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The Hidden Warrior #1
Dragon Rising
Sometimes a battle isn't waged on a bloody field.
Sometimes it's won within the heart of one girl.
Hua Minglan wants revenge for the death of her sister, and she'll do anything to get it.
A war is brewing between Piao and the Kou warriors to the north, a war that has called every able-bodied man in Piao from their fields.
When Hua's father is summoned to fight, she knows he won't return, most of the warriors don't.
With a decision that could cost her everything, she leaves her home behind in an attempt to take her father's place training under Commander Jian Li, brother to the emperor.
The commander is a harsh man, a demanding man, and one with his own desire for vengeance.
Hua can't get too close. She can't befriend the man who is able to bring her deceptions tumbling to the ground. If he learns the truth about who she is, it won't only see her shunned from the army for disguising herself as a man.
It will end in her execution.
Hua never imagines that by joining the army, she brings a greater foe into the heart of Piao.
What if the Kou are only a distraction?
What if the real enemy is her?
Dive into this full-length Mulan inspired fantasy. Beware of dragons, sword-wielding girls, and a slow-burn, heartbreaking romance.
Sometimes it's won within the heart of one girl.
Hua Minglan wants revenge for the death of her sister, and she'll do anything to get it.
A war is brewing between Piao and the Kou warriors to the north, a war that has called every able-bodied man in Piao from their fields.
When Hua's father is summoned to fight, she knows he won't return, most of the warriors don't.
With a decision that could cost her everything, she leaves her home behind in an attempt to take her father's place training under Commander Jian Li, brother to the emperor.
The commander is a harsh man, a demanding man, and one with his own desire for vengeance.
Hua can't get too close. She can't befriend the man who is able to bring her deceptions tumbling to the ground. If he learns the truth about who she is, it won't only see her shunned from the army for disguising herself as a man.
It will end in her execution.
Hua never imagines that by joining the army, she brings a greater foe into the heart of Piao.
What if the Kou are only a distraction?
What if the real enemy is her?
Dive into this full-length Mulan inspired fantasy. Beware of dragons, sword-wielding girls, and a slow-burn, heartbreaking romance.
312 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 25, 2019
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M. Lynn
59 books408 followersMichelle MacQueen is a USA Today bestselling author of love. Yes, love. Whether it be YA romance, NA romance, or fantasy romance (Under M. Lynn), she loves to make readers swoon.
The great loves of her life to this point are two tiny blond creatures who call her "aunt" and proclaim her books to be "boring books" for their lack of pictures. Yet, somehow, she still manages to love them more than chocolate.
When she's not sharing her inexhaustible wisdom with her niece and nephew, Michelle is usually lounging in her ridiculously large bean bag chair creating worlds and characters that remind her to smile every day - even when a feisty five-year-old is telling her just how much she doesn't know.
The great loves of her life to this point are two tiny blond creatures who call her "aunt" and proclaim her books to be "boring books" for their lack of pictures. Yet, somehow, she still manages to love them more than chocolate.
When she's not sharing her inexhaustible wisdom with her niece and nephew, Michelle is usually lounging in her ridiculously large bean bag chair creating worlds and characters that remind her to smile every day - even when a feisty five-year-old is telling her just how much she doesn't know.
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April 29, 2020
Disclaimer. I received this book in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
I’m so excited to read the next book in this new series M. Lynn has created. Dragon Rising is a Mulan retelling with different things added into it aka actual dragons.
Hua is such a sweet girl who doesn’t agree with the typical traditions of her country. She is a fighter and when she watches a loved one die right in front of her she wants revenge. When the war is announced she knows that if her father goes that he won’t be coming back and her four year old brother is too young to inherit the farm leaving no one to care for them. Sounds like your typical Mulan retelling right? But here’s the thing Hua’s family comes from a long line of dragon blood. She doesn’t really know what exactly it means other than that if anyone finds out she would be considered a threat to the crown and would be excited like her grandfather was before they changed their names.
I loved seeing how determined Hua is. She is ten times the warrior than any man. I love how she challenges things and doesn’t leave it to tradition. The commander Jian Li is such a deep character. He’s got a backstory that we don’t know everything about yet but he’s a very caring person. He wants to protect his troupes and when he fails he takes it hard. I would love to see more of him when he’s not stressing out over the war they are fighting. Hua’s betrothed is the most interesting character in the book. That man has some secrets that we don’t get to find out in book one but boy do I have some ideas.
Personally, I think this one falls more like the live-action movie of Mulan based off of the movie trailer I seen. This book doesn’t actually have any romance in it so if you’re looking for romance you might want to pass, but I do having a feeling that book two will have romance. But the family relationships that you see in the animated movie are very strong in this book as well. It’s not even just Hua’s family that we get to see but this family formed between her betrothed, her commander, and the emperor.
Like all of M. Lynn’s books I loved all the characters and the plot kept me turning page after page. I love how quick and fun her books are and I need the next book asap because some shit is going to be going down after the ending of the book.
I’m so excited to read the next book in this new series M. Lynn has created. Dragon Rising is a Mulan retelling with different things added into it aka actual dragons.
Hua is such a sweet girl who doesn’t agree with the typical traditions of her country. She is a fighter and when she watches a loved one die right in front of her she wants revenge. When the war is announced she knows that if her father goes that he won’t be coming back and her four year old brother is too young to inherit the farm leaving no one to care for them. Sounds like your typical Mulan retelling right? But here’s the thing Hua’s family comes from a long line of dragon blood. She doesn’t really know what exactly it means other than that if anyone finds out she would be considered a threat to the crown and would be excited like her grandfather was before they changed their names.
I loved seeing how determined Hua is. She is ten times the warrior than any man. I love how she challenges things and doesn’t leave it to tradition. The commander Jian Li is such a deep character. He’s got a backstory that we don’t know everything about yet but he’s a very caring person. He wants to protect his troupes and when he fails he takes it hard. I would love to see more of him when he’s not stressing out over the war they are fighting. Hua’s betrothed is the most interesting character in the book. That man has some secrets that we don’t get to find out in book one but boy do I have some ideas.
Personally, I think this one falls more like the live-action movie of Mulan based off of the movie trailer I seen. This book doesn’t actually have any romance in it so if you’re looking for romance you might want to pass, but I do having a feeling that book two will have romance. But the family relationships that you see in the animated movie are very strong in this book as well. It’s not even just Hua’s family that we get to see but this family formed between her betrothed, her commander, and the emperor.
Like all of M. Lynn’s books I loved all the characters and the plot kept me turning page after page. I love how quick and fun her books are and I need the next book asap because some shit is going to be going down after the ending of the book.
