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Tempted: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Running from her past, Stumbling into the unknown, and Drawn to a future she cannot have.
Elizabeth Bennet left all she loved behind when she accepted Colonel Fitzwilliam's hand. Dragging her sister Jane, her cousin Billy Collins, and a horrible secret along with her, she leaves her home and family in the United States and sets sail for England... and safety. Expecting to meet her new husband when he returns from the Boer front, she is shocked to learn that not only does his family not believe her, but Richard has gone missing.
Fitzwilliam Darcy is only doing his duty. Trying to learn the truth of what happened to his cousin, while sheltering the woman who claims to be Richard Fitzwilliam’s wife, he encounters more than he bargained for. She is ill-prepared for life in his world, and her independent ways threaten to defeat her before she has even begun. Unfortunately, she is close to defeating him, as well. Pledged to marry another, but honour-bound to do all he can for Fitzwilliam's wife, his equanimity and fortitude are tested whenever she is near.
When news of Fitzwilliam finally comes, it brings both grief and complications. Surprises, possibilities, and agonising choices... Will Darcy and Elizabeth find a path to love? Or will new revelations and the shadows of the past tear them apart before they are even together?
From the author of These Dreams and Nefarious, Tempted is a deliciously nuanced tale of longing and trust. With good people in impossible places, close-knit families, and secrets working in the dark, Darcy and Elizabeth have to fight every step for their future.
*Trigger Warning* This book contains situations that may trouble some readers. Sexual content is clean.
Honour and loyalty war with the dream of hearts that were made for each other. Lose yourself in Tempted today.
Elizabeth Bennet left all she loved behind when she accepted Colonel Fitzwilliam's hand. Dragging her sister Jane, her cousin Billy Collins, and a horrible secret along with her, she leaves her home and family in the United States and sets sail for England... and safety. Expecting to meet her new husband when he returns from the Boer front, she is shocked to learn that not only does his family not believe her, but Richard has gone missing.
Fitzwilliam Darcy is only doing his duty. Trying to learn the truth of what happened to his cousin, while sheltering the woman who claims to be Richard Fitzwilliam’s wife, he encounters more than he bargained for. She is ill-prepared for life in his world, and her independent ways threaten to defeat her before she has even begun. Unfortunately, she is close to defeating him, as well. Pledged to marry another, but honour-bound to do all he can for Fitzwilliam's wife, his equanimity and fortitude are tested whenever she is near.
When news of Fitzwilliam finally comes, it brings both grief and complications. Surprises, possibilities, and agonising choices... Will Darcy and Elizabeth find a path to love? Or will new revelations and the shadows of the past tear them apart before they are even together?
From the author of These Dreams and Nefarious, Tempted is a deliciously nuanced tale of longing and trust. With good people in impossible places, close-knit families, and secrets working in the dark, Darcy and Elizabeth have to fight every step for their future.
*Trigger Warning* This book contains situations that may trouble some readers. Sexual content is clean.
Honour and loyalty war with the dream of hearts that were made for each other. Lose yourself in Tempted today.
560 pages, ebook
First published June 30, 2020
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Nicole Clarkston
29 books212 followersNicole Clarkston is a book lover and a happily married mom of three. Originally from Idaho, she now lives in Oregon with her own romantic hero, three kids who are taller than she is, and one very fat dog.
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July 15, 2020
Beginning in 1900, this is a long story with many twists and turns and just a bit of angst. OK…it has a lot of angst. We switch back and forth (in place and time) from Wyoming to London and other places - New York, Boston and Rhode Island near the end, as well as some small towns, i.e., Meryton. The author does explain some of the war that went on in the south of Africa involving the Boers, the Dutch Afrikaners, and the British.
As the story begins we are in London with Jane, Elizabeth and their cousin, Billy Collins, as an escort, where Elizabeth is attempting to contact her husband’s relatives. Fitzwilliam Darcy meets with them and believes her allegation that she is married to his cousin, Richard, who is in Africa with the military, but the rest of Richard’s family is not as accepting of her claims. Richard’s father has recently died and his older brother has married another American lady who is one of the “Buccaneers”. (Rich American heiresses who gain a title in exchange for their riches by marrying English peers.) Darcy invites the party to stay at his estate while they try to sort out matters, hoping to hear from Richard soon. A letter soon arrives stating that Richard is MIA and as the family seeks answers with their money and influence, Darcy decides to sail to South Africa to try to determine if Richard is dead, alive or in the hands of the enemy.
Flashing back, we learn that the Bennet family has had to sell off their ranch in Wyoming and that is a story all in its own. Bennet becomes a blacksmith while his wife and daughters move in with the Gardiners where the girls help out in the general store the Gardiners own. Jake Bryson, the son of the man who bought out Mr. Bennet, is a vile rake and makes no bones about imposing himself on whichever young lady catches his eye. Colonel Fitzwilliam has been sent to the west to procure horses for the Calvary in Africa. He makes friends with the Bennets AFTER chasing down Elizabeth on what he thought was a runaway horse. And although offended by his actions at first Elizabeth and Richard soon become friends. It is he who thwarts Bryson’s actions at a dance by guiding one after another of his men to dance with Elizabeth before Jake Bryson can step in.
Just when Richard is due to take the train out with his horses he also comes to a more significant rescue of Elizabeth who, along with Kitty and Jane, had walked out one recent night in a search for Lydia. The man Lydia was to meet finding Elizabeth instead makes an attempt upon her virtue. Elizabeth has the means to protect herself…physically but her reputation is ruined and her life is in danger as the father wants revenge.
We have many teasing flashbacks to events in Wyoming that led up to Richard marrying Elizabeth. We also have Wickham, Darcy’s engagement to Anne deBourgh being pushed forward, an elopement, the looming of treason charges and an abduction of three unwitting ladies as well as a suspicious death due to arson.
There is so much more in this story but you just must read it for yourself. I did receive an ARC of this story with no strings attached and I want to read it again.
PS: Friends, see if you can spot a familiar name anywhere in the story.
As the story begins we are in London with Jane, Elizabeth and their cousin, Billy Collins, as an escort, where Elizabeth is attempting to contact her husband’s relatives. Fitzwilliam Darcy meets with them and believes her allegation that she is married to his cousin, Richard, who is in Africa with the military, but the rest of Richard’s family is not as accepting of her claims. Richard’s father has recently died and his older brother has married another American lady who is one of the “Buccaneers”. (Rich American heiresses who gain a title in exchange for their riches by marrying English peers.) Darcy invites the party to stay at his estate while they try to sort out matters, hoping to hear from Richard soon. A letter soon arrives stating that Richard is MIA and as the family seeks answers with their money and influence, Darcy decides to sail to South Africa to try to determine if Richard is dead, alive or in the hands of the enemy.
Flashing back, we learn that the Bennet family has had to sell off their ranch in Wyoming and that is a story all in its own. Bennet becomes a blacksmith while his wife and daughters move in with the Gardiners where the girls help out in the general store the Gardiners own. Jake Bryson, the son of the man who bought out Mr. Bennet, is a vile rake and makes no bones about imposing himself on whichever young lady catches his eye. Colonel Fitzwilliam has been sent to the west to procure horses for the Calvary in Africa. He makes friends with the Bennets AFTER chasing down Elizabeth on what he thought was a runaway horse. And although offended by his actions at first Elizabeth and Richard soon become friends. It is he who thwarts Bryson’s actions at a dance by guiding one after another of his men to dance with Elizabeth before Jake Bryson can step in.
