There are two things that drew me to this book: the concept and the cover design. The cover is beautiful, and the concept of the story is awesome. The idea of a girl with the power of creation and a boy with his purpose written in ink on his skin is fascinating and has so much potential, and there's a lot about this story that I really enjoyed. The magic is subtle to the point that I'm not even sure I want to call it magic, but it's interesting. I also like the way storytelling is wound into the fabric of this world and the idea of storytellers themselves and the power they have. In many ways, it feels like a metanarrative of sorts.
There are a number of things that have stopped this from being a four- or even five-star review, however. In many ways, I feel like I don't know much about the world that this is set in in terms of how everyday folks live or what the day-to-day life is like. It's dystopian, certainly, but with the way we're immediately launched into the action of the story, there isn't much opportunity to see what this world is like, and I felt a lot of times that I was going off what we were told about the world. Toward the end, we see more of it, but because of how things start off and then how we become immersed in Elle and Jay's narratives, the opportunity to establish this world before the inciting incident changes it is lost.
Something that was really jarring for me was how heavily the focus of the narrative is on how much Elle and Jay lust after each other. While the synopsis sets the expectation they'll be interested in each other, I didn't expect the heavy handedness of their sexual desires. In ways, that overshadowed getting to know the characters and their development for me, and a lot of it I found unnecessary as it didn't move the story forward. There's so much opportunity to explore the way that this world and the changes happening impact the characters, but I feel like we don't get a lot of that. Were this strictly a romance novel, I would have at least expected the sexually-driven interaction, but for this novel and the way it was presented, I wasn't expecting it.
I felt an excess repetition of ideas and messages also detracted from the story. There were also technical errors that escaped editing, which I know happens from time to time. From a technical perspective as well, I found I didn't always understand the use of italics. In some cases, it made sense, but then in others, it seemed just thrown on dialogue. I'm not sure if there was a purpose for that, but I feel like there should be, and if there was, it was lost on me.
Will I read the next in this series? Probably. I'm curious enough about how things will progress and ulimately conclude that I can see myself picking it up to see what happens (for those who've already read the book, you may, like me, see some humour in that). Again, the concept is fascinating to me, although the execution was a bit of a letdown.