May 19, 2020
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It’s a truly incredible fantasy retelling of Mulan. Hua Minglan’s family are descendents of the last Dragon Lords of Piao. Their family has been forced to hide their true identity as people fear the potential ancient dragon power running through their blood. I loved Hua’s fierce determination to fight for her people and to get justice for her much loved sister. She is strong, fearless, assertive and clever. Hua is supported by many other absolutely fabulous characters that have depth and are so relatable. I loved the dynamics between the male characters in the story too. They were bound together by loyalty born from blood, brotherhood and honour, but they also had strong emotional bonds which they did not shy away from. So wonderful to see men written in this light. The connection that Hua had with Jian and Luca developed naturally and felt authentic and in keeping with their personalities and what was happening around them. Quite often writers struggle to avoid ‘special snowflake syndrome’ when writing female characters as heroes, but I felt this author created a well written and genuine hero in Hua. My first 5 Star rating in quite a while! I will definitely be seeking out more books from this author.
February 27, 2020
I hate giving it two stars but ...
I loved M Lynn’s Golden series. That trilogy drew me in and held me tight. This didn’t,
I’m a huge fan of the legend of Hua Mulan. It’s brief but gives a lot of scope to play with when retelling.
So why didn’t this book work for me?
Strange character development. The emperor at the beginning who Luna was a consort to it is revealed very early on he is homosexual. I’m finding this to be a regular twist in Lynns books to the book I think it fell flat here. Mainly because he has such a small role in this book I don’t see why it’s relevant - it might be relevant later on - idk - I just found it a bit over sharing for a character who isn’t central.
There were a lot of very close similarities, especially at the beginning, to the Disney movie. Some of that is hard to avoid but some to me walked a bit too close to the line.
This book isn’t based in China but more a Chinese-inspired world. The language/honorifics/terms used to me just didn’t gel as much as I would have liked with the story. At times I found it distracting as I never got a clear Asian-setting from the world building.
The switching POV in third person. This perhaps I should have put first as I think it has a lot to do with why I just didn’t connect. The pov switches between Hua and Jian hit both are written in third. It just seemed to include a lot of information and scenes that I stead of moving the story forward bogged it down.
Which leads me to pacing. The last twenty percent was probably the best because something was actually happening. But the constant getting saved irritated me a bit and I found the conclusion (I’m guessing this will be a duo? trilogy?) to be really lacking. When I finished Golden Curse I *needed* the second book - this one - well it just wouldn’t bother me if I didn’t read on.
So sadly, overall I struggled connecting to characters, world building felt token at best, plot was drawn out.
I loved M Lynn’s Golden series. That trilogy drew me in and held me tight. This didn’t,
I’m a huge fan of the legend of Hua Mulan. It’s brief but gives a lot of scope to play with when retelling.
So why didn’t this book work for me?
Strange character development. The emperor at the beginning who Luna was a consort to it is revealed very early on he is homosexual. I’m finding this to be a regular twist in Lynns books to the book I think it fell flat here. Mainly because he has such a small role in this book I don’t see why it’s relevant - it might be relevant later on - idk - I just found it a bit over sharing for a character who isn’t central.
There were a lot of very close similarities, especially at the beginning, to the Disney movie. Some of that is hard to avoid but some to me walked a bit too close to the line.
This book isn’t based in China but more a Chinese-inspired world. The language/honorifics/terms used to me just didn’t gel as much as I would have liked with the story. At times I found it distracting as I never got a clear Asian-setting from the world building.
The switching POV in third person. This perhaps I should have put first as I think it has a lot to do with why I just didn’t connect. The pov switches between Hua and Jian hit both are written in third. It just seemed to include a lot of information and scenes that I stead of moving the story forward bogged it down.
Which leads me to pacing. The last twenty percent was probably the best because something was actually happening. But the constant getting saved irritated me a bit and I found the conclusion (I’m guessing this will be a duo? trilogy?) to be really lacking. When I finished Golden Curse I *needed* the second book - this one - well it just wouldn’t bother me if I didn’t read on.
So sadly, overall I struggled connecting to characters, world building felt token at best, plot was drawn out.
June 16, 2022
• Badass heroine, driven by revenge
• Terrifying, but noble Commander
• Catchy, fast paced and full of action
• Dragons and Royals
• Mulan Retelling
M. Lynn never dissapoints.
Just a few quotes I LOVED:
"When all this was done, she would no longer be Hua Minglan, prized daughter of a warrior, sister of the emperor's own consorts.
No, she'd be the girl who deceived an entire kingdom." - And I was more than ready to see her succeed.
"When I stumble I will rise again."
"You can't promise I'll survive this, but that's okay. I've already promised myself." - THIS. WOMAN.
"Trust was a thing to be earned. And he wanted more than anything to deserve hers." - Jian ❤️️
• Terrifying, but noble Commander
• Catchy, fast paced and full of action
• Dragons and Royals
• Mulan Retelling
M. Lynn never dissapoints.
Just a few quotes I LOVED:
"When all this was done, she would no longer be Hua Minglan, prized daughter of a warrior, sister of the emperor's own consorts.
No, she'd be the girl who deceived an entire kingdom." - And I was more than ready to see her succeed.
"When I stumble I will rise again."
"You can't promise I'll survive this, but that's okay. I've already promised myself." - THIS. WOMAN.
"Trust was a thing to be earned. And he wanted more than anything to deserve hers." - Jian ❤️️
January 20, 2020
I received a free copy for an honest review. This book perfectly fits in with my new obsession with Chinese dramas. Hua Minglan is someone to aspire to. She fights for those she loves and she’s fiercely loyal. I think Jian Li will be perfect for her. I just hope they can overcome their future obstacles. I love the drama and sense of honor from the warriors in this book. This is a great retelling of Mulan!!
May 4, 2020
Going into this book, I didn’t know what to expect, other than a hella good fantasy story, like all of Michele’s stories.
When I started reading, I thought this would be a classic “ordinary farm girls wants revenge”-story, but it turned out to be so much more.
The details with which Michele wrote this story and built the world, made for an outstanding image in my mind. I felt like I was right there with Hua in those fields, at those training grounds and in that little border town. Despite all the world building and detail, the writing style was easy to read and understand and most of all, the story was fast paced, gripping and intriguing. It made me want to continue reading, hence why I read this book in only two sittings spread over two days.
Hua is one of those characters that could be a hit or miss. Her story started out like a classic fantasy story surrounding a badass female lead. These kind of stories could really go two ways; either they follow the much travelled road and turn into a cliche or they go their own way and end up surprising the reading in ways unexpected. For me, Hua’s story definitely followed the latter. Yes, of course there were some cliche bits and the heavily hinted revelation of what Hua really is, didn’t come as a surprise, but the impulsiveness of Hua’s character shown through in the story and it was an honest delight imagining what Hua would do next and finding that I imagined wrong.
The tension in the air surrounding Hua’s secrets could be felt throughout the whole book, the respect of her comrades for her was beautifully written and Hua’s relationships with both Luca and Jian were done nicely.
