couple’s relationship and the bullying that Victoria’s friend inflicts on Sophie and Lily. These elements add tension and stakes, making the story more than just a romance.
Overall, Heart Entwined is a solid read, but doesn’t shine as brightly as Nichols’ The Honorable Choice or A True Gentleman. Still, it surpasses Flame and Ember in execution.
November 30, 2023
Simon and Mina Kingsley's worst nightmare reemerges (from FLAME AND EMBERS) when their son Oliver falls for Sophie Banfield (Susanna Banfield's daughter). Susanna Banfield was the woman Simon thought he could never get over and it almost destroyed his marriage to Mina (from FLAMES AND EMBERS). This story brings up old hurts, and the Kingsleys ask their son to avoid Sophie, to whom Oliver has formed an attachment. Reluctantly, he does.
The story resumes five years later, with Oliver about to commit to marriage with Victoria Caswell. They are all invited to a house party of one month's duration. However, Sophie, her mother, and the Kingsleys are at the same party. Suddenly, things that seemed so clear and easy became anything but that.
This story is a fascinating interplay of emotions, personalities, old hurts, and new situations. It is also interesting to watch young women search for husbands. Without a significant dowry, most women are stuck with spinsterhood or a disadvantageous marriage to a man of poor means (vicar or city worker). Oliver will inherit significant lands and property. Thus, Victoria has to battle with herself not to marry him just because she doesn't love him. Marrying Oliver would solve her family's problems.
One of the most interesting interplays is between Mr. Caswell, Mrs. Caswell, and Victoria. It is near the end of the book but shows why the family is nearly destitute. Mrs. Caswell has been caught up all her life being related to a baron and viscount. She had to spend money to show her standing in the community. This staggering discovery shows much about "being related to the aristocracy." Keeping up appearances can bankrupt a family, even though the relationship is tenuous at best. Tragic.
Kingsley Series
Flame and Ember (2018)
** 2. Hearts Entwined (2020)
3. A Stolen Kiss (2020)
The story resumes five years later, with Oliver about to commit to marriage with Victoria Caswell. They are all invited to a house party of one month's duration. However, Sophie, her mother, and the Kingsleys are at the same party. Suddenly, things that seemed so clear and easy became anything but that.
This story is a fascinating interplay of emotions, personalities, old hurts, and new situations. It is also interesting to watch young women search for husbands. Without a significant dowry, most women are stuck with spinsterhood or a disadvantageous marriage to a man of poor means (vicar or city worker). Oliver will inherit significant lands and property. Thus, Victoria has to battle with herself not to marry him just because she doesn't love him. Marrying Oliver would solve her family's problems.
One of the most interesting interplays is between Mr. Caswell, Mrs. Caswell, and Victoria. It is near the end of the book but shows why the family is nearly destitute. Mrs. Caswell has been caught up all her life being related to a baron and viscount. She had to spend money to show her standing in the community. This staggering discovery shows much about "being related to the aristocracy." Keeping up appearances can bankrupt a family, even though the relationship is tenuous at best. Tragic.
Kingsley Series
Flame and Ember (2018)
** 2. Hearts Entwined (2020)
3. A Stolen Kiss (2020)
March 16, 2021
This book is indeed entwined with multiple love stories and relationships. There is a lot going on as relationships tangle around each other. The main story is 2 relationships but there is also a continuing story line about the parents whose story started in Flame and Ember. This book is cram packed with story.
I enjoyed reading this book and seeing everyone come out as I hoped they would. I loved Oliver and Sophie's meet cute. They are darling together and I was attached to them from the beginning. We didn't really see a lot of Elijah outside of his time spent with Victoria and we only see that once their relationship is long established, but I'd have to say that he was incredibly patient as he watched Victoria make choices to please her family.
