This is not a YA sports romance--it is an implausible, girl-power, sports fantasy
Near the end of her sophomore year, Olive (“Liv”) Rodinsky AKA “O-Rod” is a star third baseman on the softball team of Windsor Preparatory School, a $15,000-per-year, private, girls school in an unnamed, generic, fictional small town located near Lawrence, Kansas. Liv has been attending Windsor Prep for the past three years, ever since her 25-year-old, lesbian sister, Danielle, was hired as the coach of the girls' softball team. During the most crucial game of the Kansas softball state championships, against the girls’ softball team of the local public high school, Northland High, the Northland first baseman, a senior named Stacey Sanderson, attempts to psych out Liv, as she stands, with bases loaded, on first base, by spewing bigoted remarks about Danielle, accusing her beloved sister of being a pedophile who routinely sexually assaults members of the girls' softball team that she coaches. Rather than signaling a timeout, reporting this horrendous behavior to both of their coaches and the umpire, and potentially getting Stacey kicked out of the game for poor sportsmanship, Liv impulsively punches Stacey in the face. In the brouhaha that follows, Liv makes no attempt to mitigate her inevitable punishment for committing criminal assault by telling either her sister, her parents, or the principal of Windsor Prep exactly why she hit an opposing player in the middle of a game. As a result, Liv is thrown out of the game, kicked off the team, suspended from school the rest of the year (which is only the last 3 days of the school year), and informed by the principal that she will no longer have a scholarship if she chooses to return to school in the fall. Liv is shocked, even though this has been a standard, expected punishment for the crime of assault for decades in both public and private schools. She is, in fact, fortunate that the cops weren't called to arrest her (though it is not part of the plot, that is quite believable, because she is white, and her father is a local cop--see below).
In addition to this huge blow, Liv’s handsome, Black boyfriend, Jake Rogers, who is a junior, the star running back on the Northland football team, and used to date Mean Girl Stacey two years ago, ends their three-month relationship with a stern text message, in which he makes it clear he does not approve of her violence either.
Though Liv’s father is a police detective--and inevitably would be a member of a police union, which is one of the strongest in the country and offers the best benefits--in this alternate reality, his health insurance has not adequately covered the cost of Liv's mother's treatments for several bouts of breast cancer over the past few years. The out-of-pocket expenses beyond what the health insurance the father has through his job covers (which under the ACA of 2013, with the worst coverage available, would amount to no more than a total of about $34,000 across two years) has impoverished the family to such a degree that they have lost their home and are living with Danielle and her wife Heather. In part because Liv never explains herself, but also because she broke the law, her father, a strict disciplinarian (and someone whose job it is to enforce the law, though that isn't part of the plot either), has no sympathy for her plight. She now must attend Northland, which is a huge school with 1500 students, none of whom does she know, except her ex, Jake, because she attended elementary and middle school on the opposite side of town from Northland, when her parents lived in that area.
Liv and her family are convinced that the only way Liv has any chance of affording college (since YA authors virtually never allow their MCs to consider community college and living at home), is to obtain a softball scholarship. But the only way to do that is to be a shining star on a softball team during her junior year, since by the time an athlete is a senior, all the scholarships are already allocated. Unfortunately, at the start of her junior year, the only potential spot available on the Northland softball team is the one vacated by vicious bigot, Stacey, who has graduated high school. When Liv approaches the coach of the varsity softball team, Trudi Kitterage AKA Coach Kitt, Liv does not mention how Stacey provoked the assault, because Liv still has not mentioned that salient fact to anyone. As a result, in spite of the fact that Liv is one of the best high-school, softball, third basemen in the state, Coach Kitt won't immediately accept Liv on her team, because she now has the reputation as an undisciplined hothead, and such a person would be a loose cannon, potentially detrimental to the team. However, Coach Kitt agrees to allow Liv to redeem herself before tryouts for the softball team in February, by participating in one of the fall or winter sports offered at Northland during the next six months in order to demonstrate that she can be a good teammate. Unfortunately, Liv has never played any sport but softball. Her only choices at Northland that would meet Coach Kitt's requirement, because they involve team effort, are volleyball, basketball or football.
While Liv is still considering her options, one day she is in a grassy area on the Northland campus near the football field with her 14-year-old brother, Ryan, who is considering trying out for the Northland football team as a kicker. While he is practicing, she throws the football to him, as she has done many times over the years at their house.