What I’m most thankful for is that romance wasn’t the main plot of this book. I’m grateful that Hua didn’t fall for the first strong man she saw, which is something you often do see in books like these and even though I’m a sucker for romance, in this story it wouldn’t have fitted, and so I’m glad it wasn’t there.
I loved this book with all my heart and I truly cannot wait to read the sequel!
*I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review*
When I started reading, I thought this would be a classic “ordinary farm girls wants revenge”-story, but it turned out to be so much more.
The details with which Michele wrote this story and built the world, made for an outstanding image in my mind. I felt like I was right there with Hua in those fields, at those training grounds and in that little border town. Despite all the world building and detail, the writing style was easy to read and understand and most of all, the story was fast paced, gripping and intriguing. It made me want to continue reading, hence why I read this book in only two sittings spread over two days.
Hua is one of those characters that could be a hit or miss. Her story started out like a classic fantasy story surrounding a badass female lead. These kind of stories could really go two ways; either they follow the much travelled road and turn into a cliche or they go their own way and end up surprising the reading in ways unexpected. For me, Hua’s story definitely followed the latter. Yes, of course there were some cliche bits and the heavily hinted revelation of what Hua really is, didn’t come as a surprise, but the impulsiveness of Hua’s character shown through in the story and it was an honest delight imagining what Hua would do next and finding that I imagined wrong.
The tension in the air surrounding Hua’s secrets could be felt throughout the whole book, the respect of her comrades for her was beautifully written and Hua’s relationships with both Luca and Jian were done nicely.
What I’m most thankful for is that romance wasn’t the main plot of this book. I’m grateful that Hua didn’t fall for the first strong man she saw, which is something you often do see in books like these and even though I’m a sucker for romance, in this story it wouldn’t have fitted, and so I’m glad it wasn’t there.
I loved this book with all my heart and I truly cannot wait to read the sequel!
*I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review*
February 21, 2020
I'm so glad I was able to read an ARC of Dragon Rising! It's a Mulan inspired story, but with a huge twist, because being a woman pretending to be a man isn't the only thing that Hua Minglan has to hide.
When reading the note from the author before starting the story, I came across the following sentence:
Also, please forgive the addition of live dragons. Those did not exist in ancient China.
That was it. That was the moment I had high expectations. Not only showed M. Lynn that the had a good sense of humour, but the book WOULD HAVE DRAGONS!!!!!
I expect you know what happens in Mulan. In Dragon Rising, Hua and her family are invited for the festival of the dragon by the new emperor of Piao. Everything is going fine during the festival, until the Kou attack and Hua's sister is killed. Afterwards, Hua wants nothing more than to get revenge for what happened to her sister. So, as you probably know from Mulan, she pretends to be a man and joins the army to wage war against the Kou.
Jian is the commander of the Piao army. After most of his men died in a trap set by the Kou, he started training new recruits. Despite being an honorable man, rumours are going through the camp that he deliberately lead his men into the trap. Because of this, Jian is struggling to keep the confidence of his men, while also dealing with his past.
Dragon Rising is a well-written retelling. All of the characters have a lot of depth and the character growth is amazing. I love the twists M. Lynn gave to the story. I haven't mentioned them all, so you should read the book for the rest of them!
4.5 stars
Next read: A Heart so Fierce and Broken, by Brigid Kemmerer
P.S. If anyone knows other Mulan retellings, please tell me. I need more.
When reading the note from the author before starting the story, I came across the following sentence:
Also, please forgive the addition of live dragons. Those did not exist in ancient China.
That was it. That was the moment I had high expectations. Not only showed M. Lynn that the had a good sense of humour, but the book WOULD HAVE DRAGONS!!!!!
I expect you know what happens in Mulan. In Dragon Rising, Hua and her family are invited for the festival of the dragon by the new emperor of Piao. Everything is going fine during the festival, until the Kou attack and Hua's sister is killed. Afterwards, Hua wants nothing more than to get revenge for what happened to her sister. So, as you probably know from Mulan, she pretends to be a man and joins the army to wage war against the Kou.
Jian is the commander of the Piao army. After most of his men died in a trap set by the Kou, he started training new recruits. Despite being an honorable man, rumours are going through the camp that he deliberately lead his men into the trap. Because of this, Jian is struggling to keep the confidence of his men, while also dealing with his past.
Dragon Rising is a well-written retelling. All of the characters have a lot of depth and the character growth is amazing. I love the twists M. Lynn gave to the story. I haven't mentioned them all, so you should read the book for the rest of them!
4.5 stars
Next read: A Heart so Fierce and Broken, by Brigid Kemmerer
P.S. If anyone knows other Mulan retellings, please tell me. I need more.
March 13, 2020
Sometimes a battle isn't waged on a bloody field.
Sometimes it's won within the heart of one girl.
M. Lynn has done an amazing job with this retelling , and as soon as I read that line above well I just had to read it and I'm glad I did .
This is a retelling that doesn't feel like one and that is what makes this so good . M. Lynn did an amazing job with the main characters and you the reader are instantly vested in them and you keep turning pages way into the night because you have to know what's going to happen good or bad . This is one of those unputdownable books that makes you sleepy the next morning and that's a great thing .
The main characters and the world building are excellent . So all I can say is go buy this book but be warned make sure the kids are feed lol because you will not want to stop reading .
So buy this book , sit back enjoy a fantastic story , then wonder when book 2 is and then go leave a review of this fantastic book . An easy 5 star read .
Sometimes it's won within the heart of one girl.
M. Lynn has done an amazing job with this retelling , and as soon as I read that line above well I just had to read it and I'm glad I did .
This is a retelling that doesn't feel like one and that is what makes this so good . M. Lynn did an amazing job with the main characters and you the reader are instantly vested in them and you keep turning pages way into the night because you have to know what's going to happen good or bad . This is one of those unputdownable books that makes you sleepy the next morning and that's a great thing .
The main characters and the world building are excellent . So all I can say is go buy this book but be warned make sure the kids are feed lol because you will not want to stop reading .
So buy this book , sit back enjoy a fantastic story , then wonder when book 2 is and then go leave a review of this fantastic book . An easy 5 star read .
March 3, 2020
What a fabulous book. All Hua wants is revenge for her sister’s death. She is such an amazing character. Once you start reading, you are completely involved with the plot and the characters. Don’t miss out once it’s released.
March 20, 2020
Dragon Rising is the first book in the Hidden Warrior serie by M. Lynn is a retelling of Mulan with a fantasy twist.
I really liked this retelling, it was really well done. Can't wait for the next book.
I really liked this retelling, it was really well done. Can't wait for the next book.