Just when Richard is due to take the train out with his horses he also comes to a more significant rescue of Elizabeth who, along with Kitty and Jane, had walked out one recent night in a search for Lydia. The man Lydia was to meet finding Elizabeth instead makes an attempt upon her virtue. Elizabeth has the means to protect herself…physically but her reputation is ruined and her life is in danger as the father wants revenge.
We have many teasing flashbacks to events in Wyoming that led up to Richard marrying Elizabeth. We also have Wickham, Darcy’s engagement to Anne deBourgh being pushed forward, an elopement, the looming of treason charges and an abduction of three unwitting ladies as well as a suspicious death due to arson.
There is so much more in this story but you just must read it for yourself. I did receive an ARC of this story with no strings attached and I want to read it again.
PS: Friends, see if you can spot a familiar name anywhere in the story.
September 14, 2020
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
This is an angst-filled Pride and Prejudice variation that's way outside of canon while still retaining its essential elements. The time has moved up to the early 1900's, and the setting mostly bounces back and forth between England, where the Fitzwilliams and Darcys live, and flashbacks in Wyoming in the USA, where the Bennet family lives. (Yes, Elizabeth is American.)
When we first meet Elizabeth in the Prologue, she's already married - to Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, who spent time in America on assignment purchasing cavalry horses for British fighters in the Boer War. He had to return to action immediately after their wedding.
Elizabeth has now come to London with her sister Jane and cousin Billy Collins, hoping to meet her husband's family. His cousin, Fitzwilliam Darcy, arrives with the devastating news that Richard was just reported to his family as missing in action.
What Darcy doesn't tell her - and Elizabeth quickly deduces - is that the Fitzwilliam family doesn't believe she can be Richard's wife. After all, he's the son of a British earl, while she's just the poor daughter of an American blacksmith. Darcy quietly takes the three to his London town home and then to Pemberley, averting any scandal for the Fitzwilliams and also allowing him to investigate her claim.
This sets up a delicious plot filled with unexpected twists and turns. We slowly learn the history of Elizabeth's relationship with Richard, including the parts she hides from Darcy. She's already been through a lot, and Darcy's obvious suspicion gets them off on the wrong foot. Although he feels she's hiding something, he can't help being drawn to her like no other woman. He has multiple reasons to fight the attraction - obviously, she's Richard's wife, but she's also completely unsuitable. Plus, Darcy is engaged to marry Anne de Bourgh.
There's a whopping good storyline attached to Richard's disappearance too, which sends Darcy to South Africa trying to learn the truth. Mr. Wickham also gets some devilry in, and he's not the worst villain in the story.
As always, Ms. Clarkston's writing completely engages the reader. I love the way she blends the fiction with historical facts of the era. The tension builds to almost unbearable levels, with a happy outcome seeming impossible until the very end. Characters are vivid, both Jane Austen's and those Ms. Clarkston has added.
My major quibble is wanting some motivation for Silas Bryson, a Wyoming rancher whose actions and attitude indicate some grudge against Elizabeth's family even before Colonel Fitzwilliam arrives.
This isn't significant, though, considering the overall excellence of this imaginative plot. Be warned that there is a failed sexual attack. Content is otherwise clean.
I received an Advance Readers Copy with no promise of a review, favorable or otherwise.
This is an angst-filled Pride and Prejudice variation that's way outside of canon while still retaining its essential elements. The time has moved up to the early 1900's, and the setting mostly bounces back and forth between England, where the Fitzwilliams and Darcys live, and flashbacks in Wyoming in the USA, where the Bennet family lives. (Yes, Elizabeth is American.)
When we first meet Elizabeth in the Prologue, she's already married - to Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, who spent time in America on assignment purchasing cavalry horses for British fighters in the Boer War. He had to return to action immediately after their wedding.
Elizabeth has now come to London with her sister Jane and cousin Billy Collins, hoping to meet her husband's family. His cousin, Fitzwilliam Darcy, arrives with the devastating news that Richard was just reported to his family as missing in action.
What Darcy doesn't tell her - and Elizabeth quickly deduces - is that the Fitzwilliam family doesn't believe she can be Richard's wife. After all, he's the son of a British earl, while she's just the poor daughter of an American blacksmith. Darcy quietly takes the three to his London town home and then to Pemberley, averting any scandal for the Fitzwilliams and also allowing him to investigate her claim.
This sets up a delicious plot filled with unexpected twists and turns. We slowly learn the history of Elizabeth's relationship with Richard, including the parts she hides from Darcy. She's already been through a lot, and Darcy's obvious suspicion gets them off on the wrong foot. Although he feels she's hiding something, he can't help being drawn to her like no other woman. He has multiple reasons to fight the attraction - obviously, she's Richard's wife, but she's also completely unsuitable. Plus, Darcy is engaged to marry Anne de Bourgh.
There's a whopping good storyline attached to Richard's disappearance too, which sends Darcy to South Africa trying to learn the truth. Mr. Wickham also gets some devilry in, and he's not the worst villain in the story.
As always, Ms. Clarkston's writing completely engages the reader. I love the way she blends the fiction with historical facts of the era. The tension builds to almost unbearable levels, with a happy outcome seeming impossible until the very end. Characters are vivid, both Jane Austen's and those Ms. Clarkston has added.
My major quibble is wanting some motivation for Silas Bryson, a Wyoming rancher whose actions and attitude indicate some grudge against Elizabeth's family even before Colonel Fitzwilliam arrives.
This isn't significant, though, considering the overall excellence of this imaginative plot. Be warned that there is a failed sexual attack. Content is otherwise clean.
I received an Advance Readers Copy with no promise of a review, favorable or otherwise.
November 17, 2020
Tense... Tempting... Torturous.. Tears...
Oh, what a tangled web of emotions Ms. Clarkston has poured into this latest epic novel! Not only are we transported to 1900 Wyoming and England, but the Boer War is raging in South Africa and the uncertainty of what has happened to Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, Elizabeth's husband, is unknown. Yes, you read that right. What has compelled Elizabeth to marry him?
"She is tolerable, I suppose, though I still do not know how she tempted Richard into marriage." (quote from the book)
So what happens when Elizabeth must flee the United States and puts herself, Jane and Billy Collins into the power of Mr. Darcy and the Fitzwilliam family? Let me tell you that I found it fascinating, emotional and completely compelling. The push and pull between Mr. Darcy and Mrs. Fitzwilliam was a delicious slow burn.
"Was it possible, she wondered, that the heart was a villainous, rebellious thing from its conception? That it yearned for what it should never dare to claim, content only when it was causing torment and not pleased to nurture its own?" (quote from the book)
How do they reconcile their growing feelings? How does this impact others, as they await news of Richard and of villainous characters that wish to destroy them? There are some shocking reveals and rather amusing outcomes for some of these characters. You could just feel the tension rising chapter by chapter; for you experience flashbacks between Spring 1900 in Wyoming and Summer 1900 in England through 1901.
