Praiseworthy Wordsmith Undercuts Her Story
The author is a talented wordsmith, who knows how to turn a phrase, a sentence, a narrative. There is both a grace and fluidity in her writing, in this book, "Cleon Moon," and the prior ones of the "Fallen Empire" series. It is pleasure to read, as GOOD writing is in short supply.
The storyline does possess flaws that prevent a higher rating. Romance plot lines are tricky at best, and dangerous at worse, for any writer. It is especially true in this genre of action SciFi. Most readers are generous in forgiving faults or differing opinions regarding science, as much is postulations of unknowable, future developments. Readers just want a well written, good story. The lead character continues to sexually, romantically obsess over her human cyborg security officer, losing focus throughout this book (again!), regarding her still kidnapped and missing 8 year old daughter. Nearly everything else rings true in this book and the series, but this aspect. It rips out the soul of the storyline for this reader and prevents a higher rating. Maybe it is just a different perspective in that I am male? If my was child missing, in danger, needing rescue, no matter how much I craved coitus with a good looking woman, I would find other ways to "take the edge off," and go get my kid. The other distractions, minor, that draw Alisa's focus from rescuing her daughter, also mar an otherwise entertaining read.
The book is an enjoyable read, regardless of the lead character's unrequited "horniness" and recommended.
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