I find the numbering of these books confusing since this is the 3rd book in the Victorian Love series but it happens before the 1st book. Also a little confusing as the book is part of two series. A series within a series really. I'd really prefer the books to be renumbered in chronological order even if they were published in a different order. (I assume that is why they are numbered as they are). But it still works to read them in whatever order. I haven't read Flame and Ember yet but I still followed what had happened in that book that carried over into this one.
Sex: Innuendo, inappropriate behavior
Language: no
Violence: no
I enjoyed reading this book and seeing everyone come out as I hoped they would. I loved Oliver and Sophie's meet cute. They are darling together and I was attached to them from the beginning. We didn't really see a lot of Elijah outside of his time spent with Victoria and we only see that once their relationship is long established, but I'd have to say that he was incredibly patient as he watched Victoria make choices to please her family.
I find the numbering of these books confusing since this is the 3rd book in the Victorian Love series but it happens before the 1st book. Also a little confusing as the book is part of two series. A series within a series really. I'd really prefer the books to be renumbered in chronological order even if they were published in a different order. (I assume that is why they are numbered as they are). But it still works to read them in whatever order. I haven't read Flame and Ember yet but I still followed what had happened in that book that carried over into this one.
Sex: Innuendo, inappropriate behavior
Language: no
Violence: no
January 20, 2021
A good read, especially if you have read the other series. Full disclosure: the events of this book take place before the first two books in this series, which begs the question of why?? I don't feel that there was any benefit to that. In fact I was a little baffled and went back to read sections of the first book to see how they matched up. The story is good with continuity, just odd that this one came third. So if you haven't read the others yet, start with this one and then work through 1 and 2 in my opinion.
On to the review, this book is sweet and incredibly frustrating at the same time. I felt like the characters would have no hope of getting together with the right people, but in the end, of course everything worked out. I always enjoy when heroines stand up to their elder's especially when they are being self centered morons. However there are multiple points-of-view in this book and at times I felt it was jumping around too much, but then again switching between 4+ POV is not to my personal taste. There is a lot of background info that comes the first series so I HIGHLY recommend reading those before or at least Flame and Ember which is the Hero's parent's tale. The story was clean, fun and you can't help but have your heart wrenched around a few times before the end. All in all a very satisfying read and will definitely be staying in my to keep pile.
On to the review, this book is sweet and incredibly frustrating at the same time. I felt like the characters would have no hope of getting together with the right people, but in the end, of course everything worked out. I always enjoy when heroines stand up to their elder's especially when they are being self centered morons. However there are multiple points-of-view in this book and at times I felt it was jumping around too much, but then again switching between 4+ POV is not to my personal taste. There is a lot of background info that comes the first series so I HIGHLY recommend reading those before or at least Flame and Ember which is the Hero's parent's tale. The story was clean, fun and you can't help but have your heart wrenched around a few times before the end. All in all a very satisfying read and will definitely be staying in my to keep pile.
September 8, 2023
This is a tangled web. Oliver meets Sophie and his father tells him to stay away. So years pass and Oliver is courting Victoria. There is a house party, and boom there is Sophie
Sophie still carries a torch for Oliver, and well Oliver figures out pretty quick that Sophie is amazing. Victoria's family is secretly penniless so she needs to wed Oliver for his money, but at this same house party is her love Elijah. But Elijah is poor, bound to be a successful politician but not yet.
Also the biggest wrinkle for me is that Sophie is a Banfield. Which means she is Susannah's daughter. Susannah who tried to lure Simon from Mina in Flame and Ember.
Yikes! That causes a lot of friction. Even though Sophie is nothing like her awful family.
So what to do? Do Oliver and Victoria do the easy thing and marry? It would be the best thing for everyone but them. And Sophie. And Elijah.
I can get behind Victoria and Elijah. I can see where money can be overlooked. But. For the rest if their lives Mina has to put up with Susannah? At the wedding? Every house party, every baby birth and birthday. I don't think anyone deserves that. I would feel bad even writing that story. It isn't real but gees, have a heart.
This book was a lot of angst, but also a lot of love of every kind. If you love multi generation stories, this series is so good.