June 19, 2020
I am a huge fan of retellings and this is I think the first Milan one I have come across and boy is it good! Full of adventure I loved the journey that this storyline takes us on. There’s action, twists and turns, romance, dragons And some awesome characters! All in all it’s very addictive and I loved it.
January 14, 2020
I LOVED this book!! I couldn't put it down. The characters are going to rent a space in my heart for a very long time. The story is fast paced and filled with action from start to finish. I can't wait for the second book!
April 6, 2020
4.5 stars
Mulan with dragons and it is worthy.
After a somewhat fast then slow start, the last 3rd escalated quickly and I need more ASAP.
Highly recommended.
Mulan with dragons and it is worthy.
After a somewhat fast then slow start, the last 3rd escalated quickly and I need more ASAP.
Highly recommended.
October 11, 2023
Such a great story!! Love the twists and the characters. This is a trilogy. So, there is a little cliffhanger. If you love mulan adaptations this is for you!
April 9, 2020
My gosh, I have no idea where to begin!
One of my favourite Disney movies is Mulan, everything about it is just awesome to me so this book means a great deal personally.
I honestly don’t have many words to say for this book other than I literally couldn’t put it down. I have spent all day reading it and it was phenomenal!
Absolutely phenomenal! The characters, the story, the meaning! Just an amazing read. And now I’m dying for the next book! I need to know what happens to Hua, I just need to!
By far, one of the best books I’ve read this year!
One of my favourite Disney movies is Mulan, everything about it is just awesome to me so this book means a great deal personally.
I honestly don’t have many words to say for this book other than I literally couldn’t put it down. I have spent all day reading it and it was phenomenal!
Absolutely phenomenal! The characters, the story, the meaning! Just an amazing read. And now I’m dying for the next book! I need to know what happens to Hua, I just need to!
By far, one of the best books I’ve read this year!
February 17, 2020
Received a copy in exchange for review.
Wow, this book was AMAZING!!
Mulan has always been one of my favourites and this retelling did not disappoint. Dragon Rising had me hooked from start to finish. I cannot wait for the next book
Loved it so much I had to buy a physical copy for my shelves
Wow, this book was AMAZING!!
Mulan has always been one of my favourites and this retelling did not disappoint. Dragon Rising had me hooked from start to finish. I cannot wait for the next book
Loved it so much I had to buy a physical copy for my shelves
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June 17, 2020I sadly dnfd this book. I just found the writing style didn't mesh well with me personally.
August 19, 2021
2.5
was a little too focused on events and actions and needed more world building.
was a little too focused on events and actions and needed more world building.
March 26, 2020
I have read Michelle's other books that are retellings and she always does such an amazing job of making them her own with new twist to keep you pulled into the story from beginning to end. This is one keeps up the reputation. Also with the chapters changing between characters you get the full picture of the story. Promise this story wont disappoint.
January 15, 2022
*I received an advance copy of this book from the author to proofread, but I loved it so much I’m listing it as an ARC review.*
What a way to start off the new year! By now, you all know how much I love retellings, and you’re probably aware of how much I love M. Lynn’s books but I was not prepared to be so in awe of this one.
Dragon Rising is a Mulan retelling, and while it does have a lot of similarities to the Disney movie we all love so much, it’s fresh and new and exciting. There is a full, rich background for the characters. The story is well thought out and executed brilliantly. It kept me intrigued from beginning to end, and it was hard to stop reading to do anything else.
Let’s start with the characters because that is one of the most vital parts of a story for me. Every once in a while a book comes along where I just instantly love the characters and feel deeply connected to them. It doesn’t happen often, even if I love the characters in a book, but the ones here jumped right into my heart and are prepared to stay for a long time. From Hua, a fierce warrior who wants to protect her family above all else, to Jian, the Commander who hides behind a tough mask, I love them all. There is also Emperor Bo and General Luca, whom I adore with all my heart. Jian is Bo’s half-brother, and the three men have been best friends their whole lives, which just makes my soul happy. Their friendship is very real and apparent, and they’re wonderful.
Michelle clearly did a lot of research when writing this book. It is evident in the cultures, settings, and histories presented. She does such a good job telling the story that even though there isn’t a POV of anyone in the enemy Kou army, we get a clear idea of their people and way of life. There is a distinction between the two people, and it was interesting seeing those differences.
I love her style of writing. I’m sure I’ve said it before, but it’s true. She has a way of really bringing the reader into the story, and it all feels so natural. The world building is done beautifully without being bogged down by descriptions and information–there is a perfect balance. It’s easy to get in to and find yourself lost in this new world.
I know it’s early in the year, and this was the first book I finished, but I am certain it’s going to be a favorite. Not just of 2020. This is a book I will absolutely be rereading time and time again, I’m sure. It’s one of the best books I’ve read in a long time, and I’ve read a lot of good ones the past couple months. I cannot wait to see where the next book takes these characters. You better believe I’ll be pestering Michelle until it’s in my possession!
*Full original review on Functionally Fictional.
What a way to start off the new year! By now, you all know how much I love retellings, and you’re probably aware of how much I love M. Lynn’s books but I was not prepared to be so in awe of this one.
Dragon Rising is a Mulan retelling, and while it does have a lot of similarities to the Disney movie we all love so much, it’s fresh and new and exciting. There is a full, rich background for the characters. The story is well thought out and executed brilliantly. It kept me intrigued from beginning to end, and it was hard to stop reading to do anything else.
Let’s start with the characters because that is one of the most vital parts of a story for me. Every once in a while a book comes along where I just instantly love the characters and feel deeply connected to them. It doesn’t happen often, even if I love the characters in a book, but the ones here jumped right into my heart and are prepared to stay for a long time. From Hua, a fierce warrior who wants to protect her family above all else, to Jian, the Commander who hides behind a tough mask, I love them all. There is also Emperor Bo and General Luca, whom I adore with all my heart. Jian is Bo’s half-brother, and the three men have been best friends their whole lives, which just makes my soul happy. Their friendship is very real and apparent, and they’re wonderful.
Michelle clearly did a lot of research when writing this book. It is evident in the cultures, settings, and histories presented. She does such a good job telling the story that even though there isn’t a POV of anyone in the enemy Kou army, we get a clear idea of their people and way of life. There is a distinction between the two people, and it was interesting seeing those differences.
I love her style of writing. I’m sure I’ve said it before, but it’s true. She has a way of really bringing the reader into the story, and it all feels so natural. The world building is done beautifully without being bogged down by descriptions and information–there is a perfect balance. It’s easy to get in to and find yourself lost in this new world.
I know it’s early in the year, and this was the first book I finished, but I am certain it’s going to be a favorite. Not just of 2020. This is a book I will absolutely be rereading time and time again, I’m sure. It’s one of the best books I’ve read in a long time, and I’ve read a lot of good ones the past couple months. I cannot wait to see where the next book takes these characters. You better believe I’ll be pestering Michelle until it’s in my possession!