"His look lingered, sank into her very pores, and lifted something she had tried with all her might to bury." (quote from the book)
I highly recommend this epic novel by the ever talented Ms. Clarkston. So, take the plunge and you will be well rewarded with a love story that stands the test of time...Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.
"Love is never what you pursue - it pursues you. It finds you out when you are not searching for it." (quote from the book)
July 12, 2021
A very different take, using the P&P characters.
Told between England and flashbacks on what took place in the US (slowly building up that part of the story till it reaches current times).
This is an epic book, very long, but never dragging. It was hard to put down.
Worth a read, but not sure I would read it again.
Told between England and flashbacks on what took place in the US (slowly building up that part of the story till it reaches current times).
This is an epic book, very long, but never dragging. It was hard to put down.
Worth a read, but not sure I would read it again.
October 31, 2020
This variation is set in the early 1900's - it starts in America when we learn Elizabeth is married to the colonel but nothing more. She flees to England to catch up with her husband but he is missing, presumed dead. Over the course of the book the chapters alternate between learning what happened in Wyoming that led to the marriage and the present time in England where Elizabeth and Darcy are overcoming obstacles of their own but fast falling in love - despite the impossibility of it all.
This very brief summary barely skirts the edges of a tale of revenge, grievance, lies and the dastardly deeds of Mr Wickham. Its an epic tale and a very long book. There is anagonising build towards finding out what happened to the colonel - I knew it was coming but when it arrived,I didn't like it. Having finished the book I can now understand why it had to play out the way it did - all the loose ends couldn't have been tied up without it.
Overall, this is an angst filled read... it was hard to see how anyone was going to get a happy ending here. I'll be honest, this wasn't one of my favourites from Nicole Clarkson but I'm not sure why. The writing and story was excellent. I think maybe there was a bit too much angst for me. Right from the start the storm clouds were visible on the horizon and we spend a long time waiting for that storm to arrive, knowing it's coming.
This very brief summary barely skirts the edges of a tale of revenge, grievance, lies and the dastardly deeds of Mr Wickham. Its an epic tale and a very long book. There is anagonising build towards finding out what happened to the colonel - I knew it was coming but when it arrived,I didn't like it. Having finished the book I can now understand why it had to play out the way it did - all the loose ends couldn't have been tied up without it.
Overall, this is an angst filled read... it was hard to see how anyone was going to get a happy ending here. I'll be honest, this wasn't one of my favourites from Nicole Clarkson but I'm not sure why. The writing and story was excellent. I think maybe there was a bit too much angst for me. Right from the start the storm clouds were visible on the horizon and we spend a long time waiting for that storm to arrive, knowing it's coming.
July 18, 2020
3.5. I have really struggled with how to rate this book. It is written by an amazingly talented writer & I have loved her previous works. This one was well written, but I really didn’t enjoy it. I can see from the other reviews that I am quite alone in this opinion, so maybe I’m the problem, but I did not feel the connection or the attraction between Darcy & Elizabeth until their relationship was well developed. It felt manufactured to me. I struggled to keep my attention on this story through the first half of the book hoping things would pick up & it would get better. It did get better & I started enjoying it a bit more the second half, but Colonel Fitzwilliam is one of my favorite Austen supporting characters & I felt really unsatisfied with how things went for his character in this book. This Elizabeth just didn’t connect with me or appeal to me. I’m glad I read this, but I wouldn’t read it again. Instead, I will anxiously await Ms. Clarkston’s next book!
January 11, 2022
This Pride and Prejudice variation is non stop and amazing. I would suggest to clear your calendar when you start because you won't be able to put it down.
It takes place just at the dawn of cars and phones and trains are a well used mode of transportation. Elizabeth is from the newly created state of Wyoming and travels to the England with Jane and her cousin Billy Collins. She is there to request help from her husband, Richard Fitzwilliam's family. First they have to believe her and then they have to find Richard.
I don't want to spoil anything, but there is a happily ever after for Elizabeth and Darcy (a well deserved one), a letter from her father had me actively crying, inclusion of the Boer war information was well done and interesting, and I loved all characterizations in this story.
It takes place just at the dawn of cars and phones and trains are a well used mode of transportation. Elizabeth is from the newly created state of Wyoming and travels to the England with Jane and her cousin Billy Collins. She is there to request help from her husband, Richard Fitzwilliam's family. First they have to believe her and then they have to find Richard.
I don't want to spoil anything, but there is a happily ever after for Elizabeth and Darcy (a well deserved one), a letter from her father had me actively crying, inclusion of the Boer war information was well done and interesting, and I loved all characterizations in this story.
July 2, 2020
Brilliant, Outstanding!
“Tempted” will be undoubtedly in my top reads of 2020. It certainly is my #1 to date. Nicole Clarkston wrote the very first Pride and Prejudice variation I ever read, “These Dreams”. She has masterfully written another gem, perhaps her shiniest so far. She truly knows how to write an amazing story. Her character portrayals and story action completely draw you in from start to finish.
The year 1900 setting takes us from Wyoming to London/Derbyshire to South Africa and even to Boston—all the while spinning a tale that encompasses love, hate, fear, assault, war, deceit... and oh, the angst, but not the kind that makes you feel too anxious or nervous. Rather, it’s the kind of angst that keeps you wanting more, hell bent on turning each page and staying up till the morning hours to read it and see what happens next, as I did. It is also a wonderful and truly heart-wrenching love story. Be sure to have your tissues handy. My heart!! I most highly recommend this book. Very very well written. I noted no proofreading errors. If I missed any it is because I was completely lost in the story. Do read it!
*Trigger Warning provided by the author—“This book contains situations that may trouble some readers. Sexual content is clean.”
“Tempted” will be undoubtedly in my top reads of 2020. It certainly is my #1 to date. Nicole Clarkston wrote the very first Pride and Prejudice variation I ever read, “These Dreams”. She has masterfully written another gem, perhaps her shiniest so far. She truly knows how to write an amazing story. Her character portrayals and story action completely draw you in from start to finish.
The year 1900 setting takes us from Wyoming to London/Derbyshire to South Africa and even to Boston—all the while spinning a tale that encompasses love, hate, fear, assault, war, deceit... and oh, the angst, but not the kind that makes you feel too anxious or nervous. Rather, it’s the kind of angst that keeps you wanting more, hell bent on turning each page and staying up till the morning hours to read it and see what happens next, as I did. It is also a wonderful and truly heart-wrenching love story. Be sure to have your tissues handy. My heart!! I most highly recommend this book. Very very well written. I noted no proofreading errors. If I missed any it is because I was completely lost in the story. Do read it!
*Trigger Warning provided by the author—“This book contains situations that may trouble some readers. Sexual content is clean.”
August 3, 2020
Well written, but......