Sophie still carries a torch for Oliver, and well Oliver figures out pretty quick that Sophie is amazing. Victoria's family is secretly penniless so she needs to wed Oliver for his money, but at this same house party is her love Elijah. But Elijah is poor, bound to be a successful politician but not yet.
Also the biggest wrinkle for me is that Sophie is a Banfield. Which means she is Susannah's daughter. Susannah who tried to lure Simon from Mina in Flame and Ember.
Yikes! That causes a lot of friction. Even though Sophie is nothing like her awful family.
So what to do? Do Oliver and Victoria do the easy thing and marry? It would be the best thing for everyone but them. And Sophie. And Elijah.
I can get behind Victoria and Elijah. I can see where money can be overlooked. But. For the rest if their lives Mina has to put up with Susannah? At the wedding? Every house party, every baby birth and birthday. I don't think anyone deserves that. I would feel bad even writing that story. It isn't real but gees, have a heart.
This book was a lot of angst, but also a lot of love of every kind. If you love multi generation stories, this series is so good.
February 8, 2021
M.A. Nichols once again does something I've never seen a romance author do: Make the H and h from a former story part of the complication in their child's story. It's so unusual, it's made me a little uncomfortable both times she's done it ... at the same time, it makes them realistic and human, and I admire her for doing so. I love revisiting Mina and Simon ("The Flame and the Ember" is one of my favorite stories), and I was also intrigued by the idea of revisiting their nemesis, Susannah Banfield, and her children. Usually, once the H and h get together, the OW disappears, never be a problem again. This is more realistic - in a society as small as England's, of course they'd continue to cross paths, and what would those interactions be like? I enjoyed seeing this. I also loved Oliver and Sophie. Victoria and Elijah were a bit less interesting to me, though I appreciated how the author showed Oliver and Victoria wouldn't suit, while not making either a villain. And the book prompted me to want to re-read Lily's story as well.
October 7, 2024
Unfortunately Unappealing
This is only the second title of Ms Nichols that I have read. I started with Book One, which was beautiful and engaging. Unfortunately, I cannot say the same for this one.
I listened to the audiobook version of this title as well as the ebook, because the story was just dragging by, with seemingly no hope of a resolution. So switching to Kindle, helped me skim through chapters, so that I could just press on!
The next book in the series, involves Lily and I don’t think that I can bear it. I shall try another series by the author, before I make a final decision about her.
This one just wasn’t for me.
EDIT: 7 October 2024
I next read “The Jack of All Trades”, which is seemingly a new series, however I would recommend that this title is read IMMEDIATELY AFTER Flame and Ember, because they are peers, as Simon and Finch are friends.
This next generation novel may be series 2 of the Kingsley’s but it is not episode 2 of the generation.
It makes better sense to stick with one generation of stories and characters, before moving onto the next generation. Otherwise the character development will confuse you.
This is only the second title of Ms Nichols that I have read. I started with Book One, which was beautiful and engaging. Unfortunately, I cannot say the same for this one.
I listened to the audiobook version of this title as well as the ebook, because the story was just dragging by, with seemingly no hope of a resolution. So switching to Kindle, helped me skim through chapters, so that I could just press on!
The next book in the series, involves Lily and I don’t think that I can bear it. I shall try another series by the author, before I make a final decision about her.
This one just wasn’t for me.
EDIT: 7 October 2024
I next read “The Jack of All Trades”, which is seemingly a new series, however I would recommend that this title is read IMMEDIATELY AFTER Flame and Ember, because they are peers, as Simon and Finch are friends.
This next generation novel may be series 2 of the Kingsley’s but it is not episode 2 of the generation.
It makes better sense to stick with one generation of stories and characters, before moving onto the next generation. Otherwise the character development will confuse you.