*Full original review on Functionally Fictional.
May 4, 2020
This book!!!! OMG!!!! This book was AMAZING.
When I saw this cover, I knew it was going to be epic.
When I read chapter one and got instantly hooked, I knew it was going to be even more epic.
#IHaveSoManyFeelings
I haven't read any books by this author
before, until this masterpiece fell into my lap. It was SUPER hard to put down. I found myself reading it everywhere and anywhere I could.
*** SPOILERS AHEAD ***
I really really really really hope that the author does a prequel for Jian so we can see everything he went through being a spy for Bo, growing close to the main villain of the story, and falling in love with the villain's sister. Because I will read THE HELL out of that book. It needs to happen.
When I saw this cover, I knew it was going to be epic.
When I read chapter one and got instantly hooked, I knew it was going to be even more epic.
#IHaveSoManyFeelings
I haven't read any books by this author
before, until this masterpiece fell into my lap. It was SUPER hard to put down. I found myself reading it everywhere and anywhere I could.
*** SPOILERS AHEAD ***
I really really really really hope that the author does a prequel for Jian so we can see everything he went through being a spy for Bo, growing close to the main villain of the story, and falling in love with the villain's sister. Because I will read THE HELL out of that book. It needs to happen.
August 25, 2022
Now let's see, which guy should Hua choose? The boy who's in love with another woman, or her betrothed, the boy who's in love with another boy? 🤦🏻♀️
The first book in a retelling based on the story of Mulan. The dragon elements are almost interesting enough to keep me reading, but not enough to have to slog through the romantic mess.
The first book in a retelling based on the story of Mulan. The dragon elements are almost interesting enough to keep me reading, but not enough to have to slog through the romantic mess.
March 13, 2020
I received an eARC of this book via the author. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of this review.
What an adventure! Dragon Rising by M. Lynn is the first in her new series The Hidden Warrior inspired by Mulan. I love retellings! Several years ago when I first started reading retellings, I was skeptical, but that was unfounded. I love how an author can take an original, well-known tale and put their own spin on it. And M. Lynn does just that with Dragon Rising.
Hua Minglan is a force to be reckoned with. When her sister is killed during a Kou attack on the capital city, dying right in front of her, Hua’s need for revenge consumes her thoughts. With the help of her Nainai (grandmother), Hua leaves for war, pretending to be the older son Gen Minglan never had. But she has a secret, one she must guard with her life and it isn’t that she’s a woman. Hua Minglan is dragon-blooded.
Commander Jian Li is the brother of the emperor and has suffered great loss. Like Hua, he is out for revenge against General Athan, the Kou leader, who killed the woman he loved years earlier, but it clouds his judgment leading to the slaughter of his men in a surprise attack. I love Jian. He is a lost soul, truly. He knows his place, serving as commander of his brother’s army, but he doesn’t want it. Jian is young and never wanted the responsibility or burden of leading. He only wants to serve his brother well and revenge his lost love. Now this revenge has led to many deaths that weigh heavy on his shoulders. As a result, he takes on the responsibility of training the new recruits that are arriving daily.
The plot of this story revolves around Hua and her training under Jian. While there is a lot of action and excitement, twists and turns throughout the book, Dragon Rising is character-driven. With chapters alternating POV between Hua and Jian, I found myself captivated. I loved seeing Hua through Jian’s eyes. Jian sees her as a young man, too young to be in the army, but also his best fighter. Hua sees through Jian to the loneliness he hides behind the stern Commander facade.
Overall I really enjoyed Dragon Rising. I loved the author’s spin on the classic tale of Mulan, and I cannot wait to learn more about the dragon-blooded. While the story focuses on Jian and Hua, I absolutely adore Luca, a side-character that is Jian’s best friend and Hua’s betrothed. Luca brings levity to the story, hiding Hua’s secret and feeling guilty for keeping it from Jian. Common ground for Hua and Jian is that they both care for Luca, which shows throughout the story. If you enjoy YA fantasy retellings, I highly recommend you grab a copy of Dragon Rising. It will not disappoint!
What an adventure! Dragon Rising by M. Lynn is the first in her new series The Hidden Warrior inspired by Mulan. I love retellings! Several years ago when I first started reading retellings, I was skeptical, but that was unfounded. I love how an author can take an original, well-known tale and put their own spin on it. And M. Lynn does just that with Dragon Rising.
Hua Minglan is a force to be reckoned with. When her sister is killed during a Kou attack on the capital city, dying right in front of her, Hua’s need for revenge consumes her thoughts. With the help of her Nainai (grandmother), Hua leaves for war, pretending to be the older son Gen Minglan never had. But she has a secret, one she must guard with her life and it isn’t that she’s a woman. Hua Minglan is dragon-blooded.
Commander Jian Li is the brother of the emperor and has suffered great loss. Like Hua, he is out for revenge against General Athan, the Kou leader, who killed the woman he loved years earlier, but it clouds his judgment leading to the slaughter of his men in a surprise attack. I love Jian. He is a lost soul, truly. He knows his place, serving as commander of his brother’s army, but he doesn’t want it. Jian is young and never wanted the responsibility or burden of leading. He only wants to serve his brother well and revenge his lost love. Now this revenge has led to many deaths that weigh heavy on his shoulders. As a result, he takes on the responsibility of training the new recruits that are arriving daily.
The plot of this story revolves around Hua and her training under Jian. While there is a lot of action and excitement, twists and turns throughout the book, Dragon Rising is character-driven. With chapters alternating POV between Hua and Jian, I found myself captivated. I loved seeing Hua through Jian’s eyes. Jian sees her as a young man, too young to be in the army, but also his best fighter. Hua sees through Jian to the loneliness he hides behind the stern Commander facade.
Overall I really enjoyed Dragon Rising. I loved the author’s spin on the classic tale of Mulan, and I cannot wait to learn more about the dragon-blooded. While the story focuses on Jian and Hua, I absolutely adore Luca, a side-character that is Jian’s best friend and Hua’s betrothed. Luca brings levity to the story, hiding Hua’s secret and feeling guilty for keeping it from Jian. Common ground for Hua and Jian is that they both care for Luca, which shows throughout the story. If you enjoy YA fantasy retellings, I highly recommend you grab a copy of Dragon Rising. It will not disappoint!
March 13, 2020
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I started this book with very high expectations for two reasons- 1)I love all things Mulan and this is listed as a retelling of one of my favorite Disney movies, 2)I heard this author is fantastic. Based on both those items, I was super excited but also moderately concerned the story would not live up to my expectations. I am ever so happy to report Dragon Rising was absolutely fantastic, better than I even hoped. Somehow, maybe with magic, the book was able to mix heart-break, action, character development, culture, complicated relationship dynamics, romance and dragon into a cohesive story I could not put down.