You can always count on Nicole Clarkston to create a wonderful story, well written and well developed, and this one is no different. The P&P universe is completely upended, the time period being during the war between the British and the Dutch Afrikaners in South Africa, around the year 1900. The Bennett family, along with the Gardiner family, lives in Wyoming. The Bennetts are ranchers who have fallen on hard times due to a cattle disease outbreak, and a subsequent scandal. Colonel Fitzwilliam is on a mission for the British army to acquire horses in Wyoming to ship to the forces in Africa. In this way he meets the Bennetts, the Gardiners, and Billy Collins, who helps out at the Gardiner's general store.
This is a highly melodramatic story, and rather than tell it in a linear fashion, the story alternates between current situations, and the recent past, that tells the dramatic backstory. Elizabeth Bennett is in London, trying to find shelter with the Fitzwilliams or the Darcys, and we learn in small increments how and why she left Wyoming and her family to journey across an ocean.
There's a lot to like about this book. It's definitely an exciting tale, and if you like an excess of drama, this is your book. There are plenty of characters that you can care about, and I like what the author did with William Collins, and what eventually becomes of him. However, I have a difficult time enjoying a book in which the two main characters (Elizabeth and Colonel Fitzwilliam) go through so many disasters, and endure so much suffering, both physical and mental. The entire story seems overshadowed by a profound melancholy, and a sense that, even if these people attain something positive, they can never be quite as happy as you would like, due to the traumas they've had to endure. Elizabeth's HEA with Darcy is bought at a high price, and she is directly responsible for some of the Colonel's heartache.
The book is well written and well edited. It's a complex story, and is the product of a wonderful imagination. I recommend it.
You can always count on Nicole Clarkston to create a wonderful story, well written and well developed, and this one is no different. The P&P universe is completely upended, the time period being during the war between the British and the Dutch Afrikaners in South Africa, around the year 1900. The Bennett family, along with the Gardiner family, lives in Wyoming. The Bennetts are ranchers who have fallen on hard times due to a cattle disease outbreak, and a subsequent scandal. Colonel Fitzwilliam is on a mission for the British army to acquire horses in Wyoming to ship to the forces in Africa. In this way he meets the Bennetts, the Gardiners, and Billy Collins, who helps out at the Gardiner's general store.
This is a highly melodramatic story, and rather than tell it in a linear fashion, the story alternates between current situations, and the recent past, that tells the dramatic backstory. Elizabeth Bennett is in London, trying to find shelter with the Fitzwilliams or the Darcys, and we learn in small increments how and why she left Wyoming and her family to journey across an ocean.
There's a lot to like about this book. It's definitely an exciting tale, and if you like an excess of drama, this is your book. There are plenty of characters that you can care about, and I like what the author did with William Collins, and what eventually becomes of him. However, I have a difficult time enjoying a book in which the two main characters (Elizabeth and Colonel Fitzwilliam) go through so many disasters, and endure so much suffering, both physical and mental. The entire story seems overshadowed by a profound melancholy, and a sense that, even if these people attain something positive, they can never be quite as happy as you would like, due to the traumas they've had to endure. Elizabeth's HEA with Darcy is bought at a high price, and she is directly responsible for some of the Colonel's heartache.
The book is well written and well edited. It's a complex story, and is the product of a wonderful imagination. I recommend it.
August 24, 2020
The direct use of force is such a poor solution to any problem, it is generally employed only by small children and large nations. ~ David Friedman
Nicole Clarkston’s books are always well-researched and this one is no exception. Historical facts from the Boer War were unknown to me previously. Frankly, I had no idea of any issues involved. I just knew it was in Africa.
Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam had been sent to the American west to buy replacement horses for mounts killed in battle. He must work with locals to train the horses and becomes acquainted with the Bennet and Gardiner families.
As the story begins, Elizabeth Fitzwilliam arrives in London with her sister, Jane Bennet, and their cousin, Billy Collins. The history of her friendship with the Colonel and their eventual marriage is very slowly revealed.
I seldom read JAFF that is not Regency and this book confused me numerous times beginning with the quickness of travel. I would think “wait a minute, they can’t travel to Pemberley in one day” only to have to backtrack with “oh, right, the train could make that journey in one day”.
The story is long and complex requiring Elizabeth, Darcy, and Richard to travel the world. The action takes place in Wyoming, London, Africa, and New York and other New England cities.
… O war, thou son of hell,
Whom angry heavens do make their minister
Throw in the frozen bosoms of our part
Hot coals of vengeance! ...
~ William Shakespeare, Henry VI, Part II
Nicole Clarkston’s books are always well-researched and this one is no exception. Historical facts from the Boer War were unknown to me previously. Frankly, I had no idea of any issues involved. I just knew it was in Africa.
Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam had been sent to the American west to buy replacement horses for mounts killed in battle. He must work with locals to train the horses and becomes acquainted with the Bennet and Gardiner families.
As the story begins, Elizabeth Fitzwilliam arrives in London with her sister, Jane Bennet, and their cousin, Billy Collins. The history of her friendship with the Colonel and their eventual marriage is very slowly revealed.
I seldom read JAFF that is not Regency and this book confused me numerous times beginning with the quickness of travel. I would think “wait a minute, they can’t travel to Pemberley in one day” only to have to backtrack with “oh, right, the train could make that journey in one day”.
The story is long and complex requiring Elizabeth, Darcy, and Richard to travel the world. The action takes place in Wyoming, London, Africa, and New York and other New England cities.
… O war, thou son of hell,
Whom angry heavens do make their minister
Throw in the frozen bosoms of our part
Hot coals of vengeance! ...
~ William Shakespeare, Henry VI, Part II
July 23, 2020
One of the best variations I have read
An American Lizzy is an unexpected delight and a turn of the century Darcy is everything swoon-worthy, but it is not for those reasons alone that I read an almost 600 page book in 2 days! Ms. Clarkston has a wonderful way with words that keeps you thirsting for more and with this fresh tale of love, loss, hope and adventure she is at her very best! A must read for any P&P variation lover!
An American Lizzy is an unexpected delight and a turn of the century Darcy is everything swoon-worthy, but it is not for those reasons alone that I read an almost 600 page book in 2 days! Ms. Clarkston has a wonderful way with words that keeps you thirsting for more and with this fresh tale of love, loss, hope and adventure she is at her very best! A must read for any P&P variation lover!
August 1, 2024
Interesting but very long.
December 31, 2020
It was after I wrote a book with flashbacks that I was told to avoid flashbacks like the plague because readers had trouble following them. So here is a book that includes flashbacks right to the end. IMO, that's too much--they became tiresome after about 2/3 of the way through, and the back story should have been revealed by then. In addition, they hold redundancies to the main story. But I didn't once have trouble following the changes.
The story line is unusual, and that helps the reader to become engaged in the action immediately. For those who are a little nervous about reading a non-Regency, don't be. There is little difference in this historical with the exception of some technology advances, which the author handles well.
As for characters, I found Elizabeth was perhaps a little too fretful about her position when discovered, though I'll be the first to defend the author's choice of using a portion of her canon character. Austen's Lizzy wasn't always courageous, and did run from her troubles. Darcy was wonderful as her protector, serious as ever, yet he had a take-charge attitude that worked well. The shock midway through was halfway expected if the reader was savvy, and the characterization was handled well given the circumstances as well--no spoilers.