Grey Worthington is a tall, handsome, muscular, white guy, who is a senior and starting quarterback of the Northland football team. He witnesses her spiraling a ball to her brother for 25 yards, as he puts it, “like you’ve been playing for years.” He asks her to throw the football to him at 30 yards, while he is running full tilt. She bullets it right at him, and he tells her he wants to recruit her as backup QB. He says he realizes she is a girl, and believes her when she tells him she has never played football, but he broke his collarbone in June, and he is not cleared for contact play for many weeks yet. The current backup QB is a freshman who doesn’t throw nearly as well as Liv. Grey promises her that all she will need to do is ride the bench, so there is no chance she will get hurt, and it's no problem that she knows almost nothing about football. (It is not clear why he is bothering to recruit her, if he truly believes she won't be doing anything but sitting on the bench.) The offensive coordinator and QB coach, Manny Shanks, sees Liv throwing the football to Grey and agrees that she can be on the team as backup QB along with the freshman backup QB. But Coach Shanks doesn’t confirm what Grey has said that Liv would just be a figurehead on the bench. He says she will be calling plays and chucking the ball to the running back, Jake (the fact that he is her ex, and that could be a potential issue, is never really dealt with). Liv refuses to go along with what Grey is offering until he sweetens the deal by informing her that Coach Kitt is his mother, and that he will help Liv get on the softball team.
These are the things I enjoyed about this book:
1. Liv is a strong, determined, active heroine
2. Liv is an outstanding athlete. I am a big fan of the trope of elite female athletes in YA and adult romance.
3. Liv has excellent female relationships with her beloved sister Danielle, her sister-in-law Heather, her mother, and her best friend, Addie, a Black, elite volleyball player who also plays softball as her second sport.
4. Liv has a close relationship with her brother and her father.
5. Her romantic interest, Grey, is a sympathetic, metrosexual male.
6. It is obvious that, before writing this novel, the author was a professional writer. Her writing style is smooth and clear.
These are the things I struggled with in this book:
1. Liv is 5’10” and lean, not muscle-bound by any means. I would estimate her weight to be 150 pounds, max. It is commonplace these days for high school football players to weigh in at 225-280 pounds, and most are well over 6-foot tall. She would be in danger of being outright crushed playing high school football, and there is zero attempt to offer a realistic portrayal of this situation in this story. Liv is tackled dozens of times, and the way the author makes up for this is to pretend that Liv is a cartoon character such as Wile E. Coyote, who is perpetually smashed to a pancake, only to pop back into shape immediately, no worse for wear.
2. It is blatantly stated in the novel several times that Liv has zero experience playing team football. Her only experience with football is watching an unspecified amount of Kansas City Chiefs games on TV with her father and throwing a football back and forth with her brother Ryan an unspecified amount of times over the years. Yet she walks on the team and is presented by the author as instantly being as competent a QB as Grey, who has played at least a decade and is totally dedicated to the sport. This is not a plot similar to the movie, Heaven Can Wait, in which the ghost of a brilliant professional QB jumps into Liv’s body and uses her body to play outstanding football. There is simply no plausible reason—outside of magic, and this is not a paranormal novel—as to why a talented softball player could instantly turn on a dime and be a fabulous QB with no training whatsoever. According to famous coach, Charlie Stubbs, the QB position requires more time and dedication than any other position, and a team is only as good as its QB. Not only should a highly competent QB be superbly coordinated, have outstanding athletic ability, be physically very strong, and extremely mentally alert, the QB must spend endless time studying the game. This especially includes perpetually watching game video, of their own team and that of opponents—something Liv has never done in the past and never does, ever, at any time in this book. In every possible way, her entirely unmotivated, instant genius as a QB is an insult to every dedicated QB, male or female, who has worked hard, over many years, to excel at the game.
3. This book is advertised as a “sports romance,” but the romance portion of the novel runs a far second to the football portion. There is very little romantic conflict, and what little there is, toward the last 20% of the story, is rapidly resolved.
4. The author, a former sports journalist who has worked for the Palm Beach Post, the Kansas City Star, and the Associated Press, has drawn on her past training to fill up what seems like 70% of this novel with technical descriptions of football games that sound like scripts for sports announcers. A little of that would have gone a long way. It gets really redundant.
5. The author’s attempt to write interracial romantic relationships is completely unrealistic. Both Liv, her Black best friend Addie, and her Black ex-boyfriend Jake all engage in interracial dating. In particular, Jake is portrayed as dating a succession of three white girls, including Liv, and everyone at school and around town accepts this as no big deal. Kansas is a state notorious for its history, past and present, of racism, and this is particularly an issue in small towns, such as the town in which this story takes place. Addie and Jake might as well have been white, as inauthentically as their situations are presented in this book.
6. Liv is an elite softball player, but there are only two, very brief scenes of her playing softball in the entire book. Softball is the only sport that she would, believably, be brilliant at.
7. The small town setting is completely generic. The town doesn’t even have a name. The author makes no effort to present any setting other than football games in any detailed or interesting way.
I experienced this book both in Kindle and audiobook format. The narrator of the audiobook does a very good job.
I rate this book as follows:
Heroine: 3 stars
Romantic Interest: 3 stars
Romance Plot: 1.5 stars
Football Plot: 1 star
Small Town Setting: 1 star
Writing: 2 stars
Audiobook: 3.5 stars
Overall: 2.1 rounded down to 2 stars