This followed a very similar plot backbone to the Disney cartoon Mulan, with a girl who goes to war in her father's place and a stoic general tasked with training soldiers, but from there Dragon Rising was something entirely it's own- and I mean that in the best of ways. I will admit that this was darker than I anticipated, which is purely my own fault since the conflict in the story is a bloody war, I guess I just did not think that far ahead. If you are looking for light-hearted or comic relief, this is not the right story to pick up. If you want a strong, competent heroine who is capable of saving the day on her own, then this is the story for you.
Oh what a tangled web we weave in this tale. We have Hua who is pretending to be a man-boy to fight in the war for a twofold purpose- to avenge her sister and to save her ailing father from fighting a battle he won't survive. I love how many people knew who Hua really was but decided to hold their tongue, seeing her need and purpose clearly and supporting her fully. For the second main character, we have General Li (Jian), bastard brother to the emperor, tasked with training new recruits and hoarding a boatload of personal baggage against their enemy. And then there is Luca, a side character, who charming and easy going, the man her father arranged for her to marry- even while he holds feelings for another, who he never be able to have. Side note, NaiNai, the all knowing grandmother was fantastic- everything I wanted her to be and more, just saying.
Overall, this was a fantastic engaging book and I would not change a single thing! This my current favorite read and I can't wait for the next book to see what will happen to Hua and Jian next.
I started this book with very high expectations for two reasons- 1)I love all things Mulan and this is listed as a retelling of one of my favorite Disney movies, 2)I heard this author is fantastic. Based on both those items, I was super excited but also moderately concerned the story would not live up to my expectations. I am ever so happy to report Dragon Rising was absolutely fantastic, better than I even hoped. Somehow, maybe with magic, the book was able to mix heart-break, action, character development, culture, complicated relationship dynamics, romance and dragon into a cohesive story I could not put down.
This followed a very similar plot backbone to the Disney cartoon Mulan, with a girl who goes to war in her father's place and a stoic general tasked with training soldiers, but from there Dragon Rising was something entirely it's own- and I mean that in the best of ways. I will admit that this was darker than I anticipated, which is purely my own fault since the conflict in the story is a bloody war, I guess I just did not think that far ahead. If you are looking for light-hearted or comic relief, this is not the right story to pick up. If you want a strong, competent heroine who is capable of saving the day on her own, then this is the story for you.
Oh what a tangled web we weave in this tale. We have Hua who is pretending to be a man-boy to fight in the war for a twofold purpose- to avenge her sister and to save her ailing father from fighting a battle he won't survive. I love how many people knew who Hua really was but decided to hold their tongue, seeing her need and purpose clearly and supporting her fully. For the second main character, we have General Li (Jian), bastard brother to the emperor, tasked with training new recruits and hoarding a boatload of personal baggage against their enemy. And then there is Luca, a side character, who charming and easy going, the man her father arranged for her to marry- even while he holds feelings for another, who he never be able to have. Side note, NaiNai, the all knowing grandmother was fantastic- everything I wanted her to be and more, just saying.
Overall, this was a fantastic engaging book and I would not change a single thing! This my current favorite read and I can't wait for the next book to see what will happen to Hua and Jian next.
January 9, 2020
An Enlightening But Frightening Look Behind The Cloak Of War & Repression!!😞🙏😢💥🐉
Dragon Rising
This is a gripping read. It's based on Mulan, I think?! It's set in an unspecified Asian Country in the distant past.
Hua Minglan is one of 3 siblings. Luna is oldest & has moved to the Capital, Dasha, after being given the honour of becoming one the new Emperor's consorts, then it's Hua, she's not like other girls her age. She doesn't enjoy 'girly pursuits', she prefers to hunt with a bow & arrow and practice fighting with a sword, She & Luna were always bestfriends regardless of their differences though. Then there's their little brother, 4 year old Ru, he's sweet & innocent but barely remembers Luna now.😔 Then they have their Parents & their Nainai.💕
A neighbouring Country, Koulland, attacks theirs, Pioa, and Hua's family is dealt a tragic blow, her retired General Father, tells them he's going to heed the call to Arms from the Army Commander & their Emperor, as War creeps closer!!😱😢 The night before he's due to leave she comes to a drastic decision - She's going to cut off her hair, dress as a man & enter the Army in his stead!!🙈 Her Nainai catches her just before leaves but she doesn't stop her, in fact she agrees with her decision. She asks if she can paint her skin with good luck & protection charms. Hua agrees eagerly, one of them is a Dragon!🙏 Dragons are supposed to return to their Land in a time of need to protect their people but none have been seen in hundreds of years so they've begun to slip into the realms of myth!!✨
I absolutely loved this read. Hua's character has strong morals & she's very much about protecting her Family! She's determined & willing to learn. Commander Jian Li & General Luca Kai are both very good men. Jian is broken by his past mistakes but appreciates finding such a potentially strong new soldier and possible future friend. I really liked both of these guys.👍 The descriptions of the attacks were both bloodthirsty and put you right in the moment, I was completely riveted! I loved her Nainai, her forward looking attitude is fantastic!😍
The shocking & horrifying occurrences in the last battle left me totally aghast!😱💔😭 I can't wait to find out what happens next!🙏🌟
Debbie, 1970, UK
Dragon Rising
This is a gripping read. It's based on Mulan, I think?! It's set in an unspecified Asian Country in the distant past.
Hua Minglan is one of 3 siblings. Luna is oldest & has moved to the Capital, Dasha, after being given the honour of becoming one the new Emperor's consorts, then it's Hua, she's not like other girls her age. She doesn't enjoy 'girly pursuits', she prefers to hunt with a bow & arrow and practice fighting with a sword, She & Luna were always bestfriends regardless of their differences though. Then there's their little brother, 4 year old Ru, he's sweet & innocent but barely remembers Luna now.😔 Then they have their Parents & their Nainai.💕
A neighbouring Country, Koulland, attacks theirs, Pioa, and Hua's family is dealt a tragic blow, her retired General Father, tells them he's going to heed the call to Arms from the Army Commander & their Emperor, as War creeps closer!!😱😢 The night before he's due to leave she comes to a drastic decision - She's going to cut off her hair, dress as a man & enter the Army in his stead!!🙈 Her Nainai catches her just before leaves but she doesn't stop her, in fact she agrees with her decision. She asks if she can paint her skin with good luck & protection charms. Hua agrees eagerly, one of them is a Dragon!🙏 Dragons are supposed to return to their Land in a time of need to protect their people but none have been seen in hundreds of years so they've begun to slip into the realms of myth!!✨
I absolutely loved this read. Hua's character has strong morals & she's very much about protecting her Family! She's determined & willing to learn. Commander Jian Li & General Luca Kai are both very good men. Jian is broken by his past mistakes but appreciates finding such a potentially strong new soldier and possible future friend. I really liked both of these guys.👍 The descriptions of the attacks were both bloodthirsty and put you right in the moment, I was completely riveted! I loved her Nainai, her forward looking attitude is fantastic!😍
The shocking & horrifying occurrences in the last battle left me totally aghast!😱💔😭 I can't wait to find out what happens next!🙏🌟
Debbie, 1970, UK
March 7, 2020
Dragon Rising: A Mulan Inspired Fantasy
by M. Lynn
Book 1 in the Hidden Warrior series
Rating: 4/5
Wow. I do love a good retelling! I think I've only read one other story by Melanie Dickerson regarding a Mulan retelling but this one was jam-packed full of action, dragons, and going after what you believe in.