The romance was beautifully bittersweet, developed with care I've seen in few novels. No one could deny the depth of affection on these pages, as it was held back for so long and became disproportionately deep. I don't recall reading a JAFF lately that was so successful at describing profound hidden affection so well.
The dramatic tension carried to the very last minute, and we see one of those truly evil Wickhams that some readers hate to read. I don't mind, however, and this one's character was well-drawn and utilized appropriately for the subject matter. In fact, compared to the final plot twists, the early part of the book was a bit slow. One criticism is that Wickham was slow to show, and perhaps should have been more of an "issue" earlier on in the book.
Editing was fairly good. I noticed some Americanisms such as "we will" and "I would" where British speakers would have said "we shall" and "I should." A number of words were used in a way that I think the author misunderstood their meaning, as it didn't quite make sense in the context of the sentence. I believe she should have said stablemaster when she said coachman in two cases. A lot of the prose lent itself well to painting a scene in the reader's head, though, so the author used language well.
The cover art speaks volumes about the story, particularly in the pose of the models. I would have preferred to have seen the moustache, though!
This book was long, and like most long books, included some redundancy, particularly as it related to the back story. A bit of thinning out would have tightened up the earlier story pacing a great deal. I enjoyed reading the full length of it, repeats and all, just the same.
As I now complete this review, I get a tight feeling in my chest as I recall the emotions I felt while reading this novel--it gave plenty of excitement through and through, while demonstrating one of the most heart wrenching applications of a love story I've read in a long time. Bravo, Ms. Clarkston. You are truly one of the top authors in JAFF.
Disclaimer: Because I am a JAFF author, some might say my reviews could be a conflict of interest. My reviews are honest and impartial. I am friends with Nicole Clarkston.
The story line is unusual, and that helps the reader to become engaged in the action immediately. For those who are a little nervous about reading a non-Regency, don't be. There is little difference in this historical with the exception of some technology advances, which the author handles well.
As for characters, I found Elizabeth was perhaps a little too fretful about her position when discovered, though I'll be the first to defend the author's choice of using a portion of her canon character. Austen's Lizzy wasn't always courageous, and did run from her troubles. Darcy was wonderful as her protector, serious as ever, yet he had a take-charge attitude that worked well. The shock midway through was halfway expected if the reader was savvy, and the characterization was handled well given the circumstances as well--no spoilers.
The romance was beautifully bittersweet, developed with care I've seen in few novels. No one could deny the depth of affection on these pages, as it was held back for so long and became disproportionately deep. I don't recall reading a JAFF lately that was so successful at describing profound hidden affection so well.
The dramatic tension carried to the very last minute, and we see one of those truly evil Wickhams that some readers hate to read. I don't mind, however, and this one's character was well-drawn and utilized appropriately for the subject matter. In fact, compared to the final plot twists, the early part of the book was a bit slow. One criticism is that Wickham was slow to show, and perhaps should have been more of an "issue" earlier on in the book.
Editing was fairly good. I noticed some Americanisms such as "we will" and "I would" where British speakers would have said "we shall" and "I should." A number of words were used in a way that I think the author misunderstood their meaning, as it didn't quite make sense in the context of the sentence. I believe she should have said stablemaster when she said coachman in two cases. A lot of the prose lent itself well to painting a scene in the reader's head, though, so the author used language well.
The cover art speaks volumes about the story, particularly in the pose of the models. I would have preferred to have seen the moustache, though!
This book was long, and like most long books, included some redundancy, particularly as it related to the back story. A bit of thinning out would have tightened up the earlier story pacing a great deal. I enjoyed reading the full length of it, repeats and all, just the same.
As I now complete this review, I get a tight feeling in my chest as I recall the emotions I felt while reading this novel--it gave plenty of excitement through and through, while demonstrating one of the most heart wrenching applications of a love story I've read in a long time. Bravo, Ms. Clarkston. You are truly one of the top authors in JAFF.
Disclaimer: Because I am a JAFF author, some might say my reviews could be a conflict of interest. My reviews are honest and impartial. I am friends with Nicole Clarkston.
September 9, 2022
This was the longest, angst filled, emotional roller coaster of a tearjerker I’ve read in quite some time & I hated every second of it. Plus, I constantly had to chastise myself not to peek & read ahead.
Look, this wasn’t my jam. I don’t read books to cry or feel my heart torn in two. However, I will never give an author a bad review for personal preferences, & man I seem to accidentally pick up nothing but angst here lately. I’m going to have to screen my books better.
For the story itself, it was good though once again I personally hate the way it was set up divided between past & present until they finally meet & then the story is continuous. I hate that. I want a strictly forward facing linear timeline with as few flashbacks as possible & preferably in 1st person. I will say at least this one wasn’t confusing in its attempt to be mysterious like a different book I read by this author where she employed the same writing tactic.
Idk, the problem I had with this book & why I loathe angsty reads as a rule is because every time, without fail all it amounts to is needless suffering, senseless pain that on most occasions would be so easily remedied. Point being, there is a reason I choose Darcy over Heathcliff to love for eternity & I have no desire to change that.
Look, this wasn’t my jam. I don’t read books to cry or feel my heart torn in two. However, I will never give an author a bad review for personal preferences, & man I seem to accidentally pick up nothing but angst here lately. I’m going to have to screen my books better.
For the story itself, it was good though once again I personally hate the way it was set up divided between past & present until they finally meet & then the story is continuous. I hate that. I want a strictly forward facing linear timeline with as few flashbacks as possible & preferably in 1st person. I will say at least this one wasn’t confusing in its attempt to be mysterious like a different book I read by this author where she employed the same writing tactic.
Idk, the problem I had with this book & why I loathe angsty reads as a rule is because every time, without fail all it amounts to is needless suffering, senseless pain that on most occasions would be so easily remedied. Point being, there is a reason I choose Darcy over Heathcliff to love for eternity & I have no desire to change that.
Read
July 24, 2022DNF because the action moved too slowly. Too verbose, I’d say. Otherwise I liked the writing style and the plot was original, interesting and well built.
August 11, 2020
A decent read
I was a little disappointed at the length of this book.A lot of drama for not a ton of substance. A little too angsty for me and A little too flowery When it came to the love scenes.The writing was great ;very few typos and the language was all appropriate to the time period. Wickham was sufficiently nasty & sneaky.
I was a little disappointed at the length of this book.A lot of drama for not a ton of substance. A little too angsty for me and A little too flowery When it came to the love scenes.The writing was great ;very few typos and the language was all appropriate to the time period. Wickham was sufficiently nasty & sneaky.
July 29, 2020
Most variations of Jane Austen’s classic novels are set in England, in the same Regency time period as the original stories. I was therefore pleasantly surprised to discover that this new Pride and Prejudice variation—Tempted, by prolific Austenesque author Nicole Clarkston—takes place in a unique time and multiple locations.