January 13, 2021
I think M.A. Nichols has a talent for weaving in mutliple p.o.v. or storylines into one great tale seemlessly. I liked how the story of Mr. & Mrs. Kingsley's love story was brought full circle. I really felt for Sophie. I was able to feel and relate to all the characters in the story. I felt the secodary characters brought a perspective that added to the fullness of the story and what I'd imagine realisitc views of the time. For example, I did feel Miriam selfish but I could see how she'd feel the way she did. I loved Tabby for giving Mrs. Banfiled a few choice words! Though Mr. Flemming wasn't given much page space I loved his scene. I think he really helped to redeem Victoria. I always liked Victoria but I was getting frustrated with her that's for sure! There was some great nuggets of wisdom in the story. This author is very much an auto read/buy for me. I love this family saga series.
August 20, 2023
I enjoyed this book, but in my mind, it doesn’t compare to the previous Flame and Ember. The number of characters and their romantic struggles precludes the depths reached in Mina’s and Simon’s story. I liked Oliver, Sophie, Lily, and Elijah (Victoria not so much, and the other young people NOT at all!). But the couples’ issues seemed to have such an obvious solution. I really liked getting a peak at the mature marriage of the elder Kingsleys (and Mina’s devoted brother and sister-in-law!), but Mina’s wonderful self-revelations contrasted with Simon’s virtual disappearance in the final chapters. And why weren’t Mrs. Banfield’s audacious attacks made known to Sophie?! It surely would have allowed her to make a clean break with her awful family, and have prevented some of the disappointments at the ball. Overall an interesting link in the series, but looking forward to more rounded characters in Lily’s story.
September 9, 2023
A thoughtful romance:
M.A. Nichols' Hearts Entwined is a thoughtful look at romance and how it functions in a society where wealth and status are sometimes seen as more important than emotional connection between two people contemplating marriage. We are presented with two couples whose hearts are engaged very much against other important societal factors. How they work through these tangles is an engaging story. This is not a sensual story. I thoroughly enjoyed most of it. So much so that I am almost ashamed of how one word wrecked my complete enjoyment: naturalism. This author has a good vocabulary and a good command of the written word. How to explain her misuse of this word throughout the story, I cannot. Still, I wouldn't want it to keep anyone else from reading the novel. I just hope the author sees this, looks it up, and revises her story using more appropriate words such as nature and naturalist!
M.A. Nichols' Hearts Entwined is a thoughtful look at romance and how it functions in a society where wealth and status are sometimes seen as more important than emotional connection between two people contemplating marriage. We are presented with two couples whose hearts are engaged very much against other important societal factors. How they work through these tangles is an engaging story. This is not a sensual story. I thoroughly enjoyed most of it. So much so that I am almost ashamed of how one word wrecked my complete enjoyment: naturalism. This author has a good vocabulary and a good command of the written word. How to explain her misuse of this word throughout the story, I cannot. Still, I wouldn't want it to keep anyone else from reading the novel. I just hope the author sees this, looks it up, and revises her story using more appropriate words such as nature and naturalist!
June 27, 2021
Love this series! Another great book! This was very well written with great descriptions of scenery and great character development.. I felt like I was there with them and wished to jump in and help them out.. Witty banter and great chemistry build- I like how they talk through the problems and use intellect and logic to guide their decisions. I loved how awesome both Sophia and Victoria are! As they both are vying for the same guy, you want them both to figure it out - and I love that they are both so good that they don’t harbor bad feelings and are great friends through it- that shows great character and I’m glad that it was a book with great character
October 23, 2023
This was not my favorite of the collection, but I still really enjoyed it.
I did find Victoria a bit fickle and annoying. She kind of acted too perfect while also making some annoying mistakes. Her obsession with politics was also frustrating especially when she started trying to force that love onto Oliver. Elijah was too good for her, but I did love his sweet patience as he waited for her to come around.
I enjoyed Sophia and Oliver, and loved watching Mina come to love Sophia, seeing her for who she was instead of always trying to see Sophia's Mother in her.
Overall, another delightful story. I listened to the audio version on Youtube and enjoyed the reader.