Hua Minglan is like every other girl coming from a small village farm except she and her family have a dangerous secret. They are dragon-blooded; therefore, if anyone were to discover their secret, the emperor would kill them. When tragedy strikes the family and Hua's older sister Luna is killed in an ambush with the enemy, Hua vows to avenge her sister's death and take her father's place as a new recruit to defend Piao (their country) from the Kou (the enemy trying to invade). Though her father has trained her all her life, Hua (or now Huan since she dresses as a man) still has to prove herself everything a soldier should be. Commander Jian is drawn to the young soldier with speed and skill but no strength. What will happen when Commander Jian learns the truth? Will Hua be able to help save her friends and her family?
You know the story (I hope), but what I loved about this version was the addition of the dragons. Not only is Hua Minglan talented, she has dragon blood. The mythos behind the dragon blood was very interesting to me and seemed natural to incorporate it into an Asian story. The author is very clear at the beginning of the story that she did her research but it wouldn't be perfect. However, I didn't go into the story thinking that it would be. That's the point. This story is a retelling of the legend. The story jumped off the pages into my imagination and I was wound up in this exciting tale for hours and didn't want to put the book down. It is still only book 1 in the series, so I am curious to know what will happen next and need the next book now.
Highly recommended for those that enjoy retellings but especially ones with adventurous and strong female leads.
My thanks to author for an ARC of the book. All opinions expressed here are entirely my own. No positive review was expected and no compensation received.
by M. Lynn
Book 1 in the Hidden Warrior series
Rating: 4/5
Wow. I do love a good retelling! I think I've only read one other story by Melanie Dickerson regarding a Mulan retelling but this one was jam-packed full of action, dragons, and going after what you believe in.
Hua Minglan is like every other girl coming from a small village farm except she and her family have a dangerous secret. They are dragon-blooded; therefore, if anyone were to discover their secret, the emperor would kill them. When tragedy strikes the family and Hua's older sister Luna is killed in an ambush with the enemy, Hua vows to avenge her sister's death and take her father's place as a new recruit to defend Piao (their country) from the Kou (the enemy trying to invade). Though her father has trained her all her life, Hua (or now Huan since she dresses as a man) still has to prove herself everything a soldier should be. Commander Jian is drawn to the young soldier with speed and skill but no strength. What will happen when Commander Jian learns the truth? Will Hua be able to help save her friends and her family?
You know the story (I hope), but what I loved about this version was the addition of the dragons. Not only is Hua Minglan talented, she has dragon blood. The mythos behind the dragon blood was very interesting to me and seemed natural to incorporate it into an Asian story. The author is very clear at the beginning of the story that she did her research but it wouldn't be perfect. However, I didn't go into the story thinking that it would be. That's the point. This story is a retelling of the legend. The story jumped off the pages into my imagination and I was wound up in this exciting tale for hours and didn't want to put the book down. It is still only book 1 in the series, so I am curious to know what will happen next and need the next book now.
Highly recommended for those that enjoy retellings but especially ones with adventurous and strong female leads.
My thanks to author for an ARC of the book. All opinions expressed here are entirely my own. No positive review was expected and no compensation received.
March 12, 2020
Spectacular !! Amazing !! Extraordinary Visual & Emotionally astounding !! It was like reading a film. I could envisage the town of Piao in my minds eye from it’s bright colours of the festivals and then feel the wind in my hair as Hua ran through the rural woods surrounding her family’s farming house. This was the most totally absorbing story I have read in a while..This is about a young farmer girl evolving through her life. Hua is a fierce, strong, independent young lady who always has to prove she is as good or as better than any man. After a personal family tragedy because of an outlawed force called the kao, she secretly replaces her fathers call back to war, needing to protect him, her family and fulfill the vengeance in her heart. Her grandmother recognises a spirit within her that could be the jubilation or devastation of them all. This is where the full force of commander Jian lu enters the dialogue earning his own chapters that interchange with Hua’s story. He is a broken man after tragedy after tragedy throughout his life has shaped him into the man he is today. However Hua can see the real man underneath the facade and walls he has built. Then the fantasy kicks into full force, completely taking Hua away from him. He needs to look deep inside and decide if he Can bring her back and if he did could he hold onto what she has become and hidden, Can he even find it in his heart when all he has seen is so much death and destruction surrounding them. Hua has the spirit of a dragon, Juan has had everything beaten out of him. M.Lynn has earned my respect as an author, her creativity seemingly never ending. Her take on re-tellings of tales are exceptional. Her characters coming alive in the remarkable descriptive, diversity & emotional consciousness that she stirs within you. There is so much more that is packed into this book that I haven’t mentioned but if you don’t know the story of Mulan like myself I don’t want to spoil one second of the enjoyment and fulfilment of this book. If you do know the tale of Mulan, then even more reason to read M.Lynn’s re-telling of this emotional story.
March 22, 2020
Due to being busy and unexpected life events, I am writing this review way later than I expected. I wish I could've done it sooner, because this was a truly good read.
Now, that was a sum up of the review. Whoever wants to know more, let's look into it more deeply. At first, I couldn't get into it. Probably because I was reading around eleven at night and was falling asleep. In any case, I still managed to remember all the details and although some events at the beginning didn't seem as impactful to me as the author probably intended, I found myself turning the pages (well, swiping the mages, given this was a free e-book copy kindly provided by the author for an honest review) to find out what's next.
A tiny, tiny spoiler (although not really): I wished the dragons were more prominent. I guess that's the only thing I can truly hold against the book.
It was indeed very Mulan-like. I have seen the movie once, last year. All the main things were kept. All the other ones were not. I wasn't mad about that at all.
I really liked this version. I liked Hua being strong but not perfect. I liked Luca and Jian - I was expecting a love triangle, tbh. Did that happen? I guess you have to read the book to figure it out.
I am very food obsessed, so I was hoping for more food descriptions. That didn't happen :( this is my personal issue that I should probably discuss with someone.
The plot was a tiny bit predictable, as in - a couple of things you expect in these kind of books to happen did happen. But it's always surprising to see how the authors actually make it happen.