In July 1900, we are introduced to an American Elizabeth Bennet, born and raised on a ranch in Wyoming and recently wed to Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, cousin of Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy and second son of the Earl of Matlock. Elizabeth’s amenable yet annoying cousin Billy Collins has escorted her and her sister Jane from America to London so that she may present herself to the colonel’s parents, Lord and Lady Matlock. Colonel Fitzwilliam, a cavalry officer, had been sent to Wyoming as a special envoy of Her Majesty’s Army—and someone with a good eye for horseflesh—in search of horses for the military. While on his mission in Wyoming, the colonel was called to the Boer War in South Africa and married Elizabeth shortly before he departed. There are mysterious circumstances surrounding their hasty marriage, and Elizabeth soon discovers that the colonel’s family is completely unaware of her existence and refuses to receive her as his wife. Instead, she is met by Mr. Darcy, serving as a family representative, who bears unwelcome tidings about her new husband.
“He could not form his own words, so at last, he opened the letter and read a portion of the excruciating print. ‘…We regret to inform you that Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam of the 4th Battalion of the Derbyshire’s has been listed as Missing in Action….’” (117)
Wishing to do his duty, Darcy reluctantly welcomes Elizabeth and her entourage into his home in order to protect his cousin’s wife while also determining if she truly is Mrs. Fitzwilliam. Almost immediately, he is inexplicably drawn to her.
“Whenever she looked his way, he felt certain she was some enchantress, endowed with the ability to peer into the hearts of mortal men. She was staring at him now—Richard’s wife. That was the best he could possibly hope to call her, for either she was an ill-judged ‘mistake’ of his cousin’s, or she was a fraud.” (203)
Upon her arrival, Darcy sets out to discreetly interrogate Elizabeth, who shrewdly remarks, “Am I to understand that you are the guard dog, barring the gates and catechising the claimants to discern the truth?” (258) After a dubious beginning, yet with a mutual concern for their missing loved one, as well as a mutual admiration for each other, they quickly develop a deep and abiding friendship.
The history between Elizabeth and Colonel Fitzwilliam is gradually revealed in intermittent flashbacks, interspersed with her experiences as she waits for news of her husband’s whereabouts. Elizabeth’s introduction to her in-laws as Mrs. Fitzwilliam comes with mixed results, with her mother-in-law exclaiming, “Certainly not this nameless hussy of no family and no class. What connection can she possibly have to my son? It is all a sham and a lie, Darcy, and I cannot fathom how you have succumbed to her ill-gotten tale of woe.” (413)
As in the original story, there is an obvious class divide, but there is also an overwhelming cultural separation between the brazen Americans and the posh Brits. Still, the Fitzwilliam family forges on together with Elizabeth amongst them, anxiously anticipating whatever fate has befallen their beloved Richard.
The story unfolds at a deceptively slow pace that does not quite prepare readers for the unveiling of several stunning revelations. There is action. There is angst. International travel, vile villains, suspenseful mystery and intrigue … this story has it all, and it’s masterfully plotted. My single complaint is that this book is massively (56 chapters!) long and made me feel unproductive when I read for hours and made little progress. It has a sweeping, cinematic sense to it. I felt as though I’d just emerged, bleary-eyed, from a lavish, old-fashioned movie theater where I’d been immersed for hours in a dramatic and romantic tale played out on film and worthy of a deeply contented sigh. It is truly an epic saga.
My emotional investment in the story was so gradual that it caught me by surprise. I cried at times, and I cheered, as well. There was this palpable feeling throughout the story of desperate yearning for what one cannot have and the desire to do the honorable thing. It is an examination of human relationships: romantic, familial, and even interactions with nefarious villains, and it highlights the gray area between right and wrong. Tempted is a beautifully crafted masterpiece about how love and devotion can be both heartbreaking and healing.
5 out of 5 Regency Stars
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In July 1900, we are introduced to an American Elizabeth Bennet, born and raised on a ranch in Wyoming and recently wed to Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, cousin of Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy and second son of the Earl of Matlock. Elizabeth’s amenable yet annoying cousin Billy Collins has escorted her and her sister Jane from America to London so that she may present herself to the colonel’s parents, Lord and Lady Matlock. Colonel Fitzwilliam, a cavalry officer, had been sent to Wyoming as a special envoy of Her Majesty’s Army—and someone with a good eye for horseflesh—in search of horses for the military. While on his mission in Wyoming, the colonel was called to the Boer War in South Africa and married Elizabeth shortly before he departed. There are mysterious circumstances surrounding their hasty marriage, and Elizabeth soon discovers that the colonel’s family is completely unaware of her existence and refuses to receive her as his wife. Instead, she is met by Mr. Darcy, serving as a family representative, who bears unwelcome tidings about her new husband.
“He could not form his own words, so at last, he opened the letter and read a portion of the excruciating print. ‘…We regret to inform you that Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam of the 4th Battalion of the Derbyshire’s has been listed as Missing in Action….’” (117)
Wishing to do his duty, Darcy reluctantly welcomes Elizabeth and her entourage into his home in order to protect his cousin’s wife while also determining if she truly is Mrs. Fitzwilliam. Almost immediately, he is inexplicably drawn to her.
“Whenever she looked his way, he felt certain she was some enchantress, endowed with the ability to peer into the hearts of mortal men. She was staring at him now—Richard’s wife. That was the best he could possibly hope to call her, for either she was an ill-judged ‘mistake’ of his cousin’s, or she was a fraud.” (203)
Upon her arrival, Darcy sets out to discreetly interrogate Elizabeth, who shrewdly remarks, “Am I to understand that you are the guard dog, barring the gates and catechising the claimants to discern the truth?” (258) After a dubious beginning, yet with a mutual concern for their missing loved one, as well as a mutual admiration for each other, they quickly develop a deep and abiding friendship.
The history between Elizabeth and Colonel Fitzwilliam is gradually revealed in intermittent flashbacks, interspersed with her experiences as she waits for news of her husband’s whereabouts. Elizabeth’s introduction to her in-laws as Mrs. Fitzwilliam comes with mixed results, with her mother-in-law exclaiming, “Certainly not this nameless hussy of no family and no class. What connection can she possibly have to my son? It is all a sham and a lie, Darcy, and I cannot fathom how you have succumbed to her ill-gotten tale of woe.” (413)
As in the original story, there is an obvious class divide, but there is also an overwhelming cultural separation between the brazen Americans and the posh Brits. Still, the Fitzwilliam family forges on together with Elizabeth amongst them, anxiously anticipating whatever fate has befallen their beloved Richard.
The story unfolds at a deceptively slow pace that does not quite prepare readers for the unveiling of several stunning revelations. There is action. There is angst. International travel, vile villains, suspenseful mystery and intrigue … this story has it all, and it’s masterfully plotted. My single complaint is that this book is massively (56 chapters!) long and made me feel unproductive when I read for hours and made little progress. It has a sweeping, cinematic sense to it. I felt as though I’d just emerged, bleary-eyed, from a lavish, old-fashioned movie theater where I’d been immersed for hours in a dramatic and romantic tale played out on film and worthy of a deeply contented sigh. It is truly an epic saga.
My emotional investment in the story was so gradual that it caught me by surprise. I cried at times, and I cheered, as well. There was this palpable feeling throughout the story of desperate yearning for what one cannot have and the desire to do the honorable thing. It is an examination of human relationships: romantic, familial, and even interactions with nefarious villains, and it highlights the gray area between right and wrong. Tempted is a beautifully crafted masterpiece about how love and devotion can be both heartbreaking and healing.