I did find Victoria a bit fickle and annoying. She kind of acted too perfect while also making some annoying mistakes. Her obsession with politics was also frustrating especially when she started trying to force that love onto Oliver. Elijah was too good for her, but I did love his sweet patience as he waited for her to come around.
I enjoyed Sophia and Oliver, and loved watching Mina come to love Sophia, seeing her for who she was instead of always trying to see Sophia's Mother in her.
Overall, another delightful story. I listened to the audio version on Youtube and enjoyed the reader.
January 28, 2021
Clean romance
This third book in the Victorian romance series is as good as the other two! Each can be read as a stand alone but they are good together as well.
Since I have read these I look forward to reading the Regency romance series by the same author.
The characters and storyline are well developed and and keep the reader engaged as you follow the characters as they struggle to find their own paths and future.
You cheer for true love and hope there will be.
Each character is seen from inside as well as outside perspectives and that adds to the story.
This third book in the Victorian romance series is as good as the other two! Each can be read as a stand alone but they are good together as well.
Since I have read these I look forward to reading the Regency romance series by the same author.
The characters and storyline are well developed and and keep the reader engaged as you follow the characters as they struggle to find their own paths and future.
You cheer for true love and hope there will be.
Each character is seen from inside as well as outside perspectives and that adds to the story.
April 15, 2021
Enjoyable story and likable characters. There was admittedly a lot going on and several POV changes, but it came together nicely. Sophie and Oliver were sweet and their compatibility was easy to see. I enjoyed the house party aspect of this story, it provided the perfect backdrop for these kindling relationships! The past was unearthed a bit as The Kingsleys and the Banfields are thrown together after many years. It added a layer of interest to this story that will be meaningful to readers of M.A. Nichols previous books!
August 14, 2021
The true test of character is how we behave when we think all is lost’
A month long house party - as expected will Oliver propose to Victoria? Yet Victoria loves another but due to obligations & duty to her family she must marry. Oliver reunites with
Sophia whom he met years before but cast aside due to estrangement between both families. Will Oliver & Victoria marry? What about Sophia? Who is Lilly? What happened to Oliver’s parents Simon & Mina? So many questions! Read & find out! Another great Victorian era read by M.A. Nichols.
A month long house party - as expected will Oliver propose to Victoria? Yet Victoria loves another but due to obligations & duty to her family she must marry. Oliver reunites with
Sophia whom he met years before but cast aside due to estrangement between both families. Will Oliver & Victoria marry? What about Sophia? Who is Lilly? What happened to Oliver’s parents Simon & Mina? So many questions! Read & find out! Another great Victorian era read by M.A. Nichols.
August 28, 2023
Two for one
Two love stories (actually 3 counting Mina and Simon Kingsley). Ms. Nichols does a great job introducing multiple heroes, heroines, and villains. I love that she addresses the growing and endearing love of the Kingsleys, the importance of being true to yourself, and beauty is as beauty does. So frustrating that women of that era were cobsidered second class citizens of little worth and intelligence. I loved that her female characters were women of intelligence, strong ideals, and faith.
Two love stories (actually 3 counting Mina and Simon Kingsley). Ms. Nichols does a great job introducing multiple heroes, heroines, and villains. I love that she addresses the growing and endearing love of the Kingsleys, the importance of being true to yourself, and beauty is as beauty does. So frustrating that women of that era were cobsidered second class citizens of little worth and intelligence. I loved that her female characters were women of intelligence, strong ideals, and faith.
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November 3, 2024What an intertwined story, more than one love story, and a promise of more. Bringing back Mena and Simon was nice, even if it felt a bit dominating over the main couple’s story. What I liked the most was the writing style, while other authors fail to keep my interest in what they write to fill the "in between" dialogues and eventful moments, I found myself enjoying everything here. This author is one of a few gems I was lucky to find among the contemporary authors of our time. Not many authors can come up with a good story when they give the reins to their imagination.
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