The ending was not what I expected at all, I honestly thought more would happen after that particular event, but I guess that's a good reason to read the sequel??? (It definitely is)
All in all, I really love retellings. I really love East Asian inspired settings. I love powerful women whose entire goal in life isn't to find a husband. I love dragons.
Did this book hit every single of these? Yes, yes it did.
Once again, thank you to M.Lynn for providing me with a copy in exchange for an honest review.
Now, that was a sum up of the review. Whoever wants to know more, let's look into it more deeply. At first, I couldn't get into it. Probably because I was reading around eleven at night and was falling asleep. In any case, I still managed to remember all the details and although some events at the beginning didn't seem as impactful to me as the author probably intended, I found myself turning the pages (well, swiping the mages, given this was a free e-book copy kindly provided by the author for an honest review) to find out what's next.
A tiny, tiny spoiler (although not really): I wished the dragons were more prominent. I guess that's the only thing I can truly hold against the book.
It was indeed very Mulan-like. I have seen the movie once, last year. All the main things were kept. All the other ones were not. I wasn't mad about that at all.
I really liked this version. I liked Hua being strong but not perfect. I liked Luca and Jian - I was expecting a love triangle, tbh. Did that happen? I guess you have to read the book to figure it out.
I am very food obsessed, so I was hoping for more food descriptions. That didn't happen :( this is my personal issue that I should probably discuss with someone.
The plot was a tiny bit predictable, as in - a couple of things you expect in these kind of books to happen did happen. But it's always surprising to see how the authors actually make it happen.
The ending was not what I expected at all, I honestly thought more would happen after that particular event, but I guess that's a good reason to read the sequel??? (It definitely is)
All in all, I really love retellings. I really love East Asian inspired settings. I love powerful women whose entire goal in life isn't to find a husband. I love dragons.
Did this book hit every single of these? Yes, yes it did.
Once again, thank you to M.Lynn for providing me with a copy in exchange for an honest review.
January 29, 2020
When her sister Luna is killed, Hua wants nothing more than to get revenge. Taking her father's place, she joins the army to fight against the Kou and kill the general who took her sister from her. Here, she must hide her identity as a female and become Huan. There's also a legend about dragons in Piao and Hua descends from their bloodline. The previous emperor wanted everyone who descended from dragons killed, so Hua isn't even supposed to exist.
In the training grounds, Hua meets Commander Jian who is an intimidating person to just about everyone, but not Hua. She won't let anyone get to her and won't back down from a challenge, so she isn't scared to meet Jian's eyes. But there are rumors going around about Jian. They say he led his men to their deaths and doesn't care about anyone. Hua isn't so sure she believes them because she sees a different side of him. He helps train her to be the best warrior she can be and is a fierce ally to have on the battlefield.
Reading DRAGON RISING is a great way to start off 2020! It's a retelling of Mulan with a twist of fantasy and dragons. I love how strong both Jian and Hua are in their own unique ways. Hua is headstrong and won't let anyone treat her differently just because she's a girl. Jian has had his heart broken and has scares from the battles of the present and the betrayals of his past. The two of them will have to rely on each other when push comes to shove.
Final Verdict: DRAGON RISING is a a fierce fantasy about a girl stepping out of her comfort zone to make a difference in the war and get her revenge. This is one fans of fantasy, Mulan, romance, action, adventure, and dragons won't want to miss!
This review can also be found on YABC: https://www.yabookscentral.com/yaindi...
In the training grounds, Hua meets Commander Jian who is an intimidating person to just about everyone, but not Hua. She won't let anyone get to her and won't back down from a challenge, so she isn't scared to meet Jian's eyes. But there are rumors going around about Jian. They say he led his men to their deaths and doesn't care about anyone. Hua isn't so sure she believes them because she sees a different side of him. He helps train her to be the best warrior she can be and is a fierce ally to have on the battlefield.
Reading DRAGON RISING is a great way to start off 2020! It's a retelling of Mulan with a twist of fantasy and dragons. I love how strong both Jian and Hua are in their own unique ways. Hua is headstrong and won't let anyone treat her differently just because she's a girl. Jian has had his heart broken and has scares from the battles of the present and the betrayals of his past. The two of them will have to rely on each other when push comes to shove.
Final Verdict: DRAGON RISING is a a fierce fantasy about a girl stepping out of her comfort zone to make a difference in the war and get her revenge. This is one fans of fantasy, Mulan, romance, action, adventure, and dragons won't want to miss!
This review can also be found on YABC: https://www.yabookscentral.com/yaindi...
March 18, 2020
I was really excited when I read the description and discovered a Mulan retelling. Sadly, this book fell short of what I was expecting. I really, really don't like leaving less than 4/5 star reviews, but I agreed to leave a review in exchange for reading.
Before I go into issues, I did enjoy a few moments between Jian and Hua. There were a few scenes that had me on the edge of my seat, but alas the book didn't satisfy my lovesick heart.
The biggest problem was the disconnection with the characters. There are battle scenes that happen with detail after detail yet we know nothing of how the character is reacting to the situation at hand. It is almost told more than showed. I love the premise of the book. I mean, dragons and Mulan, what's not to love? But I feel this story needs a good developmental edit. Things need to be condensed to make the story flow faster and get to the excitement sooner. I wanted to stop reading several times. I really believe the author has something here, but it just doesn't feel ready.
I was particularly annoyed (and it could just be me) to discover this wasn't a standalone. I guess I automatically assumed it would be since the Disney version is a single movie. (I don't count the awful sequel) The ending didn't really wrap anything up and I felt left hanging in a bad way. It doesn't have me wanting more and I feel it could have easily been wrapped up in a single book. But I'm not the author and who knows what her imagination holds. I hope she might revisit this someday and give it another look through.
Keep writing. It's the only way we get better.
Before I go into issues, I did enjoy a few moments between Jian and Hua. There were a few scenes that had me on the edge of my seat, but alas the book didn't satisfy my lovesick heart.
The biggest problem was the disconnection with the characters. There are battle scenes that happen with detail after detail yet we know nothing of how the character is reacting to the situation at hand. It is almost told more than showed. I love the premise of the book. I mean, dragons and Mulan, what's not to love? But I feel this story needs a good developmental edit. Things need to be condensed to make the story flow faster and get to the excitement sooner. I wanted to stop reading several times. I really believe the author has something here, but it just doesn't feel ready.
I was particularly annoyed (and it could just be me) to discover this wasn't a standalone. I guess I automatically assumed it would be since the Disney version is a single movie. (I don't count the awful sequel) The ending didn't really wrap anything up and I felt left hanging in a bad way. It doesn't have me wanting more and I feel it could have easily been wrapped up in a single book. But I'm not the author and who knows what her imagination holds. I hope she might revisit this someday and give it another look through.
Keep writing. It's the only way we get better.
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