5 out of 5 Regency Stars
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November 15, 2021
The things you'll need before you start this book.
1. A good vacation for the rest of your family, because believe me you wouldn't want your attention diverted, if that is even possibke.
2. A very comfortable seat, a recliner or a bed is even better because it's a very long journey.
3. All kind of nourishment, you won't be able to eben think of cooking and some of the snacks will be helpful when you are gnashing your teeth at the villians but let me warn you to finish your solid foods before chapter 40 because I seriously doubt you'll be able to swallow anything after that.
4. Plenty of water, to rehydrate you after all the tears.
5. Couple of boxes of tissues for the above tears, don't rely on kerchieves they'll get soggy too soon and
6. Something to fan yourself with because it gets hot at times.
I loved this book. The story happens nearly a century later than the canon. So there are trains, steamers and even cars. Elizabeth is an American married to the Colonel when he was on duty at America procuring horses for the army. She travels to England with Jane and Collins (a surprising twist in his character) where her husband's family refuses to believe her claim and her husband is missing in action at South Africa. But the faithful and honourable cousin Darcy, with a dandy moustache, believes her and gives her his protection. And the ride starts. We have the usual culprits and some new ones too. This Elizabeth is something to behold brave, sassy, honorable, fiery and oh so loveable. And Darcy, everyone, man or woman, will want one of him for themselves because he's so loyal, loving, sacrificing and sigh worthy. Every character is so well written and perfect. This book has replaced "These dreams" as my new favorite by this author.
1. A good vacation for the rest of your family, because believe me you wouldn't want your attention diverted, if that is even possibke.
2. A very comfortable seat, a recliner or a bed is even better because it's a very long journey.
3. All kind of nourishment, you won't be able to eben think of cooking and some of the snacks will be helpful when you are gnashing your teeth at the villians but let me warn you to finish your solid foods before chapter 40 because I seriously doubt you'll be able to swallow anything after that.
4. Plenty of water, to rehydrate you after all the tears.
5. Couple of boxes of tissues for the above tears, don't rely on kerchieves they'll get soggy too soon and
6. Something to fan yourself with because it gets hot at times.
I loved this book. The story happens nearly a century later than the canon. So there are trains, steamers and even cars. Elizabeth is an American married to the Colonel when he was on duty at America procuring horses for the army. She travels to England with Jane and Collins (a surprising twist in his character) where her husband's family refuses to believe her claim and her husband is missing in action at South Africa. But the faithful and honourable cousin Darcy, with a dandy moustache, believes her and gives her his protection. And the ride starts. We have the usual culprits and some new ones too. This Elizabeth is something to behold brave, sassy, honorable, fiery and oh so loveable. And Darcy, everyone, man or woman, will want one of him for themselves because he's so loyal, loving, sacrificing and sigh worthy. Every character is so well written and perfect. This book has replaced "These dreams" as my new favorite by this author.
August 5, 2020
A very unique variation. Feels fresh. It has the intrigue, slow reveal, romance, drama, and a hell of a lot of angst. Well written. Some clever changes in the characters - I really liked Billy Collins in particular. Really felt appropriate to the new setting.
It definitely deserves a high rating for effort. I can see this doing well as a novel without the P&P connection.
For me probably a 3 in enjoyment. I can’t see myself reading it again - as I was reading it I kept putting it aside to do other things. I think this was mainly because it is quite high angst and there is a feeling of depression and hopelessness throughout the novel, until almost the end. I also struggle with back and forth novels. It was definitely the best way to convey the information early on, but I didn’t have as much interest in later flashbacks.
I strongly disliked Richard for much of it, and struggled to empathise with his POV or see why Elizabeth thought so highly of him after everything. I also really didn’t agree with her decision - I have a different view of the morals of the situation I suppose. This is obviously a personal thing and I can imagine some readers will strongly empathise and identify with these sections. Either way, you’ll have a reaction! Made me cry.
Definitely an author who improves with every book. I look forward to her next.
It definitely deserves a high rating for effort. I can see this doing well as a novel without the P&P connection.
For me probably a 3 in enjoyment. I can’t see myself reading it again - as I was reading it I kept putting it aside to do other things. I think this was mainly because it is quite high angst and there is a feeling of depression and hopelessness throughout the novel, until almost the end. I also struggle with back and forth novels. It was definitely the best way to convey the information early on, but I didn’t have as much interest in later flashbacks.
I strongly disliked Richard for much of it, and struggled to empathise with his POV or see why Elizabeth thought so highly of him after everything. I also really didn’t agree with her decision - I have a different view of the morals of the situation I suppose. This is obviously a personal thing and I can imagine some readers will strongly empathise and identify with these sections. Either way, you’ll have a reaction! Made me cry.
Definitely an author who improves with every book. I look forward to her next.
July 26, 2020
Avid Reader
I wasn't sure how the author was going to resolve the love triangle between Darcy, Elizabeth, and the Colonel, but it was the handiwork of William Collins that made it possible! I had read bits and pieces of the beginning on FanFiction and one of the many Jane Austen groups. Darcy is initially engaged Anne de Bourgh, an old family friend, and she is anything but sickly! Georgina is unbelievable at first, but changes act Elizabeth saved her from Wickham. Thanks to Wickham, Mr. Bennet loses his life in a fire, but he was already dead when the fire broke out. Richard Elizabeth from certain death, but she has to flee Wyoming. Jane married Bingley. Our couple don't reach their HEA until the end.
I wasn't sure how the author was going to resolve the love triangle between Darcy, Elizabeth, and the Colonel, but it was the handiwork of William Collins that made it possible! I had read bits and pieces of the beginning on FanFiction and one of the many Jane Austen groups. Darcy is initially engaged Anne de Bourgh, an old family friend, and she is anything but sickly! Georgina is unbelievable at first, but changes act Elizabeth saved her from Wickham. Thanks to Wickham, Mr. Bennet loses his life in a fire, but he was already dead when the fire broke out. Richard Elizabeth from certain death, but she has to flee Wyoming. Jane married Bingley. Our couple don't reach their HEA until the end.
August 26, 2020
Great read by a great author
I have always enjoyed any and all of this author's books. Personally I really enjoy the regency period and had no interest in a P&P variation completely set in 1900's America. So glad that I took the chance on this one. It took place in the U.S., England and a little of Africa. There was fairly early realization of their feelings for one another but many unfortunate twists and turns hindered their becoming a couple. LOVED the author's image she created of Darcy as seen through Elizabeth's eyes when they first met. LOL. Many of the same names with character changes well thought out by the author. Not usually a fan of Elizabeth in a victim role but it was done well, not overly done.
I have always enjoyed any and all of this author's books. Personally I really enjoy the regency period and had no interest in a P&P variation completely set in 1900's America. So glad that I took the chance on this one. It took place in the U.S., England and a little of Africa. There was fairly early realization of their feelings for one another but many unfortunate twists and turns hindered their becoming a couple. LOVED the author's image she created of Darcy as seen through Elizabeth's eyes when they first met. LOL. Many of the same names with character changes well thought out by the author. Not usually a fan of Elizabeth in a victim role but it was done well, not overly done.
July 9, 2020
Impossibly Tempted
A different time period, an amazingly different plot, amid different continents, and you are still immersed in the essence of P&P. I loved this Darcy and Elizabeth. They are intensely drawn to each other from the start, although they valiantly resist. The path to their HEA is sweet and amusing, hard and heartbreaking, but beautiful. They both have an innate honor and honesty that I love to see. The characters in this fine story are richly drawn and along with the engaging plot, captivate to the last pages. Excellent writing and wonderfully told!
A different time period, an amazingly different plot, amid different continents, and you are still immersed in the essence of P&P. I loved this Darcy and Elizabeth. They are intensely drawn to each other from the start, although they valiantly resist. The path to their HEA is sweet and amusing, hard and heartbreaking, but beautiful. They both have an innate honor and honesty that I love to see. The characters in this fine story are richly drawn and along with the engaging plot, captivate to the last pages. Excellent writing and wonderfully told!
August 11, 2020
Outstanding!
It's very hard to put into words how much I loved this Pride and Prejudice variation. It's so different from all the others I've read in that it's set in the very early 20th century. Instead of the Regency period and the Peninsular war we have the Boer war as a backdrop. The story ranges from the plains of Wyoming to London and the stately homes of Derbyshire. A lovely read!
This is very well written and the story keeps you guessing why Lizzy, Jane and Billy have left the States and headed for London and Mr Darcy.
It's very hard to put into words how much I loved this Pride and Prejudice variation. It's so different from all the others I've read in that it's set in the very early 20th century. Instead of the Regency period and the Peninsular war we have the Boer war as a backdrop. The story ranges from the plains of Wyoming to London and the stately homes of Derbyshire. A lovely read!
This is very well written and the story keeps you guessing why Lizzy, Jane and Billy have left the States and headed for London and Mr Darcy.
May 12, 2021
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and I will certainly read it again. Nicole Clarkston tells beautiful stories and she writes them so well.
Reviewers before me have given a lot of detail about the story and I support everything they have said so, I will not follow with another lengthy review.
I have no hesitation recommending this book to everyone who loves romance and drama from lovable characters.
With it without prior reading of the original Pride and Prejudice, you can still enjoy this as a stand-alone novel.
Happy reading.
Reviewers before me have given a lot of detail about the story and I support everything they have said so, I will not follow with another lengthy review.
I have no hesitation recommending this book to everyone who loves romance and drama from lovable characters.
With it without prior reading of the original Pride and Prejudice, you can still enjoy this as a stand-alone novel.
Happy reading.
March 28, 2023
Great Story
What a wild ride. This book captured me from the first chapters, Elizabeth was accused of murder and had to leave home or be hanged. She does what any woman would do in 1900 to save herself. She loses her home, family, and good name. Elizabeth moves to England.
I cant say anymore or it will spoil the book.
First time reading this author, and i Love her writing. The characters are very charming and
so real. Many times i laughed, cryed, and became so frustrated with the twists and turns and complications of Elizabeths circumstances.
What a wild ride. This book captured me from the first chapters, Elizabeth was accused of murder and had to leave home or be hanged. She does what any woman would do in 1900 to save herself. She loses her home, family, and good name. Elizabeth moves to England.
I cant say anymore or it will spoil the book.
First time reading this author, and i Love her writing. The characters are very charming and
so real. Many times i laughed, cryed, and became so frustrated with the twists and turns and complications of Elizabeths circumstances.
January 22, 2024
Nicole has done it again. All of her books are very in-depth and involved. So much action, never a dull moment. Oh the heavy heartbreak and devastation. This is in the 1900, the turn of the century. So much more with motor cars and running water. This takes place in the New America's and England. So hard when there are bullies that try to have everything their way, and another version of a wicked Wickham. Love that Georgiana comes around, and so had the heartache for the Colonel. We do get our HEA for Darcy and Elizabeth, but the hard times they have to go through.
July 6, 2020
Best book of the year!
I don’t think I’ve cried so much, or had my heart soar so high over 1 book in quite some time! And I’ve read some pretty good books. I even had a few laughs here, like early on in their acquaintance when Darcy came upon Lizzy cracking Jane up by giving her impression of him twirling his “manly facial hair,” not realizing he had come up behind her.
If I could give a book more than 5 stars, this would be that book!
I don’t think I’ve cried so much, or had my heart soar so high over 1 book in quite some time! And I’ve read some pretty good books. I even had a few laughs here, like early on in their acquaintance when Darcy came upon Lizzy cracking Jane up by giving her impression of him twirling his “manly facial hair,” not realizing he had come up behind her.
If I could give a book more than 5 stars, this would be that book!
July 25, 2020
When all the reviewers say that you shouldn't start this unless you are prepared not to put it down, they are right. I made the mistake of starting this on a Tues night, and was left pining for the weekend so I could really sink into it.
In 1900 E gets finds herself in a heap of trouble and Richard is there to help her out just before he heads off to war, not to be seen again. I did love this story, truly, but I'll own that the background needed to get us up to speed is a lot to get through (though it really is needed and the author does a wonderful job of weaving in flashbacks to keep the story moving and filling in the gaps that are needed as the timeline plays out).
My biggest struggle with this story is that I loved this version of D&E. They are lovely together, but the story kept pulling them apart and jumping in their way. I get it, its where the story needed to go, and it was very well done, but I really just wanted like 50 more pages of this version of D&E being in love, and passionate, and totally perfect together.
In 1900 E gets finds herself in a heap of trouble and Richard is there to help her out just before he heads off to war, not to be seen again. I did love this story, truly, but I'll own that the background needed to get us up to speed is a lot to get through (though it really is needed and the author does a wonderful job of weaving in flashbacks to keep the story moving and filling in the gaps that are needed as the timeline plays out).
My biggest struggle with this story is that I loved this version of D&E. They are lovely together, but the story kept pulling them apart and jumping in their way. I get it, its where the story needed to go, and it was very well done, but I really just wanted like 50 more pages of this version of D&E being in love, and passionate, and totally perfect together.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 2, 2020
An Epic
It's really long. An epic of a story. I think it is well crafted but not your traditional P&P variation, which is a good thing... but for some reason, I was vaguely disturbed by it, found it hard to read, broke it up with more traditional tales. Few errors, impressive for a Kindle book this size. One thing I wonder about: why do you need to smuggle opium if it is a legal substance with a thriving trade? Maybe I should Google that.
It's really long. An epic of a story. I think it is well crafted but not your traditional P&P variation, which is a good thing... but for some reason, I was vaguely disturbed by it, found it hard to read, broke it up with more traditional tales. Few errors, impressive for a Kindle book this size. One thing I wonder about: why do you need to smuggle opium if it is a legal substance with a thriving trade? Maybe I should Google that.
July 19, 2020
What a great story
As usual, Nicole weaves a great story! You know it’s good when you continue thinking about the story and characters after you’re finished with the book. I also wished it hadn’t ended, I became attached to the characters which shows the author’s ability to develop them well.
As usual, Nicole weaves a great story! You know it’s good when you continue thinking about the story and characters after you’re finished with the book. I also wished it hadn’t ended, I became attached to the characters which shows the author’s ability to develop them well.
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